Kendal:
She sits, alone, In a booth, Smiling happily with herself now that she is relieved of command for the evening.
She thinks to herself, and ponders of horrific events that can only turn out to make her laugh, How sickening.
Kendal looks around the bar. unsure of what to think. That she plays no part in protecting the citizens of this dimension?
Well, I am in desperate need of a kind group of people to game with. I need quite a few people and I am looking to hire people of the minimum age being at least 16
You WILL need a mic, AND skype. (steam works as well for steam calls). You'll also need a good sense of humor and some decent building skills.
If you own a server we can mess around in then you will automatically be my righthand man.
Here's the app:
Name:
Age: (Need to be 16 or older)
Skype:
Steam:
Minecraft IGN:
What do you bring to the table.: (in other words, why should I hire you?)
Iren:
"Why are you doing this? JUST STOP"
She looked slightly desturbed.
"I JUST WANT TO KISS YOU..."
She then covered her mouth and then mumbled
"I didn't say that. You're weird looking."
You do believe I'm gonna let this go when I see such arguments?
Haha. You know what? I'll drop it because you're just being ignorant now and refuse to be given any advice. Keep on living in your non-existant paradise of flawless character creation you believe you're doing. I'm not gonna reply anymore because all you do is waste my time.
Looks like you have not ever seen trolling.
And no I don't care if you've lost insterest in the RP or not - you still remain a Roleplayer, so get yourself fixed up an just listen to criticism from now on. ))
((Eh no. Here is what I am going to do. I am going to take what you said, And stuff it in the most unorganized cabinet I have in my room, And hopefully someday I will bother to acknowledge it. Because as of now, it really serves NO PURPOSE. So yes I am a roleplayer, But that app was uh, Lets say it was one of my first roleplay apps in a long time. And I got a bit rusty.. My apps lately have been pretty good. Also, I am choosing to leave the conversation by just blocking you.))
(( Give me a break, argue? For what reason? No, I am trying to point out parts of your application that you can probably work on, this has to do about YOUR improvement. I, personally, have nothing to get out of this. It is you who will be benefitted. So please, don't counter my posting just by stating that I am trying to argue because I'm certainly not.
You just need to think about such an act. Try to put yourself in your character's shoes. Strangling somebody with their own guts. How would you feel after such a gruesome and violent act of yours? Would you ever be the same again? At some point in the real world (and not in the roleplay) there would be police interrogation. What would you tell them? That you were just self defending? You need to think behind the grid of the online altuism, think as an individual. ))
(( Just a note here, I'm not targeting you specifically. Your post happened to be the first one I stumbled upon, so. ))
((No no no no that is indeed clever to say, however in truth you were trolling and trying topick a fight. My app was on the first page, we were 6 pages into this roleplay and though id been accepted, i still hadnt joined in. And i am not going to. Ive lost interest. So no, i dont need to benefit off of your advice for MY CHARACTERS. Just let it go))
(( I'll give you that, it is a roleplay. But still, you can't possible be an "innocent little girl, shy and emotionally broken" when you've teared the guts out of somebody whoever that somebody might be. ))
((I said she ACTS like an innocent girl. And she is emotionally broken from the experience. You are just trying to argue.))
(( Oh please, give me ONE instance of a 17 year old girl killing a rapist by cutting them open and strangling them with their own organs. I hope you do know that if someone did this in real life chances are they are psychopaths and need medical attention, not to mention detention in such cases. Even if we do consider killing somebody normal in the first place, do you feel like it's normal for a 17 year old girl to do so by cutting their interiors open, get washed into their blood, pull his organs out and then strangle him with them? No my dear friend, that is insane and doesn't correspond to reality. ))
((Lol it is a roleplay, Lighten the hell up. The OP of this didn't find anything wrong with the app so it is fine by him. He is the only person that counts anyways. You're merely a player with a too serious attitude toward my character.))
John gulped as Iren grabbed his shirt collar. "N-not broken, just emotionally unstable." John could really be blunt at times. "I-isn't your arm hurting by doing that?"
Iren:
"You couldn't comprehend how much this hurts."
She had a pained look on her face, Her cheeks were red, Her eyes slightly squinting due to the feel of her extended arm. She pulled her face close to his, Nuzzling her nose against his, She went for a kiss, but pulled away before their lips met, She lies back in pain and rests her head on the pillow. Simply wondering what the urge was. And why she went to kiss him. She had no attraction to him, Or did she? The confused jade just lies there. Blushing. Smiling slightly, However her eyes suggested confusion. The tips of her nose was red, from rubbing against his nose.
"Do not tell anyone about that..."
The tone of voice she used was an attempt at seriousness, And came out sounding slightly silly and adorable.
"Stop doing whatever you're doing to make me do those kind of things to you. You're involved with Near and Xaya, I don't want to be part of the trio of lovers."
She looked at him, Biting her lower lip softly and caught herself doing it.
She jumped slightly hen realizing she'd been fantasizing about all four of them together.
"NO! NO NO NO!"
"I HATE YOU JOHN!"
