Some Suggestions:
Could we schedule a time when the Hunger Games will be played? I feel this will encourage people to join more since they can know when they can join with certainty.
Could we changed the price of gold to match the selling cost? This way someone could actually use gold blocks to store their money in-game, which some people prefer to simply a number.
Also, the forum post uses Comic Sans. No one likes Comic Sans.
A great server, The community is so closed knit, I know everyone bye name and we are all friends and have a great time. I only wish more people could play, so our HungerCraft games would be that more epic.
OOC Information
In-game Name:Shaiur
Age: 13
Time zone/Location: PST
How did you hear about us? (Optional): Minecraftforums
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): gamenutt5
IC information
Roleplay Name:Shaiur
Age: 24
Race:Cmok
Class: Swordsman (Merchant)
Biography(250 words minimal): Shaiur was raised on the road. His parents were travelling traders and as such he was taught by them how the trade business works. He would stay back in their wagon with his Mom while his Father would walk with the Lil, their Ox. While on the road, his Father taught him all about how to market to people and how to get a good deal. He also taught him about fighting. His Father would always have a sword on his belt, although he usually never used it.
On his 10th birthday, his Father gave him a notebook a pencil, ever since he has been recording every person of interest he has met, as well as many notes and information of the places he has been, turning his notebook into a encyclopedia of the area. As he grew he more and more began to help out with the family business, until the point where he would often take his father's place.
As soon as he turned 21, his father had planned to hand over the business, but Shaiur refused. He was to make his own destiny, not to be given it by his parents. His father accepted this, and gave all he could, and sent him out on his way. To make his own destiny
I have put more care into typing this comment then you have put into this entire thread, I can understand the occasionally mistake but it seems your keyboard is lacking a shift key, or a period for that matter.
Reposting since first application was denied, it was too generic, and I agree, hopefully you like this one better. (^.^)
u]Out-Of-Character:[/u]
-Minecraft Account Name:Shaiur
-How old are you?: 13
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PST (California)
-How long have you played minecraft?: About half a year
-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes
-What was your favourite Law?: No murdering in the streets of towns. I like it because it adds realism, and a sense of need to be secretive.
-What was your least favourite Law?:14. No mindless spamming. Spamming is just annoying.
[u]In-Character:[/u]
-Character Name: Shaiur
-What is your Race?:Dvergar
-Character Age: 26
-Character Biography: Shaiur was born underground and has always preferred it there. He had never left until the age of 8 where his parents took him on a trip to visit a relative in an isolated cave far away, the details he doesn't remember. On the travel there his family had been ambushed by a large group of Elves. While he and his mother got away, his Father was killed trying to fend the elves off. Ever since he has been extremely paranoid, and can only feel peace when he is in a large group, or a very farmiliar place.
Shauir then lived only with his mother, which he lived with until age 20, where he left with his best friend to go to a new faraway place, quiet the feat for the timid Shaiur, he now finds himself where he is now.
-Character Description: While he is very frightened about being alone, he will still go about regular Dvergar business, that is until he has to venture out alone, where he would pass up a great opportunity in favor being with others. He usually keeps to himself, but still keeps up relations with friends, where he finds the most comfort.
-Other Information: This is a smiley face :smile.gif:
-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes.
-What was your favourite Law?: Number 4. Fighting/brawling within cities is a punishable offence, nice to see the towns have some sort of peace within them.
-What was your least favourite Law?: Number 5. Excessive harassment is a fine-able offense. (If the Harassment continues, it is a punishable offense.) It's not like I really dislike this one, it's just the one I like the least.
In-Character:
-Character Name: Shaiur
-What is your Race?: Dvergar
-Character Age: 27
-Other Information: Shaiur is just your regular Dvergar, he is a law abiding citizen and usually stays to himself, far from the fighting.
======Player Application======
I. What is your In Game Name (IGN)?
Shaiur
II. What is your character name?
Shaiur
III. What is your skill?
Good with redstone, efficient farmer
IV. What faction do you want to apply to? (Coming Soon!)?
V. Did you read rules?
Yes like any good narwhal lover should >.>
VI. How often will you play on the server?
1 or 2 hours a day
VII. Age:
13
VIII. Favorite rule? (You must have one)
Rule VII, no creative mode. The fun part of building is the collecting. This is what makes minecraft what it is.
