Tell me if its decent, what i should improve on, etc. I love writing, but i need some motivation, and stuff.
Living off the Wild
Chapter 1 – Introduction
It’s cold. I need to pass the time. Maybe I should read my notes. I should tell the story of how this all happened. How the greatest thing that has ever happened in my life, managed to take place... It all started about a year ago. My parents never trusted me. I’ve always loved the thought of living in the outdoor wilderness, surviving off what I could find, it was great. When I told them im leaving for the mountains and never coming back, they just laughed. I knew I had to prove them wrong, so I packed a backpack full of blankets and clothes, a pillow, a pack of matches, about 2 boxes worth of tissues, and a wallet full of 100 dollars in cash. I zipped up the backpack. I hopped on my bike and rode off to the Kronotype mountains. And I’m almost positive, that as I was riding off, I heard my dad shouting “See you tomorrow!”. About 2 hours had passed, and I could see the outline of the entrance to the mountains. I hopped off my bike, and sneakily, I went in.
Chapter 2 – If it works, It works.
I made my way slowly up the mountains, and stopped at a nearby stream, to satisfy my dying thirst, and than I decided I should make a small camp here, and maybe find a home tomorrow morning. I knew it was the right thing to do, so I quickly found some loose twigs, and some heavy logs, and brought them near the stream. I took out a tissue, laid it under the logs, and used a match to light it. Some say it’s cheating, but hey, If it works, it works. I was warm, I had a blazing fire going, but I realized something.. I was hungry. I was STARVING. I decided that I would find food tomorrow, it’s only best, if I sleep early than I wont focus on my hunger. Seems fair, right? Yeah. I’ve read lots of survival books and I know what food you can eat. For example, whatever the raccoon eats, you should eat too. The raccoon shares the most common diet with Humans, so I thought that’s what I’d do tomorrow morning, find food.
I'd love to join. Sounds really fun. I joined hamachi server, but your sadly offline.
Name: Dylan :biggrin.gif:
IGN: zelkrim
Age: 14
How long have you been playing Minecraft?: Since Infdev.
Tell me a bit about yourself: I hate the kids who t4lk li3k this hey guys is mod rolezed yet btw notch is F4t
Experience with other Clans?: Nah, not really.
Desired Job: The highest available :wink.gif:
Time Zone: Eastern
Skype/Oovooo?: Kittygobewm91 is my skype name. Yeah, creative, right?
Last one, Creepers, friend or foe?: Friends, but they dont seem to like me.
Okay, before flaming, I am not begging. I'm simply wondering if anyone can help me. Me being the Minecraft Addict i am, i would like to know if anyone can make me an icon and signature. As you can see, my names zelkirm, and id just like any abstract-lookin' icon and sig. If you dont want to do it, its fine. I'd understand.
Story, some dude was finally rescued from minecraftia, but on his way back home the engine of the plane died and he crash landed into another region of minecraftia.
Think of it as a let's play only with certain rule's that must apply
Such as NO CARRYING 5000 BLOCKS OF WOOD.
You'll be able to carry 5 inventory slots of stuff, food not counted, and it will be hardcore survival. Food must be eaten everyday too, and hopefully our hero will be rescued once again.
I need constructive critisiscm, ideas, and whats wrong with the trailer, and what i should add into the next trailer that's released. Thanks guys.
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Living off the Wild
Chapter 1 – Introduction
It’s cold. I need to pass the time. Maybe I should read my notes. I should tell the story of how this all happened. How the greatest thing that has ever happened in my life, managed to take place... It all started about a year ago. My parents never trusted me. I’ve always loved the thought of living in the outdoor wilderness, surviving off what I could find, it was great. When I told them im leaving for the mountains and never coming back, they just laughed. I knew I had to prove them wrong, so I packed a backpack full of blankets and clothes, a pillow, a pack of matches, about 2 boxes worth of tissues, and a wallet full of 100 dollars in cash. I zipped up the backpack. I hopped on my bike and rode off to the Kronotype mountains. And I’m almost positive, that as I was riding off, I heard my dad shouting “See you tomorrow!”. About 2 hours had passed, and I could see the outline of the entrance to the mountains. I hopped off my bike, and sneakily, I went in.
Chapter 2 – If it works, It works.
I made my way slowly up the mountains, and stopped at a nearby stream, to satisfy my dying thirst, and than I decided I should make a small camp here, and maybe find a home tomorrow morning. I knew it was the right thing to do, so I quickly found some loose twigs, and some heavy logs, and brought them near the stream. I took out a tissue, laid it under the logs, and used a match to light it. Some say it’s cheating, but hey, If it works, it works. I was warm, I had a blazing fire going, but I realized something.. I was hungry. I was STARVING. I decided that I would find food tomorrow, it’s only best, if I sleep early than I wont focus on my hunger. Seems fair, right? Yeah. I’ve read lots of survival books and I know what food you can eat. For example, whatever the raccoon eats, you should eat too. The raccoon shares the most common diet with Humans, so I thought that’s what I’d do tomorrow morning, find food.
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>minecraftSP
>cracked
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Heres mine.
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Name: Dylan :biggrin.gif:
IGN: zelkrim
Age: 14
How long have you been playing Minecraft?: Since Infdev.
Tell me a bit about yourself: I hate the kids who t4lk li3k this hey guys is mod rolezed yet btw notch is F4t
Experience with other Clans?: Nah, not really.
Desired Job: The highest available :wink.gif:
Time Zone: Eastern
Skype/Oovooo?: Kittygobewm91 is my skype name. Yeah, creative, right?
Last one, Creepers, friend or foe?: Friends, but they dont seem to like me.
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Wierd Dude - Want some milk?
Simon - Yes please!
*Simon whispers* This guy creeps me the **** out..
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Thanks in Advance.
-Z
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Click below to buy it. Worth it for only 4 dollars.
http://c418.bandcamp.com/album/minecraft-volume-alpha
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Thanks, User! :biggrin.gif:
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No, more like 1 dude is just stranded, you know, he's trying to find a way out, only in a realistic manner.
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Story, some dude was finally rescued from minecraftia, but on his way back home the engine of the plane died and he crash landed into another region of minecraftia.
Think of it as a let's play only with certain rule's that must apply
Such as NO CARRYING 5000 BLOCKS OF WOOD.
You'll be able to carry 5 inventory slots of stuff, food not counted, and it will be hardcore survival. Food must be eaten everyday too, and hopefully our hero will be rescued once again.
I need constructive critisiscm, ideas, and whats wrong with the trailer, and what i should add into the next trailer that's released. Thanks guys.
-Z
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We have something here, boss.
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Sounds good. And yeah, it was a pretty active thread, lol.