Characters are the main means of participating in RPs , but not everyone is…adequate in their creation. This post is for RP makers and participants to learn how to make more interesting, and developed characters in Role Playing.
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The Character sheet
Some of you put a lot of forethought before posting a character, others just slap on some things to make their character look “cool” or “likable”, putting little to no effort into explaining what character is in essence, stands around until something happens, then unrealistically kick ass without so much a scratch. This is boring and unoriginal. I will teach how to avoid making such a character, but first we must familiarize ourselves with the character sheet.Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Items/Weapons/Powers/Special Skills:
Personality:
History/Biography:
Above is the most basic character sheet there is, and you’re allowed to modify it according to the nature of the RP, but under NO circumstances should ANY of these be removed (items and etc. coincide with each other and can be posted alone or as separate requirements), if you do, than you fail. No excuses.
This isn’t just pressing start and blasting crap, you’re making something here. You should take your time and take pride in it. The character sheet is only a skeleton; it’s your job to put in all of the organs, muscles, blood, and guts into it. (Colorful metaphors FTW)
Name
Everyone has a name; this is easy, just don’t make it ridiculous or unbelievable.Age
I don’t much care how old they are, but there is a reason why children aren’t policemen and firefighters. Also, people in their teens with no prior training should not be able to kick ass, it just makes no sense. As the RP goes however they can learn to hone what ever skills they have (albeit within a believable time frame). My recommended minimum age is 15; that’s about the time Peter Parker became Spider-man. Still, if you want a character with developed skills, its best to go with someone who ISN’T a minor.Gender
It’s so simple I won’t even bother.Appearance
Now we begin to visualize the character, bear in mind that this should not only tell you what the character looks like, but also how they appear to others. Explain in a decent amount of detail their height, weight, facial structures, defining marks; everything from the basic, to distinguishing features that set them apart from everyone else. Hell, go into detail on the dimensions of their clothes; its better to be over descriptive than to put little to nothing.Items/Weapons/Powers/Special Skills
Whatever it is, whatever they do, the most important thing to remember is to have LIMITATIONS. They must be finite, be they fairy dust, or skills with a sword. Items and weapons can be powerful, but never godlike. If you fired your one bullet in space at a bad guy and it missed, it would only keep traveling in that direction forever, it’s not going to turn around and save the day for you. If you’re screwed, then you’re screwed. Get over it.
Whatever powers or skills your character has works in the same way. They cannot be arbitrary, too powerful and “awesome” to get around. Unless the rules of the RP say so, your character is mortal. They will tire, they will be hurt, and they most certainly CAN DIE. Do not be afraid of killing off your own character, it happens just like in real life, people die and in unfair ways, but it’s a fact. Bear in mind that THE RP IS NOT ABOUT YOU, and it is only representation; you’re not actually dyeing, so there is no use crying over it. Nothing says you can’t create a replacement, THOUGH HIGHLY DISCOURAGED IN MAKING A CLONE CHARACTER, THAT’S JUST LAZY AND YOU KNOW IT.
Personality
If the above is the body, then this is the mind. Everything that character does is because of this, it affects their decision making and how they react to certain situations.IT DOES NOT NEED TO BE YOUR PERONALITY. It can take little bits and pieces, but please, please, please don’t make it a clear cut copy of yourself. It can even be the complete opposite. Sometimes it really is more fun to play the villain than the hero, no one will think less of you for it, much like they don’t think less of an actor for playing the person people love to hate (assuming they do it well).
One more thing to remember is not to take offence if a character disagrees or does something negative to yours, it doesn’t mean that the player is “out to get you” it may simply be what their character would do.
