Wait, do you mean the mods who dont notice when you say rape?
((Rape, rapety rape rape rape.))
Oh man that reminds me of this one role play I was in. A character was raped and we couldn't say rape so we referred to it as grape and r@pe. Mostly grape though.
Actually blades have their uses. Sharp and or pointed things are the only effective way to harm my character Issac since bullets and explosives (disregarding shrapnel) can for him be shrugged off.
They would most likely do something other than run at you with a sword.
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Name: 'Ghost' Cuz he goes intangible and stuff. I'm creative.
Age: Looks about 20-ish
Gender: male
Gift (Power): He can be intangible. When he is intangible he disrupts energy systems when he phases through them and people get an awkward feeling when he passes through them. He also has an aura of coldness and can manipulate coldness. Also when he is intangible, he is slightly transparent. He is resistant to extreme temperatures. Oddly, his body seems to age slower than normally, so he looks younger than he his.
Weaknesses and Limits: The cold aura is not as cold when he is not intangible. After a long period of intangibility he can no longer manipulate coldness for some time. The aura of coldness is always on unless his power is being negated. Excessive use of coldness manipulation renders it useless/weak. Though his cold aura is stronger when he is intangible, his cold manipulation is weaker, but not that weak. When he exits his intangible form, he is a weakened state. The severity depends on how long he has been intangible. Electricity can painfully force him to become tangible. After a long period of intangibility he might pop in and out of this dimension. He pops back in at the same spot. He cannot pop in and out of intangibility quickly he must wait a bit.
Appearance: Long, dirty, black. He is average height. He is dressed in rags. He's dirty and nasty. Ice blue eyes.
Personality: Generic pyschopath #4
History: He was never the biggest kid on the playground until he discovered his gift and killed the biggest kid on the playground. He discovered he could pass through stuff when he wanted to avoid someone and passed through the floor. He would have kept going down if he didn't realize he didn't have to follow the same rules as before. He was quickly found out by the ETG by the multiple murders he committed with his power. He had to be taken down by antinite and wore antinite cuffs all the time to keep him from using his power. He was later broken out by some gifted. He was grateful and only killed one of them (they weren't sure if he was the murderer, but they had their suspicions) before joining them on their way to Derika. He was almost arrested as soon as he stepped of the boat. He was thrown in a cell with antinite cuffs while a special cell is being prepared. Today he heard some commotion outside his cell. He knows better than to be hopeful, but he can't help himself.
Equipment: Clothes and cuffs.
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Alright then explain to me how we can imply super kinky -adult content- and weird sadism/machoism crazed succubi, but we can't talk about grabbing our own chests to ensure we no longer have boobs. Riddle me that.
I think I get what you're saying, in that I guess he can sort of touch their heart and stun them. Even then, I find that to be OP if he can avoid pretty much every method of attack without lifting a finger and stun someone, which is enough to win a fight as it is.
I meant to say he pulls his arm out not the heart. Woops. Yeah. I'm working on the weakness. I know some characters that can do the same thing, but kill... Still adding weaknesses. I see your point.
Mostly fair enough. However. Your argument about his power doesn't quite match up. If his intangibility could only make someone feel weird when flown through, and cold is just a chill...
You will have to explain. Weapons might be an option, though one could also argue your power wouldn't allow you to carry them after disappearing.
(Totally forgot to mention, but small stuff like clothing goes with him. A streaking poltergeist is probably not a good thing. Small knives could be carried along I guess...)
Anyways, its weird feeling when just passing through, but when he stays inside someone then they feel pain and are probably stunned. He could stick his arm through their heart and pull it out and become tangible again before strangling them to death with his cold hands. Also the aura is just a chill and its kind of just there to change the mood and stuff. He can freeze stuff, but that takes time, concentration, and energy (the bigger the object the more time and stuff is needed). Ice knives for stabby stabs.
For the containment, if it's solitary, then its probably tailored to the specific Gift. For example, they're not going to lock a slime up in a cage with bars. Solitary does not mean maximum security. Small detail, Brinkhaven would have devised some other method to prevent "Ghost"'s escape rather than permanently slapping the rather inefficient antinite cuffs on him. (I'm working on that)
^^Side note, since this is for the Brinkhaven Police station breakout scene, I assume this is for the Fabian clique, which means he's merely in a police station practically, which would be different from permanent storage. Which means he actually could just have the cuffs on if this is just a transition until they actually make him a long-term cell, if they were gonna make him a long-term cell. (I hope I got that right, Kinda rambled there.)
For the name, can't he just be dubbed "Ghost" by the jailors, or he simply uses "Ghost" as it his codename he gives out.
Mkay. Probably super dense material would keep him in one place. I know 'Ghost' is cliche and stuff, but I don't know what else people would call him.
Consider this unofficial. However, I would deny this.
