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It looks like everyone can go home today with a clean grammar record . . . for now . . .*"Jaws" theme plays*. Actually, I don't care as much about grammar as I do about content. And not nearly as much as I care about description. I should be a "Description Nazi".
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Well, Chapter One: Tempest of Act I: Infernal Devices is finished! It's not that exciting but it establishes Vikram's irrational fear of the sea and boats, introduces Charles Wickham, an eccentric poet and close friend of Vikram, and gives some important foreshadowing to events to come. More exposition and intrique will hopefully be coming in later chapters. I hope you enjoy!
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well I'm beginning to think the initial summary I put on my application for Minefic: Legacy is going to be changed. Also, Zeuistepali, your character is probably going to be in this but I might have to change some more of it. Only because it seems like the railgun is more important than the actual character. As it always seems to do when I write one, the story is getting away from me.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well I'm beginning to think the initial summary I put on my application for Minefic: Legacy is going to be changed. Also, Zeuistepali, your character is probably going to be in this but I might have to change some more of it. Only because it seems like the railgun is more important than the actual character. As it always seems to do when I write one, the story is getting away from me.
I usually plot the story out to a basic plot then write and add in new things where applicable.
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That's how I always try to do things but somehow I always come up with a better idea for a plot half way through.
I probably won't. I'm not really sure yet, to be honest. I still have a long way to go. By the way, have either of you read the first chapter?
Honestly, I skimmed it... I really cant really read it the way it is. I prefer old fashioned books. It seemed he was having a nightmare interesting. I will wait for the second or third chapter before copying it down and reading it on something like word.
Honestly, I skimmed it... I really cant really read it the way it is. I prefer old fashioned books. It seemed he was having a nightmare interesting. I will wait for the second or third chapter before copying it down and reading it on something like word.
Yeah, I'm not the biggest fan of the Minecraft Forums interface either, and I can see how that might be hard to read. Well take your time, and if you do end up finishing it please, by all means, leave some comments or constructive criticism or something
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Yeah, I'm not the biggest fan of the Minecraft Forums interface either, and I can see how that might be hard to read. Well take your time, and if you do end up finishing it please, by all means, leave some comments or constructive criticism or something
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Because we are all on drugs. everything ends up nice and happy. I am going to go play with my balloonicorn now...
Edit; You are a master writer! I loved the whole story! When are you writing more?!?!?!?!?
p.s; I copied it to word.
Well more should be out in a few days, maybe a week. I usually revise a lot before posting chapters. Was there anything I could improve on? Thanks for reviewing, by the way.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Well more should be out in a few days, maybe a week. I usually revise a lot before posting chapters. Was there anything I could improve on? Thanks for reviewing, by the way.
I loved the science fiction aspect.
The way you incorporated the aether and such. I would buy a book like this.
Loved the description of the enderman, though i was kindof confused. Was that what he had been dreaming or was it a coincidal event?
I loved the science fiction aspect.
The way you incorporated the aether and such. I would buy a book like this.
Loved the description of the enderman, though i was kindof confused. Was that what he had been dreaming or was it a coincidal event?
Thanks! He was dreaming about being on a ship and it was meant to be ominous. The Overture was an initial explanation of what the Aether was and how far technology had advanced as well as a short event that was narrated from the 3rd-person point of view of a completely unrelated character. The 3rd-person narration in the Overture was to introduce the city of Volastra, where many later events will take place, and the Endermen. I don't want to spoil too much, but later in the story the Moonlight Palace is going to be investigating a series of murders just like that one committed by the Endermen, and Vikram is going to realize that the murders are being committed on the orders of the main villain, who is an agent of the Void. But I shouldn't say anymore. I'm glad you enjoyed the Overture and the first chapter
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OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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Ah. Okay then. Correction rescinded.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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It looks like everyone can go home today with a clean grammar record . . . for now . . .*"Jaws" theme plays*.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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Wait... isn't that what guys say when they see a really good looking lady? *Refrains from describing further.*
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
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Well . . . if my story is like a good looking lady then I suppose I should be flattered. I would refrain from any further description though.
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That's how I always try to do things but somehow I always come up with a better idea for a plot half way through.
I probably won't. I'm not really sure yet, to be honest. I still have a long way to go.
Yeah, I'm not the biggest fan of the Minecraft Forums interface either, and I can see how that might be hard to read. Well take your time, and if you do end up finishing it please, by all means, leave some comments or constructive criticism or something
:D. Why do conversations always seem to end with happy emoticons in the Literature subsection?
Edit; You are a master writer! I loved the whole story! When are you writing more?!?!?!?!?
p.s; I copied it to word.
Well more should be out in a few days, maybe a week. I usually revise a lot before posting chapters. Was there anything I could improve on? Thanks for reviewing, by the way.
The way you incorporated the aether and such. I would buy a book like this.
Loved the description of the enderman, though i was kindof confused. Was that what he had been dreaming or was it a coincidal event?
Thanks! He was dreaming about being on a ship and it was meant to be ominous. The Overture was an initial explanation of what the Aether was and how far technology had advanced as well as a short event that was narrated from the 3rd-person point of view of a completely unrelated character. The 3rd-person narration in the Overture was to introduce the city of Volastra, where many later events will take place, and the Endermen. I don't want to spoil too much, but later in the story the Moonlight Palace is going to be investigating a series of murders just like that one committed by the Endermen, and Vikram is going to realize that the murders are being committed on the orders of the main villain, who is an agent of the Void. But I shouldn't say anymore.