Forum name: FluffyRaindeer.
Minecraft name: Cmusky1
Age: 15
Primary Language: English.
Skype username: (recommended)
Why you're signing up: I have been following this topic in great detail for a couple days. It's turning out well, and I think I can contribute.
Position you're applying for: Just a regular builder/member, Unless you end up in need of a Faction Leader.
Previous server building/moderating experience: I was the forum moderator for TSC (The Shadow Craft)
Previous RPG server experience:I was a very dignified member on TSC. I am currently member of a few PvP/RPG styled servers. I once hosted my own RPG server, but it didn't go well.
Things you're good at building: Hidden traps/doors, Small keeps, public transport rails, I pride myself in the ability to take caves or ravines and turn them into pretty damn awesome homes/forts.
Screenshots of your constructions: (This is optional, but highly recommended).
How much time can you spend on the server: 2+ hours every day (3+ on weekends)
Any additional information: My brain is still recovering from the last guy I killed.
Thank you for taking the time to read my application, and giving me this opportunity to try your server.
So what you're saying is you dont want people who hate ten year olds because you act like one i assume? I fear you're one of those fellows who want to skype call you every ten seconds yet on skype you just annoy people.
on a side note, if my application wasnt good enough, then your template was flawed. What you've done right there is announced everyone sitting in a red chair is a moron, as you're planted on your red colored chair. dont disreguard people's application for filling out your application if your application isnt good enough, i did wonder why you wanted me to fill out such a shitty application that was writen in a record 10 seconds, but as the nice guy i am, i filled it out only to be told you didnt write it properly.
Either you lied about being 19, or you have the worst grammar and spelling of any 19 year old. Ever.
With an attitude like that, you'd be lucky if he even considered reconsidering sometime within the next 6 months.
I'm sorry if this sounds rude in any way, but why not have people outside of a select group of individuals helping to build? Not only does construction move faster, but you get new ideas and opinions on matters. Again, I really don't mean to sound rude about this, I just think this is, for lack of a better word, inefficient.
1: He doesn't have time to babysit every single person that want's to build with their own style.
2: He most likely know's what he needs done, He just hasn't chosen a seed; so of course, construction has not begun.
1. No griefing. Busting down a wall to get into someones house is okay, but not tearing the whole place apart, or unnecessarily destroying things for no reason. (Burning stolen items, unless your own them, is also griefing btw! At least try to go sell them...) 2. Watch what you say in chat. No racism, sexism, excessive cursing, direct cursing ( AT someone), spamming, advertising other servers, or accusing. (If you think someone is hacking/cheating don’t call them out in global chat. Use /msg to contact them privately 3. No glitching/ hacking/ using illegal mods. If you discover an exploitable game glitch, rather than use it to your advantage, report it to a staff member and it will hopefully be fixed. You will likely be rewarded as well. 4. Do not combat log. If you are unaware of what this is, it is when you are in a fight, about to die, then you /spawn, or /home or /warp etc. To avoid being killed. Combat logging during events is blocked, but we cannot help what happens on the battlefields. If you are reported by players for it multiple times, action will be taken. 5. Don't question staff authority. Staff don't like to be made fools of in general chat, and if you do call them out on something then they will most likely hold a grudge against you, which you don't want... If you have a problem specificly with a particular staff member. Please notify Derreth, or another high-ranking staff official.
Here, empires can rise and fall within a decade. Here, short days bring armies, and long nights bring terrible monsters, both of which will brun down villages. Here, safety is never guaranteed, and power is everything. Here, gods wage open war on each other, and use mortals as their pawns. Entalis is a world in chaos, and the only winner is death.
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It is in this time that the savior of the world, Animus, rose up. No more than a man, but perhaps far greater, Animus challenged the gods, and single-handedly convinced them to end their quarrels and let their people live in harmony. For a time, the Animan Empire ruled over Entalis, bringing peace and prosperity throughout the peoples of the world, lead by Animus at the capital city of Carda. But like all great empires, even the righteous Animans were destroyed.
Judging by countries of old, it would more likely be Animite, Animitian, Anemesian or the like, but Name it as you will. :smile.gif:
So far, I have read the lore and it is very good. 5/5 on Lore.
A dark and hungry god, Kra'ala is known as the Great Devourer for good reason. He carries an endless hunger that will never end. Of his subjects, he demands constant sacrifices, from valuable objects to innocent life, and he consumes all of it. In exchange, he gives the great power, knowledgem and protection from hsi wrath.
