Ok so since my previous app got ignored and is now lost in the sea of pages, here it is again:
OOC
IGN: ansemx13
Age: 15
Role-Play Exp.: I have played many servers that are role-play only, and some with light role-play. That is for minecraft. I have at least 25 role-playing games on my PC, xBox and PS3. All-in-all; I have alot of RP experience.
Why Us: I decided on this server as it seems like it is a serious RP server, not a light RP or just a supposed serious RP where nobody actually role-plays.
Time You Can Dedicate: I can play at least 4 hours everyday of the week, probably more, and all-day on the weekends.
IC
Name: Zetra "The Ominous"
Gender: Male
Age: 26
RP Example:
BoS Guard: Hey, Jesse, have you heard about the new armor we're getting? They say it surges with electricity and can boost a mans speed ten-fold!
Guard#2: Yea, sounds nice.....
Guard#1: Something wrong, mate?
Guard#2: Well, haven't you heard about that guy that's been roaming around here? Apparently nobody hears him coming until they're dead. It kind of makes me jumpy, being out in the open, nobody around to back us up if we get into trouble.
Guard#1: Don't worry, I'll protect ya, you big galute. I don't know what I would do without you anyways!
Guard#2: Hah, than- (A loud grunt and heavy breathing comes from beneath the guards mask)
Guard#1: Jesse?! Jesse its not funny get up! God damnit....
The guard backs into the wall, scared to death, shaking and frantically whipping his gun around at every creak that emits from the large metal building. Suddenly, a man dressed in a black cloak, with light armor underneath seemingly made from Rad-Scorpion shell scales down the building above the guard. The man jumps onto the guards back and twists his neck to break his spinal cord. As he drops to the ground he retrieves the micro heat-sensing dart which had killed
the first guard which he had stolen from the fortress of the BoS.
The man removes the power-armor of the guard and wears it himself overtop of his Rad-Scorpion armor. He enters the fortress claiming that he was the guard wanting to take a break. As the giant door creaks and groans open, he discreetley uses a radio from within his helmet;
Man: Zetra to Enclave, come in Enclave. I have infiltrated the Brotherhood of Steele. Continuing to retrieve the blue-prints of the Steele Giant....
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I, am Zetra. This is my story. It was the year of 2285 A.D. when I was born. My parents were so very proud that I was born normal, un-mutated. I lived a peaceful life for a long time, until the NCR came along fighting the Raiders. The war lasted for years, 5 to be exact. When it started I had been 15. The years went by, but not a single day passed without my mother worrying about my father and my own safety. My father fought in the war against the raiders, but they were not allied with the NCR. It was a very small group called The Resistance. By the time i was 17, The Resistance was losing the war fast. They were desperate and started recruiting at a younger age, and that age happened to be 17, my age exactley. I was forced to join The Resistance and fight in the war. During the first few fights, I was promoted for having the most skill for my age, or any age for that matter. I had killed well over 30 men over the first 3 fire-fights I was in. But, in the 5th fight, just as we thought we had won, there was one man left. Not standing, but just barely alive and crawling towards his gun. Nobody noticed him until it was too late, he reached the gun, turned and fired. He shot my father directly in his temple. Before I had time to react,
the commander pushed me out of the way and took the bullet that the survivor had fired towards me. I couldn't believe it, the commander of the resistance took a bullet for a 17 year old recruit! He said before he died that he saw much potential in me, and wanted me to become the next commander. I was speechless and horrified at the same time. I vowed revenge on the Raiders, and the NRC that hadn't been there to save my father but rather stood back and watched us fight for years. Now, I am 25 and have made a name for myself. Not as the commander of The Resistance, but as Zetra The Ominous, a man who fights for the Enclave, yet nobody knows alot about him, or his past. I prefer not to talk about what happened that day, but when I remember it the fire burns within me even more fierce than ever. It is the one thing that pushes me, it drives me forward.
Some one who uses grammar!!! /Man hug. Accepted. Post your Enclave app for Spartan to read and approve.
Ok I get it I made a **** post now does every one mind cutting me a little slack I just really wanted to get on the server and I wanted to make a bizarre retarded backstory
Just saying, 90% chance that for that post you will never be accepted. We already get enough idiots posting and not capitalizing their i's and all kinds of other simple things that should be taken care of, and now you come along and throw gasoline on the fire we've been trying to put out. Thanks for trolling, now GTFO.
That would work, but again the Legion gets scattered in the Second Battle of Hover Dam, and I reform it years latter. You could be born in the original Legion, but not mine since I disprove of slaves. Also, please join my faction. I am literally the only person in it right now D:
IGN:Rexdog1
Age:15
Role-Play Exp.:I've played on a few roleplay servers for various online games.
