Ooh, this was a spooky one! I wonder what it all means... Could the fire lady have something to do with the Nether?
Overall, this was a pretty solid piece. The one thing I’d criticize is the part where you say something to the effect of, “Look away if you don’t like scary things.” While it does help to build suspense, bear in mind most people who are reading creepypastas want to be scared, so such a message is kind of obsolete. Other than that, it’s a very strange, but very cool story. I can definitely see you going on to write some really great stuff.
Well let me explain,
The fire lady doesn't really mean much. Lets just say when I was really young, I had dumb fears...
However, thr burning a diamond thing was real... And it was hard.
I wanted to write a creepy story, I tried... I'm better at writing other kinds of stories. You'd be surprised by the story I have going on in my head.
But you know... "Some things are just best to be forgotten."
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I believe it is called the "Neat" mod...
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It would need a more Minecraft-y name.
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I like gemstones too!
About having written anything else... Yes. Not really related to Minecraft though.
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Well let me explain,
The fire lady doesn't really mean much. Lets just say when I was really young, I had dumb fears...
However, thr burning a diamond thing was real... And it was hard.
I wanted to write a creepy story, I tried... I'm better at writing other kinds of stories. You'd be surprised by the story I have going on in my head.
But you know... "Some things are just best to be forgotten."
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Whaaa- to bad I have nothing to run Java edition on...
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Oh. Well, I wish(iwashi) I knew any this sooner!
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Wait, Optifine is out?
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*Plants vs Zombies zombie voice* The snapshots... are coming...
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I think that pandas don't fit that well... but thats what I thought about update aquatic.
And I screeched like an idiot when they revealed them...
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I'm speechless.
Yesterday i started a new Windows10 survival world.
Now I have gotten over 40 diamonds in total.
When you spawn, go get some wood, make some tools, get iron and hop into the ravine.
Seed is -564841618
Have fun
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*Scaffolding announced
The people: WOOOOOOOOO THIS IS THE BEST UPDATE!!!
*Bamboo and pandas announced
The people: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS THE BEST UPDATE EVER!!!! Wait, are we forgetting something?
I hope they end up calling the creature they were calling "the beast" actually "the beast"
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Gaming on YouTube is going downhill tho... Think of all that Clickbait...
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You could rename it to "item_id:0"
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You what, mate?