IGN: TornadoWatch
Source(s): People on Lost Days
Why Us?: Want to try out OWB, have heard from other people it's a great server and had an incident back in Lost Days with the owner.
RP Experience: Lost Days and many RPing boards across the internet. I've RP'ed for a good few months, maybe a year. IC
Name: William Vayne
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: A younger man with blue eyes and black hair. Average height and weight.
Personality: An intelligent but quiet individual that has strong opinions that he usually keeps to himself. Is not afraid to take action. Prefers being stealthy.
Background: -not ignoring you. yay some people actually read the lore-
Broken will get back to you as soon as he can. I like it though.
[u][b]OOC[/b][/u] IGN: Wolfie_Seekah. You know me, you hate me. Source(s): Moses/Black Jesus. WhyUs?: cuz we r episauc RP Experience: lolidunno [u][b]IC[/b][/u] Name: Jack Red Age: 39 Gender: Male. Appearance: Relatively stumped in height, he stands at 6'3. His frame is bulky however, giving him a somewhat "dwarven" appearance, further aided by his thick black beard. Brown eyes, relatively plain face. A few marks along his back as scars from accidents as a child, and relatively poor hygene. Personality: Relatively gruff, not afraid of throwing his weight around to get what he wants. He's surprisingly open to others though, offering them a drink or a cig when the time is right enough. Background: -This silence offends Slaanesh-
background just kinda stops when he's just barely a man, but you say you're 38 39? What happen in the other 18 years... Either make him younger, or give me something good to read. I know you can do things wolfie.
IGN: Olsalt
Source(s): just derping through the forums
Why Us?: because Fallout is amazing and i cant wait for the next one (I heard it will be the last one)
RP Experience: Played on a couple of RP servers but none really struck my fancy
IC
Name: Jack Dandy
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Appearance: about 6 feet tall, he has blonde hair and blue eyes, some say he is strong enough to arm wrestle a Securitron.
Personality: He is a very happy and outgoing person just don't make him angry, when hes mad he will do whatever it takes to win. also he enjoys long walks in the wasteland.
Background: Jacks earliest memory is walking through the wasteland at age 6 with his trusty companion Rocky the rock, he has no idea on where he came from or who his parents were but he swore to one day find out. Recently he has suffered a major set back though, the loss of his oldest friend Rocky the rock.
Please elaborate. On everything. We prefer to see at least 2 well written lore filled character giving paragraphs of information. All I see is that you like rocks.
Name:Eva Renthers
Age:18
Gender: Female
Appearance: brunette/red shoulder length hair, 5'9, large breasts, athletic, caucasian, usually wearing beaten armor, dark eyes.
Personality: she trusts people to a fault and generally likes to work with others as opposed to ever being alone
Background: -old character is back-
sure, you can play her again. Her survival is within the realms of possibility, and as long as you don't do anything foolish to go back on what you've already done with her on the server, she can continue to exist.
The IP should be on our other forum thread for role play applications. And yeah, I would prefer to have your skype. Over the weekend I work like 30-40 hours. So I won't be on much till monday night, around 9pm eastern time. And this week I'm just in general really really busy. But Broken will be able to direct you as to what to do monday. (he can't come online on sundays due to whatever or another, and I'll be working 12/13 hours.
Builder app
IGN: CarpeDiem293
Age: 16
Building Experience: I've played MC since early Alpha stage and I've built quite a few things since then.
Examples of work (screenshots):I don't have pictures of past builds but here's some newer things I've built.http://imgur.com/2q0...h,LrE8r,7eHcF#0
Time you can dedicate: Anytime of the day and any day unless preoccupied.
Time Zone: Eastern
Builder App:
IGN: DragonOptic
Age: 14
Building Experience: To be honest, this would be my first time on a server build. I am pretty talented at building and redstone if you need the help. (While talking about redstone, the BoS doors on your server don't open fully, i don't know it that is on purpose or not)
Examples of work (screenshots): These are just a few of my things, but my whole gallery is a simple click away: http://mr-house.devi...allery/38203896
Time you can dedicate: 3 weeks.
