Hmmm...I can't really find anything explicitly wrong with your application...only things I think you could do better with...for example, please refrain from using modern-day colloquialisms like "frick" and the like. Remember, the theme is renaissance Italy! Try your best to act like you're from that time period. (Playing AC2 is strongly recommended, but not required.)
Please try and enhance your working knowledge of the English language, to facilitate roleplay between players.
I'm going to say...accepted, though on watch. Be prepared to take a roleplay test when you join the server, and note that the staff at Assassin's Creep still has the right and obligation to strike your name from the whitelist at any time, for whatever reason, if they feel you cannot operate within the community.
I wish you much luck, and I hope you are able to stay! Welcome to Assassin's Creep.
Acceptable. Once again, be prepared to take a roleplay test when you connect to the server.
To both of you, be respectful, professional, don't do anything if it might be against the rules...and have fun, yall, it's what we're here for! Haha. Welcome to Assassin's Creep! I will whitelist you both shortly.
Thanks for accepting me! I'm going to play Assassin's Creed when I can, but start with number one, and also, I understand role play, I just don't know how strict of role play we are. Once I play for a day pr two, i'll get a feel.
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of different ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great experiences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip.
Why Us: You seem to have a very interesting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Most likely 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on researching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustavo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: The Dark.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner. Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you! Jerry: Gus! Long time no see! (Gus and Jerry hug) Gus: So, have any good fish? Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China. Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it? Jerry: For you? Free of charge! Gus: Thanks! Jerry: Gus, I got to tell you something. Gus: What is it? Jerry: Some guys are plan.. (Jerry is cut off by a sword piercing through his chest) Gus: What the fric! Stranger number one: It's time to die Gus. Stranger number two: Yeah Gus, the boss isn't happy you haven't payed up your dues on your house Gus surveys the area. He grabs Jerry's knife, and throw it into the heart of Stranger number one. He then back flips across a cart. Stranger number two: Get back here! Stranger number two runs after Gus. Gus: Any last words? He says as he comes to a stop. Stranger number two: What are you talking about? Gus throws a fork into his eye, and punches it through. He then walks back to his house, with his fish in hand.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, you’re made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of his own gold. Gus started to learn. He learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of the dark came when he was 5. He was relaxing with his family, when suddenly all the candles blew out. A man entered their house, and knocked out Gus. When he woke up, his parents were injured badly, and all their gold was stolen. Being the 5 year old he was, he thought that the dark had brought the strange man. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even a famous cook.
Other
What is role-play? Role-play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? There are several different meanings, but I will give the one in role playing, where players fight role playing style and ect. It is when a player says an action they use against another player works, without the other player saying so. Let's pretend SenorFunky2 and RogueHobbes are fighting in role play where it is in chat. Here is an example: RogueHobbes: Thrusts sword at SenorFunky2. SenorFunky2: Grab RogueHobbes sword, and then stabs RogueHobbes with a fork. RogueHobbes is dead. That is how a power gaming situation might come out. If they were doing it right, SenorFUnky2 would have to have said, Grabs RogueHobbes sword, lunges with fork in hand to stab into Roguehobbes . RogueHobbes would then have to say, SenorFUnky2's fork flys true into my heart! I am dead! What is Assassin's Creed? It’s about Desmond Miles, and he comes from a line of assassins. He has been trained as an assassin, but fleas his family’s nomadic living style to go live a normal life. But, he is captured my modern day Knight Templar who know of his heritage. They force him to use the Animus, which lets you see into your ancestor’s memories to find the Pieces of Eden. The Templar’s want to make a peaceful, united group. He is rescued by modern day assassins and the agrees to help them use their version of the Animus to find the Pieces of Eden before the Templars can. They want to make a peaceful, free world. *
I believe you understand what powergaming is...but the way you have it written is somewhat confusing. If you could re-word that, it'd be much appreciated.
I think your roleplay example could be a bit better...
And in an unrelated note that doesn't affect your acceptance, I hate your sig XD!
Change your skin, you cannot start out as an assassin.
Your metagaming definition was copied and pasted. Please put it in your own words.
Your powergaming definition is incorrect.