1:His powers(Intangibility, cold manipulation, extreme temperature immunity, and slow aging) do not correspond, and you fail to explain why these powers are related in the slightest.
They do correspond. Except with the intangibility and cold. Actually not really. Ghosts are cold. Slowed aging: cold = slow. I admit these are weak. Intangibility is boring alone. He's a cold ghost. The temperature immunity doesn't really need to be explained. It would be weird if he felt discomfort from his own cold.
2:The power is (To my measurements) too powerful, and no proper weakness. He is able to be intangible, and no weakness stated, meaning the only thing that could harm him is Antinite(Which is kind of special, and hard to really justify your power with). Meanwhile, he can rip things apart by simply flying through them, and on top of that, he also creates a Russian winter everywhere he flies.
I forgot to mention the extent. I always forget someone will be ridiculous. Anyways damage/disrupt does not mean when he goes through a block in is torn apart. It means it does a small amount of damage to matter. When he passes through organism and electronics it would disrupt them. He passes through you, you feel awkward. He stays in you, you feel pain. It's minor damage that disrupts. If he passes through a solid block of stone then nothing is really going to happen to it. Russian winter... Seriously... Usually 'auras' are not frickin god tier. It's enough to make you feel cold, but it isn't going to give anyone frostbite. It is not a near absolute zero winter that follows him around. (Exaggerations)
Secondly, a weakness was stated for intangibility. I'm pretty sure there was. His other abilities would slowly start to get weaker and when he would go out of it he would be in a weakened state. You could argue that he could just float around doing nothing, but he would have to become tangible again SOMETIME. (Woops forgot to put that he comes out in a weakened state)
I have no idea what you mean by no proper weakness.
3:You said he heard something outside, yet you also said he was in solitary confinement. I'm pretty sure those chambers are soundproof.
Nothing to say here. If Brinkhaven solitary confinement is soundproof then whatever it's gone.
#DerikaDoesWhatItWants
4:More erks me than anything, but he doesn't have an actual name. Other people have done that, but they provided reasons for it. However, your character has no reason at all why his name is 'Ghost', aside from his power matching that. As I'm almost certain your character wasn't named ghost from birth by fortune-telling parents, that would be nice to clear up.
He wouldn't tell anyone his name. His name doesn't really have any meaning to him. He couldn't remember his name if he wanted to. You could have just shortened number four to 'Why doesn't he have a name?'
In conclusion, you jumped to conclusions and didn't suggest any solutions.
Hope I'm not too late to make a character in the gifted jail. I totally forgot about it.
Name: 'Ghost' Cuz he goes intangible and stuff. I'm creative.
Age: Looks about 20-ish
Gender: male
Gift (Power): He can be intangible. When he is intangible he damages/disrupts matter when he phases through it. He also has an aura of coldness and can manipulate coldness. Also when he is intangible, he is slightly transparent. He is resistant to extreme temperatures. Oddly, his body seems to age slower than normally, so he looks younger than he his.
Weaknesses and Limits: The cold aura is not as cold when he is not intangible. After a long period of intangiblity he can no longer damage/disrupt matter when he passes through it and manipulate coldness for some time. The aura of coldness is always on unless his power is being negated. Excessive use of coldness manipulation renders it useless/weak. Though his cold aura is stronger when he is intangible, his cold manipulation is weaker, but not that weak.
Appearance: Long, dirty, black hair. He is average height. He is dressed in rags. He's dirty and nasty. Ice blue eyes.
Personality: Generic pyschopath #4
History: He was never the biggest kid on the playground until he discovered his gift and killed the biggest kid on the playground. He discovered he could pass through stuff when he wanted to avoid someone and passed through the floor. He would have kept going down if he didn't realize he didn't have to follow the same rules as before. He was quickly found out by the ETG by the multiple murders he committed with his power. He had to be taken down by antinite and wore antinite cuffs all the time to keep him from using his power. He was later broken out by some gifted. He was grateful and only killed one of them (they weren't sure if he was the murderer, but they had their suspicions) before joining them on their way to Derika. He was almost arrested as soon as he stepped of the boat and spent the rest of his time in the cell with antinite cuffs in solitary confinement. Today he heard some commotion outside his cell. He knows better than to be hopeful, but he can't help himself.
Equipment: Clothes and cuffs.
Phobos observes the ETG robot through his sniper rifle's scope. Ah, the added help arrives. He is in one of the towers inside the ETG rapture farm. I really doubt we need a robot to help us fend off some gifted...Well the more the merrier. He puts down the sniper rifle and sits in a chair. Still have some time till they are scheduled to arrive.
Taking another look of the surrounding, I finally see an Emergency Response Team unload from a parked jeep and begin searching the area. None of them looking familiar except for one. The sight of him put a smile on his face after he blatantly ditched me in the forest. I send a quick message to him through my processor. Hopefully it would be in range for his processor to pick up. Even if the contents of this message was only "Get over here and save me from these freaks below already, you take forever, I hate you. My life is a disaster, I just wanted to get a coffee and look what happened." It still had the thought, and that's what counts, right?