Time Zone: USA, Central
As long as you two will do whatever we say, and don't muck up our trust, I'll accept both of you as builders.
Sorrow, I added you on Skype, so we can chat when there's time for both of us to chat, as well as Broken.
Ok i just wanted to say something. Apparently I got muted and kicked because I was "complaining and being disrespectful", when I wasn't. I was just trying to offer some advice and be helpful, but will helm I think it was (rodri) decided to be quite rude about it. He basically said, Im an admin, I don't have to deal with any server problems and I can do whatever i want. Look Im just saying, thats not a good way to run a server. I speak from experience, I have fired admins/mods from my server for doing that. People have complained to me about staff being like that before. I literally was not doing anything, but rodri just said, "Screw you, I don't have to deal with you, Ill ban you just because I don't like you, mute". Then went on to blame it about being on the server for a long time today, and people complaining about stuff all the time (which you have to get used to when you run a server, whether they are right or wrong). Yet never did anything about it. S yea, just a little complaint about him, considering I never really did anything wrong, and i never broke a rule at all :/ I was never complaining about anything, i told him that, just trying to be helpful. Then he calls all the members of the server children. He obviously has no respect for anyone, and would just rather not deal with anything and complain about the members all day :/
Getting your bodies mixed up man. I'm Azazel, and had just logged on. Broken's going through some **** right now. I'm taking care of it, hopefully this can be put behind us and be all the wiser for it. But you're right, you didn't do anything wrong and I appreciate the advice you had given us. This is our first server, and while we had an idea of the burden it would be, I don't think he fully realized the extent of that burden. Hopefully this kind of thing wont happen again as we strive to be better every day. If it does though, make sure to PM me about it asap and I'll do what needs doing. I apologize on his behalf.
New faction on this server? well if i like it, it would be great to workj with you again bro:D and im just waiting for an app reveiw, also you think they'd exept a lore writer? I'd apply but it seems they have alot as is.
well, we'd ACCEPT a lore writer, but I dunno if we'd exept one. If he starts a new faction, it would be extremely minor, and would only be a group, which has the least amount of power on our server.
Why us: I like playing fallout and Minecraft so i put both together and you get the old world blues.
Rp Experience: I have played Fallout New Vegas and I have played on other Rp servers.
Name: Flippy
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Character's personality: Has a lot of anger issues.
appearance: He is dressed in rags (color shades of brown and black). His hair is black and his eyes are blue.
Character background: Sorry if it’s too short than others.
This boys life is all one big wild fire. When born his dad wanted him to test his experiments, so when he was the right age his dad would inject something in him which was to control all anger no breakouts no nothing. When they had to move and live in a hotel his dad mixed something on accident that when you get mad your anger takes over you for a while. At the age Flippy was he was not aware of it. At age 12 he was kicked out of his home for the people there hoped that he would get killed out there.
At age 16 he was in control of his anger. It was like a second mind in him that wants to come out at times. So to please him he does some hunting, like bounty hunting or animal hunting anything to survive. Bad news is that he gets in fights to much and kills to many people he just wants to end it all, but he can’t he wont he just not fully complete.
Denied for now. Your grammar is a bit weird, and your personality could use some work. Over all I can't really dig the background. I like the anger issues thing, but over all it's just not good... Work on the grammar and structure a bit, maybe add a little more and we'll talk, okay?
IGN:commando1196 Source(s):I used to have one WhyUs?:I have had experience with fallout servers and i want to help out with this one RP Experience:Vault RP and all the other run offs of it Name:John Hertz Age:30 Gender:male Appearance:John's skin has a titanium color due to experiments done to him as a teenager. He has a muscular appearance but you cannot tell due to the metal attached to his skin. His eyes are green. You cannot see his hair because he has a hood that covers it. Personality:A loyal friend but it takes a lot for John to trust you. He knows a lot about everything and loves to talk about theories. He can be very deceptive but only does it when he has to be. An occasional flash back happens where he becomes extremely violent but his flashbacks are far and few in between. He has seen a lot and only shares it with the ones he cares about. Background: -sorry forgot to bother reading the short background-
Background's too short. Want to elaborate on the experiments, or who did them, what their reason was, why him? What is the color of titanium? Why would anyone benefit from having him around?
