This was kinda dead bro, but yea, spare the fan art section another fanfic lol. I suppose I am kinda hypocritical but at least mine is good, not like this crap. Oh, and I am pretty sure Cyber stopped doing this, but IDK, he made no formal announcement.
Chapter four, or Wretch, is written from William's character, continuing from chapter two, War. If you read all of the intro you would notice every chapter's first letter lets you know who the narrator/writer is for that chapter. This means you should have known chapter four was by William and by reading the end of chapter two, should have noticed he was referring you his wife who he had said made him supper in the end of chapter two. Thank you for your critique though. Also, my vocabulary is pretty extensive but I doubted everyone could comprehend words like "Opprobrium" or "Incondite" so I left them out often. Also, only a few of the characters would know these words themselves, and I try to make them as realistic as possible when I write their chapters for them.
No, but one can tell when they are blushing heavily. And no, the edits have not all gone through. I actually lost my book writings for a while and cried, my friends stole them. I am now finishing the edits and typing chapter 5.
No, the moral of the story is that blondes are not only unable dumb, but unable to tell time has passed and extremely easy to get with, just flash a little gold.
Yea, I did write that, and thank you. I am editting it now so it will only be better and chapter 5 is coming today most likely. Anyway, if you ever need tips and such, feel free to talk to me. I'm here to help writers to be honest. Thats my main reason for lurking the Fan Art section all the time.
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Oh, and I also editted chapters 1-4.
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