History/Biography
If the name, age, gender, appearance, items and abilities are the body, and the personality is the mind, then this is most definitely the soul. Everything the character is, was, and maybe is because of their past. Everything from the way they look, to their personality, to their items and abilities ABSOUTLEY MUST BE EXPLAINED IN DECENT DETAIL HERE, I CANNOT STRESS THAT ENOUGH! A person’s past is the reason why a person is what they are, what they might become, and what they may do. It affects everyone and fictional characters are no exception. It is HIGHLY recommended that you start here first; the rest comes way more easily if you do, and I speak from experience.________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Fight against Blandness
If you didn’t quite get those guidelines for the character sheet, then you may still suffer from Mary-Sueblandboringcharacteritis. I will now show you an example of a typical flat, underdeveloped “character” whose only purpose is to stand there and look pretty.Name: amy (doesn’t bother with a last name because it’s “not important”)
Age: 16
Gender: girl
Appearance: she thinks shes ugly but shes actuly really pretty. She wears a black t-shirt and jeans.
Powers: she can throw fireballs
Personality: she is shy but is very nice once you get to know her
History/Biography: she goes to Super Power High School and her dad beats her.
DISCLAIMER: THE PRECEDING EXAMPLE REPRESENTS NO ONE IN PARTICULAR.
Aside from grammatical errors there are many things both wrong and under explained.
Name: The creator just puts in a generic name as to not be bothered with it.
Age: Chances are the creator is the same age, and puts in this one a form of self-insertion.
Gender: Same as Age
Appearance: Instead of going into true detail of what Amy looks like and how she appears to others, the creator just says that she is pretty, and that she wears everyday clothes. Why should we care? We still know nothing about her other than the fact that she is a pretty girl in her teens. Is she black, Caucasian, Vietnamese, fat, the size of an atom? We will never know, because the creator is too lazy to put in any meaningful detail.
Powers: Fireballs, nice, but how hot are they? How big do they get? How many can Amy throw in a day? How did she get the ability to spontaneously combust air? Because this is never addressed, this leaves a gigantic hole for godmodding; Amy could create a fireball the size of Texas as many times as she wanted.
You are not Chuck Norris, do not try to be.
You will fail.
Personality: Unoriginal, uncreative, and bland. There are literally MILLIONS of people like that, what makes her so special? Why should we care? It’s just a feeble attempt to make her likable.
Let me make this clear: YOUR CHARACTER DOES NOT HAVE TO BE LIKED, THAT WILL NEVER BE IMPORTANT.
EVER.
History/Biography: This is not a history; it is yet another self-insertion, followed by another attempt to make you feel bad for her, instantly creating a “connection to the character”. If her father really beat her she wouldn’t just be “shy but really nice”, she would have severe psychological trauma issues that would make her incredibly socially inept, even turning violent and unsympathetic to others. Now THAT would be more interesting, disregarding how overused that trope is, in the least its feasible, unlike the obvious bull crap the creator gave us.
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Now an example of a more fully developed character would look like this:
Name: Darius, McLeod
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Appearance: A broad face, with dull green eyes and thick brows. It’s obvious he has not shaved in a while but he isn’t unkempt. Tall, around 6’5, athletic but not huge. He often wears a chainmail suit under scale armor made from a dragon his grandfather slew. His eyes give off a calculating, no nonsense vibe.
Items: Five rations of food and water stored in a leather sack he carries with him.
Weapons: A 3’9 ft longsword, and a 2 ft diameter wooden roundshield.
Special Skills: 27 years of combat training, military experience and strategies, and dragon tracking. Darius however is not as dexterous and durable as he used to be.
Personality: Darius is not a cold person, but he’s not very emotional, often planning events in the battlefield rather than socializing. He is a proud man however, whose only desire is to carry on his family's tradition of dragon slaying. Unfortunately his nature can make him insensitive to others’ concerns. You have to be straight forward to communicate with him.
History/Biography: Darius comes from a long line military of men and dragon slayers. Every one of his forefathers has slain at least one dragon in their lifetime, failure to do so means dishonoring the family name, and according to family superstition preventing his ascension to the heavens after death, so it is imperative to him to slay one and soon, before his age prevents him from doing so. He will not rest until it is done.