IX. Why should we accept you into The Beginning: The New World?
I'm a great RPer and I add a lot to any server
======Player Application======
I. What is your In Game Name (IGN)?
Shaiur
II. What is your character name?
Shaiur
III. What is your skill?
Good with redstone, efficient farmer
IV. What faction do you want to apply to? (Coming Soon!)?
V. Did you read rules?
Yes
VI. How often will you play on the server?
1 or 2 hours a day
VII. Age:
13
VIII. Favorite rule? (You must have one)
Rule VII, no creative mode. The fun part of building is the collecting. This is what makes minecraft what it is.
IX. Why should we accept you into The Beginning: The New World?
I'm a great RPer and I add a lot to any server
Posted on page 147, and again on page 166.... never reviewed. I made a few adjustments then reposted. If someone sees the pass me by again, can you quote it for me? Thanks :smile.gif:
OOC
IGN:Shaiur
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: A few years of RP on World of Warcraft
Why Us: I find the concept interesting, much more original then. "Elves, Dwarves, and humans, Yay!."
Time You Can Dedicate: An hour or two a day.
IC
Name: Shaiur
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Fears: Flipping Spiders
Personality:Timid, and paranoid, yet intuitive.
Skills: Creative, and a good architect
Nickname (Optional): Shy ((Rather fiting I feel xD))
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
"So a tree. eh?"
"I say it's perfect! Nothin like a good forest ambush."
"But what about a fire?"
The two ruffians bantered back and forth about what they would change if they were to become leader. However Shaiur wasn't stalking in the rafters like some assassin, nay, he was hiding in this small little cozy behind a bookshelf. Something he had prepared for a while. He had hoped no one would come across this little cave he made out to be a home until he found a place he liked. He stood there until he heard a,"Alright, it looks good, I guess we can go tell the boss it's safe to set up shop in."
His heart dropped.
However he waited no longer, and he quickly and quietly gathered his things and made out into the world through the tunnel he had, like the pocket behind the bookshelf, had been made for just such an occasion.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/desert-explorer/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Shaiur was raised in the home of a leader of a small church, his father, and grew up under his mother who would tend to the children and the people of the village. He had 2 sisters, but he was the oldest of all his siblings.
He lived in a small town and was taught by his Father to become a preacher. His father of course had expectations of him becoming a preacher, but Shaiur had other ideas. He wanted to make something, something concrete, something he could, in all honestly hide behind. The thought of just relying on the people's good faith not to bash him in the head was something he couldn't stand. He needed something he could use to protect himself, something he could use to show people his work, as opposed to going out in the street and trying to convince people.
One day he had simply refused to go on learning about something he knew he couldn't do. His father understood and decided that "If it was not meant to be then there's no forcing it.
A few days later he was sent off to a college in the city for builders. There he learned everything there was to know about building. He then worked on a few designs before opting to head out into the wilderness, away from people, to attempt to get some inspiration, before coming trying to make it in the city.
Posted on page 147, never reviewed. I made a few adjustments then reposted.
OOC
IGN:Shaiur
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: A few years of RP on World of Warcraft
Why Us: I find the concept interesting, much more original then. "Elves, Dwarves, and humans, Yay!."
Time You Can Dedicate: An hour or two a day.
IC
Name: Shaiur
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Fears: Flipping Spiders
Personality:Timid, and paranoid, yet intuitive.
Skills: Creative, and a good architect
Nickname (Optional): Shy ((Rather fiting I feel xD))
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
"So a tree. eh?"
"I say it's perfect! Nothin like a good forest ambush."
"But what about a fire?"
The two ruffians bantered back and forth about what they would change if they were to become leader. However Shaiur wasn't stalking in the rafters like some assassin, nay, he was hiding in this small little cozy behind a bookshelf. Something he had prepared for a while. He had hoped no one would come across this little cave he made out to be a home until he found a place he liked. He stood there until he heard a,"Alright, it looks good, I guess we can go tell the boss it's safe to set up shop in."
His heart dropped.
However he waited no longer, and he quickly and quietly gathered his things and made out into the world through the tunnel he had, like the pocket behind the bookshelf, had been made for just such an occasion.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/desert-explorer/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Shaiur was raised in the home of a leader of a small church, his father, and grew up under his mother who would tend to the children and the people of the village. He had 2 sisters, but he was the oldest of all his siblings.
He lived in a small town and was taught by his Father to become a preacher. His father of course had expectations of him becoming a preacher, but Shaiur had other ideas. He wanted to make something, something concrete, something he could, in all honestly hide behind. The thought of just relying on the people's good faith not to bash him in the head was something he couldn't stand. He needed something he could use to protect himself, something he could use to show people his work, as opposed to going out in the street and trying to convince people.
One day he had simply refused to go on learning about something he knew he couldn't do. His father understood and decided that "If it was not meant to be then there's no forcing it.
