Bah. Day Twelve is up, and I'm not all too happy with it. It's really there just to show I'm not dead, and plan out the future days. I'll probably go back and edit it when I write day 13.
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I enjoy the way you write in how you FEEL the paranoia of the poor man but it's not crashing you over the head with it.
This adventure is indeed intended to be somewhat psyche-based. It's interesting to see the reactions of someone to a strange, mesed up and violent world. Thanks!
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Moar! MOAR!!!! MOAR I SAY!
:biggrin.gif: More IS coming. Just... kinda slowly. Sorry 'bout that.
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I've read up to day 10 now, and I must say, this is quite a good story. I know I'd re-read it anyways. :tongue.gif: also, if you ever add pumpkins (or if you already have, I havnt read day 10 yet, but I will tomorrow) you could make a scarecrow or something XD
...now all you need is some crows...
Thankyou. Good to know that people are enjoying this as much as I am.
Given that I don't 100% adher to the Craftmine game formula, anything is possible, and pumpkins will make an appearance at some point. He is, after all, a farmer.
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Nice story dude(:
Cool.
Quote from awopcxet »
gremlin i think Woodstock are a place
Woodstock was a music festival. Kickass in the extreme. The name is kinda a homage to that as well.
Good to see someone picked up on that.
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Did you get Murdered by :Skeleton:?
No, I didn't. It was a close call, though. Also add [Homework] and [Job] to the list of evil assailants.
Keep on reading and enjoying, folks. Sorry for the short update.
The Meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything.
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What an amazing story! I thought reading about a computer game I could be playing would be boring and pointless, and although pointless yes, Craftlands: Survivor has proved an exciting read. Please add more as soon as possible. You should add something about pig-riding and spider-jockeys. Thanks for the entertainment!
i LOVE it
i have a suggestion. or 2
on one day, he should find reedstone, and on another, he should encounter and befriend a lost baby slime
many diamonds for u
I used to write fanfiction for other interests (Phantom of the Opera and such) but I never thought that minecraft fanfiction would be any good, or could even be written. After reading yours, I am very interested in this type of fan fiction, and after searching for some hours on the forum, I have yet to find a fanfiction that even holds a candle to your expertise of wordcraft! (see what I did there? :biggrin.gif:)
But all joking aside, your skill in detail is astonishing. It has been a long time since a story has grabbed me so! I reached the end and found myself ravenous for more! Please please please, continue with this story! I will be waiting quite impatiently for the next installment
Well, the minor emergency is kinda a big one now, and with that, a job, and me taking my prelim-HSC's, and one actualy advanced HSC course, I've got **** all in the way of time. The story is NOT over, not by a long shot, and I'll drop back in every week or so to let you guys know that I am STILL alive. If I ever do plan to drop this, (and I don't) then I won't just leave you guys hanging, I will tell you, and probably post all the work I have, along with a semi-summary of where it was heading. But that's a worst-case-ever scenario, and not likley.
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This is an amazing story! you're missing commas in places, but that's okay, I still love it! XD for you
And I usually have too many commas :tongue.gif: Thankee for the diamond and the tip.
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tl;dr
Sorry, I'm lazy
So there's this guy called Hurly and he's being chased into the wild by some assasins. Shenanigans ensue.
:biggrin.gif:
Quote from Gunnar120 »
"Crackly.... like dry leaves"
"Happily shitting on my crops"
These are the sentences that made me actually laugh out loud.
Well, I wasn't going for comedy, but I must admit, in retrospect, that last line does give a chuckle. Glad to see you enjoy!
Quote from Robert C »
Pretty good. Keep it up!
Will do! Slowly, but I will!
Quote from Gunnar120 »
bump
*nudge*
Bumping is apreciated a lot, but not needed. Don't feel obligated to do this, I'll try my best to keep this semi-alive.
Quote from nanoman172 »
i LOVE it
i have a suggestion. or 2
on one day, he should find reedstone, and on another, he should encounter and befriend a lost baby slime
many diamonds for u
[Diamonds go here]
Redstone, perhaps. I'm not entirely sure how he would deal with it, as he's not an intelectual/logical thinker. But a slime, almost definatley. Thanks!
Quote from awopcxet »
can you make a day 13? plz or i will do this
burning notch then yummy
Erk! No need for violence! I'll get to writing as soon as I can! :tongue.gif:
Quote from roff13 »
IMO, i think u should write about a dungeon or the nether next... if not, keep on writing, cuz...
I.
LOVED.
IT.
SO PRO MAN... SO PRO
Thanks, man! Dungeons and the Nether are slated for future exploration, if only breifly. He's not as much of a miner as one would think, but they will appear.
Quote from musicalangel »
This is fantastic! Please continue it!
I used to write fanfiction for other interests (Phantom of the Opera and such) but I never thought that minecraft fanfiction would be any good, or could even be written. After reading yours, I am very interested in this type of fan fiction, and after searching for some hours on the forum, I have yet to find a fanfiction that even holds a candle to your expertise of wordcraft! (see what I did there? :biggrin.gif:)
But all joking aside, your skill in detail is astonishing. It has been a long time since a story has grabbed me so! I reached the end and found myself ravenous for more! Please please please, continue with this story! I will be waiting quite impatiently for the next installment
Good luck, friend!