Lumen
He is loved, and seen as a leader that teaches, instead of simply provides. Lumen never gives anything for free, but rewards hard workd an labour. And under his enlightenment, the followers of Lumen are inspired to achieve greatness for themselves, and for their god.
Norgits
The oldest of the current pawns of the gods, the norgits were born from the very stone in the deep places of Entalis. A very hardy people, they possess great strength, skin as hard as leather, bones made of rock and, so rumour claims, genstones for eyes.
In total, This looks as though it is off to an immensely great start.
Total lore/entities/rules rating; 9/10
@FluffyRaindeer no, it doesn't need it. It's fine as it is, and your idea isn't really original, and it's also so simple that the game would lose a lot of replay value.
@OP I think that you should get someone to do better graphics for you, OR use minecraft's graphics.
You could always add it as a different gamemode xD
Besides, it was a very basic idea, to help inspire him.
First off, do not Write All Words Having A Capital At The Beginning Of The Word when making a title, it will turn people away.
Secondly, base it on whatever your favorite subject/game is.
You know what. You should add your own spin to it, palce a chest in the middle of the map somewhere that has to be found, and maybe a scroll in the chest that is a treasure map, and when you get to the location there is a boss to fight, you know?
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Minecraft name: Cmusky1
Age: 15
Primary Language: English.
Skype username: (recommended)
Why you're signing up: I have been following this topic in great detail for a couple days. It's turning out well, and I think I can contribute.
Position you're applying for: Just a regular builder/member, Unless you end up in need of a Faction Leader.
Previous server building/moderating experience: I was the forum moderator for TSC (The Shadow Craft)
Previous RPG server experience:I was a very dignified member on TSC. I am currently member of a few PvP/RPG styled servers. I once hosted my own RPG server, but it didn't go well.
Things you're good at building: Hidden traps/doors, Small keeps, public transport rails, I pride myself in the ability to take caves or ravines and turn them into pretty damn awesome homes/forts.
Screenshots of your constructions: (This is optional, but highly recommended).
How much time can you spend on the server: 2+ hours every day (3+ on weekends)
Any additional information: My brain is still recovering from the last guy I killed.
Thank you for taking the time to read my application, and giving me this opportunity to try your server.
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Apparently,(as he stated earlier) it was lost or corrupted.
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Alright, I give up. :dry.gif:
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It's not right!!!
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(This totally shouldn't count towards our PC)
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Either you lied about being 19, or you have the worst grammar and spelling of any 19 year old. Ever.
With an attitude like that, you'd be lucky if he even considered reconsidering sometime within the next 6 months.
1: He doesn't have time to babysit every single person that want's to build with their own style.
2: He most likely know's what he needs done, He just hasn't chosen a seed; so of course, construction has not begun.
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1. No griefing. Busting down a wall to get into someones house is okay, but not tearing the whole place apart, or unnecessarily destroying things for no reason. (Burning stolen items, unless your own them, is also griefing btw! At least try to go sell them...)
2. Watch what you say in chat. No racism, sexism, excessive cursing, direct cursing ( AT someone), spamming, advertising other servers, or accusing. (If you think someone is hacking/cheating don’t call them out in global chat. Use /msg to contact them privately
3. No glitching/ hacking/ using illegal mods. If you discover an exploitable game glitch, rather than use it to your advantage, report it to a staff member and it will hopefully be fixed. You will likely be rewarded as well.
4. Do not combat log. If you are unaware of what this is, it is when you are in a fight, about to die, then you /spawn, or /home or /warp etc. To avoid being killed. Combat logging during events is blocked, but we cannot help what happens on the battlefields. If you are reported by players for it multiple times, action will be taken.
5. Don't question staff authority. Staff don't like to be made fools of in general chat, and if you do call them out on something then they will most likely hold a grudge against you, which you don't want... If you have a problem specificly with a particular staff member. Please notify Derreth, or another high-ranking staff official.
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Most Probably so, the map has not yet been constructed, and if he know his RPG Servers; he will likely spend a few hours looking for a good seed.
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First, Quick Typo
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Judging by countries of old, it would more likely be Animite, Animitian, Anemesian or the like, but Name it as you will. :smile.gif:
So far, I have read the lore and it is very good. 5/5 on Lore.
Lumen
Norgits
In total, This looks as though it is off to an immensely great start.
Total lore/entities/rules rating; 9/10
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What it used to be! it was all green and blue and awesome!
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You could always add it as a different gamemode xD
Besides, it was a very basic idea, to help inspire him.
Also, Zanz, CHANGE YOUR AVATAR BACKKK. Kthxbai
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Secondly, base it on whatever your favorite subject/game is.
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