People get your game up. Why the **** do you post so shitty crappy ass applications? You are only wasting time doing that because you are not going to get accepted. Most of these who i just denied. Have OP characters, short ass backgrounds, ****ing ass super soldier characters.
Don't even flame me that i denied you! Because you should have known that it is not that easy to get in.
ok I am sorry but I am done here, I would hate to see what it is like on the inside of this server after seeing how the accepting system works. I will find somewhere else to build with a community that wants to role play with who ever you want to be... but have wonderful day regarless sorry to have "waisted your time"
People get your game up. Why the **** do you post so shitty crappy ass applications? You are only wasting time doing that because you are not going to get accepted. Most of these who i just denied. Have OP characters, short ass backgrounds, ****ing ass super soldier characters.
Don't even flame me that i denied you! Because you should have known that it is not that easy to get in.
ok I am sorry but I am done here, I would hate to see what it is like on the inside of this server after seeing how the accepting system works. I will find somewhere else to build with a community that wants to role play with who ever you want to be... but have wonderful day regarless sorry to have "waisted your time"
Read the denied apps. If you had a server, will you let these chumps in?
-[b]Background / Who are you?: TLDR; A son of a soldier, the family uniform has been passed down, it is currently in his possession and he intends to wear it proudly.
...He grew up in a small town outside of Moscow, in Russia. Although the town he lived in was very ravaged by random groups of marauders and other rogue factions, him and his family managed to survive. He doesn't know much about his family other than the fact that he does, in fact, have one. He is reminded constantly by flashbacks that take place inside his head at random times.
...He believes that the cause of these random scenes of darkness and mystery was a small radioactive bug that somehow managed to slip inside his suit and bite him on the neck, he believes this because the flashbacks started to regularly occur about a half-hour after he discovered the bug inside the protective membrane on the back of his neck. He learned from these random flashbacks that his "Brother" is somewhere out there in the wastelands, he also has been led to believe that the combat suit he has on was passed down from his father to him, as he is the oldest.
...He loves his L96 Arctic Warfare Rifle as it has accompanied him from nomad group to nomad group, even though it recently broke, he still likes to carry it around on his back inside a tactical backpack broken into re-attachable parts. He still doesn't know where he got his L96, or why he obtained such an old piece of sniper equipment, all he knows is that it's been a reliable tool in his life since he can remember.
...He is very easy to be around and he enjoys life to it's fullest, even if it means taking risks. He has been the daredevil of almost every group he's been in, he will take dares and even risk his life, just to prove a point. But just because he's risky, doesn't mean he isn't extremely careful, he will take the most dangerous risk you can think of, as long as there isn't some unknown factor in the dare, if there is he will try to find out more about it, if he can't, he will simply deny the dare.
...He's met several people along his many travels, one of which, his buddy, Mark McGinnly, is still his best friend to date, although nobody knows exactly where he is or where he will turn up next, all that is know is that whenever the two of them get together, it is a great reunion.
...Mordecai has been to jail once in his life, but it was not because of his own fault, he was framed by a roaming gang of looters. They "informed everyone of a tragedy" and told everyone that Mordecai was a liar and a thief, when in fact it was them stealing from the town, taking everything that their hands could touch that wouldn't fight back. He was in jail for about a month or two when he was finally released. He was told that the friendly rogue faction that took refuge inside their town rounded up some proof to go against the looters and prove who was really stealing all of the towns treasures. In court, Mordecai won, gaining freedom again while passing the jail-time of 5 years onto the looters. The are still in jail to this day, set to release in another two years. They seemed to have no intentions on tracking Mordecai down for revenge, as they said "We may be angry, but as far as we're concerned, revenge isn't as fun as reaping rewards."
...He intends on elongating his story as long as he possibly can, and to avoid loosing memories again, he has been keeping a diary of his past experiences up to 8 years ago, although age 16 and 19 are both completely empty.
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-[b]Character Family: Only semi-known family member is his brother, who is yet to even be confirmed as such, the only source he has of this info are random flashbacks in which he sees random figures, one of which was titled his "Brother" by the figures. He also knows that the suit he wears comes from a family tradition of passing the suit down from Soldier-Father to Soldier-Son, although he was never a soldier, he was about as close to a soldier as he could get without getting involved in a rogue faction.[/b]
-[b]Character Age:? 24, Born on October 26th, 2189
-[b]Character Appearance:? In a rather good conditioned special operations suit, not very functional though. He is clean shaven and enjoys wearing his suit, as it is the only physical connection to any family, he never takes off his suit, except to bathe and to clean it.[/b]
-[b]Character Personality:? Very easy to get along with, but also very protective of allies. He has always been very friendly since his young childhood, even though most of it is blocked by random intervals of plain blankness in his memory, he can remember most of his childhood, he was very friendly, he believes he was friendly throughout his teens, but he was never sure, as his teen years are the most cloudy. He tends to do things after thinking them through first, he likes a good mental challenge and will accept a dare no matter what, unless there is some dangerous unknown factor that plays a huge part in the dare. If there is an unknown factor present, he will do his best to identify it, when it is identified, he will proceed with the dare.[/b]
-[b]Occupation: Sharpshooter, literally unoccupied, but he tends to travel with random nomads, aiding them with hunting and gathering food, although he doesn't always have enough for himself, he still somehow finds a need to assist people and help them survive more that he has the need to find himself food, this usually causes issues with his personal survival goal, which is simply to find shelter or a group of friendly people, and to find food, as food is crucial to his survival, or anyone's survival for that matter.[/b]
-[b]Can your character read or write? Both[/b]
-[b]Can your character mine?: Yes, but not very consistently, enough to make shelter but not enough to dig deep enough to find batteries.[/b]
-[b]Can your character build?: Yes, fairly well[/b]
-[b]Can your character fight?: Yes[/b]
-[b]Can you make tools?: Yes[/b]
-[b]Can you farm?: Not in the slightest[/b]
-[b]Any special skills? A very good shot. He has had much practice with his trusty L96 Arctic Warfare, although outdated, he has found it to be a very reliable and invaluable tool. It recently broke, due to a major sandstorm that messed up the inner workings and blocked out the barrel, he still carries it around however in pieces inside a Tactical Bag he purchased from a merchant while traveling.[/b]
-[b]Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: Cannot remember any family or how he got the combat suit. He also has random flashbacks marking events in his life that he cannot remember, he sees random figures speaking, but they are never named, with the exception of his "Brother" whom was titled but never actually revealed to him.[/b]
-[b]Character Fears: Anything that can attack him, but not be attacked at the same time.[/b]
-[b]Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: Trying to remember his family and how he ended up with the suit. Strange memories appear in his head at random, they are very vague and blankly show random figures... One of these figures so far he has been able to identify as his brother as he is constantly referred to by the multiple figures as his "Brother" although the other figures have yet to be named or even titled by any of the hundreds of memories, he intends to find is "Brother" someday.[/b]
-[b]A screenshot of your skin: [/b]
-[b]Other Information: None[/b]
[b]I saw the "put your heart" thing in your application but had no idea what it meant, so can this count as that in my application?[/b]
Im open to any criticism, but please let it be constructive, and i'm hoping this is accepted, this is my dream server :biggrin.gif:
(Probably shouldn't have posted that *laugh*)
People get your game up. Why the **** do you post so shitty crappy ass applications? You are only wasting time doing that because you are not going to get accepted. Most of these who i just denied. Have OP characters, short ass backgrounds, ****ing ass super soldier characters.
Don't even flame me that i denied you! Because you should have known that it is not that easy to get in.
ok I am sorry but I am done here, I would hate to see what it is like on the inside of this server after seeing how the accepting system works. I will find somewhere else to build with a community that wants to role play with who ever you want to be... but have wonderful day regarless sorry to have "waisted your time"
Read the denied apps. If you had a server, will you let these chumps in?
for the sake of argument, no I would not. And I have red quite a few of the apps, about 35 ages of them total but I think that this server is WAY to picky, this might lead to a very fun server on the inside but I would think that this would just restrict the creativity of the people applying. My app is 100% unique, I did not draw from others apps for ideas and I am confused how i have "a short ass background" (its huge...) or am "OP" (I have seen some OP characters and I defiantly have a weakness) or am a "****ing super soldier" (this discussion happened yesterday and if you want to ready my thoughts on this look at page 70 or 71. I believe I used tony starks arc reactor comparison to my characters body). some explanation would be nice other then denied. I refuse to doctor my app any more then it already has been and I will more than likely not come back. Oh, and I do wish you guys the best and I wont be a homo falmer you reserve the right to tell me to go away I just disagree with your system
People get your game up. Why the **** do you post so shitty crappy ass applications? You are only wasting time doing that because you are not going to get accepted. Most of these who i just denied. Have OP characters, short ass backgrounds, ****ing ass super soldier characters.
