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    posted a message on What are you feeling right now?
    I feel like eating a cookeh *eats cookeh* now, i feel sad that cookeh is gone..
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    posted a message on Epic dream *be prepared for lots of text
    So..boring..confusing...and no, i am normal, so i have never gotten a high dream
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    posted a message on Kik
    Quote from TheEvanCat

    Is kik a drug? I like drugs.


    Right now, im really hoping that was a joke..
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    posted a message on Never-Ending Questions
    Singing

    OK IMA STOP WITH ALL THE 'meep or blup' questions!

    Do you like strawberries?
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    posted a message on Super Happy Swordy Time(chapter 1 out!)
    Quote from PopRocks

    Your gore is so over-the-top and cheesy that it comes back around and becomes goofy and light hearted. Remember, one painful wound is a hundred times more meaningful than a thousand painful wounds.

    Quote from Immortus

    It's a good story, but I would suggest using more variety in sentences. I think you started a sentence with 'Steve so and so' three or four times. There are also a few missing apostrophes and capitals missing.

    And also don't forget to put a space after a comma and a full stop. This is really minor but it makes it easier to read. :) Looking out for chapter 2!


    Thank you two for your critiscm, thoughts and compliments.It means alot to me that people are actually reading my work.Right now im working onchapter 2 and will be posting it later! :D
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    posted a message on What's worse?
    Whats Worse?Diving into a shallow pool and dying instantly or being forced to dive into a shallow pool and die instantly?
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    posted a message on (Story) Swords, Mines and Ores
    Very long, i read up to chapter 6 then copy and pasted it into notepad for another time when im bored..looks interesting though
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    posted a message on Super Happy Swordy Time(chapter 1 out!)
    Thank you for looking at this topic,this is one of my many stories about minecraft.but this is my first gore story and first one rated M.So, here it is.

    So, you all are thinking this is one of those'Once Upon A Time, in the land of Princessisia, a lovely girl lived in harmony' stories, youve come to the wrong place.What you are about to read is the gory battles of Steve, a brave warrior fighting for his country.Rated M for blood and gore.Reader Discretion Is Advised...
    decapitated heads everywhere.Blood stained grass lay on the fainted battle field.Steve held his head up high, and charged toward the mutant zombies, stabbing them with his sword as he went along.Steve wiped his face with his battered hand, geting the splattered blood off.Round 2 was coming, and Steve had no bow and arrow.But before you knew it, skellies were eveywhere, shooting at him.Steve fell to the ground, and was drowning in his own pool of blood.With the constant reminders of death, he got up,saturated in his own blood.Now this was serious.He ran for his chest, and grabbed his bow and one arrow.With a whole field of skeletons, this was tough.One shot, one chance..he pulled back the bow..

    Steve was tired and lonely, with the accompany of the mobs who attack him.He had to get medical attention for his knee, before he bled to death.When that bow went off, the world went silent for a moment.
    He killed 30 skeletons with that one shot.He knew he was good.And that was the end of the battle for today.He packed up his stuff and headed off to his car..
    Chapter 2 coming soon!
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    posted a message on New Life [Minecraft Poem]
    This is a very well thought out poem.21 views and only i commented..you deserve more attention

    :
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    posted a message on "The 12 Blocks of Minecraft"
    I doesnt really go with it.the lines go for longer
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    posted a message on The Beginning: A Minecraft story- Book Two
    He has stopped im afraid :(
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    posted a message on The Following Days
    Epic story mang!Sad your not contuining!
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    posted a message on Minecraft Stories and Myths
    Naww!Im so sad your not contuining.You do the best work!please keep on wirting stories1
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    posted a message on [PVP] [Raiding] [Chestshop] [Factions] VolcomCraft PVP [Brand-new] [lag-free]
    nice bro, nice!
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    posted a message on New Sever "LOOKING FOR STAFF"
    In-game name:ELLAMELLA

    Real Name:ELLA
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    Age:10

    Time zone:SYDNEY

    How long you have played on the server:A WHILE!
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    Past server experience:been admin for a few weeks to aclosing servr, needed help with the role of taking it up.

    Why do you think you should be chosen?:Cos i love to help people build and nt grief

    What do you think you may help do?:not grief

    Anything else you would like to say?:Nah!
    Posted in: PC Servers
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