First off, I will actually be gone for a bit, so don't readtoo fast. But that doesn't mean you should stop checking up; the more you check on this story, the sooner it will become popular, and the more people will be reading your favorite story!
Right but I forgot, this isn't anyone's favorite story, so why bother?
But seriously; my dad is gonna kill me, so I'll keep this short:
I intend to finish up the story here within fifteen chapters, and add in a chapter or two or three or four of epilogue. After that, I will be writing another fanfiction called Blueice -- The Legend of the Miner, and possibly one before that explaining where all the mobs came from.
So for now, adieu, my friends.
EDIT:
First off, I will actually be gone for a bit, so don't readtoo fast. But that doesn't mean you should stop checking up; the more you check on this story, the sooner it will become popular, and the more people will be reading your favorite story!
the more you check up on this story and comment/keep-the-thread-alive, the sooner it will become popular...
First off, brilliant chapter. It's a shame you'll be leaving... Hope you come back soon (seems everybody's leaving recently. Cubic fire is on hold too )
Thank you, and yeah, I saw that cubic fire is on hold, I would be sad, but I won't be here to see it on hold... so... yeah.
Can't wait for blueice. Speaking of which, can your avatar possibly be blueice ore O_o?
No, there is no such thing as blueice ore. My avatar is blueice. Blueice comes only in blocks (like diamond/iron/etc. blocks, but blueice) and blueice ingots (like iron/gold ingots, but blueice).
Don't worry, I'll be writing as much as I can while I'm gone.
This is goodbye until I return in... a week... or two... or more... or less... But anyway, see ya'll some other time!
Oh, and a few words of wisdom...
Spoilers are good, keep this thread alive while I'm gone, don't forget to support whatever story is your favorite, and spoilers are good. (Did I forget to tell you that spoilers are good?)
As the chapter name suggests... The Guardians gather
GREAT NEWS: I just got my fourth content too long error! That means into post number four!
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please say so. If you don't speak up, you won't be heard. If you aren't heard, you will turn into a shadow of a... whatever you are, and there'll be no chance of you being seen/noticed/found/discovered/othercleverword. So yeah.
Hmmm. Lemme guess. That Herobrine was a decoy, alongside with the Dragons of The End? Or weak clones...
Whoa! Have to use a spoiler here!
I do, in fact, like the word 'arching'.
To answer the second part of the quote...
If you are reading this, be warned:
THIS SPOILS PART
OF THE STORY!!
That Herobrine was not a decoy. If you remember the vision that Minxed had of Herobrine trying to escape that pit, that helps explain it. Herobrine right now is only partially resurrected from his state of defeat. That pit is deep within the confines of the Nether. In this story, the Nether was created to keep Herobrine from escaping. Herobrine's defeat, and the creation of the Nether all came by the same person, who just HAPPENS to be one of Minxed's predecessors. So back on topic, Herobrine's spirit is confined in the Nether Pit, along with the majority of his body. This means that in his current state, Herobrine is weak, and mostly skeletal. The only portion of his body that isn't skeletal is his face. Here are descriptions of him in his three resurrected states:
Partially Resurrected:
Taller than most humans, Herobrine stands just over two-and-a-half meters tall. He wears a red, silk cloak that completely covers his body. His pure white eyes can light up even the darkest areas, making him easy to spot. His face has flesh on it, his chest partially covered by flesh, and the rest of him is skeletal.
Mostly Resurrected:
Taller than most humans, Herobrine stands just over two-and-a-half meters tall. He wears a red, silk cloak that completely covers his body. His pure white eyes can light up even the darkest areas, making him easy to spot. Mostly covered in flesh, Herobrine is capable of walking through fire unscathed, though his hands and arms are still skeletal.
Fully Resurrected: Taller than most humans, Herobrine stands just over two-and-a-half meters tall. He wears a red, silk cloak that completely covers his body. His pure white eyes can light up even the darkest areas, making him easy to spot. Now fully resurrected, Herobrine’s humanoid state has completely returned, and if it weren’t for his eyes, he would look human.
So there you have it. That's Herobrine for ya'. Now for the enderdragons...
Minxed is actually correct in thinking there are only three; the mother and father who roam freely between the four dimensions, living mostly in the Aether, and the child, who lives in The End for the most part. In my story, The End got it's name like this:
At the peak of Herobrine's reign, The Predecessor(Refering to Minxed's predecessor who defeated Herobrine) created a race of dragons to help him in the battle against Herobrine. Angered that The Predecessor would make something so alike to the Endermen, who revolted against Herobrine, Herobrine began to hunt down the dragons. The Predecessor, in an effort to preserve the great race of the dragons, created a new dimension for them to stay in until the final battle. However, Herobrine discovered this dimension, and in one flick of his hand, ended the lives of all but three of the dragons; the mother, father, and first child. The dimension was given the name 'The End' in honor of the many dragons who died that day, and people eventually came to know them as the "Enderdragons".
