Chapter 8 is up now
Again sorry for the delay, I had three exams that week. By the way: My word document, where I write the story not has over 30 pages.
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Chapter 9 is up now
I should really get a link to this story in my signature, but I feel that it is cheap just putting a link. If anybody blessed with the powers of graphical editing could make me a signature, I would be really thankful.
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There you have chapter 10, now we are double-digit, isn't that great? And by the way, the word document now hit 40 pages.
Let me explain the long delay: The hard drive, where the story is saved on broke (after about a year and a quarter), it is saved there because I write most of the story at school during the breaks. I couldn't get to the story and the last backup was about one week before it broke. I had to wait for a specialist to get all the data and transfer it over to a new hard drive. But I wouldnt have had time anyways because the world ending (haha), christmas, new year and stuff.
Anyways, have fun reading ^^
I've only just read chapter 3, but I can already tell that it's shaping up to be a great story. The complex plot concept and the many thoughts of the characters make this a very enjoyable read.
I also agree with Immortus' criticisms with the paragraphs and the usernames. Perhaps the people with usernames should also get nicknames, like Fire.
I shortened their usernames in later chapters (for example TheUnchosenOne is only called Unchosen). And for the paragraphs, I still havent found time to make them but they are on my list ^^
Chapter 12 in b4 1000 views ^^
And at the same time I completely used up my first post, good thing that I reserved a second one! But I can tell you that only about 10-15% of the story are out yet (rest is still in my head). I might just have to use my other posts. And I feel that I should have choosen a different title but changing it seems cheap, so it will stay.
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The concept of your story is similar to my 'Mainframe', which I like because it's nice to have interesting concepts popping in the forums. Your fic is added to Minefic!
Okay, this time the update is a little different, no new chapter but I (finally) made the paragraphs and also corrected some things. I will try to get chapter 13 out as soon as I can.
And there is chapter 13!
It tecnically was done a few days ago but I went away with my class for a few days, school event, you know.
This chapter is a bit complicated but I don't think that it is hard to understand.
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Aaaaand chapter 16
Sorry for the big delay, had been away with my class.
This chapter is a bit calmer and overall a bit more relaxing to read.
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Okay, Chapter 19 is out
What do you think about the story so far? Have I made any mistakes about characters being overpowered or something like that? Just let me know.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 22 is out
Wow, I can't believe I actually had to use the fourth (my third) post and I have the feeling that that will not be the last post I will have to use.
Have fun reading ^^
Again sorry for the delay, I had three exams that week. By the way: My word document, where I write the story not has over 30 pages.
Have fun reading ^^
I should really get a link to this story in my signature, but I feel that it is cheap just putting a link. If anybody blessed with the powers of graphical editing could make me a signature, I would be really thankful.
Have fun reading ^^
Let me explain the long delay: The hard drive, where the story is saved on broke (after about a year and a quarter), it is saved there because I write most of the story at school during the breaks. I couldn't get to the story and the last backup was about one week before it broke. I had to wait for a specialist to get all the data and transfer it over to a new hard drive. But I wouldnt have had time anyways because the world ending (haha), christmas, new year and stuff.
Anyways, have fun reading ^^
I also agree with Immortus' criticisms with the paragraphs and the usernames. Perhaps the people with usernames should also get nicknames, like Fire.
I actually didn't think, I would make it in time.
Have fun reading ^^
And at the same time I completely used up my first post, good thing that I reserved a second one! But I can tell you that only about 10-15% of the story are out yet (rest is still in my head). I might just have to use my other posts. And I feel that I should have choosen a different title but changing it seems cheap, so it will stay.
Have fun reading ^^
It tecnically was done a few days ago but I went away with my class for a few days, school event, you know.
This chapter is a bit complicated but I don't think that it is hard to understand.
Have fun reading ^^
I decided to make a little change of perspective, expect "Jack Chapters" once in a while.
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I have to say, this server story is a very good one.
The idea of enchanting is nicely DONE!
But yeah, break up the text in paragraphs so that there is not as much textwalls.
Kewl anyway!
TT2000, you are genius.
Just a hint, we meet an old "friend" again
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Sorry for the big delay, had been away with my class.
This chapter is a bit calmer and overall a bit more relaxing to read.
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and it has one of the cliffhangers, that you all love ;P
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After having defeated a sickness and writer's block, you can expect some more chapterage soon.
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What do you think about the story so far? Have I made any mistakes about characters being overpowered or something like that? Just let me know.
Have fun reading ^^
My word document now has 89 pages and 33814 Words.
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Have fun reading ^^
Wow, I can't believe I actually had to use the fourth (my third) post and I have the feeling that that will not be the last post I will have to use.
Have fun reading ^^