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Now I won’t pretend that this is the best example ever, but it is light-years ahead of the one before it. The archetype itself is not original, but I at least give him a history explaining who is, and why does what he does. While he has a lot of experience, he is getting old and he knows it, so he won’t be that nimble, especially with all of that equipment. He has no magic sword, he is not super strong, he is just a man, and he is most certainly aware of his mortality. He is not out to be liked, only to fulfill his own goals.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Final Thoughts
See? It’s not so hard when you take your time and actually put effort into it. See how much clearer everything becomes when you actually try? I hope you learned something from this, and if you have anymore to add or found something here that needs correcting, please do so. Happy character making!Also, please make this a sticky so everyone can see.
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It is the year 2016. Mutated animals have taken out mankind. You are a survivor.
Advanced RP - An RP that has a set story line, and requires high writing abilities and well thought out posts, no matter what.
Brilliant scientists from across the world were abducted by an underground terrorist group in the year 2016, and were kept hidden from the outside world. They were used against their will for a whole year, to develop a virus that would mutate the brains of animals, providing it wasn't strong enough to overwhelm the disease. The virus would strengthen and evolve the animal at rapid paces, making them feral and lethal. The terrorist group planned on unleashing these beasts – using them as weapons – to take over their country, and, if they could, the world. Their hope was futile; the animals went against the terrorists, however, and took out nearly all of the scientists and terrorist. One survivor was bitten as he fled to safe haven, and the virus spread to the humans and animals. Sadly, because of how developed the human brain was, the virus practically destroyed people. The disease was viral, infecting all the world at a rapid pace. Most people simply died because their brain couldn't handle it. Those who didn't were transformed into suicidal, explosive green mutants who were hell bent on destroying anything they saw.
However, there is hope. A small group of people who are immune to the virus are scattered along the western coast of North America. If they were to band together, defend themselves, and rebuild society, life could have a chance of coming back to the way things used to be.
Well, as close as they could, when the world was filled with mutants.
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Hey, guys and gals. Welcome to my roleplay. I believe it is an original idea. I've participated in plenty on this forum, and I've always wanted to set one up, but I've never gotten around to it. But, ha, here we are I guess. I want this to be a respectable roleplay, with respectable people. I don't like the flood of all the half-assed roleplays on this forum, and I want to change that. I clearly can't stop people from making them, but perhaps I can inspire them to try harder. Who knows, eh? Well, shall we begin?
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How This Will Play Out -
This is a forum roleplay, not a server.
This is a post apocalyptic, human world. The one we call our home. However, in the virus, Minecraft elements have been brought out. Spiders are incredibly large, primates are basically the zombies and skeletons of Minecraft, and creepers make their appearance as well.
Guns exist. However, most are eroded or destroyed. Very few redneck and police stashes exist, and getting into these would be incredibly hard to find and challenging. You can start with a gun, but only a pistol of sorts. Preferably not a powerful one.
Magic doesn't exist in this roleplay. However, a survivor is working on a way to manipulate the virus to work for the survivors, to take one enhanced characteristic from an animal. You do not get to start with an animal ability.
This is set in modern times. Very few advancements have been made since 2011. Electricity still works providing you have a generator. If you can find gas, and an actual working vehicle, it is possible to drive around. However, all of these things are hard to come by. I wish you luck.
You are a human. No fancy races, no mythical creatures, you are a simple human survivor.
Try to avoid making a combat-based character. You can know how to fight, sure, but if everybody comes from a military background, it makes an uninteresting RP. Think about it. All the survivors are probably average people who lived average lives.
This RP will be run by the players, with guidance from the mods. If you want to start a plot twist, or change something around, or pitch an idea, PM me this idea and I'll look over it.
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Proper grammar is a must. Spelling, punctuation, everything is needed. A mistake here and there is acceptable, we all miss a key, or hit an extra. We all forget here and there, but completely and utterly ignoring grammar is not acceptable in the slightest.
No god-modding, ubering, powerplaying, etc. If you don't know what any of these are, please educate yourself further before attempting to join.
The moderators have the final say in most cases. If the members completely over-rule the mods, then we will go with their ideas. However, try not to argue with us if you do not like our choice.
Please avoid posting until you are on the members list.
Make sure your posts make sense! It seems obvious, but so many illogical things are posted in Roleplays all the time.