Why Us: Sounds like an awesome idea for a server! I'd love to play and see what it's all about.
Time You Can Dedicate:1-3 Hours a day depending on how busy I am.
IC
Name:Grifon Lakewood
Gender:Male
Age:19
RP Example:
Grifon emerged from the slave quarters, cautiously peering in all directions. It was well past midnight, and the full moon shining on the heavily drunk guards seemed to represent a temporary freedom for Grifon. Once sure to not be caught, Grifon creeped towards the tent of his sleeping father, warmly lit on the inside by the glowing torches so familiar to members of Caesar's Legion. Once inside, he gently shook his father awake. "Father, where has mother gone? I haven't seen her at all today and it's beginning to worry me." Grifon whispered, still cautious of being discovered.
"Don't worry about her any longer Grifon. Try to forget about her." he said, plainly. Grifon was shocked. He couldn't have imagined his father would say something like this.
"What? Forget about my own mother? Why?!" he yelled, suddenly hysterical. He pulled his knees toward his chest in an attempt to calm himself down.
"Yes, Grifon. You have to. You're never going to see her again." said his father, callously. He seemed to be satisfied as tears streamed down Grifon's face. "She was only going to cause problems, I couldn't keep her a secret any longer." Grifon began to calm down. His mood slowly transformed from sad, to furious as he came to a sudden realization.
"You! What have you done with her?" he began to scream, louder than before. He heard guards awakening and moving towards the tent but he no longer cared. "You murderer! You didn't care about her! Do you even care about me?" Grifon asked, suddenly quiet. His father had no response. He simply stared back. His eyes shifted to behind Grifon, at a group of guards reacting to the disturbance.
"Did this slave attack you, sir? How did he escape his quarters?" said the taller of the two guards. They looked at Grifon's father, awaiting orders.
"No, he was just trying to steal food. You can escort him back to the slave quarters." he said, appearing sleepy and passive. They quickly grabbed Grifon's arms and dragged him out of the tent, screaming.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): As Caesar's Legion spread across the Southwest, many tribes were enslaved or forced into Caesar's army. One such unlucky tribe contained Violet Lakewood, a beautiful woman that was captured and made a slave in one of Caesar's camps. William Silverton, a captain in Caesar's legion, couldn't help falling in love with her. However, this love was forbidden. Slaves were not permitted to have any interaction with the men, lest the men should become less devoted to Caesar. These rules did not stop Will, and soon Violet was pregnant. Voilet, in an attempt to protect Will, blamed her pregnancy on another slave, claiming rape. He was executed and Voilet was allowed to remain under the so-called care of Caesar's slavers. Finally, Grifon was born in 2791. He grew up as a slave, doing jobs that fit his capabilities. He did not know of a life better than what he had.
Through the years, his father's paranoia grew. He was deathly afraid that Caesar would discover who the true father of Grifon was. He became insensitive and selfish toward Violet, who was starting to fear for her own safety. Soon, his paranoia was at a breaking point. One night, while Violet was in his tent, she jokingly mused that she would tell Caesar who Grifon's real father was if Will continued to be rude to her. Not thinking the joke was funny at all, Will became enraged. He beat Voilet to death, muffling her screams with a rag. The next day, Grifon entered his tent worried about his mother. After a short discussion, a vengeful 13 year old Grifon was forcefully
escorted to his quarters. The rest of the night, Grifon plotted his revenge.
At the age of 18, Grifon was by no means a child. He had become a man, and years of hard labor had made him strong. One night, Grifon slowly crept out of his quarters for the last time. He had dreamed of this night for years. He opened the flap and entered his fathers tent. Upon waking his father, he stood back. He wanted his father to look him in the eyes before he killed him. His father just looked back, his eyes full of sorrow. They seemed to ask him to remove him from his suffering. The guilt of murdering Violet, the love of his life, was killing him inside. Grifon, feeling no remorse, left his father to suffer in the depths of despression. Using the route he had planned for years, Grifon left his slavery in Caesar's Legion. He wandered the wastelands, surviving. Finally, Grifon arrived in the Mojave, hoping to find a better life there.
... I'm so sad that I can't accept you Q.Q The one thing you need to fix is we are in 2310, not 2791, and our Legion got scattered, and reformed by me a few years latter. So either you'll have to make your character older or something, but being born into my Legion wouldn't fit your back story as we don't use slaves. Also, you might want to post a faction app.
My only question is, why would you go to the Enclave, when they hate mutants and ghouls even more than the Brotherhood, especially seeing as you lived among them and befriended many of them for most of your life? Who to my knowledge doesn't have that much against Ghouls? I mean, they don't like us... But they don't out right massacre us either. On the wiki here's a little tid bit about the BoS's attitude towards mutants. I linked the page at the end.
