Hey guys... My first time on the literature page.. But yeah.. I got a great story in mind and I don't wan't to lose it but yeah here... (If I copied this then.. yeah it's cool)
Never mind a boy made this (No offense to all the boy writers out there )
Please correct me if I have grammar mistakes or spelling... My official language isn't English
INSIDE THE CODE
Chapter 1: Spawning
I was doing great... Top in my class... Best in everything in my school.. Everything you always wanted... For my gift, my parents bought me the Minecraft video game.. I was so excited!!... What did I do then. I grabbed the game, invited my brother, we both ran to my room, opened my laptop, placed the Minecraft CD (yeah it's a CD)
on the disk reader.. and BOOM! Everything changed!.. My first ten minutes in the game was wondrous... Tried to make my first house out of dirt but it kept me safe for the first night. Ate blocky porkchops for cubed pigs... Oh the wonder! I was at my top of my bed at that time. When I looked at the time... it was quarter to 11 in the evening. I realized I better go to sleep.. So what did I do. I went to my blocky bedroom.. Stood there for half a minute and logged out Minecraft then my desktop... Then I went to sleep.. Praying that the next day... Another Minecraft Day
Chapter 2: The Error
The next day... Breakfast was great!.. A little bacon and eggs for me. Went to school happy and proud to share my Minecraft experiences... When I came back to my happy home.. I quickly went to my room.. Started up my desktop and I came face to face with an ERROR! screen... I didn't know what to do. So I just laid back, relaxed and turned the power down. When I started it again.. It still flashed the same screen.. The ERROR! screen...
I can imagine my first 10 minutes... The things I built.. gone... everything in and out of Minecraft... at the edge of the ledge towards DELETION... I was desperate at those times... After the news.. My grades lowered down a lot... My friends started backstabbing me... No wonder I was so addicted to that game I began talking about it.... I only played for one day.. they call me addicted... I don't care... Until the next day..
Chapter 3: The Adventure
My laptop... came back to life... only different... desktop was normal... everything deleted EXCEPT Minecraft... I was shocked of what happened... The only things in my desktop are the Minecraft icon, The Computer AND two .txt files that said "Play Minecraft first". So I played it.. and the opening screen changed.. Normally it would show MOJANG with orange and white color.. Now it showed WINDOWS with the Windows color scheme... It opened.. The background was different. Everything digital... The only thing in the menu screen was a big DEBUG button that flashed constantly... I clicked it and it directed me to a world screen with only one world.. "_C0D3_"... I clicked it one time and it directed me to a folder... Not a game... I scratched my head in confusion.. "Why did it direct me to a folder?" I said. But I noticed... The Minecraft taskbar was there... I clicked it to get back... and it opened the hotbar ingame.. I was shocked on how this happened... But when I noticed the folder was Minecraft itself but black and white with no grayscale things or color... I began to sense something... Why would it do this.. until I noticed a sign near a yellow block which might supposed to be the folder... "SCHOOL STUFF" I quickly went inside the folder.. Only directing me to the End.. but it looks different... All white.. No mobs visible except for a strange hermit near a pillar... Who was dressed in black so he can be noticable.. I quickly went into his direction.. only to find out...
Chapter 4: Unknown Entity
He disappeared... Turns out, he was a failed mode of a Shulker. Of course he was hostile as every hostile mob in the game. But this one acted differently... He went closer and closer every-time he teleported. It was a little creepy but when it got closer... It soon died. After that.. It took me back outside of the "SCHOOL STUFF" folder. And another folder appeared to the right of it. It was a folder called "DATA'... When I saw it.. It hit me in the head that the world I'm playing... It's my folders in my desktop... Then music played at the background... It sounded off, like it's not from Minecraft... It was something like a war-tune type of sound. When I got closer to the folder.. It grew louder and louder then BOOM!... The folder exploded. And an dragon-entity appeared... Considering I didn't know what was the Enderdragon doing in my folder screen... I got closer... Only to find out that it wasn't a dragon after all!... It was something more sinister...
