Okay. I have returned. Zoo, (can I call you zoo?) you did good on telling him what to do. I'm not sure about the politician thing though...
drdre, your new app is much better than the previous, but I do suggest you change a few things... Your spelling and grammar absolutely sucks in there. The back story is much too short and it says you became an assassin but your occupation says citizen? Next, you need to go more in depth with the appearance... Lastly, the RP example is dialogue, not a sentence. Oh... 1 more thing... You don't quite seem to understand the assassins...
Zoo, you said being 11 was a bad sign? I'm 12 and this is the second server I have run... I have been accepted to 10 servers, 4 of which were "hardcore" RPGs. So, I suggest you don't underestimate because of age. Speaking of which, I have a bit of a surprise for you and J3astly. I'll PM you.
Anyways, you left so suddenly. Was it for this? Looks like interesting concepts are starting to crawl over those boring Medieval RP servers.
Nah... The reason I left was because my Minecraft killed itself and wouldn't let me reinstall... But then I came back on and it was kinda boring because I had sort of lost interest... So I made this.
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"Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me;
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Nah... The reason I left was because my Minecraft killed itself and wouldn't let me reinstall... But then I came back on and it was kinda boring because I had sort of lost interest... So I made this.
IGN:Jammerjr99
Age:12 (Very mature and respectful)
Role-Play Exp.:World of Warcraft RPing servers, and 4 different minecraft servers for role-playing
Why Us:Looking for a nice active server to play on
Time You Can Dedicate: mostly every day with a few days off here and there
IC
Name: Selonian Brightstar
Gender:Male
Age:17
Appearance:6 Ft tall, Medium build, very athletic
Fears: None other than Spiders
Personality: lone wolf lifestyle
Occupation:Assassin
Skills: Assassination, Thievery, Stealth
Nickname (Optional): Uinstitches
RP Example (Add Dialogue): *Loud footsteps from further down the corridor* 'They're almost here!' the child screamed. 'I know' i reply. 'You go, I will hold them off' I say. 'But, You will die sir.' the child inquired. 'Do not fear the shadow of death my son, Doing so only hastens the inevitable.' *Lock Opens* 'GO! Get as far from here as you can and close the gate behind you!'*The child runs as fast as he can , then turns around to see his father impaled by a sword but surrounded by bodies of the dead*
Skin (Link, picture, description): Couldn't link it. Made it myself Desc: Shadowy Figure in Black as Night leather armor, Dagger strapped accross his chest and a quiver filled with arrows on his back. Demon Assassin
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I was born and raised in a village named Fallwater but when i was 3 a group of bandits broke into our house and set it ablaze.I was the only one to escape from the village alive besides my trustful dog Thunder. Since that day i have sold my soul to the devil,murdered kings,and killed anything that stood in my way to avenge my family and friends.
I fixed grammer and ocupation i forgot :tongue.gif:
Uh... Best one yet... 2 last things... (sorry) Your RP example is just... Unrealisticly terrible... and the backstory could use some lengthening... I suggest talking about the childhood or something...
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"Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me;
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Uh... Best one yet... 2 last things... (sorry) Your RP example is just... Unrealisticly terrible... and the backstory could use some lengthening... I suggest talking about the childhood or something...
So when is the server planned to open? and also like I said, if the Assassin population gets too crowded, I'll be okay with filing another Application.
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a politican when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the politican. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the politican. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
So when is the server planned to open? and also like I said, if the Assassin population gets too crowded, I'll be okay with filing another Application.
Uh... It will be open a little while after Bukkit gets the 1.0.0 recommended build...
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a polotician when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the polotician. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the polotician. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
Your spelling is absolutely atrocious, work on that and you are accepted. Just fix it a little and I will accept you.
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"Because I could not stop for Death, He kindly stopped for me;
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Uh... Best one yet... 2 last things... (sorry) Your RP example is just... Unrealisticly terrible... and the backstory could use some lengthening... I suggest talking about the childhood or something...