IGN:bluestudioes Source(s):Another server i play on WhyUs?:I really like your plans for this server upon reading page 1. so i think ti would be a great server to join. RP Experience:I have played on a nother fall-out server, that is pretty much it for multi-player RP experiance. [u][b]IC[/b][/u] Name:Larry Age:17 Gender:male Appearance:Larry is a tall muscular figure, he is aprox 6ft6in. and is always waering black ranger armor/out a helm, his body is covered in scales as he is a failed experamant of the BoS outcast attempt to gene-splice the attributes of a deathclaw(speed strength ect.) into a human. Has 25% of his face as 'human' with a blue eye and blond hair. He has four horns(suggesting they used an Alpha-Male) And long claws. Personality:Larry is a very quiet but trusting guy, due to what he is alot of people only see the feral side of him when he goes on rampages, but for the few friends he has made he will put his own life on the line for them. Despite being feral he can be stopped by those he has a bond with, even in the middle of a severe-rampage. Background:-tl;dr-
Crafting will take care of you as he started with you. I'm sure you're fine though.
IGN: lv_Hidd3n_vl Source(s): WinterWrath2089 WhyUs?: My friend recommended me to this server (see above), and being an avid fan of the Fallout series decided to give it a go! RP Experience: RPed a lot back a couple years ago, other then that never done so before in Minecraft [u][b]IC[/b][/u] Name: Jax Fenix Age: 24 Gender: Make Appearance: Tall (6'3), with a broad but slender build. He has a green eye, for he is blind in his other eye (all white). He lost this from radiation poisoning at a young age. A scar also ranges down said eye. His skin is tan from so much traveling and being in the sun, and his hands are also very durable from long-time usage of heavy weapons. Personality: Typically quiet, keeps to him self. Basically your stereotypical "Lone Wolf". He's shy, and generally a kind person. But he also has a short temper to things he deems unacceptable (i.e. a cocky attitude). He's also loyal and protective to his friends. Background: At the age of 19, Jax's entire family (mother, father, and younger brother) were killed by a pack of super mutants. Since then he's become a wanderer/scavenger. The past few years he has traveled by himself to different destinations across the Mojave Deseret. Despite keeping to himself, he's kept close ties to several powerful people in-case he'd ever need it.
OOC
IGN: EvilMrSnowman
Source(s): Minecraft.et
Why Us?: I Love Minecraft& I Love FallOut I want to see what happens when you put them together.
RP Experience: IC
Name: Jared
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Personality:
Background:
OOC
IGN:
Source(s):
Why Us?: I love Fallout, and I see a server, Fallout-themed, with serious RP. And SPOUT?! I must join it!
RP Experience: So, me and the RP. It's like Peanut Butter Jelly time without the butter. I've joined many RP servers, back in the days I was a cracked fella. But, lately there haven't been many Cracked-RP Servers. Now I'm premium, so I'm trying to find another RP server to join. IC
Name: Regret
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Appearance: Blond, red eyes. He wears his custom Vault 13 scientist suit, which is Black and red, and has a big red 13 on the back of it. Rumor has that his right eye is purple, though it hasn't been yet confirmed.
Personality: Back on his Vault 13's days, he was a calm, but funny kid. He always had a way to make people laugh. However, that changed when he and his parents followed the Vault Dweller into the Wasteland. There, he grew to become a distant, cold person. He have no friends, only 'persons that can benefit him'.
Background: -nope, not doing it-
Wrong Vault, wrong game... The original Vault Dweller emerged from the Vaults in 2161, 130 years ago (give or take) from the time we're currently playing in. Vault 13 is long long and so would your character here.
