Here is another something. I didn't have the inspiration to write another chapter in the Rockhaven storyline but I instead came up with something else, it doesn't really fit into the main story so I thought that I would post it as a side story of sorts (located in the original post), make sure to read it and give me some feedback on it and the whole concept.
There may or may not be more side stories at some point in the future, depending on what ideas I get.
This was actually supposed to go up a couple of days ago but due to one hell of a thunderstorm I didn't have internet for those couple of days. Now everything is back up and running.
This time I tried the "third person narration" again without following anyone's point of view specifically, just works better for parts with more characters.
No new chapter just yet but this is a big update nonetheless.
I once again went through all chapters to clean up old mistakes and continuity errors. Up until now those cleanup runs have tried to change as little as possible, this one has been a bit more... aggressive. There were some things in the earlier chapters that I thought I could call back to at some point but never came around to it, those would then stand out as strange loose ends without any followup, so I removed them.
Also... that lore thread I talked about a while ago? It probably won't happen as a dedicated thing, especially since I have been able to work a lot of worldbuilding and lore into the regular chapters. If you do have any questions about the world or anything related, just go ahead and ask, I'll try my best to answer in a reply, if it's significant enough I might even work it into a side story or a dedicated section in the OP.
I believe this is a bit late but chapter 59 and 58 are the same
Thank you for telling me. I made a mistake pasting the chapters over into my formating templates. I just fixed it, Chapter 59 is actually what it is supposed to be now.
no problem....so, you have the whole chapter backed up in your computer ?
Yes, I have the entire story in one document. I also have documents with BB code templates so that I can just paste my chapters in there and have them completely formated.
There won't be a chapter in a bit because I'm once again polishing up the story from beginning to end. I had a lot of time to think about things that I wanted done differently and I'll put them in place now.
The newest round of polishing is done, this time I didn't have to correct as many style errors since I got most of them in the previous passes. I instead focused on changing a few of the things I wrote in the earlier chapters that conflicted with the plan I have now. If there was ever a point where re-reading the entire thing from the start was a good idea, it's now. There probably won't be any fundamental changes to the earlier chapters in the future since they are pretty much where I want them to be right now.
There, have a new side story. Though since you'll probably have looked at it before looking at this post I'll tell you what the hell is going on.
That story was generated with a Markov Chain generator, it takes a seed text and generates a text based on probablity of certain words following each other. It generally doesn't make sense.
Here is another something. I didn't have the inspiration to write another chapter in the Rockhaven storyline but I instead came up with something else, it doesn't really fit into the main story so I thought that I would post it as a side story of sorts (located in the original post), make sure to read it and give me some feedback on it and the whole concept.
There may or may not be more side stories at some point in the future, depending on what ideas I get.
Anyways, have fun reading ^^
Chapter 68 is out now!
This was actually supposed to go up a couple of days ago but due to one hell of a thunderstorm I didn't have internet for those couple of days. Now everything is back up and running.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 69 is out now.
This time I tried the "third person narration" again without following anyone's point of view specifically, just works better for parts with more characters.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 70 is out now.
This one is a bit longer than usual.
Have fun reading ^^
No new chapter just yet but this is a big update nonetheless.
I once again went through all chapters to clean up old mistakes and continuity errors. Up until now those cleanup runs have tried to change as little as possible, this one has been a bit more... aggressive. There were some things in the earlier chapters that I thought I could call back to at some point but never came around to it, those would then stand out as strange loose ends without any followup, so I removed them.
Also... that lore thread I talked about a while ago? It probably won't happen as a dedicated thing, especially since I have been able to work a lot of worldbuilding and lore into the regular chapters. If you do have any questions about the world or anything related, just go ahead and ask, I'll try my best to answer in a reply, if it's significant enough I might even work it into a side story or a dedicated section in the OP.
Chapter 71 is out now.
Just a heads up, University is starting again quite soon so I may not be able to post regular chapters but I'll do what I can.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 72 is out now.
I actually wanted to finish this chapter earlier but a cold got in the way.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 73 is out now.
Have fun reading ^^
I believe this is a bit late but chapter 59 and 58 are the same
Thank you for telling me. I made a mistake pasting the chapters over into my formating templates. I just fixed it, Chapter 59 is actually what it is supposed to be now.
no problem....so, you have the whole chapter backed up in your computer ?
Yes, I have the entire story in one document. I also have documents with BB code templates so that I can just paste my chapters in there and have them completely formated.
Chapter 74 is finally out!
Good to be writing again after the pre-christmas *fun* times that happen in universities.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 75 is out!
It's been way too long since I have put out a chapter, thanks to the post-Christmas exam fun times.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 76 is out now.
There won't be a chapter in a bit because I'm once again polishing up the story from beginning to end. I had a lot of time to think about things that I wanted done differently and I'll put them in place now.
Have fun reading ^^
The newest round of polishing is done, this time I didn't have to correct as many style errors since I got most of them in the previous passes. I instead focused on changing a few of the things I wrote in the earlier chapters that conflicted with the plan I have now. If there was ever a point where re-reading the entire thing from the start was a good idea, it's now. There probably won't be any fundamental changes to the earlier chapters in the future since they are pretty much where I want them to be right now.
Have fun reading ^^
There, have a new side story. Though since you'll probably have looked at it before looking at this post I'll tell you what the hell is going on.
That story was generated with a Markov Chain generator, it takes a seed text and generates a text based on probablity of certain words following each other. It generally doesn't make sense.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 77 is finally out.
I feel bad for not being able to write as often as before but between projects and more writing for university it's all I can do.
Have fun reading ^^
Alright, this took longer than it should have. Chapter 78 is out now.
I've been quite busy in the recent time but over the summer I'll try to regularly post chapters again.
Have fun reading ^^
Chapter 79 is out a little later than expected but it's here.
Have fun reading ^^