~musicalangel ♥
Aha! Many thanks for the extended response! Fanfiction is indeed a rather delicate balance, and I'm not entirely sure I balance on that particular tightrope properly, I at the very least cling desperatley to it, I hope. If you take a look at the Chroniclers (or perhaps Chronicles, I forger) of Minecraft thread, they've got a lot of stories there that are, honeslty, amazing. It's a brilliant thread, and I'm proud to be included in it.
I will indeed continue, and I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far!
Quote from Gidding »
I just voted for Die in a hole! because it sounded funny XD
that's sorta why its there. Also to keep the trolls away from the other options.
Quote from le_alouette »
A well written story!! Keep up the good work.!
Indeed! More is forthcoming. Forthcoming like... something slow but anticipated..... like... christmas? I don't know. But it's coming. :biggrin.gif:
Quote from Gunnar120 »
dherp
Hderp.
So, more IS coming, and I greatly appreciate all the feedback! Just hang in there a little, and make sure you enjoy yourselves that little bit extra, just for me. Or something.
he needs to find a wolf next (and maybe a book that tells him how to get to the nether and or aether?) (giant encounter?)
note giants ARE in minecraft they just dont spawn (they are 7 blocks high)
epic story bro
also, if you ever add pumpkins (or if you already have, I havnt read day 10 yet, but I will tomorrow) you could make a scarecrow or something XD
...now all you need is some crows...
I used to be known as Scizor on the MC forums. I run a pony Ask blog!
This adventure is indeed intended to be somewhat psyche-based. It's interesting to see the reactions of someone to a strange, mesed up and violent world. Thanks!
:biggrin.gif: More IS coming. Just... kinda slowly. Sorry 'bout that.
Thankyou. Good to know that people are enjoying this as much as I am.
Given that I don't 100% adher to the Craftmine game formula, anything is possible, and pumpkins will make an appearance at some point. He is, after all, a farmer.
Cool.
Woodstock was a music festival. Kickass in the extreme. The name is kinda a homage to that as well.
Good to see someone picked up on that.
No, I didn't. It was a close call, though. Also add [Homework] and [Job] to the list of evil assailants.
Keep on reading and enjoying, folks. Sorry for the short update.
Expect updates to resume on the fifteenth.
Sorry, I'm lazy
Every click counts
"Happily shitting on my crops"
These are the sentences that made me actually laugh out loud.
MOD EDIT: No bumping
i have a suggestion. or 2
on one day, he should find reedstone, and on another, he should encounter and befriend a lost baby slime
many diamonds for u
I.
LOVED.
IT.
SO PRO MAN... SO PRO
Support Vexx people!
I used to write fanfiction for other interests (Phantom of the Opera and such) but I never thought that minecraft fanfiction would be any good, or could even be written. After reading yours, I am very interested in this type of fan fiction, and after searching for some hours on the forum, I have yet to find a fanfiction that even holds a candle to your expertise of wordcraft! (see what I did there? :biggrin.gif:)
But all joking aside, your skill in detail is astonishing. It has been a long time since a story has grabbed me so! I reached the end and found myself ravenous for more! Please please please, continue with this story! I will be waiting quite impatiently for the next installment
Good luck, friend!
~musicalangel ♥
MOD EDIT: Please don't post if you have nothing to say, this is spammy
And I usually have too many commas :tongue.gif: Thankee for the diamond and the tip.
So there's this guy called Hurly and he's being chased into the wild by some assasins. Shenanigans ensue.
:biggrin.gif:
Well, I wasn't going for comedy, but I must admit, in retrospect, that last line does give a chuckle. Glad to see you enjoy!
Will do! Slowly, but I will!
*nudge*
Bumping is apreciated a lot, but not needed. Don't feel obligated to do this, I'll try my best to keep this semi-alive.
Redstone, perhaps. I'm not entirely sure how he would deal with it, as he's not an intelectual/logical thinker. But a slime, almost definatley. Thanks!
Erk! No need for violence! I'll get to writing as soon as I can! :tongue.gif:
Thanks, man! Dungeons and the Nether are slated for future exploration, if only breifly. He's not as much of a miner as one would think, but they will appear.
Aha! Many thanks for the extended response! Fanfiction is indeed a rather delicate balance, and I'm not entirely sure I balance on that particular tightrope properly, I at the very least cling desperatley to it, I hope. If you take a look at the Chroniclers (or perhaps Chronicles, I forger) of Minecraft thread, they've got a lot of stories there that are, honeslty, amazing. It's a brilliant thread, and I'm proud to be included in it.
I will indeed continue, and I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far!
that's sorta why its there. Also to keep the trolls away from the other options.
Indeed! More is forthcoming. Forthcoming like... something slow but anticipated..... like... christmas? I don't know. But it's coming. :biggrin.gif:
Hderp.
So, more IS coming, and I greatly appreciate all the feedback! Just hang in there a little, and make sure you enjoy yourselves that little bit extra, just for me. Or something.
note giants ARE in minecraft they just dont spawn (they are 7 blocks high)
epic story bro
P.S. its a word.
P.P.S the trolls are trolin the poll