Haha, sorry guys. I've been getting caught up with my other business (BFBC2, TF2, Portal 2, Minecraft, my clan, etc.) I'll continue then if this is still in demand.
Ok first of all, this is a great story with a good storyline and characters but I must say, you need to read over your work! I was noticing one or two every few paragraphs and for a grammar freak like me it is extremly off-putting.
I also have a few ideas for the plot:
Another character or bring Sam back, three's a crowd!
A city, old and abandoned perhaps? Ravaged by war? (hint hint!)
A dungeon might be good, perhaps he goes exploring and finds one than sets up a mob grinder and gets unlimited arrows?
Perhaps a inhabited city or another house with somebody living in it?
This is a great story and has been bookmarked!
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By request, I will be continue writing. However, I am quite horrible with endings. I could never see the reasoning in ending something so good, but all good stories come to an end. I have finals so do not expect much for the next week. I will also continue on "To Stop The Devil," My other epic story I am working on.
Writing is a hobby, not my job. Thanks for the support, though.
Can you make it so they acually go get iron, then they find diamond, make pick axes then they mine obsidian, they find a note on the shore Showing the blueprint of a nether portal, then they construct it and as soon as they walk through they find themselve back in their past-lives
Can you make it so they acually go get iron, then they find diamond, make pick axes then they mine obsidian, they find a note on the shore Showing the blueprint of a nether portal, then they construct it and as soon as they walk through they find themselve back in their past-lives
Maybe. I get your drift and I will definitely consider some of it.
This is a great story, really. But one thing makes me sorta mad.
I look at the title and it says [Chapter 18]. I get all excited and when I check it out, nothing is written. D=
So may I ask something: DON'T put it in the title until its written. Please.
This is a great story, really. But one thing makes me sorta mad.
I look at the title and it says [Chapter 18]. I get all excited and when I check it out, nothing is written. D=
So may I ask something: DON'T put it in the title until its written. Please.
I'm glad you find my stories exciting to read. I'm sorry I do this but sometimes, I write a little bit into the next chapter and end it due to some events. Please remember that when I say Chapter 18, it means I have arrived to it. It does not mean I had started but sometimes I might have. Since it is the summer time, I have a lot of time to write but Witcher 2 is that one big wall between me and further writing but I assure you, more will come.
Aye, I finally remembered about this after so long. Taking some responsibility and continuing this. Unfortunately, I can not change the title of the thread and I guess it will remain with a [Chapter 19] tag there. Oh well. I will continue more if someone replies, otherwise I will let this dead thread stay dead.
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I also have a few ideas for the plot:
Another character or bring Sam back, three's a crowd!
A city, old and abandoned perhaps? Ravaged by war? (hint hint!)
A dungeon might be good, perhaps he goes exploring and finds one than sets up a mob grinder and gets unlimited arrows?
Perhaps a inhabited city or another house with somebody living in it?
This is a great story and has been bookmarked!
My Clan:
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My stories:(1)
[simg]http://i1081.photobucket.com/albums/j357/Nguyeninja/6kftusig.jpg?t=1295835928[/simg]
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/366558-slanting-fences-on-half-blocks/page__st__140__gopid__5738864#entry5738864
Writing is a hobby, not my job. Thanks for the support, though.
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Can you make it so they acually go get iron, then they find diamond, make pick axes then they mine obsidian, they find a note on the shore Showing the blueprint of a nether portal, then they construct it and as soon as they walk through they find themselve back in their past-lives
Maybe. I get your drift and I will definitely consider some of it.
My Clan:
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I look at the title and it says [Chapter 18]. I get all excited and when I check it out, nothing is written. D=
So may I ask something: DON'T put it in the title until its written. Please.
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I'm glad you find my stories exciting to read. I'm sorry I do this but sometimes, I write a little bit into the next chapter and end it due to some events. Please remember that when I say Chapter 18, it means I have arrived to it. It does not mean I had started but sometimes I might have. Since it is the summer time, I have a lot of time to write but Witcher 2 is that one big wall between me and further writing but I assure you, more will come.
My Clan:
[simg]http://i.imgur.com/h1Atq.gif[/simg]
My stories:(1)
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My Clan:
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My stories:(1)
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P.S: please put some romance in the story soon.
PLZ CONTINUE
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