Chapter 5: The Virus
A red deformed figure surprised me... face to face.. It looked at me liked I was it's next prey. Then I heard falling mobs.. They sounded like villagers, so I think I'm safe for now... In my screen after a few seconds... Hundreds of villagers surrounded the creature... Only they weren't any ordinary villagers. They were yellow-robed, magic wielding and named villagers... They were powerful... As soon as I hovered at the villagers... Labeled "McAfee Anti-Virus". They started going crazy.. Destroying everything they see as a threat... Then the world ended... Minecraft crashed with me scratching my head in confusion... As I saw the .txt file change "READ NOW!"... Well I did what any other person did... I read it... Here's what it read
"O Minecraft Player... You still have far to go until you get Princess CORE back... She will be waiting for you for 3 days until she either corrupts herself or RECYCLE BIN deletes her forever... You can still get her back.. But find out how to deal with it... Or she - 2182n!)@B170!@(b!*&@&n1f)!&0%!("
The rest were codes... I didn't understand it... What did it mean?
But there were many more spaces... a note said to stop until I defeated another boss
Chapter 6: Princess CORE
And the biggest question is "Who is Princess CORE?" and "Do I have to defeat RECYCLE BIN?"... I didn't know... I opened Minecraft again only this time... It wasn't the same... It was corrupted. MINECRAFT now said TROJAN...
Now I was scared to press PLAY... But when I hovered over it.. I was transported to another folder... It was called MC MODS. I saw every mod I downloaded... When every mod I saw stood out from its folder... I interacted with them. Except for one folder called "DELETED MODS". There I put the scary or outdated mods... Slender, Weeping Angels... every outdated mod. The biggest mystery is... A .ZIP file shouldn't have scars... There another war-themed music played again... I realized that it was TROJAN...
Chapter 7: TROJAN
BOOM! TROJAN came out of the Mutant Horses mod.... He was a wooden horse with a few flashing green blocks... Out of his nostrils... Binary particles came out... To signal that it was really dangerous... It defeated every "McAfee Anti-Virus". I was left with nothing... Then I found something. A window popped up... There was a broken dispenser with no key and a single sign that said "FIND ME"... What would happen to me!
Chapter 8: .exe the Prophecy
OUCH!... TROJAN shoved me out of the way... Hurting me 8 hearts... I didn't know what would I do?... In my mind. I looked back at the first folder... The white lands with the failed Shulker model... I was at the edge... Until I saw something drop from the sky. A map item renamed to "Prophecy". I hovered over it using the hotbar... It displayed nothing but a white page with some text below that said "BRIGHTNESS"... I realized the brightness needs to be lowered but trying to press "Esc" brings up a minigame that you need to memorize a sequence about your own desktop... A really hard minigame but my laptop depends on it
Chapter 9: Sequencing Desktops
So I opened "Esc" mode and tried to complete the sequence... It involves me going to other computers.. Even in my sister's.. But that will be pretty hard... Because she never lets me use it... But at this one time when she is gone... Later when she leaves. I'll get on with it... The time she left... I opened her desktop. Which was rather easy because she doesn't keep a password in her desktop. Anyways... A .txt file appeared in her desktop... I clicked it and it showed me the answer... It involves me copy pasting it into my USB and into my laptop... But wait!.. a USB CAN contain those "McAfee Anti-Viruses".. All I need is more time but I HAVE no time!...
Chapter 10: BRIGHTNESS
Well I logged back on my laptop and found out that the sequencing part repeated again... The same pattern but flipped.. Now I need to flip the whole .txt file again... Once again success was on my side and the menu opened but it was different.... It was badly made and distorted... But I clicked the former options menu... Found that the only slider there labeled "BRIGHTNESS" was in 50%... Well I turned it up by 100% and got back to the game... Then I equipped the map and found something really awesome!.. The prophecy.. It read..
For once.. A brave coder was found in this wretched world... He fought WORM, TROJAN but he'll expect others fighting his life and reputation... If your reading this.. This is you!... Have a brave time... My child..
Below the prophecy was a signature
-Turner
I literally scratched hard... "Who is TURNER?"
After that... Seems like TROJAN was destroying half my window... But who cares.. I rushed to him... then I plugged my USB in my laptop... Then it was all new.. Flying Guardians appeared.. I hovered in one of them.. It labeled "DATA"... Then in a huge pile of codes... TROJAN was defeated.. Piles of Acacia Wood were piled up on the codes... Then I noticed
Chapter 11: TURNER has been TURNED ON
Someone talked.. in the chat bar... It said
TURNER: I've been turned on.. Beware viruses.. I'm coming for every one of you
Then arguments started in the chat bar... I can't really understand them because they were mostly what they said "CODE SPEAK"... and what's even more surprising is that Turner can speak their language... And at the same time communicate with me!... I responded to the argument
<Lee>: Who are you?
Then Turner responded
TURNER: I'm one of the people that will help you. My child... Be careful of the viruses that invade your computer... I-I I am-
At that very moment.. Minecraft crashed... And the previous .txt file changed to "READ AGAIN"
It said...
