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    posted a message on LethalDrive · Official host of MineCon 2011! · 20% off with 'summertime'!
    Good servers as ever, JWJ.

    Glad to be one of your customers again.
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    posted a message on The Dead Man Walking (Story)
    Quote from hawkdude12

    It's good grammar and interesting, yet it feels a bit cliche. Also You should rewrite the sentence "I'm going to die, won't I?" as the choice of words SEEMS incorrect aren't I might be a better fit.


    Thanks, I'll work on that for Draft number 3. I do admit the story is quite cliche, I need to polish off it's originality. Change why he has trauma, etc.
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    posted a message on The Dead Man Walking (Story)
    I've always wanted to write this, but I never had time and I've always been lazy. I know I don't really have a reputation on these forums, but I need some place to post my work. Enjoy!

    I've been thinking of writing some sort of story for a while, but I was always too lazy to actually write it out. I've finally gotten around to writing the first chapter, but I still don't have a name. Let me know what you think c:


    Chapter one: Cold Sweat


    "It hurts.. so bad.."

    "I know. I'm trying, just, calm down, okay? You'll be fine."

    God damn it. I can't do this again. I've watched one too many scared soldiers, many of them just kids, die in my hands. But this wasn't the time to think about it. I had to keep working. I had to try. He's loosing blood fast, but I can't see from where. "I'm so cold, man..." He let out a long, rusty cough. "I can't feel my legs.." "You'll be fine. I just need to find the so-" His femoral artery was severed. I don't even have any transfusion packs to give him. I don't even have any painkillers to ease him. "I'm going to die, won't I?" I looked him directly in the eyes. I could see death in them. He deserved far more than this- bleeding to death in a dirt crater, under fire. He atleast deserved the truth. But I lied to him. "You won't. you'll be fine." He let out another long cough. this one, accompanied by blood. "Medics are trained to lie well, I heard. I guess you must've missed that course." His eyes were slowly rolling to the back of his head. No, no not now. Not again. I can't watch another one die. "I won't let you die here. I won't." Despite his atrocious condition, he managed one last breath and used it on one final sentence: "Your too late for that." And with a bloody grin on his face, he died. But there are worse things to worry about then a body now. There was a strange whining noise, and the hum of engines in the distance.. something was coming..

    I woke up in cold sweat. The low pitched whine of the Ariska's engines brought me out of my dream. Sitting up in my bed inside the tiny cabin, I rubbed my eyes deeply. I keep getting those dreams about the war. Whatever I do, they don't go away. Hopefully, this buisness trip will take my mind off it. I get up, and wash my face in the tiny sink by the door. I pull on a fresh pair of clothes- Some casual things. My buisness meeting isn't until tommorow, So I have a day to fool around Jaltak. But then again, Who wants to be walking around Jaltak anyway? The little holographic display mounted in the wall of my cabin displays the information first in Altarian, Which looks it took the alphabet and turned it backwards, and then in english. It was about 8:00 AM in Altaria, Sunrise. The ship was in final docking procedures, and would land in about five minutes. All passengers were to report to the Entry bays for final de-boarding. Since I still had some time, I packed my things and started walking toward the viewing decks. Usually, the long, steel hallways are packed with travellers. However, today, there is only the sound of my footsteps and the maids of the ship preparing rooms for the next round of travelers. Even the Atrium, which is usually packed with people going to and fro, is empty, except for a few scarce souls walking to the Entry bay. Walking up the rightmost stairway to the third floor of the ship, I push open the glass doors to the Carpeted and window-surrounded viewing deck. Normally, the windows would be full of beautiful stars and the empty blackness of space. Today, It's filled with the warmth of the Altarian rising sun and the view of Jaltak's ever stretching skyline. It seems that each time i'm here, the Buildings grow taller. Or maybe the ships are getting smaller. The whine of the ships engines become ever lighter, and the dull thud of tethering hooks attaching to the side of the ship. A final decreasing whine sounds through the air, along with the sound of mechanical lifting. Exiting the viewing deck, and walking toward the Entry bays, I brace myslef for the days ahead. It's going to be a long, hard two weeks in this hostile world.

    (This is final draft 2 of chapter 1)
    Posted in: Arts & Creativity
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    We have begun work on the first town already, and Safteymoose is allowing us to host a subdomain until we get our own dedicated one. We're moving along ,but we still need more people and builders!
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Updated the build team, and holding a skype conference. the server and IP are avaidable to build team members
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Added new additions to the build team.
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    We've got 3 new confirmed members to the build team, as shown!

    Bukkit experts And website experts are needed
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Adding xtra to the build team.

    Still need alot more!
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Thanks for all the requests guys!

    Remember to add me so I can get to know a bit more about your skills and add you to the team.
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Anyone who has any of the communication methods posted in the contact info, please add me on those, And I'll talk further about your addition to the team!
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    @ giygas

    That would be awesome! Just add me on both, I've posted contact information in the first post.
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    My account on skype is WafflesElite, I'll add my contact information to the top of the thread.
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    Skype, Steam, and facebook. i'm open to other suggestions.
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on Looking for a dedicated development team.
    I've always had some sort of dream of hosting a server unique, unlike anything other. I'm tired of simple economy, freebuild, rp, bla bla servers. These kind of servers are getting so stale and repetitive, despite the limitless bounds of minecraft, That I don't want to make one like the others. Very few servers these days have anything incredibly unique to them besides the player builds.


    I want to build a new kind of Roleplay server - One that has so many quests. So many towns. so many things to do that a player won't run out of enjoyment for HIS level for at least a month. One where people could combine the best of building, Minecraft, And certain mmo and lite roleplay games, all into one. The clever mod I'm setting up, TheMineQuest, is perfect for this, and I'm ready to build a world that no other server can copy. But there is one problem, and that is:

    Damn, It's gonna be hard to do this alone.

    So I come to the community prepared, with a server already bought, A teamspeak a few freinds wouldn't mind sharing, and limitless time. (it's the summer and I really don't want a job)


    Helpers and creators will be given full administrive rights over the server, access to the box to edit files, etc.

    The only requirements is that you be fluid in working with bukkit, or good at building complex things.

    Also needed are some website designers, As I plan to rent a website in the near future.


    BUILD TEAM:

    Me(MrmcWaffles)

    IrustyI

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    Rockasaur123

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    BUKKIT TEAM:

    Me (Mrmcwaffles)

    Flilopino

    Xtra

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    Website Design Team:

    Me (Mrmcwaffles)

    Flilopino

    NiggleOvBlyth

    CONTACT INFORMATION:

    Skype: WafflesElite

    Steam: the_warbird2 (will come up as waffles when added)

    Facebook: Michael Kovco

    I need your help bros, be part of something original!
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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    posted a message on ImperiumCraft Roman RP[DEDICATED 32-slot][Bukkit][Iconomy]
    This topic is no longer needed, lock please.
    Posted in: Starting Up / Looking For Server
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