It has an interesting concept, but I'm questioning the logic behind this Universe. If the government of this new planet is aware of children with powers, wouldn't it be more wise to kill them on sight rather than wait for them to "Turn" and suffer for years?
I do like the idea that the children of this new planet are all 'infected', in a way that they are a valuable necessity for the continued survival of humanity, but there is something wrong with them. I like that aspect of this RP, I think you should give it a little more thought and consider it with a bigger concept in mind, so that there is actual material to work with when Roleplaying, such as the children coming to terms with their powers, understanding their significance to continue humanity's existence, and work together to find a solution before they would 'Turn', it can create some amazing conflict.
Thanks for the feedback, now that I think about it that is a huge flaw and plot hole. I'm thinking of rewriting it so that the events of the rp take place before/after the first new child turned. That way people would be able to have freedom to work with their powers while still feeling the weight of the government trying to control them.
Well the obvious one is death. However I have always had a deep rooted fear of things like pyramid head. Pale beings with dark, sunken eyes, razor sharp teeth and elongated faces. I also have a fear of the dark like everyone else, however I can't help but imagine what may be lurking out in the darkness. What could be watching, no, stalking us until we become enveloped in the darkness. And then, and only then will we experience true fear.
I usually think to myself "Alright I have x amount of hours left until this needs to be done. I'll just start after I finish this."
*20 minutes until it's due an 5 empty cans of red bull later*
"Uuuwwwwaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh! Why did I wait so long to start this!?"
Your momma is so short that she committed suicide by jumping off of her bed!
Your momma is so dumb that she stole free bread!
Your momma is so fat that it negatively effects her self of steam.
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Thanks for the feedback, now that I think about it that is a huge flaw and plot hole. I'm thinking of rewriting it so that the events of the rp take place before/after the first new child turned. That way people would be able to have freedom to work with their powers while still feeling the weight of the government trying to control them.
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*A loud series of explosions occur outside before the pungent smell burning tar spreads throughout the house.*
Uhhh guys I hope that no one wanted to drive anywhere because I sort of blew up the road.
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*20 minutes until it's due an 5 empty cans of red bull later*
"Uuuwwwwaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh! Why did I wait so long to start this!?"
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Your momma is so dumb that she stole free bread!
Your momma is so fat that it negatively effects her self of steam.
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*Puts on blindfold*
Great now lets go for a walk.
*Walks off of a cliff*
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Translation: Don't fear the reaper