"FacePlant" Cheesier every chapter, it's grating (No pun intended) on my nerves.
Then stop reading if you hate it.
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Would be cool if some thing happened and there was a type of enderman sickness that caused them to have white eyes and they had to stop the sickness from killing end and the whole enderman race , perhaps getting the cure from the Aether , on a side note , it would be funny if theyfound some old guy that was from indev or something he would be like "back in my day we didn't have no Fancy pistons and creepy
enderman
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If the cake is a lie........ does that mean if i build a house out of cake my house isn't real?
Your sense of style is pathetic , I always look to java programers for style , because where ever they are , they always have .class.
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Hawt Pocket! It's shaping out nicely, though I do agree - it's becoming a bit cheesey. I still feel the chapters are a bit rushed, especially in the romance department, and the chapters, like most other fanfictions here, are short but gripping. As always, your unique writing style helps me imagine the events in vivid detail. Keep it up!
you should talk to slamcow and see if you can get this into a animation
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If the cake is a lie........ does that mean if i build a house out of cake my house isn't real?
Your sense of style is pathetic , I always look to java programers for style , because where ever they are , they always have .class.
you should talk to slamcow and see if you can get this into a animation
Slamacow has like, 200k subscribers. Even though he is a great animator, I doubt he will just make animations on request for people lol
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I really like this...story or whatever. That even includes when Steve said End was on redstone HAHAHA,I laughed for about 20 minutes with the last 10 minutes of me pouring out tears on each joke End made!
Chapter 6 is a bit short. But i think i got most of the references, it is still great. Dont think that you HAVE to put a chapter up every week i think it should be: A chapter every time it is complete. Dont hurry, take your time and keep up the quality ^^
New chapter a WEEK?!Why not new chapter every 3 days?Since it's so good I DECLARE THIS STORY IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 6 is a bit short. But i think i got most of the references, it is still great. Dont think that you HAVE to put a chapter up every week i think it should be: A chapter every time it is complete. Dont hurry, take your time and keep up the quality ^^
I agree,forget about what I said of every 3 days,I think SuperFire131 is right,don't rush for a week,if your busy,don't hurry,we'll always be here to wait,take a month if you need to don't rush only for us,do what YOU want not what we want,don't listen to other people about how much time you have to get it over with,we won't rush you,you have many other things to do anyway.
Chapter 6 is a bit short. But i think i got most of the references, it is still great. Dont think that you HAVE to put a chapter up every week i think it should be: A chapter every time it is complete. Dont hurry, take your time and keep up the quality ^^
I agree,forget about what I said of every 3 days,I think SuperFire131 is right,don't rush for a week,if your busy,don't hurry,we'll always be here to wait,take a month if you need to don't rush only for us,do what YOU want not what we want,don't listen to other people about how much time you have to get it over with,we won't rush you,you have many other things to do anyway.
Speaking of posting times, I'm leaving today for vacation. But a chapter will be up Sunday when I get back.
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NOW I see we're this is going, I think dani and steve the next night are gonna do IT, you know the IT were ya make babies trolollolololololol I bet hundred pennies on it that dani wants to the the baby makin thing with the story person cause she knows it's the only way trolollolololololol!!!!!!Uggg sey my friend was reading his from my account and had posted that behind my back, he means offense but no offenseI mean hey not sey
NOW I see we're this is going, I think dani and steve the next night are gonna do IT, you know the IT were ya make babies trolollolololololol I bet hundred pennies on it that dani wants to the the baby makin thing with the story person cause she knows it's the only way trolollolololololol!!!!!!
Uggg sey my friend was reading his from my account and had posted that behind my back, he means offense but no offense
I mean hey not sey
To what your friend said,
I don't think I can post that content to the forums lol
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Let me teach you something good...~
Then stop reading if you hate it.
enderman
Your sense of style is pathetic , I always look to java programers for style , because where ever they are , they always have .class.
RUN
lmao
Thanks!
Your sense of style is pathetic , I always look to java programers for style , because where ever they are , they always have .class.
Slamacow has like, 200k subscribers. Even though he is a great animator, I doubt he will just make animations on request for people lol
Speaking of posting times, I'm leaving today for vacation. But a chapter will be up Sunday when I get back.
this is an exception
To what your friend said,
I don't think I can post that content to the forums lol