OOC
IGN: deadfire813
Source(s): word o' mouth
Why Us?: Most of my friends from the other server I play on
RP Experience: 3 other servers Before this one and was a developer on one server before this IC
Name: Andrew Grand
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: Andrew is a short Caucasian male with blonde hair and blue eyes he is not very muscular his arms look like noodles; from a distance appears to be a shadow; and is barely able to fit into a suit of t-51b armor
Personality: Andrew lived in a BoS community with his mother and father. his father, a high ranking scribe, taught him gun repair and computer repair. Being from technological roots and a natural studier does not affect Andrew and his charismatic nature. A born leader he loves people but has a hard time taking orders from superiors that he does not respect While his small frame make him very agile he lacks the strength and Endurance of others.
Background:-It gets better-
A better backstory than last time, and doesn't randomly stop. Accepted.
Also, I didn't just ignore you. I had a headache, pretty bad one. Text was hurting my eyes.
IGN:EJBomber26
Source(s):friends
Why Us?:Fallout servers are cool and this on looks nice
RP Experience: Many different RP servers. One fallout.
Name:Jay
Age: 27
Gender:male
Appearance: Appears completly human. He has robotic implants but they are not visible. He is pale with brown hair and his 5ft 9in. He likes to wear sunglasses as he thinks it makes him appear more of a threat.
Personality: After years of living alone in the Mojave Jay became cold and cynical. His hatred for the NCR was let out on raiders as well as innocent people. He did not care for the lives of others and found joy in killing. When he joined the Legion he found purpose in his life. He pledged his loyalty to the almighty Caesar not because of his power but because he respected him and agreed with the Legion's purpose. Now he his a ruthless warrior that is absolutley loyal to Caesar.
-much much better this time.-
[u][b]OOC[/b][/u] IGN:Ash_J_Williams Source(s): Minecraft Forums, if you mean where I found this. And my friend DragonOptic recommended it. WhyUs?: I love Fallout, and I've played on a few roleplaying servers for Minecraft. RP Experience: Quite a bit of experience, I can be a leader or a follower, and I am pretty fair when it comes to RP. [u][b]IC[/b][/u] Name: Ash Williams Age: 78 Gender: Male Appearance: A tamed ghoul reaver, he has diamond thread sealing his lips together, and he speaks with a voice modulator in his throat, giving him a moderately robotic voice. He has dark blue skin and blood red eyes, and has green and black dreadlocks, which are barely on his head after 64 years as a ghoul. Personality: From his past and current situation as a member of one of the most hated races around, he is unfriendly and untrusting of others, but once he gets to know people, he becomes like family to him, and he will protect them with his life. Background:-sooo... How is he a tamed ghoul?-
Your text size hurts my eyes. A few issues, mostly couldn't you just be a regular non feral ghoul? And blue skin? We'll talk if you'd like, try to win me over with your feral.
OOC:
Ign:alaca
Age:27
Why us? Because I Though the Idea Was Nice But other Wasteland Servers Are Horrible In Lore Holes,Etc Etc
Did you read the rules?: Yes
What is your RP exprience: I Have Been On Plenty of Gmod Servers,Table Top D@D,Lots of Forum Rping I Am A Great Rper,Only Problem Is Sometimes My Imagination Goes To Far (None Of These Sings Will I Use,<3,<Etc) And I Hope We Have Fun
Name: Alexandria Hyde
Affliliation: Talon Company
Sex: Female
Age: 27
Occupation/Specialty: Mercenary/ Hitman/ Trained Killer
Personality: Switches between upbeat and aloof to sadistic and cruel
Appearance: Asian. Around 5 feet tall with an athletic build. Has neck length Blue hair. Due to radiation at a young age. Her body is scarred (a side-effect from her job), but her face is unusually unscarred for one in her profession. When first meeting her one might be fazed the the whiteness of her teeth, dentistry practically unheard in the wasteland. That is because Alexandria's teeth are all prosthetics, his original set falling out during a bout of radiation poison he suffered as a teenager.
Bio: I-little sadist... I like it-
I quite possibly love this app and this character. Although there are a few issues due to our own lore. I'll pm you about them, with possible solutions. Accepted, although like I said. Changes will have to be made.
I clearly stated that at age 28 he was very smart, this being a response for "When he grows up the fact that he was a child genious doesn't matter" because it does, as I mentioned. He stayed smart from 28 to 38 of course.. then Skull taking over RVC was the reason he left.