Don't even flame me that i denied you! Because you should have known that it is not that easy to get in.
ok I am sorry but I am done here, I would hate to see what it is like on the inside of this server after seeing how the accepting system works. I will find somewhere else to build with a community that wants to role play with who ever you want to be... but have wonderful day regarless sorry to have "waisted your time"
Read the denied apps. If you had a server, will you let these chumps in?
Not all of us had terrible apps. They just needed some work.
-[b]Name and last name (Optional):[/b] Isaac Kretzmer
-[b]How old are you?:[/b] 15
-[b]Are you Mature:[/b] Yes
-[b]Gender?:[/b] Male
-[b]Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [/b] Pacific Time Zone/ USA
-[b]Good Grammar: Yes / No[/b] Yes!
-[b]Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[/b] I have been playing Minecraft for awhile, I go on whenever I can, and I enjoy playing Soccer.
-[b]Do you like RP servers:[/b] Yes I do. Most of the servers I go on are RP.
-[b]What do you think about the server:[/b] From the OP, it looks like one of the best RP servers out there. I can tell that you don’t take **** from any griefers, hackers, and people that are just assholes.
-[b]Why you would be a good addition to the server:[/b] I feel like my character would be helpful to many people.
-[b]Describe yourself in one word:[/b] Intelligent
-[b]How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[/b] About 30 hours.
-[b]What do you know about roleplaying?:[/b] Lots o’ stuff. I have played on many Minecraft RP’s, and also some other websites that do RP, such as Adventure Quest.
-[b]What do you expect this server will be like?:[/b] I think it will be fun, people stick to their character, and don’t be assholes just for fun.
-[b]What is your past roleplaying experience?:[/b] Minecraft RP’s, Adventure Quest, Sims Online, Gaia.
-[b]What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[/b]
World of Bros- Server switched computers, became laggy.
Dragon RP- No one stuck to their character
Minecraft United- Got bored.
There are others, I just cannot remember them.
-[b]How long have you played minecraft?:[/b] Since Indev (Seriously)
-[b]Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ):[/b]
Nope.
-[b]Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?:[/b] Yes and Yes!
-[b]Have you read and do you understand the lore?:[/b] Yes to both. And how long did it take to create all of that. It is very in-depth.
-[b]What is a slime called on the server?:[/b] [Unknown]
-[b]Do You Have a Referral, if so who?:[/b] No.
-[b]Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?:[/b] I do have a mic, and I will be on mumble.
-[b]What is the server motto?[/b] Life Sucks, deal with it!
-[b]Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big):[/b] I have played on many RP servers. More than I can count. But they all suck, and I am hoping this will be a good one.
[b]In-Character:[/b]
-[b]Character Name:[/b] Carter McNeil
-[b]Background / Who are you?:[/b] Carter McNeil nearly didn’t make it past birth. He was born with a defect in his leg, so he wasn’t able to control the muscles in his leg. His family, a team of 5 nomads, was extremely saddened. They knew Carter would not survive in the barren wasteland, so they decided to abandon him. They put him at the entrance to a small town and left. They were never seen again.
Luckily for Carter, a woman whose own son had died at just 2 years old, found him at the entrance. The woman thought it was a sign that her son was supposed to die, and raise this child instead. She took him into the city. Carter was raised by this woman, whose name turned out to be Alice. She had a husband named Jake, who became very fond of the boy. Carter grew up with the defect in his leg, and did not walk until age 6, when a traveling doctor stopped at the city. He was able to cure Carter, but he still walks with a limp. He was never as fast as the other kids in the town, but he became strong. He could lift nearly as much as his adoptive father when he was just 7.
By age 18, Carter was strong and happy. Content with his life, his family, and the town where he lived. Until the day the Raiders came. The town was unprepared. Their soldiers were taken by surprise and slaughtered before they knew what was happening. The Raiders gathered everyone and brought them to the middle of the town. The men were lined up and killed individually. The women were taken, and Carter never saw any of them again. But when they came for Alice, Carter attacked the man that was pulling Alice. He managed to break both of his arms before the other men grabbed him. They held him down and one pulled out his knife and cut a large X into his leg. Carter had never felt such unbelievable pain in his life. The men left him on the ground and pulled Alice away. It was the last time Carter ever saw her. When the Raiders left, the only people that remained were the children, the elderly, and a few men that had managed to escape the Raiders, and Carter.
He knew he couldn’t remain in the town. Too many memories, his family was gone, and the town was doomed. He gathered his supplies and left in the night. Because of his injury, he had stolen a pair of crutches from the towns doctor. He probably wasn’t going to need them anytime soon. He hobbled away, not knowing where to go or what to do. But he knew he was going to either find Alice, or dye trying.
-[b]Character Family:[/b]
Biological Family- Unknown
Adoptive Family- Alice Reilly- Abducted
Jake Reilly- Dead
-[b]Character Age:? 18
-[b]Character Appearance:?[/b] Tall, muscular build, brown hair, blue eyes. Walks with a bit of a limp.
-[b]Character Personality:?[/b] Athletic build. Shy and easily shocked. This is because he has never seen the world outside of his town. Can never focus on one thing, and everything he does has to be perfect.
-[b]Occupation:[/b] None
-[b]Can your character read or write?[/b] He can read, no writing skills.
-[b]Can your character mine?:[/b] No, he has absolutely no skill with mining.
-[b]Can your character build?:[/b] Yes, possibly his greatest talent. He can construct a house that with strong defense in a very short time.
-[b]Can your character fight?:[/b] He has had no training in close-combat, but is pretty good with a bow.
-[b]Can you make tools?:[/b] Yes, but fairly simple tools. Nothing extremely strong.
-[b]Can you farm?:[/b] He knows the basics.
-[b]Any special skills?[/b] Very good with booby traps, pit falls, and defense mechanisms. If he doesn’t want you to find something, you won’t find it. Alive at least.
-[b]Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?:[/b] He was born with a limp and his leg has numerous gashes.
-[b]Character Fears:[/b] Spiders and the possibility of losing control of his leg.
-[b]Describe an event where your character is in deep pain:[/b](This is part of my background just more in-depth with more details). I was confused as to who the Raiders came. They had simply come in to the city without asking. And where were the guards? “We have nothing in our small town,” I called out to them. Three of them walked over to me and the middle one gave me a hard punch to the throat. I was taken by surprise and it took me awhile to get my breath back. I didn’t say much after that. The raiders talked to one another in a foreign tongue.
We were all gathered in the town square with all the men lined up. What is going on? Who were these men? My thoughts were interrupted by the Raiders grabbing all the men in the town, and lining them up against a wall. “What are you doing?” I yelled at the men. They just looked at me and gave me evil grins. Alice quietly walked over to me and grabbed my hand. “Shhh,” she said in a confident voice. But I looked in her eyes and saw nothing but fear.
I looked back at the men and saw that a few had pulled out swords. I grasped what was about to happen a second before it did. The men hacked and swung their swords at the men. One by one they collapsed to the ground, dead. My eyes teared up as I saw Jake beheaded not 10 yards from me. When the men had finished, every man I had ever met was either dead or bleeding out. And then they came for the women.
The men grabbed the women and dragged them out of the town, where more men had sacks that they put over the women’s head. I just stared in shock, but when they came for Alice, I flipped. Lunging at the man nearest her, I grabbed both his arms and pulled sharply backwards. I heard two snaps and a scream of pain. The other men wheeled around and pulled their swords. I punched one in the face and kicked another in the groin, but they finally subdued me.