Maximilian receives Vance's message. It surprised him. It had been a long time since his processor was put to use. Ew, Vance. He replies, 'Oh, shut up. I have work to do.' He walks towards a pile of rubble and finds a mutilated Brinkhaven SWAT person. Woah. That doesn't look like it was caused by the explosion... He picks up an organ on the ground that, presumably, was from the body. He places it back where it should be and starts to use his power to heal and raise the dead. He decides to send a message to Vance. 'Hey, were any bad guys here recently. I just found a mutilated Brinkhaven guard.' He was here before me. Maybe he knows something.
Maximilian had joined the emergency response team in their jeep and went with them to the explosion site. He exits the jeep and looks around at the wreckage and stuff.
((This should have been posted way sooner. I'm not sure about details so the post is short.))
What were they doing when you left them? 8.0's pretty much sitting around in a room somewhere.
Pretty much that. It had enough going on to grab my attention, with all the psycho murderers and dolls and everything.
Well, the last time I posted with them was before the big timeskip so they aren't really anywhere right now... But they were at an ETG research base on Derika before the timeskip.
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Oh man that reminds me of this one role play I was in. A character was raped and we couldn't say rape so we referred to it as grape and r@pe. Mostly grape though.
They would most likely do something other than run at you with a sword.
App:
[spolier]
Name: 'Ghost' Cuz he goes intangible and stuff. I'm creative.
Age: Looks about 20-ish
Gender: male
Gift (Power): He can be intangible. When he is intangible he disrupts energy systems when he phases through them and people get an awkward feeling when he passes through them. He also has an aura of coldness and can manipulate coldness. Also when he is intangible, he is slightly transparent. He is resistant to extreme temperatures. Oddly, his body seems to age slower than normally, so he looks younger than he his.
Weaknesses and Limits: The cold aura is not as cold when he is not intangible. After a long period of intangibility he can no longer manipulate coldness for some time. The aura of coldness is always on unless his power is being negated. Excessive use of coldness manipulation renders it useless/weak. Though his cold aura is stronger when he is intangible, his cold manipulation is weaker, but not that weak. When he exits his intangible form, he is a weakened state. The severity depends on how long he has been intangible. Electricity can painfully force him to become tangible. After a long period of intangibility he might pop in and out of this dimension. He pops back in at the same spot. He cannot pop in and out of intangibility quickly he must wait a bit.
Appearance: Long, dirty, black. He is average height. He is dressed in rags. He's dirty and nasty. Ice blue eyes.
Personality: Generic pyschopath #4
History: He was never the biggest kid on the playground until he discovered his gift and killed the biggest kid on the playground. He discovered he could pass through stuff when he wanted to avoid someone and passed through the floor. He would have kept going down if he didn't realize he didn't have to follow the same rules as before. He was quickly found out by the ETG by the multiple murders he committed with his power. He had to be taken down by antinite and wore antinite cuffs all the time to keep him from using his power. He was later broken out by some gifted. He was grateful and only killed one of them (they weren't sure if he was the murderer, but they had their suspicions) before joining them on their way to Derika. He was almost arrested as soon as he stepped of the boat. He was thrown in a cell with antinite cuffs while a special cell is being prepared. Today he heard some commotion outside his cell. He knows better than to be hopeful, but he can't help himself.
Equipment: Clothes and cuffs.
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I find it weird that they yelled at you. They usually don't go to the roleplay section.
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*gasp* That's weird. In this rp?
Because we are sophisticated.
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I meant to say he pulls his arm out not the heart. Woops. Yeah. I'm working on the weakness. I know some characters that can do the same thing, but kill... Still adding weaknesses. I see your point.
That makes more sense then reality crumbling.
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May I remind you of PETEP?
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(Totally forgot to mention, but small stuff like clothing goes with him. A streaking poltergeist is probably not a good thing. Small knives could be carried along I guess...)
Anyways, its weird feeling when just passing through, but when he stays inside someone then they feel pain and are probably stunned. He could stick his arm through their heart and pull it out and become tangible again before strangling them to death with his cold hands. Also the aura is just a chill and its kind of just there to change the mood and stuff. He can freeze stuff, but that takes time, concentration, and energy (the bigger the object the more time and stuff is needed). Ice knives for stabby stabs.
Mkay. Probably super dense material would keep him in one place. I know 'Ghost' is cliche and stuff, but I don't know what else people would call him.
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1:His powers(Intangibility, cold manipulation, extreme temperature immunity, and slow aging) do not correspond, and you fail to explain why these powers are related in the slightest.
