great story. plz continue with it. also may i suggest having your player meet herobrine in the nether, because in most of the herobrine stories ive heard it says that he's the king of the nether. but dont make it like herobrine is the reason for this, just maybe ur player meets him,(no pun intended) then falls into lava and dies or goes out of the nether or something. but for now heres some :Flint and Steel: :Flint and Steel: lol lots of stuff for u
Creepypastas aren't meant to be real. Some of them(like Binary DNA) just aren't possible. Like a picture killing you?... XD Still, thinking of what next. I'm sure It'll come, and when it does it'll hit me like a train... Well. I may have just given myself an idea. XD
Now, I've not much to say abouh the story itself besides that it doesn't really appeal to me, but what you said there is only partially right.
It dosn't need to be plausible to be considered creepypasta, but it's a hell of a lot scarier if it is. If it's something that could also happen to the reader, a whole new level of fear is reached. I'll be putting up a thread soon on how to write a good creepypasta, so keep an eye out for that to see how to improve your story!
Is this story still going? This is one of the more "unique" stories that doesn't really do anything cliche (Herobrine, Interaction with reality, etc.). I like how they're driven by curiosity a bit more than normal minecraft creepypastas..
You ma'am are a great writer. also, my current project is a texture pack, and the whole "depressed and bloody mobs" gave me a reason to make my mob textures as bloody and ugly as I could just for a creepy look.
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I'm going to continue this, because it is seriously the best Minecraft story I have ever heard! My writing style might be different though and it might not be as good. Expect it soon!
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Now, I've not much to say abouh the story itself besides that it doesn't really appeal to me, but what you said there is only partially right.
It dosn't need to be plausible to be considered creepypasta, but it's a hell of a lot scarier if it is. If it's something that could also happen to the reader, a whole new level of fear is reached. I'll be putting up a thread soon on how to write a good creepypasta, so keep an eye out for that to see how to improve your story!
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