Princess CORE is still far enough... RECYCLE BIN is now releasing project MALWARE... A very dangerous type of virus that multiplies when attacked... Be careful my child... As now you know my identity... -Turner
Turner was helping me defeat RECYCLE BIN... He was one of the Anti-Virus Leaders... That's what I thought...
Chapter 12: MALWARE
Again... everything changed... TROJAN was now MALWARE... and now accompanying the click sound was a sinister "YES"..I opened the world "_C0D3_"... I noticed that the world is starting to come back... The folders were now turning to chunks of Minecraft Blocks... Walls were disappearing... But some blocks were left unchanged.. I could barely identify my house to a pile of acacia wood that TROJAN left... I went in.. and found a Written book inside a distorted item frame... It read... "From Turner"... The GUI suddenly opened on a 2 page book... It read
PG 1
My child... remember me in your memories...
when you were standing in that hill looking
above the stars... And telling me how I look...
It was wonderful... You were dressed like
you were part of the starts. And I looked
like I was part of the tree I was lying down on.
Then you suddenly lured me into a lovely
song that we both sang until the brink of dawn
PG 2
Oh the good times... I look down to that moment
when we first met and I saved it in my notepad..
Just remember me in the name Dralia Turner...
Hope you remember me in your sweet memories
I blushed at the message... I realized it was from none other than Dralia Tricia Turner... My girlfriend...
The twist begins.. It exposes my real life slowly until I defeat RECYCLE BIN and rescue Princess CORE
Then as I think about the past... MALWARE appears out of nowhere... In a form of a blue Slime... Then it
started shooting out gray particles that damaged me... Then someone joined...
TURNER joined the game
It was her... She walked slowly towards MALWARE... hit it in the shins... and fell 15 hearts below... She immediately left with the message
TURNER: You can do it.. I believe in you my child
I was notified that it was her... Then as she left.. She dropped two stuff... A sword and a poppy...
Chapter 13: The Hill
Then MALWARE fell in a great roar... as it fell... two more came out of him... Instead of blue.. they were now red... But it didn't matter.. I defeated every state it had... After that I saw a sign appear in a hill with a tree... As I go near the sign.. Minecraft crashed... and the .txt file changed... "READ AGAIN 2"
It said-
I'm not gonna call you "My child" again Lee.. I know you and you know me... I'm Dralia... you know.. we had many adventures... But you were limited to outside games... Because before... you didn't have Minecraft... I on the other hand... Had Minecraft when it started... In 2009. When we first met.. i still remembered you being the shy guy in the back of the class but now.. your our achiever... Anyway.. defeat RECYCLE BIN... Good luck Lee...
-Dralia
I said "Wait... If Dralia knew me from the start.. Why did she remind me about her again.. I didn't forget about her"
I opened Minecraft again... But this time it was different... It asked me my username and password... I realized it was slowly coming back to normal... I typed it.. With luck it opened me to the Main menu screen.. it was back to normal.. The options button, multiplayer, everything... Except for one final thing... The Minecraft sign now said "SPYWARE".. With quick succesion. I clicked "Single-Player" but it directed me to multiplayer.. In there. Only one IP showed
dralia.turner.is.here
I clicked it.. only directing me.. To a server with 5 people
Lee
TURNER
PNG
JPEG
ZIP
Dralia then explained what happened...
Chapters 14 - 19 will be out sometime this Monday
[P.S None of the is canon... Some mods and servers aren't real ]
[P.P.S Lee isn't me... I'm not the person in the story]
From the title, I was expecting the story to have more to do with the code itself, which could potentially be cringeworthy if you don't have any programming background. Hovever, this story has more of a creepypasta format, so realism is less of a concern.
Despite grammar errors, this story is mostly readable. The most obvious issue that I see is the overuse of ellipses (...). Also, although not quite a grammar issue, it helps if you divide your chapters into multiple paragraphs. It adds stucture an tension.
Now for the story itself. First of all, the end of Chapter 2 is quite melodramatic given that only a day has passed. Second of all, by the end of Chapter 3, all the random Minecrafty computer things that keep happening make the story begin to drag, because there is no logical connection between the events that make me as a reader feel that the story has meaning.
Other than that, nice work. I hope you keep writing.
From the title, I was expecting the story to have more to do with the code itself, which could potentially be cringeworthy if you don't have any programming background. Hovever, this story has more of a creepypasta format, so realism is less of a concern.
