Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting.
Are you mature?:yes
IC:
Character name:Jole collins
Age:24
Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough):When Jole was younger he was always made fun of because he believed that the world would end from the dead rising up again and killing the living. When he was twenty he started to invest in supplies for when that time comes. For three years he built up of storage of food, water and other materials needed for survival. Three weeks before his twenty fourth birthday the portal incident happened so he barricaded his home and waited it out. After months of sitting in his home his supplies ran out. After making a difficult decision he burnt down his home so nothing else would be able to take refuge there. He now goes from town to town looking for a safe haven and a place to call home. RP example: Jole was walking through the streets of what was once called New Hope. After walking for hours he came upon a large pile up of cars. He looked around seeing the only way around the pile up was through a nearby building he first looked for something to use. He looked around in the cars only to find a golf club and a few rounds for a gun he did not have, so he kept the golf club and rounds and headed into the building. Once inside he noticed an odd feeling of emptiness in the building. After walking through the building looking for supplies in everywhere possible he left the building and continued walking. Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
☣(here is the edited version and the reposted one i hope this is better)
Made a typo, I meant before not after. The server takes place 32 years after the portal crisis man. If he was born before, which you are telling me, he would be 52. As for your app, it is still worded really bad man. I can't accept it. Go through it manually and fix it up instead of using Microsoft Word. I honestly think you should just rewrite it. Denied.
alright I will rewrite it but I don't know how to show he is 24 and was born before it and is 24 in present time
Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting.
Are you mature?:yes
IC:
Character name:Jole collins
Age:24
Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people started fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead so the ones that were smarter than to try and fight hide and waited for it to calm down. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes its head then drops the board and runs for the exit. Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
☣(here is the edited version and the reposted one)
Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting.
Are you mature?:yes
IC:
Character name:Jole collins
Age:24
Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people started fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead so the ones that were smarter than to try and fight hide and waited for it to calm down. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes its head then drops the board and runs for the exit. Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
☣(here is the edited version and the reposted one)
I hope this is better I put it through microsoft word at least twice
If he was born 20 years after, your character would be in his 50's. I really want you to go through and fix all these errors man. If you can't word things right and use proper sentence structure, how will you in-game? Please fix it up the best you can, and I will go over it again. Denied.
He born before it he was 20 when he started now he is 24 and i'll go through it again. I'm not that good with back stories I have been on other RP servers and my sentence stuff is better on the server.
OOC: IGN:sgtjole Age:13 Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting. Are you mature?:yes
IC: Character name:Jole collins Age:24 Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people where fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground. RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes it's head then drops the board and runs for the exit;. Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
☣(here is the edited version and the reposted one)
Hmm... let's see. I would like a steampunk outfit, not a robot, with red hair. I would like him to wear dark colored clothes and some sort of eyewear. Sorry if its a bit vague.
Could you get a picture or something along that lines?
Since your character is 24, that means he was born after the apocalypse and your bio wouldn't make sense. You really need to work on that sentence structure in your RP example. There is a landslide of a run-on happening there. Fix it up, and I will go over it again. Denied.
I just edited it again I added something to the backstory he was born before the portal incident
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Please extend your backstory. What happened when everything hit the fan? Make your backstory clearer. Why did you abandon your home and burn it? What happened in your childhood? In your RP example fix up your grammar. Fighting 2 zombies with a piece of glass is suicidal and you will be killed. One stab from a glass shard to the head wouldn't kill a zombie and it'll grab you before you can run away. Also please reread the rules.
Sorry about that I guess the bio hazard sign didn't make it onto the post but I'll fix it then repost (I am not that good at doing backstorys)
OOC: IGN:sgtjole Age:13 Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting. Are you mature?:yes
IC: Character name:Jole collins Age:24 Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people where fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes it's head then drops the board and runs for the exit;. Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
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Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough):When Jole was younger he was always made fun of because he believed that the world would end from the dead rising up again and killing the living. When he was twenty he started to invest in supplies for when that time comes. For three years he built up of storage of food, water and other materials needed for survival. Three weeks before his twenty fourth birthday the portal incident happened so he barricaded his home and waited it out. After months of sitting in his home his supplies ran out. After making a difficult decision he burnt down his home so nothing else would be able to take refuge there. He now goes from town to town looking for a safe haven and a place to call home.
RP example: Jole was walking through the streets of what was once called New Hope. After walking for hours he came upon a large pile up of cars. He looked around seeing the only way around the pile up was through a nearby building he first looked for something to use. He looked around in the cars only to find a golf club and a few rounds for a gun he did not have, so he kept the golf club and rounds and headed into the building. Once inside he noticed an odd feeling of emptiness in the building. After walking through the building looking for supplies in everywhere possible he left the building and continued walking.
Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
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Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people started fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead so the ones that were smarter than to try and fight hide and waited for it to calm down. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes its head then drops the board and runs for the exit.
Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
I hope this is better I put it through microsoft word at least twice
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IGN:sgtjole
Age:13
Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting.
Are you mature?:yes
IC:
Character name:Jole collins
Age:24
Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people where fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes it's head then drops the board and runs for the exit;.
Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
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IGN:sgtjole
Age:13
Reason for joining: I saw the post and thought it would be interesting.
Are you mature?:yes
IC:
Character name:Jole collins
Age:24
Gender:male
Backstory (One to two paragraphs, be thorough): He was born before the portal incident. When he was 20 the incident started. when Jole was younger he was always one of the people who believed the world would end someday so when he was able to earn money on a daily bases he started to buy supplies and other things he needed to survive when it did happen after he got a supply large enough for a few months he knew he was set for when it did happen. Jole had always been what a lot of people called a "Prepper" he was constantly made fun of because of that. But when everything hit the fan people where fighting for survival but it was hopeless to fight against the dead. But he was the one that was safe and ready for anything that would come at him. After his supplies had run out he left his home in a burning blaze because he didn't want anyone else taking refuge in the place he called home so he started it on fire burning it to the ground.
RP example: Jole was climbing up the elevator shaft of an old office building when he hears a large creaking noise he looks up and sees the ladder is coming off its hinges. He looks at the nearest elevator door seeing a few zombies on the other side he decides to jump off the ladder into the zombie infested floor Right as the ladder snaps falling to the ground floor. When he lands in the area he alerts two of the zombies, he looks around for something on the floor to use when he notices a metal pole on the ground he grabs it then bashes the first zombie over the head with it for a sec then turns his attention to the other zombie he hits the zombie once then the pole busts in half from the rust and use on the other zombie. He panics then starts backing up from the zombie while looking for something to use on it. While dodging the zombies arms he trips over some rubble and rocks, he grabs one of the rocks and throws it at the zombie the rock does nothing against the zombie but buys him enough time to find a wooden board. He hits the zombie in the legs knocking it to the ground he bashes it's head then drops the board and runs for the exit;.
Picture of skin: I don't have that good of luck with the pictures so I will have to give a link http://imgur.com/IS8Sn
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I have been having problems with the picture thing so just click on the link