They held me on the ground, and one of them brought a short knife. He stared down at me on the ground. I just looked up in fear. He leaned down and made 2 huge gashes in my leg, in the shape of an X as I screamed in agony. I could feel the blood everywhere, and thought I was going to die. I almost wished that I would die. The man looked at me after making the gashes. He gave me a wicked smile and stabbed me in the middle of the X. The worst pain I could ever imagine shot to my leg and I passed out. I do not know how long I was out, but it can’t have been very long. I regained my senses in time to see the men carrying Alice away. She looked me in the eyes and mouthed a single word: Goodbye. Somehow, the pain of seeing this was worse than the wounds in my leg. I closed my eyes as they put a bag over her head. It was the last time I ever saw Alice.
-[b]A screenshot of your skin:[/b] (Work in progress)
-[b]Other Information:[/b] I will use ((*)) or brackets to speak in OOC in the local chat if needed or I will get banned!
-[b]Name and last name (Optional):[/b] Isaac Kretzmer
-[b]How old are you?:[/b] 15
-[b]Are you Mature:[/b] Yes
-[b]Gender?:[/b] Male
-[b]Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [/b] Pacific Time Zone/ USA
-[b]Good Grammar: Yes / No[/b] Yes!
-[b]Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[/b] I have been playing Minecraft for awhile, I go on whenever I can, and I enjoy playing Soccer.
-[b]Do you like RP servers:[/b] Yes I do. Most of the servers I go on are RP.
-[b]What do you think about the server:[/b] From the OP, it looks like one of the best RP servers out there. I can tell that you don’t take **** from any griefers, hackers, and people that are just assholes.
-[b]Why you would be a good addition to the server:[/b] I feel like my character would be helpful to many people.
-[b]Describe yourself in one word:[/b] Intelligent
-[b]How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[/b] About 30 hours.
-[b]What do you know about roleplaying?:[/b] Lots o’ stuff. I have played on many Minecraft RP’s, and also some other websites that do RP, such as Adventure Quest.
-[b]What do you expect this server will be like?:[/b] I think it will be fun, people stick to their character, and don’t be assholes just for fun.
-[b]What is your past roleplaying experience?:[/b] Minecraft RP’s, Adventure Quest, Sims Online, Gaia.
-[b]What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[/b]
World of Bros- Server switched computers, became laggy.
Dragon RP- No one stuck to their character
Minecraft United- Got bored.
There are others, I just cannot remember them.
-[b]How long have you played minecraft?:[/b] Since Indev (Seriously)
-[b]Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ):[/b]
Nope.
-[b]Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?:[/b] Yes and Yes!
-[b]Have you read and do you understand the lore?:[/b] Yes to both. And how long did it take to create all of that. It is very in-depth.
-[b]What is a slime called on the server?:[/b] [Unknown]
-[b]Do You Have a Referral, if so who?:[/b] No.
-[b]Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?:[/b] I do have a mic, and I will be on mumble.
-[b]What is the server motto?[/b] Life Sucks, deal with it!
-[b]Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big):[/b] I have played on many RP servers. More than I can count. But they all suck, and I am hoping this will be a good one.
[b]In-Character:[/b]
-[b]Character Name:[/b] Carter McNeil
-[b]Background / Who are you?:[/b] Carter McNeil nearly didn’t make it past birth. He was born with a defect in his leg, so he wasn’t able to control the muscles in his leg. His family, a team of 5 nomads, was extremely saddened. They knew Carter would not survive in the barren wasteland, so they decided to abandon him. They put him at the entrance to a small town and left. They were never seen again.
Luckily for Carter, a woman whose own son had died at just 2 years old, found him at the entrance. The woman thought it was a sign that her son was supposed to die, and raise this child instead. She took him into the city. Carter was raised by this woman, whose name turned out to be Alice. She had a husband named Jake, who became very fond of the boy. Carter grew up with the defect in his leg, and did not walk until age 6, when a traveling doctor stopped at the city. He was able to cure Carter, but he still walks with a limp. He was never as fast as the other kids in the town, but he became strong. He could lift nearly as much as his adoptive father when he was just 7.
By age 18, Carter was strong and happy. Content with his life, his family, and the town where he lived. Until the day the Raiders came. The town was unprepared. Their soldiers were taken by surprise and slaughtered before they knew what was happening. The Raiders gathered everyone and brought them to the middle of the town. The men were lined up and killed individually. The women were taken, and Carter never saw any of them again. But when they came for Alice, Carter attacked the man that was pulling Alice. He managed to break both of his arms before the other men grabbed him. They held him down and one pulled out his knife and cut a large X into his leg. Carter had never felt such unbelievable pain in his life. The men left him on the ground and pulled Alice away. It was the last time Carter ever saw her. When the Raiders left, the only people that remained were the children, the elderly, and a few men that had managed to escape the Raiders, and Carter.
He knew he couldn’t remain in the town. Too many memories, his family was gone, and the town was doomed. He gathered his supplies and left in the night. Because of his injury, he had stolen a pair of crutches from the towns doctor. He probably wasn’t going to need them anytime soon. He hobbled away, not knowing where to go or what to do. But he knew he was going to either find Alice, or dye trying.
-[b]Character Family:[/b]
Biological Family- Unknown
Adoptive Family- Alice Reilly- Abducted
Jake Reilly- Dead
-[b]Character Age:? 18
-[b]Character Appearance:?[/b] Tall, muscular build, brown hair, blue eyes. Walks with a bit of a limp.
-[b]Character Personality:?[/b] Athletic build. Shy and easily shocked. This is because he has never seen the world outside of his town. Can never focus on one thing, and everything he does has to be perfect.
-[b]Occupation:[/b] None
-[b]Can your character read or write?[/b] He can read, no writing skills.
-[b]Can your character mine?:[/b] No, he has absolutely no skill with mining.
-[b]Can your character build?:[/b] Yes, possibly his greatest talent. He can construct a house that with strong defense in a very short time.
-[b]Can your character fight?:[/b] He has had no training in close-combat, but is pretty good with a bow.
-[b]Can you make tools?:[/b] Yes, but fairly simple tools. Nothing extremely strong.
-[b]Can you farm?:[/b] He knows the basics.
-[b]Any special skills?[/b] Very good with booby traps, pit falls, and defense mechanisms. If he doesn’t want you to find something, you won’t find it. Alive at least.
-[b]Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?:[/b] He was born with a limp and his leg has numerous gashes.
-[b]Character Fears:[/b] Spiders and the possibility of losing control of his leg.
-[b]Describe an event where your character is in deep pain:[/b](This is part of my background just more in-depth with more details). I was confused as to who the Raiders came. They had simply come in to the city without asking. And where were the guards? “We have nothing in our small town,” I called out to them. Three of them walked over to me and the middle one gave me a hard punch to the throat. I was taken by surprise and it took me awhile to get my breath back. I didn’t say much after that. The raiders talked to one another in a foreign tongue.
We were all gathered in the town square with all the men lined up. What is going on? Who were these men? My thoughts were interrupted by the Raiders grabbing all the men in the town, and lining them up against a wall. “What are you doing?” I yelled at the men. They just looked at me and gave me evil grins. Alice quietly walked over to me and grabbed my hand. “Shhh,” she said in a confident voice. But I looked in her eyes and saw nothing but fear.
I looked back at the men and saw that a few had pulled out swords. I grasped what was about to happen a second before it did. The men hacked and swung their swords at the men. One by one they collapsed to the ground, dead. My eyes teared up as I saw Jake beheaded not 10 yards from me. When the men had finished, every man I had ever met was either dead or bleeding out. And then they came for the women.
The men grabbed the women and dragged them out of the town, where more men had sacks that they put over the women’s head. I just stared in shock, but when they came for Alice, I flipped. Lunging at the man nearest her, I grabbed both his arms and pulled sharply backwards. I heard two snaps and a scream of pain. The other men wheeled around and pulled their swords. I punched one in the face and kicked another in the groin, but they finally subdued me.