A few days later he was sent off to a college in the city for builders. There he learned everything there was to know about building. He then worked on a few designs before opting to head out into the wilderness, away from people, to attempt to get some inspiration, before coming trying to make it in the city.
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Could we schedule a time when the Hunger Games will be played? I feel this will encourage people to join more since they can know when they can join with certainty.
Could we changed the price of gold to match the selling cost? This way someone could actually use gold blocks to store their money in-game, which some people prefer to simply a number.
Also, the forum post uses Comic Sans. No one likes Comic Sans.
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In-game Name:Shaiur
Age: 13
Time zone/Location: PST
How did you hear about us? (Optional): Minecraftforums
UCGaming Forums Name (We require you to signup on our website): gamenutt5
IC information
Roleplay Name:Shaiur
Age: 24
Race:Cmok
Class: Swordsman (Merchant)
Biography(250 words minimal): Shaiur was raised on the road. His parents were travelling traders and as such he was taught by them how the trade business works. He would stay back in their wagon with his Mom while his Father would walk with the Lil, their Ox. While on the road, his Father taught him all about how to market to people and how to get a good deal. He also taught him about fighting. His Father would always have a sword on his belt, although he usually never used it.
On his 10th birthday, his Father gave him a notebook a pencil, ever since he has been recording every person of interest he has met, as well as many notes and information of the places he has been, turning his notebook into a encyclopedia of the area. As he grew he more and more began to help out with the family business, until the point where he would often take his father's place.
As soon as he turned 21, his father had planned to hand over the business, but Shaiur refused. He was to make his own destiny, not to be given it by his parents. His father accepted this, and gave all he could, and sent him out on his way. To make his own destiny
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u]Out-Of-Character:[/u]
-Minecraft Account Name:Shaiur
-How old are you?: 13
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:PST (California)
-How long have you played minecraft?: About half a year
-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes
-What was your favourite Law?: No murdering in the streets of towns. I like it because it adds realism, and a sense of need to be secretive.
-What was your least favourite Law?:14. No mindless spamming. Spamming is just annoying.
[u]In-Character:[/u]
-Character Name: Shaiur
-What is your Race?:Dvergar
-Character Age: 26
-Character Biography: Shaiur was born underground and has always preferred it there. He had never left until the age of 8 where his parents took him on a trip to visit a relative in an isolated cave far away, the details he doesn't remember. On the travel there his family had been ambushed by a large group of Elves. While he and his mother got away, his Father was killed trying to fend the elves off. Ever since he has been extremely paranoid, and can only feel peace when he is in a large group, or a very farmiliar place.
Shauir then lived only with his mother, which he lived with until age 20, where he left with his best friend to go to a new faraway place, quiet the feat for the timid Shaiur, he now finds himself where he is now.
-Character Description: While he is very frightened about being alone, he will still go about regular Dvergar business, that is until he has to venture out alone, where he would pass up a great opportunity in favor being with others. He usually keeps to himself, but still keeps up relations with friends, where he finds the most comfort.
-Other Information: This is a smiley face :smile.gif:
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-Minecraft Account Name:Shaiur
-How old are you?: 13
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST (California)
-How long have you played minecraft?: 6 months.
-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes.
-What was your favourite Law?: Number 4. Fighting/brawling within cities is a punishable offence, nice to see the towns have some sort of peace within them.
-What was your least favourite Law?: Number 5. Excessive harassment is a fine-able offense. (If the Harassment continues, it is a punishable offense.) It's not like I really dislike this one, it's just the one I like the least.
In-Character:
-Character Name: Shaiur
-What is your Race?: Dvergar
-Character Age: 27
-Other Information: Shaiur is just your regular Dvergar, he is a law abiding citizen and usually stays to himself, far from the fighting.
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I. What is your In Game Name (IGN)?
Shaiur
II. What is your character name?
Shaiur
III. What is your skill?
Good with redstone, efficient farmer
IV. What faction do you want to apply to? (Coming Soon!)?
V. Did you read rules?
Yes like any good narwhal lover should >.>
VI. How often will you play on the server?
1 or 2 hours a day
VII. Age:
13
VIII. Favorite rule? (You must have one)
Rule VII, no creative mode. The fun part of building is the collecting. This is what makes minecraft what it is.
IX. Why should we accept you into The Beginning: The New World?
I'm a great RPer and I add a lot to any server
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I. What is your In Game Name (IGN)?