Please submit a full application.
Thanks for what i need to fix, and I'm happy you hate my sig.
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of different ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great experiences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip.
Why Us: You seem to have a very interesting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Most likely 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on researching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustavo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: The Dark.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner.
Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you!
Jerry: Gus! Long time no see!
(Gus and Jerry hug)
Gus: So, have any good fish?
Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China.
Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it?
Jerry: For you? Free of charge!
Gus: Thanks!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, you’re made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of his own gold. Gus started to learn. He learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of the dark came when he was 5. He was relaxing with his family, when suddenly all the candles blew out. A man entered their house, and knocked out Gus. When he woke up, his parents were injured badly, and all their gold was stolen. Being the 5 year old he was, he thought that the dark had brought the strange man. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even a famous cook.
Other
What is role-play? Role-play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? There are several different meanings, but I will give the one in role playing, where players fight role playing style and ect. It is when a player says an action they use against another player works, without the other player saying so. For example, is SenorFUnky2 is role playing fighting RogueHobbes, and SenorFunky2 says RogueHobbes died from a hit with his sword, and RogueHobbes didn’t say so, that is power gaming.
What is Assassin's Creed? It’s about Desmond Miles, and he comes from a line of assassins. He has been trained as an assassin, but fleas his family’s nomadic living style to go live a normal life. But, he is captured my modern day Knight Templar who know of his heritage. They force him to use the Animus, which lets you see into your ancestor’s memories to find the Pieces of Eden. The Templar’s want to make a peaceful, united group. He is rescued by modern day assassins and the agrees to help them use their version of the Animus to find the Pieces of Eden before the Templars can. They want to make a peaceful, free world.
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A few things. Spelling and grammatical errors as well that could use polishing.
Your fears: Spiders. I'm assuming you mean the big, Minecraft spiders, yes? It was also in your backstory...there are no giant spiders in the Assassin's Creed world (which is Renaissance Italy, in this case). Therefore, your backstory and your fears must be updated accordingly.
At the end of your backstory, you mention assassins. You cannot know of or meet assassins beforehand.
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of diffrent ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great expierences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip/
Why Us: You seem to have a very intresting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Probley 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on reaserching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustovo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: Spiders.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner. Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you! Jerry: Gus! Long time no see! (Gus and Jerry hug) Gus: So, have any good fish? Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China. Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it? Jerry: For you? Free of charge! Gus: Thanks!
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, your made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of their own gold. Gus started to learn. he learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of spiders came when he was 10. He has working the field, and a giant spider came, and bit his leg. He was hurt very badly, and couldn't work for weeks. Since then, he never forgot that day. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even one on those assassins.
Other
What is roleplay? Role play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? it;s when you work to achieve a goal, but you don;t stick to your character.
What is Assassin's Creed? It's about a line of assassin's and their adventures.
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IGN: nydrummer44
Any Experience In An Army/Medieval Clan? No, i have not been apart of am army or Midevil clan. Srry
If So, What Clan?
What Job Do You Want? i would like the Job of Town Architect, Head builder, Plot seller, or builder.
How Long Have You been Playing Minecraft? have been playing since beta.
Are You Currently In Any Clans? Yes.
If So, Which Ones? Omen
Why Do You Want To Join Tall Kingdoms? The Omen server is down a lot of the time and i would like to be active in another clan.
What Can You Bring To The Clan? I have plenty of Mod And Admin experience, also i am very good at running city's and towns. Also i am a great Lanscaper and builder.
What Are You Good At In Minecraft? Yes indeed, i am highly skilled at Minecraft and can build almost anything. Also my faorite animal are Pigs!
What Timezone Are You? Eastern united states
Do You Have Good Behavior? Yes
Did You Read The Rules? Yes i have!
Cant wait to join!
-nydrummer44
Accepted, but please choose Swordsmen, Archer, or Healer. Report to g.minemania.nl
Thanks!
-nydrummer44
Alright, Thank you. Ill Choose Archer because im very good with a bow. Also could you PM me the IP? And what is g.minemania.nl?