They held me on the ground, and one of them brought a short knife. He stared down at me on the ground. I just looked up in fear. He leaned down and made 2 huge gashes in my leg, in the shape of an X as I screamed in agony. I could feel the blood everywhere, and thought I was going to die. I almost wished that I would die. The man looked at me after making the gashes. He gave me a wicked smile and stabbed me in the middle of the X. The worst pain I could ever imagine shot to my leg and I passed out. I do not know how long I was out, but it can’t have been very long. I regained my senses in time to see the men carrying Alice away. She looked me in the eyes and mouthed a single word: Goodbye. Somehow, the pain of seeing this was worse than the wounds in my leg. I closed my eyes as they put a bag over her head. It was the last time I ever saw Alice.
-[b]A screenshot of your skin:[/b] (Work in progress)
-[b]Other Information:[/b] I will use ((*)) or brackets to speak in OOC in the local chat if needed or I will get banned!
-What do you think about the server: Minecraft needed a good post apolytic server
-Good Grammar: Yes / No eh.... yes, but my spelling is horrible
-Gender?: Male
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Unites States Central Time
-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well I do enjoy to build but I also like to relish in the others creations. I plan on joining the military and my character will reflect that defiantly.
-Why you would be a good addition to the server: I am a team player and like to support the cause.
-Describe yourself in one word: Smart
-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: eh, that could differ, I have a light schedule but it picks up occasionally.
-What do you know about roleplaying?: stay in character and try not to be a **** or someone will probably off you (fallout 3, Oblivion, Runescape veteran)
-What do you expect this server will be like?: well, a wasteland that will be populated with the unfortunate few who didn't die :tongue.gif:
-What is your past roleplaying experience?: fallout 3, Oblivion, Runescape veteran
-What other server have you played on and why did you leave them?: Colony Craft - Banned for setting a fire that spread (I was building a fire place.....)
-How long have you played minecraft?: almost 4 months
-Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ): yes, I set a huge fire trying to build a fire place.... the mobs wanted blood so I was banned for being complacient
-Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: yes, I do agree to them
-Have you read and do you understand the lore?: yes, that took a bit I bet :tongue.gif:
-What is a slime called on the server?: it has no name or ????
-Do You Have a Referral, if so who?: no
-Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?: nope, and I wouldnt bet
-What is the server motto? Life sucks deal with it
-Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big): eh, I would enjoy a server where I dont have a build a doom fort and the have it blown to pieces because some griefer wanted to, I would love to explore the ruins and maybe.. you know form a clan
In-Character:
-Character Name: Vladimir Itsov
-Background / Who are you?:
I was bourn in the Russian Republic before the bombs fell. When the oil ran dry and people started to become scared I decided that the only logical thing to do was to enlist in the military to defend the Russian people. I never agreed wit hthe PRoA and always fought to defend mother Russia, not the conglomerate government whos flag I carried. Commanders writing shining reports of my battlefield prows and skill recommend me to join the Spetnaz special forces program. on my first mission to to defend the leaders of the Russian people while they feld from NATO forces I was severely wounded by a NATO artillery bombardment and had to have over 97% of my body replaced wit cybernetics. My legs, most of my arms my right eye most of my internal organs were replaced with inorganic steel and bionic parts. The addition of my bionics mean I can not die from time alone, (I still need food and water and routine maintenance to live, I am by no means immortal). I was offered to retire from the spetnaz after my grievous wounds but I decided after the NATO destruction of the Moon I wanted personal revenge. From then on I was a soldier fighting only to slake my thirst for vengeance, one for my country ravaged by hunger and thirst and two for the ashes of my family (the were destroyed in the retaliatory nuclear strikes on sevastapole by NATO forces). Now, when the EMP hit I was very lucky to be located in a nuclear testing facility that was encased in a faraday cage to protect from the experimental EMP weapon that the PRoA was developing that shielded my bionic parts from the NATO EMP, Allowing myself to live. I lived a peaceful life during the time with no power and when the "survivor project" came to fruition I was relieved to see my fellow man recover from the brink of annihilation. This time did not pass well for me, being 97% bionic people often would mistake me for a robot and my treatment was poor at best. When the robot revolution hit I was tempted to allow robots to kill the ones who mistreated me, but knowing they could tell I was a man not a machine, I helped men the only way I knew how, by fighting as a soldier on the front lines. I will pass over the years spent killing robots as they were of no consequence until the year that the EMP storms were about. Fearing for my life I adopted a risky procedure that I saw in a old Russian lavatory that was designed to protect a electronic from a EMP, by grounding my subsystems in a small faraday cage I could avert the worst and repair the damage afterwards. to skip ahead during the time of the great link, I had to put down my seething hatred of the Westerners to lead a small band of Russian Spetnaz, civilians to the west to collaborate with for survival.
-Character Family: all dead killed in the war with NATO
1 wife
2 childern
-Character Age:? 203 (bionics support my life and I have very little flesh)
-[b]Character Appearance:? A mostly bionics form covered in the old Russian Spetnaz uniform
-Character Personality:? Bitter at the world having seen the worst of it, but has compassion on his fellow man and wants a feature for our species, dosent trust Americans or members of old NATO countries at all, would rather avoid them and blames them for murdering his family.
-Occupation: Solider
-Can your character read or write? yes, Russian and most languages of the west
-Can your character mine?: yes, but nothing more then cobblestone and iron
-Can your character build?: yes,e is skilled at trenches small bunkers and habitationsbut that is about all , some old world designs are stored in his memories as well.
-Can your character fight?: yes, He is a exceptional fighter with almost any weapon, Spetnaz are trained to fight with everything from a AK-47 to a combat boot. They are Russia's most deadly warrior and mine is one of the best and fighting every type of eneny (Man or robot) from almost a century of expirence
-Can you make tools?: yes, but only out of wood and stone, Iron requires more crating skill then basic training coverd
-Can you farm?: No, Spetnaz He never had the need always living in the city
-Any special skills? Expert fighting ability and genus level intellect (brain is composed of large Databanks along with regular brain matter, so memory is photographic, remembers old designs that were used before "The Great Ruining")
-Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: most of his body is cybernetics so EMP will render him unable to move for a time, has a problem trusting westerners , Occasionally some of his parts will malfunction due to lack of maintenance
-Character Fears: EMP, love (docent want physical attachment to a being that he will outlive)
-Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: during the battle for moscow squad apphs consisting of myself, vascille, and Andinov were guarding the dignitaries, griping about how they had to stay behind to "babysit" the politicians while there brothers were fighting. Andinov suddenly cries "CONTACT!" wipping his weapon around he fires a extended burst at a figure in the shadows who lets out a scream and falls to the ground. As that event unfolded fire from all around starts wizing by the whole squad. Vascille leveling his weapon fires at the shadows in the distance along with Vladmier's and Andinov. the men were fighting for there very lives and beating the odds until out of Vladimr's peripheral vision he he sees one of his comrades go down from a wound to the head. Sprayed with brain matter and blood of his fallen comrade he bellows a battle cry that shook the heavens looking for blood, and the NATO soldiers were going to slake his need. Victory seemed assured after 30 minutes for heavy fighting until Vladimer hears a sound like that of a freight train falling from the sky and immeadatly hits the dirt with Andinov, knowing that a artillery strike in inbound. Hearing on the raidos that the package was secured the decided to risk the artillery strike and flee to the safety of PRoA lines. Leaving the relative safety of a building they run through the streets doging falling shells and NATO gunfire friendly trenches were so close Vladimere could see them when everything went black, all of his senses overloaded to the point of breaking, the last voice he hears is that of his comrade andinov screaming "Vladimer, oh god! MEDIC! MEDIC!" Waking up on a stretcher Andinov at his side who noticed immediately that he was awake commanded the medic to issue vladimer a stim to prevent him from feeling the pain. The doctor replied that doing that was impossible as it would kill him and he will have to feel the whole procedure. He looked at his form, Andinov tried in vain to prevent him from seeing the extent of the damage, Both legs gone, both arms mostly missing, his right eye was rolled out of his socket, most of his body was riddles with shrapnel, making him look more like a late of ground beef then a man. His senses were assaulted by pain from every direction, all limbs, all organs, wanted to express the pain they were in at the same time, all vladimer could do was issue a blood curdling scream before he blacked out from the pain. He awoke in a field hospital still in pain, but the pain was not as extreme, looking at his form to see see if he was dreaming he saw cold steel and felt almost nothing, the doctor explained that he was more machine then man and he was fit for duty, he would no longer feel pain again.