You should change the BoS to Enclave and then be a Ghoul yourself :biggrin.gif: join in with Me and Toclafane. We're fighting for Mutant and Ghoul rights.
I would like to point out that 90% of Super Mutants wont even talk, and about 50% of ghouls can't. <- Deserve to be put down out of mercy. Anyways, while thinking of Super Mutants you could talk to without getting a bullet in your brain I remembered Lilly from New Vegas. You guys are accepting Nightkin right? And are you based in that mountain log (assuming they build it?)
IGN:spartan4812
Age:16
Role-Play Exp.:(im gettin to that)
Why Us:i really wanna shoot something
Time You Can Dedicate:weekends mostly
IC
Name:Christian
Gender:Male
Age:16
RP Example:my old co owners rp server
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): i was just a young boy when my dad went to fight for the NCR, i was expecting him to come back after 2 months of service, but he never did. i went out looking for him and i heard stories of how all thought the NCR there had been mass killings of anyone of Russian descent. Knowing my heritage, i knew what had happened to my father... now my job is to Fight for the motherland and for the spoils of war (mostly vodka).
Colonel Radec(Nobark_Noonan): Comrade welcome to the Soviets, fill out these forms and prepare to fight for the Motherland! URA!
Barracks Commander Dimitri(Zimmeme): I shall assign you your barracks number once you meet us, I shall also train you to be a coldblooded killer.
Name (Full):spartan4812
Rank you want if wanted?:Kazak(Vehicle guy),
Special Talents? (i.e. fighting, farming, scientist): very good a driving and drive-bys
Will you be dedicated?:yes sir!
Why do you want to join the Soviets?:because i want all the vodka in the WORLD!!!
Will you be loyal and respectful to your fellow soldiers?:Yes Sir!
Will you fight for the glory and die for the Motherland?:Da, whatever it takes.
<Walking down a lone deserted road, i see a small band of people ahead, they are all circling around something>
I then investigate further, i see they are all NCR boys, they are kicking a rotted body of what seems to be a Soviet soldier (vodka in hand)
i then try to keep walking, but one of the boys stops me, he say 'Hey Russian, you dont want to end up like your buddy over here, i suggest you turn around." i look him right in the eyes and say "Don't mess with a drunk soviet, ehh..." they all turn towards me and i show no fear.
i then cringe over the thought that these boys where just kicking the body of one of my comrades, my eye cringes as i swiftly pull out my AK-47 and mow them down, without giving it a second thought, and i continue down the road...
(i hope that that will compensate for my short backstory)
Back story should be longer and the paragraph at the bottom would go under "RP Example". Please copy paste this into Microsoft word so that it fixes all the i's and other grammar mistakes. As for the Soviet app, I can't accept that. You'll have to wait to the Soviet leader to accept you.
Ok, there are three things I need to do before this is done
1. Make the key in the top left corner
2. Make the boxes all the same size
3. Make the legion's flag whatever it is really going to be
But before that I need to know if all these relations are correct :tongue.gif:
Legion is; Independence hostile, Enclave friendly until Spartan conforms of denies truce, friendly with themselves, neutral BOS, hostile NCR, neutral soviets (since I don't know anything about them really), and friendly to wastlanders.
Also, I saw the flag you made. I could have done that rofl.
RP Example: Every story has an end but here we will start at the end. The war rages on in Mojave. My dad is gone to help the NCR. He says when Im old enough I will have to fight to that was 5 years ago Im now 19 and adult. Im going to join the NCR in 3 days then Dad will be proud. Ma tells me to forget about Dad but I cant he was my hero. Now Im going to be his hero by bringing Mojave back to its victorious way!
Background: Im the only child in my family. Out here in Mojave, youre never shure about what will happen next. My dad is in part of NCR a scientist. But when he passed he gave me a note that said "Son, go, go out into the world make a difference in the NCR. I know you will be a good scientist. I have taught you as much as I can. If youre reading this Im gone now. Go to General Everest and tell him I sent you.".... Im on my way there now but I see something in the distance. It looks like a thief hideout. I Quickly ran to a NCR guard and he and his friends ran to abliterate the thieves. I ran inside to see a person at a desk I told them I needed to talk to Everest but I needed to fill this application out so I did and heres what it looked like.
Full Name:
Specialization: I am a scientist Im also very strategic. I will fight if when needed
Will You Be Dedicated: Yes, very
Why The NCR: My dad was a scientist in the NCR and Im going to continue his dream of bringing back Mojave to its victorious way!
