Hey all! I'm about to finish my 2 volume minecraft music collection (28 tracks total!), and wanted to put on a contest for album art. There is more info here in this video!
I must say, the instrument part of this song is really well done: well-composed, full of emotion and interesting melody. However, I can't say I'm fond of the lyrics; they don't feel as if they fit the more serious tone of the song itself. It's hard to explain... it's as if the words were all pulled out of xkcd's Thing Explainer.
I can see that!! I appreciate you checking it out and giving me your feedback. I can say that that is definitely partly my fault as I tend to write lyrics that are not that deep (as I'm a piano player of 20 years, so the music part is definitely my thing, as you've already deduced!!!).
Hey guys, I hope you like this original song I wrote about the Guardian mob!
Lyrics:
v1: Its been a long journey for us
to the ocean
We've traveled many miles of land
looking for a home
B: We'll stay by the water tonight,
We'll watch the clouds come in
v2: The sun came up, what did we see,
A cave in the water across the sea.
We build a boat, use wood from trees,
we're going to look and see...
B: We're moving slowly across
We're going to find out whats inside
CHORUS: There's something living here
I feel it in my soul
There's something in this cave
Why won't it show itself to us...
v3: We press on down the cave
We don't know what we'll see
We hope that we'll survive
We don't know whats going to be
B: We add our torches along the way
So we can find our way back home
Chorus 2: The guardians, are here in this place
To defend, this monumental space,
We can't pretend, that we belong
here in their world
We are strange, they catch us with eyes
within their range, we'll flee before we die
We cannot change, their hatred for the unidentified x2
Hey guys, enjoy my new Minecraft song "The Wither".
Lyrics:
v1: Is this a dream, or is something off
I see something in the dark
Bridge: I cannot see I cannot run
I don't know what to do without the sun and
I cannot say what I've seen tonight but
I hope it isn't what I thought, a Wither.
v2: I've done pretty good, made a name for myself
Even started to build a town
I took all my diamonds, invested in the mine bizz
I'm almost on the top
[Bridge + I will not let it take my life
Even when it tries to take my soul and
I cannot say what I've seen tonight but
You never wanna see it's face, a Wither.
CHORUS: You won't escape the Wither
It will devour your soul, in, a heart, beat
You won't believe your eyes
When you wake up in hell, from your death of
(The Wither, Wither, Wither, Wither
The Wither, Wither, Wither, Wither)x2
v3: You are lucky, if you've never seen
Ghostly, and haunting, it will ruin your dreams
If people are not responding to your thread, they don't feel like it. Having your own subsection won't make that any better, don't act like it will. It's unneeded to have one, because people like me, Tracks, other followers of Fan Art, respond to whatever is good or seems interesting. Don't whine your thread isn't getting replies, people probably just don't like it. Bump it if you see necessary, but that brings the fact you could be banned for unneeded bumpage.
First of all, I wasn't whining about any of my own threads not getting views. Nor did I state at any point that I hate RP threads, or need to get rid of them. But, I did notice that they are very popular, and people like to view them. So why not give them a sub-section where they can just go to visit the RP threads, and have a separate place where people can post their comics, pictures, etc. It totally makes sense, even if you don't think it does.
There are so many of these RP threads, that they need to really have their own sub-section... all the people who are posting art, like pictures and music and what not aren't getting any views or feedback. Please consider this request!
"Creeper Face" *Lady Gaga Parody* by Bobby Yarsulik
Intro: (wait 2 bars) Ma ma ma maa... x 5
Verse 1: I want to blow you up and see the smithereens
Sneak upon you in the night and steal all of your dreams (I love it)
I will wait until the dark to do my dirty deed
And after you've been up all night I won't leave 'til you bleed
B: Oh, oh oh oh... oh oh, I'll blow you up, and take all your stuff
Oh, oh oh oh... oh oh, I'll blow you up, and take all your stuff
Chorus: Can't see my, can't see my, no you can't see my creeper face (Want to bomb everybody)
Can't see my, can't see my, no you can't see my creeper face (Want to bomb everybody)
C-c-c-creeper face, C-c-creeper face (ma ma ma ma)
C-c-c-creeper face, C-c-creeper face (ma ma ma ma)
Verse 2: I wanna get a friend a make a bigger boom
a little tnt is fun when it's your doom
Playing your game is not the same without a bomb
and once you set me off and hear my click you better run, run
[B, CHORUS]
[CREEPER FACE] Ma ma ma ma, Ma ma ma ma
Bridge: I won't tell you that I'm comin' that I'm hidin' that I'm tickin'
I'm not here I just want hugs and then I'll be on my way after killin'
Just like a cow inside that house I'm gonna be inside when you rouse
I promise this promise, see this face cuz I'm ominous
That's right guys, I'm doing an LP series. Mind you, episode 1 is more of a pilot, (no intro). All the others get better, quality wise, as they go along.
Pretty neat, I'm surprised you haven't received much feedback on this. The effort you've put into the song shows!
Thanks ! :smile.gif:
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Your songs are both inspiring and awesome! In my opinion, this is one of your best works so far, your music varies in genre/style so much, which is great as it appeals to more people, but this is the style that most appeals to me. <3 I have bought Minecraft Epics, and I loved it, the effort you put in is impressive, to say the least.
Hey, Bobby, it's a real pleasure to 'meet' or at least talk to you! :'D
I appreciate it, I'm glad you find it inspiring! I love making all my music, and it makes me feel really good to know that people are enjoying listening to it as much as I enjoyed creating it! ... and a pleasure it is! :wink.gif:
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Hey Bobby, idk why anyone was giving feedbacks, i think your music is awesome!!!