IGN: nydrummer44
Any Experience In An Army/Medieval Clan? No, i have not been apart of am army or Midevil clan. Srry
If So, What Clan?
What Job Do You Want? i would like the Job of Town Architect, Head builder, Plot seller, or builder.
How Long Have You been Playing Minecraft? have been playing since beta.
Are You Currently In Any Clans? Yes.
If So, Which Ones? Omen
Why Do You Want To Join Tall Kingdoms? The Omen server is down a lot of the time and i would like to be active in another clan.
What Can You Bring To The Clan? I have plenty of Mod And Admin experience, also i am very good at running city's and towns. Also i am a great Lanscaper and builder.
What Are You Good At In Minecraft? Yes indeed, i am highly skilled at Minecraft and can build almost anything. Also my faorite animal are Pigs!
What Timezone Are You? Eastern united states
Do You Have Good Behavior? Yes
Did You Read The Rules? Yes i have!
Cant wait to join!
-nydrummer44
Accepted, but please choose Swordsmen, Archer, or Healer. Report to g.minemania.nl
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I don't have one. Max offered to sell me one.
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Thanks for accepting me! I'm going to play Assassin's Creed when I can, but start with number one, and also, I understand role play, I just don't know how strict of role play we are. Once I play for a day pr two, i'll get a feel.
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Age: 18
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of different ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great experiences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip.
Why Us: You seem to have a very interesting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Most likely 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on researching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustavo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: The Dark.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner.
Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you!
Jerry: Gus! Long time no see!
(Gus and Jerry hug)
Gus: So, have any good fish?
Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China.
Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it?
Jerry: For you? Free of charge!
Gus: Thanks!
Jerry: Gus, I got to tell you something.
Gus: What is it?
Jerry: Some guys are plan..
(Jerry is cut off by a sword piercing through his chest)
Gus: What the fric!
Stranger number one: It's time to die Gus.
Stranger number two: Yeah Gus, the boss isn't happy you haven't payed up your dues on your house
Gus surveys the area. He grabs Jerry's knife, and throw it into the heart of Stranger number one. He then back flips across a cart.
Stranger number two: Get back here!
Stranger number two runs after Gus.
Gus: Any last words? He says as he comes to a stop.
Stranger number two: What are you talking about?
Gus throws a fork into his eye, and punches it through. He then walks back to his house, with his fish in hand.
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://minecraftwb.c...l-adventurer-v2
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, you’re made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of his own gold. Gus started to learn. He learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of the dark came when he was 5. He was relaxing with his family, when suddenly all the candles blew out. A man entered their house, and knocked out Gus. When he woke up, his parents were injured badly, and all their gold was stolen. Being the 5 year old he was, he thought that the dark had brought the strange man. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even a famous cook.
Other
What is role-play? Role-play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? There are several different meanings, but I will give the one in role playing, where players fight role playing style and ect. It is when a player says an action they use against another player works, without the other player saying so. Let's pretend SenorFunky2 and RogueHobbes are fighting in role play where it is in chat. Here is an example:
RogueHobbes: Thrusts sword at SenorFunky2.
SenorFunky2: Grab RogueHobbes sword, and then stabs RogueHobbes with a fork. RogueHobbes is dead.
That is how a power gaming situation might come out. If they were doing it right, SenorFUnky2 would have to have said, Grabs RogueHobbes sword, lunges with fork in hand to stab into Roguehobbes . RogueHobbes would then have to say, SenorFUnky2's fork flys true into my heart! I am dead!
What is Assassin's Creed? It’s about Desmond Miles, and he comes from a line of assassins. He has been trained as an assassin, but fleas his family’s nomadic living style to go live a normal life. But, he is captured my modern day Knight Templar who know of his heritage. They force him to use the Animus, which lets you see into your ancestor’s memories to find the Pieces of Eden. The Templar’s want to make a peaceful, united group. He is rescued by modern day assassins and the agrees to help them use their version of the Animus to find the Pieces of Eden before the Templars can. They want to make a peaceful, free world.
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Thanks for what i need to fix, and I'm happy you hate my sig.
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Age:
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of different ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great experiences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip.