(I dont want cheat seeing as I am more machine then man, and I can make a new thing up if nessicary, but this scared him for shure)
-A screenshot of your skin:
Its red with cybernetic implants on most of his body one yellow eye and one blue one (I forgot where i got it and I donk know how to upload it)
-Other Information: I will use ((*)) or brackets to speak in OOC in the local chat if needed or I will get banned!
How the **** can you call this a unique application? We have had allot of these on our old thread. You have ton of grammar fails, your background is almost the same size as the ''Describe an event where your character is in deep pain'' and your character is a ****ing big cliché. So don't even dear to come here and say that your application is unique, because it's not even near it. Oh and your applications is not even near long as for those who has been written on the old thread.
-What do you think about the server: Minecraft needed a good post apolytic server
-Good Grammar: Yes / No eh.... yes, but my spelling is horrible
-Gender?: Male
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Unites States Central Time
-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well I do enjoy to build but I also like to relish in the others creations. I plan on joining the military and my character will reflect that defiantly.
-Why you would be a good addition to the server: I am a team player and like to support the cause.
-Describe yourself in one word: Smart
-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: eh, that could differ, I have a light schedule but it picks up occasionally.
-What do you know about roleplaying?: stay in character and try not to be a **** or someone will probably off you (fallout 3, Oblivion, Runescape veteran)
-What do you expect this server will be like?: well, a wasteland that will be populated with the unfortunate few who didn't die :tongue.gif:
-What is your past roleplaying experience?: fallout 3, Oblivion, Runescape veteran
-What other server have you played on and why did you leave them?: Colony Craft - Banned for setting a fire that spread (I was building a fire place.....)
-How long have you played minecraft?: almost 4 months
-Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ): yes, I set a huge fire trying to build a fire place.... the mobs wanted blood so I was banned for being complacient
-Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: yes, I do agree to them
-Have you read and do you understand the lore?: yes, that took a bit I bet :tongue.gif:
-What is a slime called on the server?: it has no name or ????
-Do You Have a Referral, if so who?: no
-Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?: nope, and I wouldnt bet
-What is the server motto? Life sucks deal with it
-Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big): eh, I would enjoy a server where I dont have a build a doom fort and the have it blown to pieces because some griefer wanted to, I would love to explore the ruins and maybe.. you know form a clan
In-Character:
-Character Name: Vladimir Itsov
-Background / Who are you?:
I was bourn in the Russian Republic before the bombs fell. When the oil ran dry and people started to become scared I decided that the only logical thing to do was to enlist in the military to defend the Russian people. I never agreed wit hthe PRoA and always fought to defend mother Russia, not the conglomerate government whos flag I carried. Commanders writing shining reports of my battlefield prows and skill recommend me to join the Spetnaz special forces program. on my first mission to to defend the leaders of the Russian people while they feld from NATO forces I was severely wounded by a NATO artillery bombardment and had to have over 97% of my body replaced wit cybernetics. My legs, most of my arms my right eye most of my internal organs were replaced with inorganic steel and bionic parts. The addition of my bionics mean I can not die from time alone, (I still need food and water and routine maintenance to live, I am by no means immortal). I was offered to retire from the spetnaz after my grievous wounds but I decided after the NATO destruction of the Moon I wanted personal revenge. From then on I was a soldier fighting only to slake my thirst for vengeance, one for my country ravaged by hunger and thirst and two for the ashes of my family (the were destroyed in the retaliatory nuclear strikes on sevastapole by NATO forces). Now, when the EMP hit I was very lucky to be located in a nuclear testing facility that was encased in a faraday cage to protect from the experimental EMP weapon that the PRoA was developing that shielded my bionic parts from the NATO EMP, Allowing myself to live. I lived a peaceful life during the time with no power and when the "survivor project" came to fruition I was relieved to see my fellow man recover from the brink of annihilation. This time did not pass well for me, being 97% bionic people often would mistake me for a robot and my treatment was poor at best. When the robot revolution hit I was tempted to allow robots to kill the ones who mistreated me, but knowing they could tell I was a man not a machine, I helped men the only way I knew how, by fighting as a soldier on the front lines. I will pass over the years spent killing robots as they were of no consequence until the year that the EMP storms were about. Fearing for my life I adopted a risky procedure that I saw in a old Russian lavatory that was designed to protect a electronic from a EMP, by grounding my subsystems in a small faraday cage I could avert the worst and repair the damage afterwards. to skip ahead during the time of the great link, I had to put down my seething hatred of the Westerners to lead a small band of Russian Spetnaz, civilians to the west to collaborate with for survival.
-Character Family: all dead killed in the war with NATO
1 wife
2 childern
-Character Age:? 203 (bionics support my life and I have very little flesh)
-[b]Character Appearance:? A mostly bionics form covered in the old Russian Spetnaz uniform
-Character Personality:? Bitter at the world having seen the worst of it, but has compassion on his fellow man and wants a feature for our species, dosent trust Americans or members of old NATO countries at all, would rather avoid them and blames them for murdering his family.
-Occupation: Solider
-Can your character read or write? yes, Russian and most languages of the west
-Can your character mine?: yes, but nothing more then cobblestone and iron
-Can your character build?: yes,e is skilled at trenches small bunkers and habitationsbut that is about all , some old world designs are stored in his memories as well.
-Can your character fight?: yes, He is a exceptional fighter with almost any weapon, Spetnaz are trained to fight with everything from a AK-47 to a combat boot. They are Russia's most deadly warrior and mine is one of the best and fighting every type of eneny (Man or robot) from almost a century of expirence
-Can you make tools?: yes, but only out of wood and stone, Iron requires more crating skill then basic training coverd
-Can you farm?: No, Spetnaz He never had the need always living in the city
-Any special skills? Expert fighting ability and genus level intellect (brain is composed of large Databanks along with regular brain matter, so memory is photographic, remembers old designs that were used before "The Great Ruining")
-Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: most of his body is cybernetics so EMP will render him unable to move for a time, has a problem trusting westerners , Occasionally some of his parts will malfunction due to lack of maintenance
-Character Fears: EMP, love (docent want physical attachment to a being that he will outlive)
-Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: during the battle for moscow squad apphs consisting of myself, vascille, and Andinov were guarding the dignitaries, griping about how they had to stay behind to "babysit" the politicians while there brothers were fighting. Andinov suddenly cries "CONTACT!" wipping his weapon around he fires a extended burst at a figure in the shadows who lets out a scream and falls to the ground. As that event unfolded fire from all around starts wizing by the whole squad. Vascille leveling his weapon fires at the shadows in the distance along with Vladmier's and Andinov. the men were fighting for there very lives and beating the odds until out of Vladimr's peripheral vision he he sees one of his comrades go down from a wound to the head. Sprayed with brain matter and blood of his fallen comrade he bellows a battle cry that shook the heavens looking for blood, and the NATO soldiers were going to slake his need. Victory seemed assured after 30 minutes for heavy fighting until Vladimer hears a sound like that of a freight train falling from the sky and immeadatly hits the dirt with Andinov, knowing that a artillery strike in inbound. Hearing on the raidos that the package was secured the decided to risk the artillery strike and flee to the safety of PRoA lines. Leaving the relative safety of a building they run through the streets doging falling shells and NATO gunfire friendly trenches were so close Vladimere could see them when everything went black, all of his senses overloaded to the point of breaking, the last voice he hears is that of his comrade andinov screaming "Vladimer, oh god! MEDIC! MEDIC!" Waking up on a stretcher Andinov at his side who noticed immediately that he was awake commanded the medic to issue vladimer a stim to prevent him from feeling the pain. The doctor replied that doing that was impossible as it would kill him and he will have to feel the whole procedure. He looked at his form, Andinov tried in vain to prevent him from seeing the extent of the damage, Both legs gone, both arms mostly missing, his right eye was rolled out of his socket, most of his body was riddles with shrapnel, making him look more like a late of ground beef then a man. His senses were assaulted by pain from every direction, all limbs, all organs, wanted to express the pain they were in at the same time, all vladimer could do was issue a blood curdling scream before he blacked out from the pain. He awoke in a field hospital still in pain, but the pain was not as extreme, looking at his form to see see if he was dreaming he saw cold steel and felt almost nothing, the doctor explained that he was more machine then man and he was fit for duty, he would no longer feel pain again.