Keep working on minecraft themed music, your work is pretty awesome!
Here some diamonds for you
Srry for my bad english, im from Brazil
Hey man! First of all... your english is AWESOME! Thanks for your reply, seriously! Thanks for my diamonds too!!
Okay well at least someone could kindly explain as to why no one is leaving any comments or feedback. I honestly feel like I have something here that is just as creative as anything else in this forum section, but everyone is skipping over my thread (It's a sad face.)
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Hey all! I'm about to finish my 2 volume minecraft music collection (28 tracks total!), and wanted to put on a contest for album art. There is more info here in this video!
edit: Broke link, fixed it though!
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I can see that!! I appreciate you checking it out and giving me your feedback. I can say that that is definitely partly my fault as I tend to write lyrics that are not that deep (as I'm a piano player of 20 years, so the music part is definitely my thing, as you've already deduced!!!).
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Hey guys, I hope you like this original song I wrote about the Guardian mob!
Lyrics:
v1: Its been a long journey for us
to the ocean
We've traveled many miles of land
looking for a home
B: We'll stay by the water tonight,
We'll watch the clouds come in
v2: The sun came up, what did we see,
A cave in the water across the sea.
We build a boat, use wood from trees,
we're going to look and see...
B: We're moving slowly across
We're going to find out whats inside
CHORUS: There's something living here
I feel it in my soul
There's something in this cave
Why won't it show itself to us...
v3: We press on down the cave
We don't know what we'll see
We hope that we'll survive
We don't know whats going to be
B: We add our torches along the way
So we can find our way back home
Chorus 2: The guardians, are here in this place
To defend, this monumental space,
We can't pretend, that we belong
here in their world
We are strange, they catch us with eyes
within their range, we'll flee before we die
We cannot change, their hatred for the unidentified x2
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Lyrics:
v1: Is this a dream, or is something off
I see something in the dark
Bridge: I cannot see I cannot run
I don't know what to do without the sun and
I cannot say what I've seen tonight but
I hope it isn't what I thought, a Wither.
v2: I've done pretty good, made a name for myself
Even started to build a town
I took all my diamonds, invested in the mine bizz
I'm almost on the top
[Bridge + I will not let it take my life
Even when it tries to take my soul and
I cannot say what I've seen tonight but
You never wanna see it's face, a Wither.
CHORUS: You won't escape the Wither
It will devour your soul, in, a heart, beat
You won't believe your eyes
When you wake up in hell, from your death of
(The Wither, Wither, Wither, Wither
The Wither, Wither, Wither, Wither)x2
v3: You are lucky, if you've never seen
Ghostly, and haunting, it will ruin your dreams
[Whole Bridge]
[CHORUS TWICE]
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First of all, I wasn't whining about any of my own threads not getting views. Nor did I state at any point that I hate RP threads, or need to get rid of them. But, I did notice that they are very popular, and people like to view them. So why not give them a sub-section where they can just go to visit the RP threads, and have a separate place where people can post their comics, pictures, etc. It totally makes sense, even if you don't think it does.
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MP3 DOWNLOAD: http://www.mediafire.com/?kclzm8nc7p38d0v
LYRICS:
"Creeper Face" *Lady Gaga Parody* by Bobby Yarsulik
Intro: (wait 2 bars) Ma ma ma maa... x 5
Verse 1: I want to blow you up and see the smithereens
Sneak upon you in the night and steal all of your dreams (I love it)
I will wait until the dark to do my dirty deed
And after you've been up all night I won't leave 'til you bleed
B: Oh, oh oh oh... oh oh, I'll blow you up, and take all your stuff
Oh, oh oh oh... oh oh, I'll blow you up, and take all your stuff
Chorus: Can't see my, can't see my, no you can't see my creeper face (Want to bomb everybody)
Can't see my, can't see my, no you can't see my creeper face (Want to bomb everybody)
C-c-c-creeper face, C-c-creeper face (ma ma ma ma)
C-c-c-creeper face, C-c-creeper face (ma ma ma ma)
Verse 2: I wanna get a friend a make a bigger boom
a little tnt is fun when it's your doom
Playing your game is not the same without a bomb
and once you set me off and hear my click you better run, run
[B, CHORUS]
[CREEPER FACE] Ma ma ma ma, Ma ma ma ma
Bridge: I won't tell you that I'm comin' that I'm hidin' that I'm tickin'
I'm not here I just want hugs and then I'll be on my way after killin'
Just like a cow inside that house I'm gonna be inside when you rouse
I promise this promise, see this face cuz I'm ominous
[CHORUS] x2 [CREEPER FACE] x2
THE END
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Yes, "I" am the guy who did the "MineCraft: Epics" and "Songs of the Nexus" albums.
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That's right guys, I'm doing an LP series. Mind you, episode 1 is more of a pilot, (no intro). All the others get better, quality wise, as they go along.
Here is the playlist so far!!
http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p ... E1D2D7BD38
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Thanks ! :smile.gif:
I appreciate it, I'm glad you find it inspiring! I love making all my music, and it makes me feel really good to know that people are enjoying listening to it as much as I enjoyed creating it! ... and a pleasure it is! :wink.gif:
Hey man! First of all... your english is AWESOME! Thanks for your reply, seriously! Thanks for my diamonds too!!
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:biggrin.gif: Thanks man, I really appreciate you supporting me!
Well... herro there! :smile.gif:
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http://www.mediafire.com/?i1bisrd34moz94j