Despite grammar errors, this story is mostly readable. The most obvious issue that I see is the overuse of ellipses (...). Also, although not quite a grammar issue, it helps if you divide your chapters into multiple paragraphs. It adds stucture an tension.
Now for the story itself. First of all, the end of Chapter 2 is quite melodramatic given that only a day has passed. Second of all, by the end of Chapter 3, all the random Minecrafty computer things that keep happening make the story begin to drag, because there is no logical connection between the events that make me as a reader feel that the story has meaning.
Other than that, nice work. I hope you keep writing.
Its because the story isn't finished yet. I kinda got used to the ellipses. And the reason why Chapter 2 has only a day passed because it is just like a normal day of a Minecraft Gamer or youtuber. Theres a surprise in some chapter that I would like to add. The code stuff... It doesn't explain a creeypasta. Well the first three parts explains a kid playing Minecraft then suddely crashing and something great would follow. So yeah... Chapters 4-7 will be out later (I'm having my recollection later so have a happy day reading this )
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SWEET! This could be classified as creepy pasta doe
Anyway, welcome to literature!
P.S. I'm a boy writer too >:(
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I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Location:
Cat kingdom, Cateria
Join Date:
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cool. I like the new chapters so far
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I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Zanks!.. Anyways... This is faster than usual but Chapters 8 - 13 are gonna be out tomorrow..
EDIT: FALSE ALARM!... Seems like I won't be here tomorrow... So I'll be releasing it quite shorty
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I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
Location:
Cat kingdom, Cateria
Join Date:
12/5/2014
Posts:
83
Location:
Cat kingdom, Cateria
Minecraft:
Bolt1
Xbox:
MeowsRul
PSN:
MeowRul
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Nice I like how this went from adventure creepypasta to more of a romantic story
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I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Hey guys... My first time on the literature page.. But yeah.. I got a great story in mind and I don't wan't to lose it but yeah here... (If I copied this then.. yeah it's cool)
Never mind a boy made this (No offense to all the boy writers out there )
Please correct me if I have grammar mistakes or spelling... My official language isn't English
Someone talked.. in the chat bar... It said
TURNER: I've been turned on.. Beware viruses.. I'm coming for every one of you
Then arguments started in the chat bar... I can't really understand them because they were mostly what they said "CODE SPEAK"... and what's even more surprising is that Turner can speak their language... And at the same time communicate with me!... I responded to the argument
<Lee>: Who are you?
Then Turner responded
TURNER: I'm one of the people that will help you. My child... Be careful of the viruses that invade your computer... I-I I am-
At that very moment.. Minecraft crashed... And the previous .txt file changed to "READ AGAIN"
It said...
Princess CORE is still far enough... RECYCLE BIN is now releasing project MALWARE... A very dangerous type of virus that multiplies when attacked... Be careful my child... As now you know my identity... -Turner
Turner was helping me defeat RECYCLE BIN... He was one of the Anti-Virus Leaders... That's what I thought...
Chapter 12: MALWARE
Again... everything changed... TROJAN was now MALWARE... and now accompanying the click sound was a sinister "YES"..I opened the world "_C0D3_"... I noticed that the world is starting to come back... The folders were now turning to chunks of Minecraft Blocks... Walls were disappearing... But some blocks were left unchanged.. I could barely identify my house to a pile of acacia wood that TROJAN left... I went in.. and found a Written book inside a distorted item frame... It read... "From Turner"... The GUI suddenly opened on a 2 page book... It read
PG 1
My child... remember me in your memories...
when you were standing in that hill looking
above the stars... And telling me how I look...
It was wonderful... You were dressed like
you were part of the starts. And I looked
like I was part of the tree I was lying down on.
Then you suddenly lured me into a lovely
song that we both sang until the brink of dawn
PG 2
Oh the good times... I look down to that moment
when we first met and I saved it in my notepad..
Just remember me in the name Dralia Turner...
Hope you remember me in your sweet memories
I blushed at the message... I realized it was from none other than Dralia Tricia Turner... My girlfriend...
The twist begins.. It exposes my real life slowly until I defeat RECYCLE BIN and rescue Princess CORE
Then as I think about the past... MALWARE appears out of nowhere... In a form of a blue Slime... Then it
started shooting out gray particles that damaged me... Then someone joined...
TURNER joined the game
It was her... She walked slowly towards MALWARE... hit it in the shins... and fell 15 hearts below... She immediately left with the message
TURNER: You can do it.. I believe in you my child
I was notified that it was her... Then as she left.. She dropped two stuff... A sword and a poppy...