Is it really necessary that I change it?
On a second read through without a massive headache. It does make more sense.
Accepted.
IGN:EJBomber26
Source(s):friends
Why Us?:Fallout servers are cool and this on looks nice
RP Experience: Many different RP servers. One fallout.
Name:Jay
Age: 23
Gender:male
Appearance: Is a human but has robotic parts. Robotic parts are infused within him. They give him enhanced abilities including strength and accuracy, but do not protect him from radiation. He is of average height and has a somewhat stocky build. He has short brown hair and brown eyes, and when he is not wearing armor he likes to wear a hat to cover is robotic skull.
Personality: Self preserving, lonewolf, and a need to be something. He is extremely self conscious about his robotic parts. He dislikes robots but he almost is one. Because of this he prefers to live on his own. He is tough to get a long with and seems to have a cold personality when you first meet him but once you are friends he is easy to like. Living on his own secluded from others caused him to become somewhat socially akward, but he still retained his intelligence. Pancakes over waffles. Scrapple, bacon, and sausage in that order. Apples over oranges. Cheeseburgers over hotdogs.
Background: -hates robots because he's a not quite a robot?-
Your grammar is off, and hurts a lot to read. Why are the artificial limbs there, or are they not limbs? And just implants, or what? The whole thing is just kind of confusing.
IGN: xCpuMattx Source(s): Friends Why Us?: my friend say that this is the best fallout server they have been on and I trust
them completely and we usually play rp servers together and I like fallout so I hope to
see and share the experience on your server with my friends RP Experience: I have been on other rp servers on minecraft and I have played a few rp
video games such as fallout 3.
Name: Matt Marben Spelloyal Age: 17 Gender: male Appearance: normal teenage boy. Brown hair medium length. Blue eyes.
White shirt black jacket black jeans and brown shoes. Personality: matt's personality is somewhat weird he isn’t easy to get angry yet when he
is he can become pretty scary as if he changes in to someone else, which really happens. He is
usually kind and considerate of others in need. Background: -she gone and died on you, bummer-
Your grammar isn't there. but the app is fine otherwise I guess. Although you said he becomes someone else when he's angry, does he have metal problems, why does it happen?
OOC IGN: nolanwashere Source(s): Twizzler_Lord(a friend) informed me of the server. Why us?:This seems to be a great server, full of content and RP I shouldn't miss out on. RP Experience: 3 out of the 5 Roleplay servers I've played on were Fallout Roleplay; it is my favorite kind of Minecraft Roleplay server.
IC Name: Jack Cameron Mackenzie (Nolan James Andrews is his real name, for he goes by a fake one) Age: 38 Gender: Male Appearance: I vary from the skins I use with him, have created multiple clothes for different days. Nolan is mildly wrinkled, he definately looks older than he is by a bit, has a rusty beard, brown hair green eyes, and scars toughening and engraved upon his face. 6.1, a small bit fat, but even more muscular(a mix of both, leaving him still strong,) 280 lbs. Personality: He is usually depressed, and easily angered around certain people, but he would never turn to evil and will always oppose it, and he is partially living in the shadow of his old self.(I didn't mention close to everything in the background, just where he grew up)
Background: -boy genius?-
Ten Years Later
-and now all of a sudden, the fact that he's a boy genius doesn't matter?-
It's like 2 different' backgrounds almost. Could you be a little mor coherent with it please?
[u][b]OOC[/b][/u] IGN:Zugel Source(s): other servers talking of you WhyUs?: want to try all the fallout servers RP Experience: I have much, and have played for a long time on a different fallout server [u][b]IC[/b][/u] Name:Marcus Freeman Age:28 Gender:Male Appearance: Very tall, Very strong. wears a brown Duster and has a cybernetic Eye piece has a strange look to him like he isn't really a human Personality: Devious, and cunning, not to be trusted Background:He came from a Genetics lab from Detroit, he doesn't know much about how he came to be but he knows that he needs to find out. one day he hopes that someone from his past will meet up with him and explain who he is and how he came to be.
