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The Slaves of the Desert Mine
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This first post will be used for general information and for links and will change once in a while. The chapters are in my later posts.
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This story has evolved quite a bit over the years. It took many steps to get it to what it is now from the near-unreadable wall of text it was in the beginning. I also did change some relatively minor things around so if you have read the story before and are now reading this again and things are different, that is why.
If you do have any questions about the world or anything related, just go ahead and ask, I'll try my best to answer in a reply, if it's significant enough I might even work it into a side story or put it into dedicated section in the OP.
While it may have started out as a Minecraft Fanfic, this story has also turned into a kind of playground for me to try out different things in writing, I like to experiment after all. So don’t be surprised if you see a sudden shift in style for a chapter.
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I can't help but ask,but it seems like you looked at http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/minecraft-discussion/suggestions/64149-please-read-this-before-making-a-suggestion and did exactly what it said not to do.
-vague
-signing your name
-Saying "add because its cool"
- Making it called "The ____ Update"
-Telling your critics to do it for you.
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Best mob idea ever. Witches and slimes. Water. Vines. Witch huts. Swamp.
Water in ocean
Witch wherever.
Slime underground.
Vines jungle.
Witch huts.
We need something to help the swamp!
100% Support.
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So true. But really, people just like to choose their own storys.
They way i see it, minecraft is heading in a direction where there will always be normal minecraft, but they will start releasing other games with other storys and points. Some more like skyrim, or fallout, or maybe even skylanders.
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You are amazing! This is a really cool creation, but a lot more simple than it seems! I wish i was half as good as you are with redstone.....
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I have a baby pet slime named Jello. After he died, I summoned a invincible baby slime. No Jello cannot die. Ever.
Sorry, i like to keep cheats on. Just in case a horrible, unbearable accident like this happens.
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I would make a planet that is massive! The would be magic and wizards, and elves and troolss and stuff like that.
Main Races:
Dragons
Half-Dragons
Elves (The lord of the ring kind)
Humans (Like when kings and queen times)
Steam punk Type humans
Wizards
Owls
The dragons are wise and strong, but don't live in groups. They live thousands of years.
Half-dragons are half human, half dragon, and have a two main civilizations. One is beautiful, majestic, and kind behind in tech, but they now quite a bit about magic. One would be industrialized, but polluted.
Elves would be like they are in the lord of the rings.
Humans would be like when there was catles and kings and stuff.
Steam Punk Humans would be steam punk-y.
Wizards would be catsle/king/old time stuff like, but with magic.
Owls would be kind of the like the guardians of Ga' Hoole, with all the same swear words, but i would take the place of Gluax, and the great Barn Owl, Moonriser. They would live in remote part of the world, one surrounded by a huge enchanted ocean, guarded by the Knights of Gluax (still believing the ancient stories of Gluax), that no one would ever be able to pass.
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Lol, i thought the same thing. I'm not killing my cat.
Anyway, i like these ideas about small little things that would just make minecraft better.
Support.
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I like this. I can imagine just walking through a mesa biome and seeing this next to a oak tree. I support.
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Endermen pick up items with no use and just randomly place them. I love endermen, and i often go into thought about what the purpose could be. I have come up with a good idea, and want your help to make it better.
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You know dude, a lot of these people aren't even hacking, just people are sore losers. Somehow, i once got lucky during a lag spike and killed someone. And he started shouting I was hacking. I don't even know how to hack.