The Long path home (Part 2) Takes place Before the first map, So you will find out what happens to your father and who that strange man named Ivor Is. It tells how you meet Kate (your wife) and there are quite a bit of tram stations.
Some problem i think, as i came to the INN the torches stopped and i couldn't find a way to go, i tried to go inside and wander aimlessly around. With no luck...
But putting that aside, i really like the store, makes me wonder what happened to my father and the strange talking man. Great buildings (Could probably add a new layer of wall since i could see the bookshelf sticking out of the wall to the outside.) Liked the random chest loot (at least i think they are pretty random with a few exceptions) Traps that actually got me :3 and the part with the wolves was excellent!
The rules was to much to remember and a bit unclear, maybe add something easier on the next map and do as mostly the others do to make it "you can destroy clay" or something, and the rule about you can destroy furniture's was also a bit unclear since furniture's are everything inside a house except the wall,roof and floor, might have been on purpose as it is hard to remember you have to think if you if this and that is allowed making the map more difficulty but also confusing- and last, i think you guided us a bit to much, on the next map maybe put a few torches each 20 blocks makes us search a bit after them.
But there was some downsides to, well as the problem about the inn is unsolved i have come to a conclusion that this map was actually better than many other maps that I've played and it has made me very curious! i hope the feedback of what i have played is good enough and that is wasn't to bad of a negative feedback! it was really all i could find out was bad in this map :biggrin.gif:
Thanks,
Yea after I played through the map abit myself I got a little confused but it was good for her first ^^ Thank you very much for the feedback and I bet when I show her what you said she'll get all excited and study it until she drops lol. The end of the map is ok but still a bit confusing lol.
It would only raise her to get some negative feedback, but if you don't want any i won't :wink.gif: The only way of putting out a download link is to go to mediafire.com login (or sign up) go to your user and press upload. Then just drag the file over to the little popup thingy and share the link :biggrin.gif:
Well I guess a little negative feedback couldnt hurt ^^ as long as its informative, and thanks for helping me imma edit the post relly quick.
Well this was my little sister's first adventure map (She's 10 so please no feedback thats TO harsh) She is planning on being a big game developer so this is like her first baby steps :wink.gif:! Im very proud of her and I know she would love feedback after you play through it. She came up with everything herself and built everything herself and she even came up with the story! She says that if she gets enough positive reviews then she may go on to make bigger and better adventure maps.
So please Enjoy her little Map, and have a Fun Time playing it! fer chu~!
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Its very fun and I hope you enjoy it!
The long path home Part 2
The long path home part 1
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Thanks,
Yea after I played through the map abit myself I got a little confused but it was good for her first ^^ Thank you very much for the feedback and I bet when I show her what you said she'll get all excited and study it until she drops lol. The end of the map is ok but still a bit confusing lol.
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Alright I guess thats good enough for now xD links er' up and ready to go!
ok NOW there ready xD
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Alright I guess thats good enough for now xD links er' up and ready to go!
Crap wait wrong links (lol) gimme 5 mins xD
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well I went to mediafire and put the files in but the region file keeps failing =.=
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Well I guess a little negative feedback couldnt hurt ^^ as long as its informative, and thanks for helping me imma edit the post relly quick.
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So please Enjoy her little Map, and have a Fun Time playing it!
The Long Path Home Download
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Explore the rest for yourself :wink.gif:))) Happy Minecrafting!
Part 2 Has been Realeased!! go here To check it out :wink.gif:
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