I know you're not totally finished releasing the Water Temple, but do you have any ideas for future maps? A sequel or even a prequel maybe? Just from playing these first three I know I'd love to see more from you.
This is INCREDIBLE. Just finished chapter 2 and I must say this is by far the most detailed map I've ever played. The story is solid and compelling and keeps you going. You also do a good job of keeping the suspense running thick.
A tip to other players: download the soundtrack to any Zelda game and play whichever song is most appropriate for the area you're in on repeat. Definitely boosts the atmosphere for me.
Can't wait to move onto Noema and whatever else is in store.
Keep up the good work, I'm excited for whatever adventures you come up with next.
I would love to play, but it's way too laggy for me.
I was at the very first puzzle, where that wall of sand was in the way and pressing the button did nothing and I kept pressing it until it popped off the wall and now I can't even put it back on.
Oh well.
((Sorry I haven't been on much you guys, chemistry is being a huge wang so I have very little time. You all can feel free to continue without me though. Sorry! :sad.gif: ))
((Well, you'd need a lot of clay, and when you do finish the shelter it probably won't be beautiful and perfectly bricky, but it's alright.
Lootieloo, you're in.
Swammi, sorry, we have enough people now.))
"Wait who the hell did you just call out to?" Sadie whispered at Kitty harshly, she leaned forward to peer down at the ground below but saw no one. "What if that's one of the skeletons?!" Sadie froze then, uncomfortable with how easily the word escaped her lips.
((Italics are appropriate for thoughts. Also, Sadie and Kitty are fairly well concealed in the tree. You'll have to think of a different way to spot them, like how Neoo's climbed into another tree, he has a different angle. Also, Neoo, when speaking out of character use (( )) so we know when you are. And your commas are fine for the most part, but there are several you place mid sentence that don't belong.))
Sadie glanced nervously at the ground. Skeleton archer? That can't be real. Yet the more she thought about it the more sense it made to her. She closed her eyes trying to shake the completely unrealistic notion, but couldn't. "Whatever, this island could be inhabited by cannibalistic natives or something. Maybe they wear the bones of things they've killed," she said, then added, "I took an anthropology class last semester." Sadie searched her mind for the memories associated with it, but couldn't remember the teacher's name, or the name of her school. Panic gripped her and her chest suddenly fired up with fear. She fought to remain in control of herself and quickly quelled the panic.
((Netwalker, I have to agree with Imnotlikeyou. The biggest reason a roleplay fails is when people don't interact enough in the beginning. Anyway, you seem to have a good enough grasp on writing prose. However you are definitely moving way too fast. I know this is a Minecraft roleplay, but I don't want it to be literally like the game. Don't go straight after the coal and torches. Your character is a confused teenager on a strange island, so play this out like a confused teenager would. Anyway, you're clear for landing, just remember this isn't exactly like the game.))
Sadie let out an exasperated laugh, "Yeah I think so too." She sat in silence for a minute, then gestured toward the ground below. "What the hell was that?" Sounded like an arrow. Sadie hugged herself uncomfortably, it was hot and humid, even at night on this island.
Sadie had to agree with the girl, Kitty. As the sun sank lower and lower a feeling of dread rose up inside her. Something about nighttime on this island did not make her feel at ease, as the night usually did.
"Yeah, good idea," Sadie agreed, she pointed to a sturdy looking tree that was draped with its leaves. They'd be practically invisible up in that one. "There, let's climb up that one." Using her flexible stick as a climbing tool, Sadie ascended into the tree. She was surprised at how easy it was considering she hadn't climbed a tree since her childhood.
IGN: wildebat
Did you read the rules: I did
Age: 18
Why should I accept you: I enjoy being apart of fledgling communities because I like to help out a town get started, and then keep contributing to new buildings and districts.
Have you ever been banned: No
If so, why:
Did you REALLY read the rules: Yes!
Do you want to live in the wild, city, or join a player city: The city!
Et tu brute: Blah blah blah!
IGN: wildebat
Class: Apprentice
Age: 18
Reason for Joining: I am a huge fan of roleplaying, especially when it's set in a totally user-created world. Sadly, all of the roleplay servers I've joined have died and I'm hoping this one will be different.
Sadie didn't lower the stick, but her shaking stopped when she got a better look at the girl. She was several inches taller than Sadie, and thin like herself. Yeah, I think I could take her if it comes to it. Sadie wasn't ready to trust this girl yet.
"Sadie," she said tentatively, "And you?"
Although she hadn't noticed it consciously, in the back of her mind something opened up. Something that took note of the flexibility of the stick she was carrying.
Sadie twisted to the right just in time to avoid the stick that nearly poked her in the face. She cursed herself for not seeing it coming earlier, but the forest was thick with plant life. Raising her own stick, she backed up and said to the stranger, "Okay, come out slowly and you won't get hurt." She hoped she sounded intimidating.
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A tip to other players: download the soundtrack to any Zelda game and play whichever song is most appropriate for the area you're in on repeat. Definitely boosts the atmosphere for me.
Can't wait to move onto Noema and whatever else is in store.
Keep up the good work, I'm excited for whatever adventures you come up with next.
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I was at the very first puzzle, where that wall of sand was in the way and pressing the button did nothing and I kept pressing it until it popped off the wall and now I can't even put it back on.
Oh well.
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Lootieloo, you're in.
Swammi, sorry, we have enough people now.))
"Wait who the hell did you just call out to?" Sadie whispered at Kitty harshly, she leaned forward to peer down at the ground below but saw no one. "What if that's one of the skeletons?!" Sadie froze then, uncomfortable with how easily the word escaped her lips.
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Sadie glanced nervously at the ground. Skeleton archer? That can't be real. Yet the more she thought about it the more sense it made to her. She closed her eyes trying to shake the completely unrealistic notion, but couldn't. "Whatever, this island could be inhabited by cannibalistic natives or something. Maybe they wear the bones of things they've killed," she said, then added, "I took an anthropology class last semester." Sadie searched her mind for the memories associated with it, but couldn't remember the teacher's name, or the name of her school. Panic gripped her and her chest suddenly fired up with fear. She fought to remain in control of herself and quickly quelled the panic.
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Sadie let out an exasperated laugh, "Yeah I think so too." She sat in silence for a minute, then gestured toward the ground below. "What the hell was that?" Sounded like an arrow. Sadie hugged herself uncomfortably, it was hot and humid, even at night on this island.
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"Yeah, good idea," Sadie agreed, she pointed to a sturdy looking tree that was draped with its leaves. They'd be practically invisible up in that one. "There, let's climb up that one." Using her flexible stick as a climbing tool, Sadie ascended into the tree. She was surprised at how easy it was considering she hadn't climbed a tree since her childhood.
((You're good Imnotlikeyou.))
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Did you read the rules: I did
Age: 18
Why should I accept you: I enjoy being apart of fledgling communities because I like to help out a town get started, and then keep contributing to new buildings and districts.
Have you ever been banned: No
If so, why:
Did you REALLY read the rules: Yes!
Do you want to live in the wild, city, or join a player city: The city!
Et tu brute: Blah blah blah!
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Class: Apprentice
Age: 18
Reason for Joining: I am a huge fan of roleplaying, especially when it's set in a totally user-created world. Sadly, all of the roleplay servers I've joined have died and I'm hoping this one will be different.
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"Sadie," she said tentatively, "And you?"
Although she hadn't noticed it consciously, in the back of her mind something opened up. Something that took note of the flexibility of the stick she was carrying.
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