They do correspond. Except with the intangibility and cold. Actually not really. Ghosts are cold. Slowed aging: cold = slow. I admit these are weak. Intangibility is boring alone. He's a cold ghost. The temperature immunity doesn't really need to be explained. It would be weird if he felt discomfort from his own cold.
2:The power is (To my measurements) too powerful, and no proper weakness. He is able to be intangible, and no weakness stated, meaning the only thing that could harm him is Antinite(Which is kind of special, and hard to really justify your power with). Meanwhile, he can rip things apart by simply flying through them, and on top of that, he also creates a Russian winter everywhere he flies.
I forgot to mention the extent. I always forget someone will be ridiculous. Anyways damage/disrupt does not mean when he goes through a block in is torn apart. It means it does a small amount of damage to matter. When he passes through organism and electronics it would disrupt them. He passes through you, you feel awkward. He stays in you, you feel pain. It's minor damage that disrupts. If he passes through a solid block of stone then nothing is really going to happen to it. Russian winter... Seriously... Usually 'auras' are not frickin god tier. It's enough to make you feel cold, but it isn't going to give anyone frostbite. It is not a near absolute zero winter that follows him around. (Exaggerations)
Secondly, a weakness was stated for intangibility. I'm pretty sure there was. His other abilities would slowly start to get weaker and when he would go out of it he would be in a weakened state. You could argue that he could just float around doing nothing, but he would have to become tangible again SOMETIME. (Woops forgot to put that he comes out in a weakened state)
I have no idea what you mean by no proper weakness.
3:You said he heard something outside, yet you also said he was in solitary confinement. I'm pretty sure those chambers are soundproof.
Nothing to say here. If Brinkhaven solitary confinement is soundproof then whatever it's gone.
#DerikaDoesWhatItWants
4:More erks me than anything, but he doesn't have an actual name. Other people have done that, but they provided reasons for it. However, your character has no reason at all why his name is 'Ghost', aside from his power matching that. As I'm almost certain your character wasn't named ghost from birth by fortune-telling parents, that would be nice to clear up.
He wouldn't tell anyone his name. His name doesn't really have any meaning to him. He couldn't remember his name if he wanted to. You could have just shortened number four to 'Why doesn't he have a name?'
In conclusion, you jumped to conclusions and didn't suggest any solutions.
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Name: 'Ghost' Cuz he goes intangible and stuff. I'm creative.
Age: Looks about 20-ish
Gender: male
Gift (Power): He can be intangible. When he is intangible he damages/disrupts matter when he phases through it. He also has an aura of coldness and can manipulate coldness. Also when he is intangible, he is slightly transparent. He is resistant to extreme temperatures. Oddly, his body seems to age slower than normally, so he looks younger than he his.
Weaknesses and Limits: The cold aura is not as cold when he is not intangible. After a long period of intangiblity he can no longer damage/disrupt matter when he passes through it and manipulate coldness for some time. The aura of coldness is always on unless his power is being negated. Excessive use of coldness manipulation renders it useless/weak. Though his cold aura is stronger when he is intangible, his cold manipulation is weaker, but not that weak.
Appearance: Long, dirty, black hair. He is average height. He is dressed in rags. He's dirty and nasty. Ice blue eyes.
Personality: Generic pyschopath #4
History: He was never the biggest kid on the playground until he discovered his gift and killed the biggest kid on the playground. He discovered he could pass through stuff when he wanted to avoid someone and passed through the floor. He would have kept going down if he didn't realize he didn't have to follow the same rules as before. He was quickly found out by the ETG by the multiple murders he committed with his power. He had to be taken down by antinite and wore antinite cuffs all the time to keep him from using his power. He was later broken out by some gifted. He was grateful and only killed one of them (they weren't sure if he was the murderer, but they had their suspicions) before joining them on their way to Derika. He was almost arrested as soon as he stepped of the boat and spent the rest of his time in the cell with antinite cuffs in solitary confinement. Today he heard some commotion outside his cell. He knows better than to be hopeful, but he can't help himself.
Equipment: Clothes and cuffs.
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Maximilian receives Vance's message. It surprised him. It had been a long time since his processor was put to use. Ew, Vance. He replies, 'Oh, shut up. I have work to do.' He walks towards a pile of rubble and finds a mutilated Brinkhaven SWAT person. Woah. That doesn't look like it was caused by the explosion... He picks up an organ on the ground that, presumably, was from the body. He places it back where it should be and starts to use his power to heal and raise the dead. He decides to send a message to Vance. 'Hey, were any bad guys here recently. I just found a mutilated Brinkhaven guard.' He was here before me. Maybe he knows something.
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((This should have been posted way sooner. I'm not sure about details so the post is short.))
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Well, the last time I posted with them was before the big timeskip so they aren't really anywhere right now... But they were at an ETG research base on Derika before the timeskip.
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I'd like to say that your post did not capture my attention, but Ryik's did.