I'd like you to take a look at your OWN application before downing this guy.
Here's your app
Just look at it for a while. Notice the...
Spelling/grammar mistakes:
- "benn" instead of "been"
- "Staff" instead of "staff"
- "Ive" needs an apostrophe
- No spaces after the colons
- No spaces between commas
- And I'm sure more that I have not noticed
The formatting:
- Everything is bold. Does it take that much time to turn the bold option off for your answeres compared to the questions?
- The entire last sentence is underlined... Same thing.
- The spacing between the lines is completely screwed up!
Finally:
I don't know about anyone else, but if I got an application from a person named XDark_SwagBoiX, I wouldn't take much time to look at it... Especially if there were grammar/spelling/formatting mistakes in it.
It's obvious that you put around 45 seconds into making your application, and now you're telling koolkowz that (s)he needs to spend more time on his/her app!? That's ridiculous.
Besides, your telling him/her that (s)he is going to be denied lacks grammar and spelling, too!
- Capital letters at the beginning of sentences
- Periods at the end
- You should say "Next time put more effort in it", not on it.
A disclamer:
Someone may notice my odd usage with grammar around apostrophes, such as you said "Example", and then you said "Example number two".
Normally the comma and the period would go inside the quote, but to me that makes no sense so I prefer to just do it the intuitive way.
Also:
Yes, I edited this. This was only to fix a spacing issue that was annoying me.
Good day.
he never downed that guy dont say he did he was just telling him that if you want to be in try a little harder as far as im concerned that is NOT downing so dont be makin' him feel bad when he didnt do anything
1.8 sucked. Diorite and granite look like crap, the rabbits look like crap too, and the armor stands are pointless. Mods will take a huge amount of time updating to 1.8, too. I did like the slime blocks, but they weren't even Mojang's original idea. The zipkrowd guys came up with it. The only really good thing Mojang did was the ocean monuments and the guardians. And for basically a year, that's really terrible.
this is the reason why notch quit mojang and sold it to microsoft
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he never downed that guy dont say he did he was just telling him that if you want to be in try a little harder as far as im concerned that is NOT downing so dont be makin' him feel bad when he didnt do anything
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this is the reason why notch quit mojang and sold it to microsoft
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