Will You Respect Your Fellow Officers and Soldiers: Yes, like they are my family
Will You Fight Until The End:Yes, Until we win and after
....sigh. Stereotypical story, it's suppose to be 2 paragraphs not one, and the are quite a few errors. It's sure, not "shure".
so can a whitelister tell me if i am whitelisted or not, i posted a week ago
We here at Fallout: WNC are very lazy, and if it is not on the top page assume it is not being seen. Please find and repost your app.
For all the people who we "TL;DR, derp" or didn't see my post on the Legion, we are not mongols, but prideful. We believe we are working for the citizens of the Mojave by freeing them from the NCR. We do NOT pillage, loot, and destroy. Any Legion found doing any of these will receive suspension.
As the leader of the enclave i have the resolutions to the problems that you guys seem to have. The enclave work slightly with one of the new reno familys to get slaves and such. So the enclave will work with you as long as your use full to their couse. When that group or person runs out of use fullness they are terminated. And also yes, the Enclave are described in the Fallout:Bible (Book of lore practicly) That the Enclave were consisted of hundreds of troops. Not even thousands just hundreds. What they lacked in strength (in numbers) they make up for in sheer blanket rotation of extremely high grade tech. They have transport virtibirds, Attack Virtibirds acsess to the last oil resevors in the world and have acsess to higher grades of Power armor and weapons. So i might ally with the legion just for the fact that they want my enemys dead. They can do what my small forces can't. (Fight a large army) Also for the start of the server all the enclave will do is observe the enemy and observe towns. then i will act on our observations, so don't be weak at the start or i'll come in and rape you :tongue.gif:
Sir, I am the leading general of the Legion of the Fallen (Caesar's Legion), and I would like to propose a truce between our two groups. If you would like, I can send you our Political Positions.
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But the server is up.... Oh wells. Got my hopes up.... :C
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Some one who uses grammar!!! /Man hug. Accepted.
Post your Enclave app for Spartan to read and approve.PM the post above me your Enclave app.^^^
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Why am I not whitelisted already? Can someone gurry and add me so I don't miss the beta again.
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Just saying, 90% chance that for that post you will never be accepted. We already get enough idiots posting and not capitalizing their i's and all kinds of other simple things that should be taken care of, and now you come along and throw gasoline on the fire we've been trying to put out. Thanks for trolling, now GTFO.
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That would work, but again the Legion gets scattered in the Second Battle of Hover Dam, and I reform it years latter. You could be born in the original Legion, but not mine since I disprove of slaves. Also, please join my faction. I am literally the only person in it right now D:
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... I'm so sad that I can't accept you Q.Q The one thing you need to fix is we are in 2310, not 2791, and our Legion got scattered, and reformed by me a few years latter. So either you'll have to make your character older or something, but being born into my Legion wouldn't fit your back story as we don't use slaves. Also, you might want to post a faction app.
THANK YOU FOR USING CORRECT GRAMMAR THOUGH <3
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I would like to point out that 90% of Super Mutants wont even talk, and about 50% of ghouls can't. <- Deserve to be put down out of mercy. Anyways, while thinking of Super Mutants you could talk to without getting a bullet in your brain I remembered Lilly from New Vegas. You guys are accepting Nightkin right? And are you based in that mountain log (assuming they build it?)
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Back story should be longer and the paragraph at the bottom would go under "RP Example". Please copy paste this into Microsoft word so that it fixes all the i's and other grammar mistakes. As for the Soviet app, I can't accept that. You'll have to wait to the Soviet leader to accept you.
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Legion is; Independence hostile, Enclave friendly until Spartan conforms of denies truce, friendly with themselves, neutral BOS, hostile NCR, neutral soviets (since I don't know anything about them really), and friendly to wastlanders.
Also, I saw the flag you made. I could have done that rofl.
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Hooray for determination!!! We don't need to know how to do things if your willing to spend hours trying it anyways. That's how I play puzzle games XD
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Any changes in your app should be reposted to bring it to the attention of those who can accept you.
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....sigh. Stereotypical story, it's suppose to be 2 paragraphs not one, and the are quite a few errors. It's sure, not "shure".
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We here at Fallout: WNC are very lazy, and if it is not on the top page assume it is not being seen. Please find and repost your app.
For all the people who we "TL;DR, derp" or didn't see my post on the Legion, we are not mongols, but prideful. We believe we are working for the citizens of the Mojave by freeing them from the NCR. We do NOT pillage, loot, and destroy. Any Legion found doing any of these will receive suspension.
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Sir, I am the leading general of the Legion of the Fallen (Caesar's Legion), and I would like to propose a truce between our two groups. If you would like, I can send you our Political Positions.