What was your favorite animal before the outbreak? Explain it in your application, or you will be denied.
You can cuss in this roleplay, but keep it to a minimum. Don't swear every two words.
You can have 'intimate relations' if you know what I mean, just don't get too graphic.
Follow the application I post.
If you don't post for a good, long time, then I will put you onto an inactive list until you get back. However, please try to inform me when you will be going.
You should know what OOC is. When talking out of character, use ((-)) or [-].
Please avoid being rude or obnoxious. I may have to find you, and give you a nice spanking if you ignore this rule.
Avoid one or two liners like the plague. You can post them rarely, but please try to add more detail into your posts.
Don't make a perfect character! Make your character original, and give him/her drawbacks!
Try to avoid pointless OOC posts. PM me, or the other people, if it is so important.
Mods get chosen by me, and I don't choose people who PM me. So if you want to become a mod, just follow the rules, and maybe fill out a lengthy, thirty page app- I'm kidding. I'll pick who gets the mod status.
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It's fairly lengthy, but that just lets me see that you are dedicated.
Name – Your characters name.
Age – Your characters age.
Personality – What does your character act like? Does he lash out? Is he a quick thinker? How do you want your character to establish himself among other people?
Appearance – What does your character look like? Explain it in detail, so we can get a good mental image of him/her
Equipment – What does your character start with? This doesn't mean you have nothing but the clothes on your back, but at the same time, you can't have a whole bunch of guns and weaponry to start yourself off with. Clothing goes in appearance.
Skills – What is your character good at? Is he a martial artist? Can he cook? Explain!
Biography – This is an explanation of your characters past. It also shows your RPing skills, which will help me determine your 'talent', so to speak.
Additional Facts – Is he a heavy smoker? Does he have a favorite food? Explain extra things that are unimportant to the plot.
Suggestions – Anything you could tell me? Tips? Things I misspelled or did wrong in the OP? Go ahead, let me know.
One Liner - A one lined sentence showing your characters name and skills. For example:
Bob Georgio: The expert cook.
Here is my application, to follow as an example.
Name: Lester Johnson
Age: 28
Personality: Lester is calm and relaxed. Often times, it seems like he doesn't have a care in the world. He is actually incredibly intelligent, but often doesn't use his head, and makes stupid mistakes. He likes to show off when he gets the chance, but usually he prefers to sit back and let other people do the dirty work. He is confident, and sometimes cocky, when it comes to socializing.
Appearance: Lester has thin black hair, that was usually gelled up. However, after the outbreak, he gave up on gel and let it hang loose, and cut it with his scalpel whenever it got out of hand, usually resulting in a lot of cuts along his forehead. He has thin eyebrows. His eyes are a light green, with a soft tinge of blue. He wears glasses, because he has poor vision. They have thin frames, but his back-up glasses have very thick frames. He has a closely shaved beard, that never seems to want to grow.. He has a wide nose, and has a seemingly always smirking face.
He is in shape, but doesn't have a well-muscled body. He never tried for muscles, and found them distasteful. He simply gets his daily activity and eats healthy. He has a tattoo of a mole on his left arm, his favorite animal. He always thought it was amazing how effective burrowing was too their lifestyles. He wears a well-used white lab-coat, with a tight shirt under it. He wears cargo pants, for their use in an apocalyptic world. He wears military-style boots, to keep the debris of the destroyed world from hurting him. He also wears blue rubber gloves and a face mask in case anything is contaminated. He usually wears the mask around his neck, unless he goes out.
Equipment: Lester carries a well sharpened scalpel, and a sturdy pair of brass knuckles. He also holds onto a rusted revolver that only just barely works, that has eighteen shots left.
Skills: Lester is a fairly decent fighter, from teaching himself how to handle bullies in high school. He also took up boxing for a year or too. However, he is a marine biologist. Examining the animals of the deep, identifying them, and learning about them is his passion. He has a masters degree in marine biology, and hoped to go for a PhD before the world ended. He is a quick thinker, and is also a bit of a poet.
