White poem has a very... broken meaning, that always flows into another one. I think it was common in Japan. Well, I'm not quite sure about the term "White Poem", since it's how we call it in russia(white, as a synonim for bland, plain).
The actual name might be Haiku, but even if its not, it is something very similar to the style of Haiku.
Look those up.
EXAMPLE:
I wonder,
what is colour blue?
And as I kept;
and as I sang
I saw a blue facepalm of destiny.
Yeah.....
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No! I refuse to die without a fight!
They shall not go unpunished.
The sun rises and they go alight.
My revenge is dashed.
Some leaves rustle behind me.
There is no time to flee.
Boom.
See what I mean?
Dashed doesn't rhythm with me, so doesn't flee. But the words make it better.
-Applauds-
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Ah, dam. I really should pay attention to the rhymes more. I use http://www.rhymezone.com but I am seriously beginning to suspect that it doesn't get rhymes. Just... syllables or endings. -Sigh.-
Lol. You silly Russian. Jk.
Oh, btw, no poems today. Sorry. I'm working on that Frostbite thread. Gotta get it before Sunday. It's a big amount of time, but school and all.
LIES! YOU ARE NO DRUNKEN FOOL.
COME BACK TO DROWN IN THE POOL.
I dunno. Just randomly popped into my head.
Anyway, what I really came here to say if that I fixed the rhyme with unpunished. Not much, but hey, you can check it if you want.
LIES! YOU ARE NO DRUNKEN FOOL.
COME BACK TO DROWN IN THE POOL.
OMYGOD! LOOK AT YOU! YOU CAN'T DO ANYTHING WITHOUT ME INSPIRING YOU! YOU ARE LIKE A ZERO WITHOUT A ONE WITHOUT ME! INSOGDNOSFGNOSNDGNSOFNLnfdnlkgndsklngl
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LIES! YOU ARE NO DRUNKEN FOOL.
COME BACK TO DROWN IN THE POOL.
OMYGOD! LOOK AT YOU! YOU CAN'T DO ANYTHING WITHOUT ME INSPIRING YOU! YOU ARE LIKE A ZERO WITHOUT A ONE WITHOUT ME! INSOGDNOSFGNOSNDGNSOFNLnfdnlkgndsklngl
...Well, abifbKBVWKAGHDLGLBWRHOhk;hfwlgwglkjGKUGKIGKGIg;go8glgl.
Oh hey, I almost put google.
I'll go play Kingdom Hearts and buy crap from a moogle.
I hear they came from Final Fantasy too.
Well, whatever, I'll play World of Goo.
...Well, abifbKBVWKAGHDLGLBWRHOhk;hfwlgwglkjGKUGKIGKGIg;go8glgl.
Oh hey, I almost put google.
I'll go play Kingdom Hearts and buy crap from a moogle.
I hear they came from Final Fantasy too.
Well, whatever, I'll play World of Goo.
....Dunno. STOP MESSING WITH MY HEAD.
For some reason I almost laughed uncontrollably at that, emphasis on almost, I just grinned a stupid grin and held back a laugh. Damn, I should've replied with something rhyming... ummm.... Nope, I can't think of anything :tongue.gif:
...Well, abifbKBVWKAGHDLGLBWRHOhk;hfwlgwglkjGKUGKIGKGIg;go8glgl.
Oh hey, I almost put google.
I'll go play Kingdom Hearts and buy crap from a moogle.
I hear they came from Final Fantasy too.
Well, whatever, I'll play World of Goo.
....Dunno. STOP MESSING WITH MY HEAD.
For some reason I almost laughed uncontrollably at that, emphasis on almost, I just grinned a stupid grin and held back a laugh. Damn, I should've replied with something rhyming... ummm.... Nope, I can't think of anything :tongue.gif:
You are not alone. Although I DID laugh uncontrollably.
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I came to my humble home
No eye nor ear of groan and bone
I was safe or so I thought
That's when a shadow sought
To reap me from my eternal house
I was as helpless, as a mouse
I drew my sword but it's too late
It's dark hiss has sealed my fate
As it exploded madly
I placed obsidian front of me
I grinned
I laughed
I was free!
Then I heard the hissing plea
10 brothers of the one I slayed
Have come to have my debt repaid.
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A man can only understand the worth of his present for all eternity once he gets to see his future and past just once.
The actual name might be Haiku, but even if its not, it is something very similar to the style of Haiku.
Look those up.
EXAMPLE:
I wonder,
what is colour blue?
And as I kept;
and as I sang
I saw a blue facepalm of destiny.
Yeah.....
See what I mean?
Dashed doesn't rhythm with me, so doesn't flee. But the words make it better.
-Applauds-
Thanks anyways.
BTW, how doesn't me and flee rhyme?
Dangit, why do you have to be so sticky to words!!! xD
off course, go ahead and don't mention the person who gave awesome advice
Nevermind, just coming through. (Sheep mode activated :Sheep:)
Because I am russian. That's my #1 excuse on everything.
Oh, btw, no poems today. Sorry. I'm working on that Frostbite thread. Gotta get it before Sunday. It's a big amount of time, but school and all.
But not then he is under heavy vodka intoxication. You would lose your eye.
Did you know that was freaking beautiful? It's that rare thing where you have both the rhythm and the meaning.
My try:
I am no knave,
you are no sheep;
I am a man,
and you're a gish.
Oh, sorry man. As you can see, the vodka is kicking back again. I should leave.
COME BACK TO DROWN IN THE POOL.
I dunno. Just randomly popped into my head.
Anyway, what I really came here to say if that I fixed the rhyme with unpunished. Not much, but hey, you can check it if you want.
Edit: Also found better rhymer. http://www.rhymer.com/ Much better than rhymezone.
OMYGOD! LOOK AT YOU! YOU CAN'T DO ANYTHING WITHOUT ME INSPIRING YOU! YOU ARE LIKE A ZERO WITHOUT A ONE WITHOUT ME! INSOGDNOSFGNOSNDGNSOFNLnfdnlkgndsklngl
...Well, abifbKBVWKAGHDLGLBWRHOhk;hfwlgwglkjGKUGKIGKGIg;go8glgl.
Oh hey, I almost put google.
I'll go play Kingdom Hearts and buy crap from a moogle.
I hear they came from Final Fantasy too.
Well, whatever, I'll play World of Goo.
....Dunno. STOP MESSING WITH MY HEAD.
For some reason I almost laughed uncontrollably at that, emphasis on almost, I just grinned a stupid grin and held back a laugh. Damn, I should've replied with something rhyming... ummm.... Nope, I can't think of anything :tongue.gif:
You are not alone. Although I DID laugh uncontrollably.
I should probably take my meds.
That's everything you need xD
I came to my humble home
No eye nor ear of groan and bone
I was safe or so I thought
That's when a shadow sought
To reap me from my eternal house
I was as helpless, as a mouse
I drew my sword but it's too late
It's dark hiss has sealed my fate
As it exploded madly
I placed obsidian front of me
I grinned
I laughed
I was free!
Then I heard the hissing plea
10 brothers of the one I slayed
Have come to have my debt repaid.