Chapter 13: The Hill
Then MALWARE fell in a great roar... as it fell... two more came out of him... Instead of blue.. they were now red... But it didn't matter.. I defeated every state it had... After that I saw a sign appear in a hill with a tree... As I go near the sign.. Minecraft crashed... and the .txt file changed... "READ AGAIN 2"
It said-
I'm not gonna call you "My child" again Lee.. I know you and you know me... I'm Dralia... you know.. we had many adventures... But you were limited to outside games... Because before... you didn't have Minecraft... I on the other hand... Had Minecraft when it started... In 2009. When we first met.. i still remembered you being the shy guy in the back of the class but now.. your our achiever... Anyway.. defeat RECYCLE BIN... Good luck Lee...
-Dralia
I said "Wait... If Dralia knew me from the start.. Why did she remind me about her again.. I didn't forget about her"
I opened Minecraft again... But this time it was different... It asked me my username and password... I realized it was slowly coming back to normal... I typed it.. With luck it opened me to the Main menu screen.. it was back to normal.. The options button, multiplayer, everything... Except for one final thing... The Minecraft sign now said "SPYWARE".. With quick succesion. I clicked "Single-Player" but it directed me to multiplayer.. In there. Only one IP showed
dralia.turner.is.here
I clicked it.. only directing me.. To a server with 5 people
Lee
TURNER
PNG
JPEG
ZIP
Dralia then explained what happened...
Chapters 14 - 19 will be out sometime this Monday
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead
Cool story. Welcome to the Literature subsection.
From the title, I was expecting the story to have more to do with the code itself, which could potentially be cringeworthy if you don't have any programming background. Hovever, this story has more of a creepypasta format, so realism is less of a concern.
Despite grammar errors, this story is mostly readable. The most obvious issue that I see is the overuse of ellipses (...). Also, although not quite a grammar issue, it helps if you divide your chapters into multiple paragraphs. It adds stucture an tension.
Now for the story itself. First of all, the end of Chapter 2 is quite melodramatic given that only a day has passed. Second of all, by the end of Chapter 3, all the random Minecrafty computer things that keep happening make the story begin to drag, because there is no logical connection between the events that make me as a reader feel that the story has meaning.
Other than that, nice work. I hope you keep writing.
Its because the story isn't finished yet. I kinda got used to the ellipses. And the reason why Chapter 2 has only a day passed because it is just like a normal day of a Minecraft Gamer or youtuber. Theres a surprise in some chapter that I would like to add. The code stuff... It doesn't explain a creeypasta. Well the first three parts explains a kid playing Minecraft then suddely crashing and something great would follow. So yeah... Chapters 4-7 will be out later (I'm having my recollection later so have a happy day reading this )
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead
I can't wait to read the rest! (And no I'm not just saying this to be nice XD)
https://www.roblox.com/games/292439477/Phantom-Forces-Beta?rbxp=87417790
You must play this awesomeness right this moment...
You can find me sometimes on CubeCraft or Hypixel.
SWEET! This could be classified as creepy pasta doe
Anyway, welcome to literature!
P.S. I'm a boy writer too >:(
I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Chapters 4 - 7 are out! PEACE!!!
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead
cool. I like the new chapters so far
I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Zanks!.. Anyways... This is faster than usual but Chapters 8 - 13 are gonna be out tomorrow..
EDIT: FALSE ALARM!... Seems like I won't be here tomorrow... So I'll be releasing it quite shorty
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead
I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Anyhow... Chapters 8 - 13 are out... please comment on how you like it or how can I improve the next chapters
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead
Nice I like how this went from adventure creepypasta to more of a romantic story
I help people in need of help. I support people that need support. I talk and reply to everything that i find interesting. And I really enjoy it. Do you need any help? If so, all you have to do is message me and be kind and i will do my best to help!!!
Sorry for the loooong delay guys.. The rest of the chapters will be out this Christmas...I only have limited WiFi today..
My YT!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyS_GEiXHCUvX5d1ZmYivWg/about
Inside the Code: First Story: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2564723-inside-the-code-wip
RP CHARACTERS ▼
Black = Me
Turquoise = Other Self
Lime = Dark Overlord behind the closet
Blue = Physicist who prescribes deadly medicine
Orange = Yandere self
Spruce Green = Slenderman's cousin's brother's cousin's cousin's nephew
Pink = My annoying cat
White = I'm dead