So the Enderdragons are the weaker ones of the race; the ones that Herobrine defeated. Because of who he descended from, Minxed was able to bring back some of the Enderdragons. The real power however, is not the Enderdragons, but The Three Dragons.
So Herobrine is... Not the real enemy? Or are the Three Dragons of the End out for bloodlusty revenge?
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Herobrine is the enemy; The Predecessor only created The End to hide the dragons from Herobrine, and Herobrine tracked them down and killed them. The Mother and Father Dragons already got the revenge they were looking for; the first defeat of Herobrine. However, the Child Dragon, the one remaining dragon who seeks revenge against Herobrine, is trapped in The End. The explanation for him killing everyone is that he's gone partially insane from being trapped in The End for so long. I mean, three million, two hundred and three thousand, eight hundred and fifteen years is a long time to be trapped, and the poor Child Dragon has been trapped there since long before Herobrine's defeat(Herobrine was first defeated 3,203,815 years ago). So in short, the answer to your question is no. Herobrine IS the real enemy, and The Three Dragons are not out for bloodthirsty revenge.
Herobrine is the enemy; The Predecessor only created The End to hide the dragons from Herobrine, and Herobrine tracked them down and killed them. The Mother and Father Dragons already got the revenge they were looking for; the first defeat of Herobrine. However, the Child Dragon, the one remaining dragon who seeks revenge against Herobrine, is trapped in The End. The explanation for him killing everyone is that he's gone partially insane from being trapped in The End for so long. I mean, three million, two hundred and three thousand, eight hundred and fifteen years is a long time to be trapped, and the poor Child Dragon has been trapped there since long before Herobrine's defeat(Herobrine was first defeated 3,203,815 years ago). So in short, the answer to your question is no. Herobrine IS the real enemy, and The Three Dragons are not out for bloodthirsty revenge.
Wha- y u no blodthirsty revenge!?
Me is sad;(
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Yet another chapter is out, and the story is only getting better as it goes!
For those of you who already read chapter 18:
What's with the all-of-the-sudden disappearance of Tankinator and that girl he was supposedly talking to? Is Minxed's dream about Brailyn really going to happen? How did Steve, E.J, and Pluto find their way to them without trouble? What did The Predecessor mean? : : Stoked yet?
Get ready for chapter 19! Filled with excitement, a flurry of motion, non-stop action, and amystifying new character, chapter 19 will answer many questions, and leave more deeper questions unanswered!
Yet another chapter is out, and the story is only getting better as it goes!
For those of you who already read chapter 18:
What's with the all-of-the-sudden disappearance of Tankinator and that girl he was supposedly talking to? Is Minxed's dream about Brailyn really going to happen? How did Steve, E.J, and Pluto find their way to them without trouble? What did The Predecessor mean? : : Stoked yet?
Get ready for chapter 19! Filled with excitement, a flurry of motion, non-stop action, and amystifying new character, chapter 19 will answer many questions, and leave more deep questions unanswered!
Wow! I mean just...wow! Total cliff hanger! Really can't wait for more! And:
SPECIAL MESSAGE FOR MINXE
maybe when you story is done, make a new post with all that maps and magic word thing and what ever else just to clean up the post a bit?
Guys, chapter 19 is out! After a few long weeks of little-to-no motivation, I've finally come up with another chapter! Ready for the epicness contained in it? I sure hope so, because if you're not, then no one is!
Tell me how it was! Liked it? Disliked it? Hated it? Loved it? Feedback always helps, no matter whether it is good or bad!
I like it. The only issue I have with this is the fighting. It reads itself quite weird. I can't put my finger on it, but I think the dialogue and the huge armies that get destroyed in the matter of seconds look awkward.
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I like it. The only issue I have with this is the fighting. It reads itself quite weird. I can't put my finger on it, but I think the dialogue and the huge armies that get destroyed in the matter of seconds look awkward.
Yes, the fighting is a bit weird. I noticed that too, and I'm being too lazy to go back and fix it in previous chapters (partially because I feel that would change the direction the story's going), but if you'll notice... SPOILER ALERT!!
At the end of chapter 19, a new monster is introduced. A giant spider. Literally. This monster was only SEEN by The Guardians, and no one has actually done battle with one yet. As they are about to find out in chapter 20, these creatures will prove a new challenge that will not be so easily overcome. In fact, Minxed will find himself in a bit of a predicament involving quite a few of the Immanis Araneas. (Pronounced ih-man-iss are-uh-nei-uh, and Latin for enormous spider)
The only thing I would say could do with a tiny bit of improvement is the fight with the mages. It felt a bit... OP...? (Terrible way to explain but all I can think of.) It felt like Minxed was... too powerful. I mean, there were 10 of them and one of him. Surely they should have offered at least slightly more resistance?
Anyway, just a minor thought. Apart from that, brilliant .
That is one of the many questions that you should have had. I did that on purpose. SPOILER ALERT!!