(I dont want cheat seeing as I am more machine then man, and I can make a new thing up if nessicary, but this scared him for shure)
-A screenshot of your skin:
Its red with cybernetic implants on most of his body one yellow eye and one blue one (I forgot where i got it and I donk know how to upload it)
-Other Information: I will use ((*)) or brackets to speak in OOC in the local chat if needed or I will get banned!
How the **** can you call this a unique application? We have had allot of these on our old thread. You have ton of grammar fails, your background is almost the same size as the ''Describe an event where your character is in deep pain'' and your character is a ****ing big cliché. So don't even dear to come here and say that your application is unique, because it's not even near it. Oh and your applications is not even near long as for those who has been written on the old thread.
I am not gonna even bat this back and forth with you with out knowing the information you have. You have issues with people questioning your idea of the "prefect app" and you only answered one part of my last post you failed to point out how I am OP and a ****ing super soldier, or what is to small. Oh and if you are a english major, good for you, its a online game sorry I did not look over this as carefully as I would a term paper
I am not gonna even bat this back and forth with you with out knowing the information you have. You have issues with people questioning your idea of the "prefect app" and you only answered one part of my last post you failed to point out how I am OP and a ****ing super soldier, or what is to small. Oh and if you are a english major, good for you, its a online game sorry I did not look over this as carefully as I would a term pape
Grammar is one of the most important things in roleplay. So don't even say that it is not important. Yes it is a game, but still we want to keep it as a professional roleplay and not the crappy as rolepaly you find on other servers.
I've been wondering lately, how might the music be like in this kind of setting? It'd be unlikely for copies of older music to survive for all these decades, so what are people listening to to maintain their morale and keep themselves entertained?
I can just imagine some poor ass guy sitting alone in his basement, banging on some rusted pots with a pair of wooden spoons trying to look like Steve Moore.
I've been wondering lately, how might the music be like in this kind of setting? It'd be unlikely for copies of older music to survive for all these decades, so what are people listening to to maintain their morale and keep themselves entertained?
I can just imagine some poor ass guy sitting alone in his basement, banging on some rusted pots with a pair of wooden spoons trying to look like Steve Moore.
This world is way to ruined for a person to think of morale and entertaining, there is only one thing in your mind, and that is to survive the cruel world!
-[b]Background / Who are you?: TLDR; A son of a soldier, the family uniform has been passed down, it is currently in his possession and he intends to wear it proudly.
...He grew up in a small town outside of Moscow, in Russia. Although the town he lived in was very ravaged by random groups of marauders and other rogue factions, him and his family managed to survive. He doesn't know much about his family other than the fact that he does, in fact, have one. He is reminded constantly by flashbacks that take place inside his head at random times.
...He believes that the cause of these random scenes of darkness and mystery was a small radioactive bug that somehow managed to slip inside his suit and bite him on the neck, he believes this because the flashbacks started to regularly occur about a half-hour after he discovered the bug inside the protective membrane on the back of his neck. He learned from these random flashbacks that his "Brother" is somewhere out there in the wastelands, he also has been led to believe that the combat suit he has on was passed down from his father to him, as he is the oldest.
...He loves his L96 Arctic Warfare Rifle as it has accompanied him from nomad group to nomad group, even though it recently broke, he still likes to carry it around on his back inside a tactical backpack broken into re-attachable parts. He still doesn't know where he got his L96, or why he obtained such an old piece of sniper equipment, all he knows is that it's been a reliable tool in his life since he can remember.
...He is very easy to be around and he enjoys life to it's fullest, even if it means taking risks. He has been the daredevil of almost every group he's been in, he will take dares and even risk his life, just to prove a point. But just because he's risky, doesn't mean he isn't extremely careful, he will take the most dangerous risk you can think of, as long as there isn't some unknown factor in the dare, if there is he will try to find out more about it, if he can't, he will simply deny the dare.
...He's met several people along his many travels, one of which, his buddy, Mark McGinnly, is still his best friend to date, although nobody knows exactly where he is or where he will turn up next, all that is know is that whenever the two of them get together, it is a great reunion.
...Mordecai has been to jail once in his life, but it was not because of his own fault, he was framed by a roaming gang of looters. They "informed everyone of a tragedy" and told everyone that Mordecai was a liar and a thief, when in fact it was them stealing from the town, taking everything that their hands could touch that wouldn't fight back. He was in jail for about a month or two when he was finally released. He was told that the friendly rogue faction that took refuge inside their town rounded up some proof to go against the looters and prove who was really stealing all of the towns treasures. In court, Mordecai won, gaining freedom again while passing the jail-time of 5 years onto the looters. The are still in jail to this day, set to release in another two years. They seemed to have no intentions on tracking Mordecai down for revenge, as they said "We may be angry, but as far as we're concerned, revenge isn't as fun as reaping rewards."
...He intends on elongating his story as long as he possibly can, and to avoid loosing memories again, he has been keeping a diary of his past experiences up to 8 years ago, although age 16 and 19 are both completely empty.
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-[b]Character Family: Only semi-known family member is his brother, who is yet to even be confirmed as such, the only source he has of this info are random flashbacks in which he sees random figures, one of which was titled his "Brother" by the figures. He also knows that the suit he wears comes from a family tradition of passing the suit down from Soldier-Father to Soldier-Son, although he was never a soldier, he was about as close to a soldier as he could get without getting involved in a rogue faction.[/b]
-[b]Character Age:? 24, Born on October 26th, 2189
-[b]Character Appearance:? In a rather good conditioned special operations suit, not very functional though. He is clean shaven and enjoys wearing his suit, as it is the only physical connection to any family, he never takes off his suit, except to bathe and to clean it.[/b]
-[b]Character Personality:? Very easy to get along with, but also very protective of allies. He has always been very friendly since his young childhood, even though most of it is blocked by random intervals of plain blankness in his memory, he can remember most of his childhood, he was very friendly, he believes he was friendly throughout his teens, but he was never sure, as his teen years are the most cloudy. He tends to do things after thinking them through first, he likes a good mental challenge and will accept a dare no matter what, unless there is some dangerous unknown factor that plays a huge part in the dare. If there is an unknown factor present, he will do his best to identify it, when it is identified, he will proceed with the dare.[/b]
-[b]Occupation: Sharpshooter, literally unoccupied, but he tends to travel with random nomads, aiding them with hunting and gathering food, although he doesn't always have enough for himself, he still somehow finds a need to assist people and help them survive more that he has the need to find himself food, this usually causes issues with his personal survival goal, which is simply to find shelter or a group of friendly people, and to find food, as food is crucial to his survival, or anyone's survival for that matter.[/b]
-[b]Can your character read or write? Both[/b]
-[b]Can your character mine?: Yes, but not very consistently, enough to make shelter but not enough to dig deep enough to find batteries.[/b]
-[b]Can your character build?: Yes, fairly well[/b]
-[b]Can your character fight?: Yes[/b]
-[b]Can you make tools?: Yes[/b]
-[b]Can you farm?: Not in the slightest[/b]
-[b]Any special skills? A very good shot. He has had much practice with his trusty L96 Arctic Warfare, although outdated, he has found it to be a very reliable and invaluable tool. It recently broke, due to a major sandstorm that messed up the inner workings and blocked out the barrel, he still carries it around however in pieces inside a Tactical Bag he purchased from a merchant while traveling.[/b]
-[b]Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: Cannot remember any family or how he got the combat suit. He also has random flashbacks marking events in his life that he cannot remember, he sees random figures speaking, but they are never named, with the exception of his "Brother" whom was titled but never actually revealed to him.[/b]
-[b]Character Fears: Anything that can attack him, but not be attacked at the same time.[/b]
-[b]Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: Trying to remember his family and how he ended up with the suit. Strange memories appear in his head at random, they are very vague and blankly show random figures... One of these figures so far he has been able to identify as his brother as he is constantly referred to by the multiple figures as his "Brother" although the other figures have yet to be named or even titled by any of the hundreds of memories, he intends to find is "Brother" someday.[/b]
-[b]A screenshot of your skin: [/b]
-[b]Other Information: None[/b]
[b]I saw the "put your heart" thing in your application but had no idea what it meant, so can this count as that in my application?[/b]
Im open to any criticism, but please let it be constructive, and i'm hoping this is accepted, this is my dream server :biggrin.gif:
(Probably shouldn't have posted that *laugh*)
Denied
Please read the rules!