WhyUs?: I enjoy how everything looks thought out and the added pics make me interested.
RP Experience: I play on many rp sights and have played many rp games. IC Name: Dankaiba Foxington
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Appearance: Dan is a average male, he has red hair and minor scars on his legs, arms, and chest. He has red spiky hair and pale orange eyes. He wears snow camo because it is teh only item he has left of his past. He wears goggles so sand and dust doesn't get in his eyes.
Personality: Brave, Honest, orderly
Background: -WAT?-
I'm a little confused. You were put to sleep and woke up in the middle of the war? Did you live through the nukes and you're from the pre-war times, and just waking up from a suspended animation? What army did you join? It's all pretty vague.
Role-Play Exp.: I’ve been on 5 different minecraft role-play servers
Why Us: Fallout and minecraft just work. All the other server's that have fallout have why to many people and just a
way to combined my 2 favorite games
Time You Can Dedicate: weekdays 4pm-8pm weekends 12am-6pm
Save The Mojave!
IC
Name: Nosmoke
Gender: Male
From:Freeside
Age: 26
Appearance: 6'6 ,blonde ,Dark blue eyes, Scar right through his nose, muscular
Fears: radscorpion
Personality: Funny guy, he almost impossible to hate unless you get on his bad side
Occupation: Shooting and playing around with friends
Skills: Stealth, Shooting and Survival
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
Chief: Man a group of powder ganders that have been trying to over throw this very town
NoSmoke: So what’s our plan Chief
Cheif: I'll have you and the other man to go in from the east since there attacking from the west its full proof
NoSmoke: But to the east we have Death Claws Sir it will be suicide
Chief: i already Thought about that but NoSmoke your good with a knife just slit there throats
NoSmoke: Easier said then done ill try my best *leaves the room*
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): -little young to be playing fallout, aren't you?-
As I said, aren't you a little young to be playing the fallout series? And a little over powered there in your background.
OOC
IGN: deadfire813
Source(s): word o' mouth
Why Us?: Most of my friends from the other server I play on
RP Experience: 3 other servers Before this one IC
Name: Andrew Grand
Age:
Gender: Male
Appearance: Andrew is a short Caucasian male with blonde hair and blue eyes he is not very muscular his arms look like noodles he from a distance appears to be a shadow
Personality: Andrew lived in a BoS community with his mother and father. his father, a high ranking scribe, taught him gun repair and computer repair so he was kinda a battle tech and is hugely
Background:-ran off with the gypsies-
I would suggest proof reading, or having someone proof reading things like this, especially if you have other friends on the server, because there were several times where you misused words, and repeated phrases. Like
The attack leaving the Enclave crippled also left his father crippled.
could have been written The attack left the Enclave, and his father crippled. That's just one example, and there could be others. But that's just a friendly tip. Its important because it makes stories easier to read, and doesn't take us out of the story because we're unsure of what was just said.
I see the character, and I see it wants to live in my world. But it needs some defining yet.
Also this bothers me. "so he was kinda a battle tech and is hugely" and is hugely what?
IGN: SorrowTheReaper
Source(s): Lyycan
Why Us?: I'm looking for a new Fallout server, and I would like to give your server a shot.
RP Experience: Other Minecraft Servers.
IC
Name: Doug Bentley AKA Sorrow
Age: Twenty Eight
Gender: Male
Appearance: Fair Skinned, Athletic Fighter, 5'4''. Bears large Chinese tattoo of 'Sorrow' on left ribs.
Personality: Quiet, friendly, trustworthy buy not trusting.
Background:-pass-
I still have my problems with it, but those are my own. It's acceptable now and within the realms of reality.
Haha. Yeah a little much. I was thinking more like 300 or so soldiers altogether, and fourteen battalions just sounded cool Sorry. I also didn't mean to say they were all battle hardened, as the Legion advances ranks by the amount of battle you have been in, so we would be using advanced weapons to slaughter a lot of the lesser foot soldiers. We obviously did not win, I ended up a slave.