They are more powerful than that. In fact, each one of them rivals Minxed in power. I will say no more than that about those magi, until chapter 20 comes out.
Right now I'm getting a little bit of inspiration from LotR and The Hobbit.
That's where the idea for the Immanis Araneas came from
Oh, and to stem further questions about it, Mr. Gold is special:
He speaks the Ancient Language(If you want to know what he's saying, use Google Translate to translate from Afrikaans) which has power in and of itself, has magic that no one has heard of since long before Herobrine first appeared, and will play a vital role in the next chapter. Though he is late in introduction, I hope you get a feel for him like I did when I was creating his character.
But anyways, thank you for commenting yet again, and helping me clear all that up!
Ah, okay. But remember, destroying huge armies in a matter of seconds can be a REALLY good effect to show how boss an EVIL guy is. Or if the situation is fitting, also for good guys. But don't overdo it.
Ah, the good old spider-pass.
I notice you like giant versions of Mobs
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- Added Chapter 16
First off, I will actually be gone for a bit, so don't read too fast. But that doesn't mean you should stop checking up; the more you check on this story, the sooner it will become popular, and the more people will be readingyour favorite story!Right but I forgot, this isn't anyone's favorite story, so why bother?
I intend to finish up the story here within fifteen chapters, and add in a chapter or two or three or four of epilogue. After that, I will be writing another fanfiction called Blueice -- The Legend of the Miner,
and possibly one before that explaining where all the mobs came from.So for now, adieu, my friends.
EDIT:
the more you check up on this story and comment/keep-the-thread-alive, the sooner it will become popular...
Sweet!!
Thank you, and yeah, I saw that cubic fire is on hold, I would be sad, but I won't be here to see it on hold... so... yeah.
No, there is no such thing as blueice ore. My avatar is blueice. Blueice comes only in blocks (like diamond/iron/etc. blocks, but blueice) and blueice ingots (like iron/gold ingots, but blueice).
Quotes from Noobslayer00
Thanks!!
Don't worry, I'll be writing as much as I can while I'm gone.
This is goodbye until I return in... a week... or two... or more... or less...
But anyway, see ya'll some other time!
Oh, and a few words of wisdom...
Spoilers are good, keep this thread alive while I'm gone, don't forget to support whatever story is your favorite, and spoilers are good. (Did I forget to tell you that spoilers are good?)
TT2000, you are genius.
Very awesome story!!!! I love it!
And as always
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Hmmm. Lemme guess. That Herobrine was a decoy, alongside with the Dragons of The End? Or weak clones...
TT2000, you are genius.
Sweet! That's so great to hear!
Whoa! Have to use a spoiler here!
To answer the second part of the quote...
Partially Resurrected:
Mostly Resurrected:
Fully Resurrected:
Taller than most humans, Herobrine stands just over two-and-a-half meters tall. He wears a red, silk cloak that completely covers his body. His pure white eyes can light up even the darkest areas, making him easy to spot. Now fully resurrected, Herobrine’s humanoid state has completely returned, and if it weren’t for his eyes, he would look human.
So there you have it. That's Herobrine for ya'. Now for the enderdragons...
Minxed is actually correct in thinking there are only three; the mother and father who roam freely between the four dimensions, living mostly in the Aether, and the child, who lives in The End for the most part. In my story, The End got it's name like this:
So Herobrine is... Not the real enemy? Or are the Three Dragons of the End out for bloodlusty revenge?
TT2000, you are genius.
Me is sad;(
TT2000, you are genius.
- Added chapter 18
Yet another chapter is out, and the story is only getting better as it goes!For those of you who already read chapter 18:
Get ready for chapter 19! Filled with excitement, a flurry of motion, non-stop action, and a mystifying new character, chapter 19 will answer many questions, and leave more deeper questions unanswered!
Wow! I mean just...wow! Total cliff hanger! Really can't wait for more! And:
If you are not Noobslayer00, do not bother looking in the spoiler, this is private... mostly.
super top secret message for minxes' eyes only!
Guys, chapter 19 is out! After a few long weeks of little-to-no motivation, I've finally come up with another chapter! Ready for the epicness contained in it? I sure hope so, because if you're not, then no one is!
Tell me how it was! Liked it? Disliked it? Hated it? Loved it? Feedback always helps, no matter whether it is good or bad!
TT2000, you are genius.
Yes, the fighting is a bit weird. I noticed that too, and I'm being too lazy to go back and fix it in previous chapters (partially because I feel that would change the direction the story's going), but if you'll notice... SPOILER ALERT!!
That is one of the many questions that you should have had. I did that on purpose.
Right now I'm getting a little bit of inspiration from LotR and The Hobbit.
Oh, and to stem further questions about it, Mr. Gold is special:
But anyways, thank you for commenting yet again, and helping me clear all that up!
Ah, the good old spider-pass.
I notice you like giant versions of Mobs
TT2000, you are genius.