What did I do wrong? I did everything in the rules...
If I fix it can I be accepted? This is my dream server!
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There was even going to be a party for you. A big party. That all your friends were invited too. I invited your best friend the companion cube. Of course, he couldn't come because you murdered him. All your other friends couldn't come either, because you don't have any other friends. Because of how unlikeable you are. It says so right here in your personal file: UNLIKEABLE, liked by no one, a bitter, unlikeable loner, who's passing shall not be mourned, SHALL NOT BE MOURNED. That's exactly what it says. Very formal. Very official. It also says you were adopted, so thats funny too.
-Are you Mature: Not a good question, anyone can say they are mature. (But I do consider myself mature)
-Gender?: Male
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Ohio ( Timezone same as New York)
-Good Grammar: Yes / No See for yourself.
-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a mine-crafter looking for another role play server (I am already part of http://www.aleyria.com), I enjoy role play and having fun.
-Do you like RP servers: Yes, yes I do.
-What do you think about the server: Looks fun, we will see if thats true.
-Why you would be a good addition to the server: I would like to have fun role-playing and doing all that stuff.
-Describe yourself in one word: Polite
-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2-5 times.
-What do you know about roleplaying?: Yes, I know much about it, but I am still learning.
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-What do you expect this server will be like?: Good role-playing atmosphere with good environments.
-Character Personality:? A good leader, and a surviving soul, he is respected by those that he comes across.
-Occupation: Doing everything there is to do.
-Can your character read or write? Yes, he can read and write, during his travels he found an ancient school books and used them.
-Can your character mine?: Yes, he is a skilled miner.
-Can your character build?: Yes, he is a master builder.
-Can your character fight?: He is OK at it, but is still learning.
-Can you make tools?: He is OK at crafting, but does not make the best tools.
-Can you farm?: He can, but only makes enough for himself.
-Any special skills? Not really.
-Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: Has anger bursts sometime. Has an eye-patch.
-Character Fears: Has no fears, but this trait may(will) kill him someday.
-Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: A Mutated Scientist captured him once and tortured him, using its fingers to pull out Gorgons eye.
ok I am sorry but I am done here, I would hate to see what it is like on the inside of this server after seeing how the accepting system works. I will find somewhere else to build with a community that wants to role play with who ever you want to be... but have wonderful day regarless sorry to have "waisted your time"
Read the denied apps. If you had a server, will you let these chumps in?
Please read the rules!
for the sake of argument, no I would not. And I have red quite a few of the apps, about 35 ages of them total but I think that this server is WAY to picky, this might lead to a very fun server on the inside but I would think that this would just restrict the creativity of the people applying. My app is 100% unique, I did not draw from others apps for ideas and I am confused how i have "a short ass background" (its huge...) or am "OP" (I have seen some OP characters and I defiantly have a weakness) or am a "****ing super soldier" (this discussion happened yesterday and if you want to ready my thoughts on this look at page 70 or 71. I believe I used tony starks arc reactor comparison to my characters body). some explanation would be nice other then denied. I refuse to doctor my app any more then it already has been and I will more than likely not come back. Oh, and I do wish you guys the best and I wont be a homo falmer you reserve the right to tell me to go away I just disagree with your system
Not all of us had terrible apps. They just needed some work.
[b]Out-Of-Character:[/b]
-[b]Minecraft Account Name:[/b] BabyCarlos1
-[b]Name and last name (Optional):[/b] Isaac Kretzmer
-[b]How old are you?:[/b] 15
-[b]Are you Mature:[/b] Yes
-[b]Gender?:[/b] Male
-[b]Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [/b] Pacific Time Zone/ USA
-[b]Good Grammar: Yes / No[/b] Yes!
-[b]Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[/b] I have been playing Minecraft for awhile, I go on whenever I can, and I enjoy playing Soccer.
-[b]Do you like RP servers:[/b] Yes I do. Most of the servers I go on are RP.
-[b]What do you think about the server:[/b] From the OP, it looks like one of the best RP servers out there. I can tell that you don’t take **** from any griefers, hackers, and people that are just assholes.
-[b]Why you would be a good addition to the server:[/b] I feel like my character would be helpful to many people.
-[b]Describe yourself in one word:[/b] Intelligent
-[b]How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[/b] About 30 hours.
-[b]What do you know about roleplaying?:[/b] Lots o’ stuff. I have played on many Minecraft RP’s, and also some other websites that do RP, such as Adventure Quest.
-[b]What do you expect this server will be like?:[/b] I think it will be fun, people stick to their character, and don’t be assholes just for fun.
-[b]What is your past roleplaying experience?:[/b] Minecraft RP’s, Adventure Quest, Sims Online, Gaia.
-[b]What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[/b]
World of Bros- Server switched computers, became laggy.
Dragon RP- No one stuck to their character
Minecraft United- Got bored.
There are others, I just cannot remember them.
-[b]How long have you played minecraft?:[/b] Since Indev (Seriously)
-[b]Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ):[/b]
Nope.
-[b]Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?:[/b] Yes and Yes!
-[b]Have you read and do you understand the lore?:[/b] Yes to both. And how long did it take to create all of that. It is very in-depth.
-[b]What is a slime called on the server?:[/b] [Unknown]
-[b]Do You Have a Referral, if so who?:[/b] No.
-[b]Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?:[/b] I do have a mic, and I will be on mumble.
-[b]What is the server motto?[/b] Life Sucks, deal with it!
-[b]Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big):[/b] I have played on many RP servers. More than I can count. But they all suck, and I am hoping this will be a good one.
[b]In-Character:[/b]
-[b]Character Name:[/b] Carter McNeil
-[b]Background / Who are you?:[/b] Carter McNeil nearly didn’t make it past birth. He was born with a defect in his leg, so he wasn’t able to control the muscles in his leg. His family, a team of 5 nomads, was extremely saddened. They knew Carter would not survive in the barren wasteland, so they decided to abandon him. They put him at the entrance to a small town and left. They were never seen again.
Luckily for Carter, a woman whose own son had died at just 2 years old, found him at the entrance. The woman thought it was a sign that her son was supposed to die, and raise this child instead. She took him into the city. Carter was raised by this woman, whose name turned out to be Alice. She had a husband named Jake, who became very fond of the boy. Carter grew up with the defect in his leg, and did not walk until age 6, when a traveling doctor stopped at the city. He was able to cure Carter, but he still walks with a limp. He was never as fast as the other kids in the town, but he became strong. He could lift nearly as much as his adoptive father when he was just 7.
By age 18, Carter was strong and happy. Content with his life, his family, and the town where he lived. Until the day the Raiders came. The town was unprepared. Their soldiers were taken by surprise and slaughtered before they knew what was happening. The Raiders gathered everyone and brought them to the middle of the town. The men were lined up and killed individually. The women were taken, and Carter never saw any of them again. But when they came for Alice, Carter attacked the man that was pulling Alice. He managed to break both of his arms before the other men grabbed him. They held him down and one pulled out his knife and cut a large X into his leg. Carter had never felt such unbelievable pain in his life. The men left him on the ground and pulled Alice away. It was the last time Carter ever saw her. When the Raiders left, the only people that remained were the children, the elderly, and a few men that had managed to escape the Raiders, and Carter.
He knew he couldn’t remain in the town. Too many memories, his family was gone, and the town was doomed. He gathered his supplies and left in the night. Because of his injury, he had stolen a pair of crutches from the towns doctor. He probably wasn’t going to need them anytime soon. He hobbled away, not knowing where to go or what to do. But he knew he was going to either find Alice, or dye trying.