Why Us: You seem to have a very interesting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Most likely 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on researching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustavo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: The Dark.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner.
Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you!
Jerry: Gus! Long time no see!
(Gus and Jerry hug)
Gus: So, have any good fish?
Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China.
Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it?
Jerry: For you? Free of charge!
Gus: Thanks!
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://minecraftwb.c...l-adventurer-v2
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, you’re made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of his own gold. Gus started to learn. He learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of the dark came when he was 5. He was relaxing with his family, when suddenly all the candles blew out. A man entered their house, and knocked out Gus. When he woke up, his parents were injured badly, and all their gold was stolen. Being the 5 year old he was, he thought that the dark had brought the strange man. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even a famous cook.
Other
What is role-play? Role-play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? There are several different meanings, but I will give the one in role playing, where players fight role playing style and ect. It is when a player says an action they use against another player works, without the other player saying so. For example, is SenorFUnky2 is role playing fighting RogueHobbes, and SenorFunky2 says RogueHobbes died from a hit with his sword, and RogueHobbes didn’t say so, that is power gaming.
What is Assassin's Creed? It’s about Desmond Miles, and he comes from a line of assassins. He has been trained as an assassin, but fleas his family’s nomadic living style to go live a normal life. But, he is captured my modern day Knight Templar who know of his heritage. They force him to use the Animus, which lets you see into your ancestor’s memories to find the Pieces of Eden. The Templar’s want to make a peaceful, united group. He is rescued by modern day assassins and the agrees to help them use their version of the Animus to find the Pieces of Eden before the Templars can. They want to make a peaceful, free world.
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Ok, I will go back and edit tomorrow.
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Age:
Role-Play Exp.: I have played in a lot of diffrent ones, and I can't name them all, but I had great expierences with all, but alas, they shut down or I lost the ip/
Why Us: You seem to have a very intresting twist to role play.
Time You Can Dedicate: Probley 1-2 hours and day, maybe more.
Have you played Assassin's Creed? No, but I have heard great things about it, and I'm planning on reaserching it to learn more.
IC
Name: Gustovo Jenkins.
Gender: Male.
Age: 21.
Fears: Spiders.
Personality: A nice guy, but has a short temper for insults.
Skills: Climbing, fighting, cooking.
Nickname (Optional): Gus.
RP Example (Add Dialogue): Gus is walking into the local market to buy some fish for dinner.
Gus: Hello Jerry! Nice to see you!
Jerry: Gus! Long time no see!
(Gus and Jerry hug)
Gus: So, have any good fish?
Jerry: yep, we have a rare salmon from China.
Gus: I'll take it! Will 20 gold do it?
Jerry: For you? Free of charge!
Gus: Thanks!
Skin (Link, picture, description): http://minecraftwb.com/index.php/component/zoo/item/medieval-adventurer-v2
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Gus was born into an average family. His Mom and Dad were your average farmers. They worked the fields. When Gus was young, his parents told him, "Gus, your made for better things then this tiny, ragged hut and patch of dirt. When you get older, use this money to go and go to the city to get a nice job, meet a nice women, and have a relaxing life." His Mom gave Gus a pouch full of their own gold. Gus started to learn. he learned how to read, write, and cook. His Mother taught him how to bargain, and his dad taught him how to fight. His fear of spiders came when he was 10. He has working the field, and a giant spider came, and bit his leg. He was hurt very badly, and couldn't work for weeks. Since then, he never forgot that day. But now, he is 23, and is ready to go to the big city. He wants to become a trader, or even one on those assassins.
Other
What is roleplay? Role play is when you take a character you create, and then become them. You live out their life, as if it was you.
What is Metagaming? Metagaming is when you use knowledge you get when you aren't your character, then use it to your advantage. For example, is someone is afraid of the dark, and someone finds that out and exploits it to kill him, that is metagaming.
What is Powergaming? it;s when you work to achieve a goal, but you don;t stick to your character.
What is Assassin's Creed? It's about a line of assassin's and their adventures.
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Ok, thanks!
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g.minemania.nl is the ip.....
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Accepted, but please choose Swordsmen, Archer, or Healer. Report to g.minemania.nl