IGN:Adjns
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a polotician when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the polotician. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the polotician. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading
Ok i changed cilvialian to assassin
Nah... The reason I left was because my Minecraft killed itself and wouldn't let me reinstall... But then I came back on and it was kinda boring because I had sort of lost interest... So I made this.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Okay, Leonardo DeIgnasio?
Sounds douchey.
Try Leonardo Rossi.
I would be... A big more subtle, but yeah.... I agree.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
can I play?I fixed it.
Editing App.
Change the things I spoke of and you are
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
I fixed grammer and ocupation i forgot :tongue.gif:
Age:12 (Very mature and respectful)
Role-Play Exp.:World of Warcraft RPing servers, and 4 different minecraft servers for role-playing
Why Us:Looking for a nice active server to play on
Time You Can Dedicate: mostly every day with a few days off here and there
IC
Name: Selonian Brightstar
Gender:Male
Age:17
Appearance:6 Ft tall, Medium build, very athletic
Fears: None other than Spiders
Personality: lone wolf lifestyle
Occupation:Assassin
Skills: Assassination, Thievery, Stealth
Nickname (Optional): Uinstitches
RP Example (Add Dialogue): *Loud footsteps from further down the corridor* 'They're almost here!' the child screamed. 'I know' i reply. 'You go, I will hold them off' I say. 'But, You will die sir.' the child inquired. 'Do not fear the shadow of death my son, Doing so only hastens the inevitable.' *Lock Opens* 'GO! Get as far from here as you can and close the gate behind you!'*The child runs as fast as he can , then turns around to see his father impaled by a sword but surrounded by bodies of the dead*
Skin (Link, picture, description): Couldn't link it. Made it myself Desc: Shadowy Figure in Black as Night leather armor, Dagger strapped accross his chest and a quiver filled with arrows on his back. Demon Assassin
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): I was born and raised in a village named Fallwater but when i was 3 a group of bandits broke into our house and set it ablaze.I was the only one to escape from the village alive besides my trustful dog Thunder. Since that day i have sold my soul to the devil,murdered kings,and killed anything that stood in my way to avenge my family and friends.
Uh... Best one yet... 2 last things... (sorry) Your RP example is just... Unrealisticly terrible... and the backstory could use some lengthening... I suggest talking about the childhood or something...
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
oh ok :sad.gif:
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a politican when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the politican. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the politican. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading.
Uh... It will be open a little while after Bukkit gets the 1.0.0 recommended build...
Your spelling is absolutely atrocious, work on that and you are accepted. Just fix it a little and I will accept you.
The cube had food and maybe ammo. And immortality."
Sorry RP example but backstory is longer
Age:12
Role play XP:Alot.
Why us:With a server like this i can play assasins creed in minecraft.
Time you can dedicate:Mostly from 2:30-9:00
IC
Name:Adrian
Gender:Male
Age:20
Appearence:White,Brown eyes,Wind swept hair,
Fears:Bandits,Spiders
Personality:Good person,Sorta like the shop keeper that does his work silently but one day pulls a sword and kills everyone none the less still nice
Occupation:Going through tough times with money and trying to pay the bills.
Skills:Bargening,Mining,Building
Nickname:None
Rp Example:
Trader:Hello fine merchant Im looking to buy some bread how much would it cost?
Adrian:Its would be Five gold fine sir!
Trader:Thats a little much how about 2?
Adrian:Thats a little low i'll settle on 4.
Trader:3.
Adrian:Deal.
Backstory:
When i was young my mother was training to be an assasin when she was murdered one day. the killers were trying to steal some food from a farmer and she tried to stop them she was outnumbered and died.
for my father he was working for a polotician when an archers arrow peierced his heart in an attempt to murder the polotician. like all loyal gaurds would do he jumped infront of the arrow and saved the polotician. at the time i was only 5.
my dad was teaching me skills in combat so i grew up almost an orphan and took to selling and trading