Biography: Lester was always very smart. He didn't achieve top grades in his classes, simply because he was far too lazy and laid back to get any work done. But when he sets his mind to it, the job is done quickly and efficiently. This made him an infamous procrastinater, which was his big downfall in high school, making his grades plummet until eleventh grade. This was when he realized that if he didn't do well in school, he wouldn't make it anywhere in life. His best class was biology, to be more specific, the marine department of it. Because of his sudden interest in learning, he was deemed a nerd and picked on all the time. Not fond of this, he taught himself to throw punches just in case he ever got stuck in a fight. After seeing his success in this, he took boxing lessons and came third in a small tournament, where he ended up breaking his leg. He wasn't one to go back to something if he got hurt, so he gave up on boxing. He graduated high school with an A average and went on to university, majoring in marine biology.
The virus hit on a school break, where he was visiting his family. They were eating dinner, happily, all congratulating Lester on his academic success. Things got awkward, however, when his younger brothers pet turtle came crashing through the roof, twenty times it's previous size. Rising to his feet, Lester looked at in shock. He had heard rumors of this – terrorists creating a virus that would affect animals – but didn't expect it to be true. He turned to see the rest of his family, choking. They were all suddenly struck with an illness, and seemed to be dying. He wondered why he wasn't affected at all, as they dropped to the floor. Lester ran off too his lab, shaking as he saw everyone practically drop dead. He took a scalpel, and looted the guards dead body for brass knuckles and a pistol. He also grabbed gloves and a mask, just for safety precautions.
He lives in the attic of the lab, periodically going up to the roof when the screeching of birds stop. Or, when they started. He needed food sometimes.
Additional Facts: Bad vision, allergic to bee stings.
Suggestions: Haha, none.
One Liner: Lester Johnson : The laid-back scientist.
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I am blue.
Mods are green.
Trusted Players are teal.
Normal players are black.
Inactive players are brown.
Warned are red.
Banned are crimson.
Neilsaur - Lester Johnson: The laid-back scientist.
Chatix - Reagan Reyes, the determined soldier.
Stingray56 - SSGT Markus Fletcher, the realistic repairman.
Absolete - Adrianne, the emotional yet kindly scene singer.
HugTheZombies - John Clark, the marksman and survivalist.
Little Orphan Annie - Amanda Smith: The artistic teen
Feokris - Vincent - The unimmune doctor.
Thanatos - Jack Whitechapel - Genteel Acadamian
Miscellanion - Jin (James) Oshiro: The Mysterious Monk.
The Masked Krusader - William the biker nerd.
The Nturtanyr - Ted Davis: The Eccentric Cowboy
Neray Jenkins: The Avenging Gunslinger
Player Limit: 12/15
Markus is near death, and the group needs to make a dangerous choice.
Jin has faked death, and escaped the group - for now.
Lester is captured, and has to make a harsh decision. Everybody is in danger.
'Chapters'
This Roleplay will play out in different phases, that are each significantly different than the others. Once we finish a stage, we will move onto the next and the phase afterwords will be revealed.
1. Survival - The applicants who were here from the start will all meet together, tell eachother their stories, and attempt to survive.2. The Chase - Two military helicopters have taken down the strongest enemy the group has seen yet. The group is trying to follow them.3. The Fortress - The group enters the great city. Who knows what will happen?
4. The East - ?????
We now have a signature! Checkit!
Absolete, for the general idea of having animals take over.
Voicelessbard, for creating the signature!
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Game name - Saakar Gupta
Country you wish to lead - India - 'Cuz it's the fourth most powerful country in the world when it comes to military power... And all the higher ones are already taken.
Countries Controlled - India
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In order to have a successful roleplay, you must participate multiple times in other roleplays. This way, you can have experience, get better at writing, and get a name for yourself. If nobody knows you, very few will join your roleplay. If you want, check out my Guidelines, it's pinned in the FA section. It may help you out s'more.
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Decided to space their sentences apart.
With every line.
It's kind of obnoxious.
Please, just try. Even if its not top notch, try and don't be lazy. Also, Gollusk is feeling ignored, gais. :wink.gif: ))