She was now very angry, yet still had that silly demeanor. She couldn't even be called Iren at this point. Jade is back, And sillier than ever before.
She folds her arms and pouts. looking at the door a few feet from her bed.
"John... Comfort me..."((That was very hard to do. I am not used to playing all over the place characters. i hope I captured what you pictured Jade to be like.))
John sighed at Iren's last comment. "Well, you can't hide them forever, Iren... or Jade. You're only making yourself an emotional time bomb. That's what my son did with most of his depression, held it in. He almost ended his life three times at age 10 because of that. We don't want that happening to you, now!"
Iren:
"Heh... Who cares what Xaya or near thinks about me right!? I'm a beautiful, Strong, BROKEN woman right!?"
She gripped the sheets even tighter, She then threw her arm to John, extending it and grabbing onto his shirt collar.
Iren:
She stops staring at the ceiling crying, And turns her head towards him. Her light purple eyes glisten in his utter generousity.
"Why... Why do you do this to me? Make me feel?"
She closed her eyes tight, gritting her teeth. Balling her hands up into fists holding the bedsheets tight, She sobbed.
"Why did Kirith have to bring you here...? It's only made me realize I can't hide myself away..."
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She sits, alone, In a booth, Smiling happily with herself now that she is relieved of command for the evening.
She thinks to herself, and ponders of horrific events that can only turn out to make her laugh, How sickening.
Kendal looks around the bar. unsure of what to think. That she plays no part in protecting the citizens of this dimension?
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Well, I am in desperate need of a kind group of people to game with. I need quite a few people and I am looking to hire people of the minimum age being at least 16
You WILL need a mic, AND skype. (steam works as well for steam calls). You'll also need a good sense of humor and some decent building skills.
If you own a server we can mess around in then you will automatically be my righthand man.
Here's the app:
Name:
Age: (Need to be 16 or older)
Skype:
Steam:
Minecraft IGN:
What do you bring to the table.: (in other words, why should I hire you?)
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"Why are you doing this? JUST STOP"
She looked slightly desturbed.
"I JUST WANT TO KISS YOU..."
She then covered her mouth and then mumbled
"I didn't say that. You're weird looking."
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((Eh no. Here is what I am going to do. I am going to take what you said, And stuff it in the most unorganized cabinet I have in my room, And hopefully someday I will bother to acknowledge it. Because as of now, it really serves NO PURPOSE. So yes I am a roleplayer, But that app was uh, Lets say it was one of my first roleplay apps in a long time. And I got a bit rusty.. My apps lately have been pretty good. Also, I am choosing to leave the conversation by just blocking you.))
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((No no no no that is indeed clever to say, however in truth you were trolling and trying topick a fight. My app was on the first page, we were 6 pages into this roleplay and though id been accepted, i still hadnt joined in. And i am not going to. Ive lost interest. So no, i dont need to benefit off of your advice for MY CHARACTERS. Just let it go))
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((I said she ACTS like an innocent girl. And she is emotionally broken from the experience. You are just trying to argue.))
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((Lol it is a roleplay, Lighten the hell up. The OP of this didn't find anything wrong with the app so it is fine by him. He is the only person that counts anyways. You're merely a player with a too serious attitude toward my character.))
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Iren:
"You couldn't comprehend how much this hurts."
She had a pained look on her face, Her cheeks were red, Her eyes slightly squinting due to the feel of her extended arm. She pulled her face close to his, Nuzzling her nose against his, She went for a kiss, but pulled away before their lips met, She lies back in pain and rests her head on the pillow. Simply wondering what the urge was. And why she went to kiss him. She had no attraction to him, Or did she? The confused jade just lies there. Blushing. Smiling slightly, However her eyes suggested confusion. The tips of her nose was red, from rubbing against his nose.
"Do not tell anyone about that..."
The tone of voice she used was an attempt at seriousness, And came out sounding slightly silly and adorable.
"Stop doing whatever you're doing to make me do those kind of things to you. You're involved with Near and Xaya, I don't want to be part of the trio of lovers."
She looked at him, Biting her lower lip softly and caught herself doing it.
She jumped slightly hen realizing she'd been fantasizing about all four of them together.
"NO! NO NO NO!"
"I HATE YOU JOHN!"
She was now very angry, yet still had that silly demeanor. She couldn't even be called Iren at this point. Jade is back, And sillier than ever before.
She folds her arms and pouts. looking at the door a few feet from her bed.
"John... Comfort me..."((That was very hard to do. I am not used to playing all over the place characters. i hope I captured what you pictured Jade to be like.))
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Iren:
"Heh... Who cares what Xaya or near thinks about me right!? I'm a beautiful, Strong, BROKEN woman right!?"
She gripped the sheets even tighter, She then threw her arm to John, extending it and grabbing onto his shirt collar.
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She stops staring at the ceiling crying, And turns her head towards him. Her light purple eyes glisten in his utter generousity.
"Why... Why do you do this to me? Make me feel?"
She closed her eyes tight, gritting her teeth. Balling her hands up into fists holding the bedsheets tight, She sobbed.
"Why did Kirith have to bring you here...? It's only made me realize I can't hide myself away..."