-[b]Character Family:[/b]
Biological Family- Unknown
Adoptive Family- Alice Reilly- Abducted
Jake Reilly- Dead
-[b]Character Age:? 18
-[b]Character Appearance:?[/b] Tall, muscular build, brown hair, blue eyes. Walks with a bit of a limp.
-[b]Character Personality:?[/b] Athletic build. Shy and easily shocked. This is because he has never seen the world outside of his town. Can never focus on one thing, and everything he does has to be perfect.
-[b]Occupation:[/b] None
-[b]Can your character read or write?[/b] He can read, no writing skills.
-[b]Can your character mine?:[/b] No, he has absolutely no skill with mining.
-[b]Can your character build?:[/b] Yes, possibly his greatest talent. He can construct a house that with strong defense in a very short time.
-[b]Can your character fight?:[/b] He has had no training in close-combat, but is pretty good with a bow.
-[b]Can you make tools?:[/b] Yes, but fairly simple tools. Nothing extremely strong.
-[b]Can you farm?:[/b] He knows the basics.
-[b]Any special skills?[/b] Very good with booby traps, pit falls, and defense mechanisms. If he doesn’t want you to find something, you won’t find it. Alive at least.
-[b]Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?:[/b] He was born with a limp and his leg has numerous gashes.
-[b]Character Fears:[/b] Spiders and the possibility of losing control of his leg.
-[b]Describe an event where your character is in deep pain:[/b](This is part of my background just more in-depth with more details). I was confused as to who the Raiders came. They had simply come in to the city without asking. And where were the guards? “We have nothing in our small town,” I called out to them. Three of them walked over to me and the middle one gave me a hard punch to the throat. I was taken by surprise and it took me awhile to get my breath back. I didn’t say much after that. The raiders talked to one another in a foreign tongue.
We were all gathered in the town square with all the men lined up. What is going on? Who were these men? My thoughts were interrupted by the Raiders grabbing all the men in the town, and lining them up against a wall. “What are you doing?” I yelled at the men. They just looked at me and gave me evil grins. Alice quietly walked over to me and grabbed my hand. “Shhh,” she said in a confident voice. But I looked in her eyes and saw nothing but fear.
I looked back at the men and saw that a few had pulled out swords. I grasped what was about to happen a second before it did. The men hacked and swung their swords at the men. One by one they collapsed to the ground, dead. My eyes teared up as I saw Jake beheaded not 10 yards from me. When the men had finished, every man I had ever met was either dead or bleeding out. And then they came for the women.
The men grabbed the women and dragged them out of the town, where more men had sacks that they put over the women’s head. I just stared in shock, but when they came for Alice, I flipped. Lunging at the man nearest her, I grabbed both his arms and pulled sharply backwards. I heard two snaps and a scream of pain. The other men wheeled around and pulled their swords. I punched one in the face and kicked another in the groin, but they finally subdued me.
They held me on the ground, and one of them brought a short knife. He stared down at me on the ground. I just looked up in fear. He leaned down and made 2 huge gashes in my leg, in the shape of an X as I screamed in agony. I could feel the blood everywhere, and thought I was going to die. I almost wished that I would die. The man looked at me after making the gashes. He gave me a wicked smile and stabbed me in the middle of the X. The worst pain I could ever imagine shot to my leg and I passed out. I do not know how long I was out, but it can’t have been very long. I regained my senses in time to see the men carrying Alice away. She looked me in the eyes and mouthed a single word: Goodbye. Somehow, the pain of seeing this was worse than the wounds in my leg. I closed my eyes as they put a bag over her head. It was the last time I ever saw Alice.
-[b]A screenshot of your skin:[/b] (Work in progress)
-[b]Other Information:[/b] I will use ((*)) or brackets to speak in OOC in the local chat if needed or I will get banned!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRXdTsMbqC8
I like ^^
"Nietzsche is dead." - God
How the **** can you call this a unique application? We have had allot of these on our old thread. You have ton of grammar fails, your background is almost the same size as the ''Describe an event where your character is in deep pain'' and your character is a ****ing big cliché. So don't even dear to come here and say that your application is unique, because it's not even near it. Oh and your applications is not even near long as for those who has been written on the old thread.
Thanks!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRXdTsMbqC8
I am not gonna even bat this back and forth with you with out knowing the information you have. You have issues with people questioning your idea of the "prefect app" and you only answered one part of my last post you failed to point out how I am OP and a ****ing super soldier, or what is to small. Oh and if you are a english major, good for you, its a online game sorry I did not look over this as carefully as I would a term paper
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRXdTsMbqC8
People say Beauty is in the eye of the Beholder. So let's cut that eye open right now, gimme a knife.
In all seriousness, hey, I'm back from my friend's house. I can tell I missed so much. :3
Grammar is one of the most important things in roleplay. So don't even say that it is not important. Yes it is a game, but still we want to keep it as a professional roleplay and not the crappy as rolepaly you find on other servers.
I can just imagine some poor ass guy sitting alone in his basement, banging on some rusted pots with a pair of wooden spoons trying to look like Steve Moore.
This world is way to ruined for a person to think of morale and entertaining, there is only one thing in your mind, and that is to survive the cruel world!
What did I do wrong? I did everything in the rules...
If I fix it can I be accepted? This is my dream server!
Read the rules more closely and you will understand!
Out-Of-Character:
-Minecraft Account Name:
-Name and last name (Optional): ---
-How old are you?: 15
-Are you Mature: Not a good question, anyone can say they are mature. (But I do consider myself mature)
-Gender?: Male
-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Ohio ( Timezone same as New York)
-Good Grammar: Yes / No See for yourself.
-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a mine-crafter looking for another role play server (I am already part of http://www.aleyria.com), I enjoy role play and having fun.
-Do you like RP servers: Yes, yes I do.
-What do you think about the server: Looks fun, we will see if thats true.
-Why you would be a good addition to the server: I would like to have fun role-playing and doing all that stuff.
-Describe yourself in one word: Polite
-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2-5 times.
-What do you know about roleplaying?: Yes, I know much about it, but I am still learning.
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-What do you expect this server will be like?: Good role-playing atmosphere with good environments.
-What is your past roleplaying experience?: http://www.aleyria.com
-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: http://www.aleyria.com - And I didnt leave it.
-How long have you played minecraft?: A year or so.
-Have you ever been banned before? if, why? ( Be Honest ): No, I have not been banned before.
-Have you read the rules? Do you understand them and do you agreed with them?: Yes
-Have you read and do you understand the lore?: Yes
-What is a slime called on the server?: [Unknown] Is a living nuclear waste creature.
-Do You Have a Referral, if so who?: Nope
-Do you have a microphone, if you have will you be active on our Mumble?: Yes
-What is the server motto? Welcome to the messed up wastelands of Ruined World? (Its not clear what your motto is)
-Why you want to be accepted (A short answer, nothing big): So I can play on another server and have fun.
In-Character:
-Character Name: Gorgon Retilit
-Background / Who are you?: Not much is know about the man, there are many rumors about him.
-Character Family: Unknown
-Character Age: Unknown
-Character Appearance:? ] http://www.minecraft.net/skin/Jumbify.png
-Character Personality:? A good leader, and a surviving soul, he is respected by those that he comes across.
-Occupation: Doing everything there is to do.
-Can your character read or write? Yes, he can read and write, during his travels he found an ancient school books and used them.
-Can your character mine?: Yes, he is a skilled miner.
-Can your character build?: Yes, he is a master builder.
-Can your character fight?: He is OK at it, but is still learning.
-Can you make tools?: He is OK at crafting, but does not make the best tools.
-Can you farm?: He can, but only makes enough for himself.
-Any special skills? Not really.
-Does your character have any health/physical or mental problems/issues?: Has anger bursts sometime. Has an eye-patch.
-Character Fears: Has no fears, but this trait may(will) kill him someday.
-Describe an event where your character is in deep pain: A Mutated Scientist captured him once and tortured him, using its fingers to pull out Gorgons eye.
-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraft.net/skin/Jumbify.png
-Other Information: PLEASE improve Gorgon, I am horrible at making people for RP. I will probably make a different skin..