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Broken will get back to you as soon as he can. I like it though.
background just kinda stops when he's just barely a man, but you say you're
3839? What happen in the other 18 years... Either make him younger, or give me something good to read. I know you can do things wolfie.Please elaborate. On everything. We prefer to see at least 2 well written lore filled character giving paragraphs of information. All I see is that you like rocks.
sure, you can play her again. Her survival is within the realms of possibility, and as long as you don't do anything foolish to go back on what you've already done with her on the server, she can continue to exist.
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As long as you two will do whatever we say, and don't muck up our trust, I'll accept both of you as builders.
Sorrow, I added you on Skype, so we can chat when there's time for both of us to chat, as well as Broken.
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Getting your bodies mixed up man. I'm Azazel, and had just logged on. Broken's going through some **** right now. I'm taking care of it, hopefully this can be put behind us and be all the wiser for it. But you're right, you didn't do anything wrong and I appreciate the advice you had given us. This is our first server, and while we had an idea of the burden it would be, I don't think he fully realized the extent of that burden. Hopefully this kind of thing wont happen again as we strive to be better every day. If it does though, make sure to PM me about it asap and I'll do what needs doing. I apologize on his behalf.
well, we'd ACCEPT a lore writer, but I dunno if we'd exept one. If he starts a new faction, it would be extremely minor, and would only be a group, which has the least amount of power on our server.
Denied for now. Your grammar is a bit weird, and your personality could use some work. Over all I can't really dig the background. I like the anger issues thing, but over all it's just not good... Work on the grammar and structure a bit, maybe add a little more and we'll talk, okay?
What page was it on? I don't recall seeing it anywhere.
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And done.
gotta bear with us lads. Only a the two of us whitelisting and things are hectic.
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Crafting will take care of you as he started with you. I'm sure you're fine though.
Background too short.
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Wrong Vault, wrong game... The original Vault Dweller emerged from the Vaults in 2161, 130 years ago (give or take) from the time we're currently playing in. Vault 13 is long long and so would your character here.
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We (the mods and admin) are currently reworking a few of the rules and conversing about important things.
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Plugins and stuff. some technical difficulties and a big Gun overhaul
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A better backstory than last time, and doesn't randomly stop. Accepted.
Also, I didn't just ignore you. I had a headache, pretty bad one. Text was hurting my eyes.
Accepted. Much better.
Your text size hurts my eyes. A few issues, mostly couldn't you just be a regular non feral ghoul? And blue skin? We'll talk if you'd like, try to win me over with your feral.
I quite possibly love this app and this character. Although there are a few issues due to our own lore. I'll pm you about them, with possible solutions. Accepted, although like I said. Changes will have to be made.
On a second read through without a massive headache. It does make more sense.
Accepted.
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Your grammar is off, and hurts a lot to read. Why are the artificial limbs there, or are they not limbs? And just implants, or what? The whole thing is just kind of confusing.
Your grammar isn't there. but the app is fine otherwise I guess. Although you said he becomes someone else when he's angry, does he have metal problems, why does it happen?
It's like 2 different' backgrounds almost. Could you be a little mor coherent with it please?
This is not enough background, please add to it.
I'm a little confused. You were put to sleep and woke up in the middle of the war? Did you live through the nukes and you're from the pre-war times, and just waking up from a suspended animation? What army did you join? It's all pretty vague.
We'll work on that right now
As I said, aren't you a little young to be playing the fallout series? And a little over powered there in your background.
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I would suggest proof reading, or having someone proof reading things like this, especially if you have other friends on the server, because there were several times where you misused words, and repeated phrases. Like
could have been written The attack left the Enclave, and his father crippled. That's just one example, and there could be others. But that's just a friendly tip. Its important because it makes stories easier to read, and doesn't take us out of the story because we're unsure of what was just said.
I see the character, and I see it wants to live in my world. But it needs some defining yet.
Also this bothers me. "so he was kinda a battle tech and is hugely" and is hugely what?
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I still have my problems with it, but those are my own. It's acceptable now and within the realms of reality.
See you in the Mojave.
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Make it like one, and I can deal with it.