Shaiur
II. What is your character name?
Shaiur
III. What is your skill?
Good with redstone, efficient farmer
IV. What faction do you want to apply to? (Coming Soon!)?
V. Did you read rules?
Yes
VI. How often will you play on the server?
1 or 2 hours a day
VII. Age:
13
VIII. Favorite rule? (You must have one)
Rule VII, no creative mode. The fun part of building is the collecting. This is what makes minecraft what it is.
IX. Why should we accept you into The Beginning: The New World?
I'm a great RPer and I add a lot to any server
:smile.gif:
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OOC
IGN:Shaiur
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: A few years of RP on World of Warcraft
Why Us: I find the concept interesting, much more original then. "Elves, Dwarves, and humans, Yay!."
Time You Can Dedicate: An hour or two a day.
IC
Name: Shaiur
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Fears: Flipping Spiders
Personality:Timid, and paranoid, yet intuitive.
Skills: Creative, and a good architect
Nickname (Optional): Shy ((Rather fiting I feel xD))
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
"So a tree. eh?"
"I say it's perfect! Nothin like a good forest ambush."
"But what about a fire?"
The two ruffians bantered back and forth about what they would change if they were to become leader. However Shaiur wasn't stalking in the rafters like some assassin, nay, he was hiding in this small little cozy behind a bookshelf. Something he had prepared for a while. He had hoped no one would come across this little cave he made out to be a home until he found a place he liked. He stood there until he heard a,"Alright, it looks good, I guess we can go tell the boss it's safe to set up shop in."
His heart dropped.
However he waited no longer, and he quickly and quietly gathered his things and made out into the world through the tunnel he had, like the pocket behind the bookshelf, had been made for just such an occasion.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/desert-explorer/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Shaiur was raised in the home of a leader of a small church, his father, and grew up under his mother who would tend to the children and the people of the village. He had 2 sisters, but he was the oldest of all his siblings.
He lived in a small town and was taught by his Father to become a preacher. His father of course had expectations of him becoming a preacher, but Shaiur had other ideas. He wanted to make something, something concrete, something he could, in all honestly hide behind. The thought of just relying on the people's good faith not to bash him in the head was something he couldn't stand. He needed something he could use to protect himself, something he could use to show people his work, as opposed to going out in the street and trying to convince people.
One day he had simply refused to go on learning about something he knew he couldn't do. His father understood and decided that "If it was not meant to be then there's no forcing it.
A few days later he was sent off to a college in the city for builders. There he learned everything there was to know about building. He then worked on a few designs before opting to head out into the wilderness, away from people, to attempt to get some inspiration, before coming trying to make it in the city.
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OOC
IGN:Shaiur
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.: A few years of RP on World of Warcraft
Why Us: I find the concept interesting, much more original then. "Elves, Dwarves, and humans, Yay!."
Time You Can Dedicate: An hour or two a day.
IC
Name: Shaiur
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Fears: Flipping Spiders
Personality:Timid, and paranoid, yet intuitive.
Skills: Creative, and a good architect
Nickname (Optional): Shy ((Rather fiting I feel xD))
RP Example (Add Dialogue):
"So a tree. eh?"
"I say it's perfect! Nothin like a good forest ambush."
"But what about a fire?"
The two ruffians bantered back and forth about what they would change if they were to become leader. However Shaiur wasn't stalking in the rafters like some assassin, nay, he was hiding in this small little cozy behind a bookshelf. Something he had prepared for a while. He had hoped no one would come across this little cave he made out to be a home until he found a place he liked. He stood there until he heard a,"Alright, it looks good, I guess we can go tell the boss it's safe to set up shop in."
His heart dropped.
However he waited no longer, and he quickly and quietly gathered his things and made out into the world through the tunnel he had, like the pocket behind the bookshelf, had been made for just such an occasion.
Skin (Link, picture, description):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/desert-explorer/
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Shaiur was raised in the home of a leader of a small church, his father, and grew up under his mother who would tend to the children and the people of the village. He had 2 sisters, but he was the oldest of all his siblings.
He lived in a small town and was taught by his Father to become a preacher. His father of course had expectations of him becoming a preacher, but Shaiur had other ideas. He wanted to make something, something concrete, something he could, in all honestly hide behind. The thought of just relying on the people's good faith not to bash him in the head was something he couldn't stand. He needed something he could use to protect himself, something he could use to show people his work, as opposed to going out in the street and trying to convince people.
One day he had simply refused to go on learning about something he knew he couldn't do. His father understood and decided that "If it was not meant to be then there's no forcing it.
A few days later he was sent off to a college in the city for builders. There he learned everything there was to know about building. He then worked on a few designs before opting to head out into the wilderness, away from people, to attempt to get some inspiration, before coming trying to make it in the city.