((Well, the main reason applications were turned off was because a few people posted so much and so fast it was leaving out other characters. Right now....things are looking slow... If I was an admin, and you made a really good app, I would accept you despite "We aren't accepting anymore."))
((I am not an admin, so I really can't accept your application... =( MAYBE IF THE ADMINS COME ON. I'll just review some things. Well, the first issue we should touch is your species. Could you make up your mind? =P The bio really is confusing too. Somehow a fourteen-year-old survived on his own since he was one without anyone clearly recognized raising him nor teaching him how to use his abilities (or do anything for that matter). Probably expand on his weaknesses, as in say how is he vulnerable to light and silver. Also, he does have a bit too many abilities.))
((Though, if the admins still don't accept, then everything was all a wasted effort.))
(Okay, editting it. And the reason why the bio was so confusing is because I didn't want it to be too long and stuff. I think I'll just leave the bio out for now..he'll tell people if he chooses.)
Name: Axel Hall
Appearance: He usually wears all black if he can. His eyes change according to his emotions, but his normal eye-color is grey. He has a twin pair of daggers on either side of him, and he's pale to the point of almost being as white as paper. He has black hair slightly reaching his eyes, and usually wears a jacket as well.
Age: Fourteen.
House: He has none. He lives in the forest, climbing and sleeping in trees when he needs to.
Street: Again, he doesn't live inside the perimeters of town, or in a house.
Supernatural Species: He's a hybrid of Demon, Angel, Werewolf, Vampire, and a few other things, and there is a reason to it. It's not simply because I can't make up my mind, trust me.
Weaknesses: His demon side tries to take over constantly, which makes Axel have sort of seizures which debilitate him for as short as five minutes to as long as an hour. He's also very vulnerable to silver, because he's part werewolf. And light, because of his demon side. He's quite anti-social, so he won't often ask for help, and that gets him injured a lot. He often gets clumsy and can't pay attention very well when his family is brought up, so he can't fight very well when thinking about it. He avoids violence because he's seen too much of it, and he doesn't like injuring people, though he tends to do so by mistake.
Supernatural Abilities: He can turn into a shadow, but only when there's some sort of light, or he can't do it. And turning into mist exhausts him, so he tries not to when he can help it. He can control the elements of Lightning and Fire only. While he can heal, it drains him so much that he doesn't bother doing it most of the time. He can make his skin as hard as steel, but he has to know the attack is coming, and it takes time to do. He can only maintain it for a few seconds at a time, as well. He also has pure black wings, but he barely knows how to fly, as they only grew in a few months ago, so he never uses it in combat.
(Anything else I need to edit..? I limited his abilities to a limit, and stuff. Is that any better..?)
((@Snappcraft Sorry, but Cyshadichu has a point. Your character has no weaknesses, controlling people is an OVERPOWERED ability in almost every sense of the word, and like Cyshadichu said... you obviously confused Supernatural Being with Supernatural Abilities.))
(("Supernatural Being" dictates what your character is. Is he a human with psychic abilities? Is he a vampire? A demon? Or something completely different?))
(("Supernatural Abilities" dictates WHAT powers they have, also make the powers at least MATCH what supernatural being your character is. If your character is say... a stone golem for example then he might be a little slow, but incredibly powerful.))
((Also... WEAKNESSES ARE MANDATORY FOR A CHARACTER! Without any weaknesses your character will be able to pretty much take on any threat thrown at him. In other words a near perfect character. Granted giving your character a disability can be considered a weakness of sorts, it's still not an actual listed weakness. For example Werewolves are weak to silver. Normally a werewolf would be incredibly resistant to injuries except injuries created by silver (like a silver bullet) which could really weaken a werewolf and cause the wound to take longer to heal. When making a character make them balanced. A perfect character in a metaphorical sense is a character with flaws. Nobody is perfect, and I do mean nobody. Also..))
((THE TITLE OF THE RP SAYS WE ARE NO LONGER ACCEPTING! So until my fellow Co-owner says otherwise we are not accepting anyone. I may be a CO-Owner of the RP, but I still prefer to have my fellow co-owner CPRox's opinion on things.))
((I'm sorry if I sounded harsh and mean, but I just felt like I had to throw all that out.))
((THE TITLE OF THE RP SAYS WE ARE NO LONGER ACCEPTING! So until my fellow Co-owner says otherwise we are not accepting anyone. I may be a CO-Owner of the RP, but I still prefer to have my fellow co-owner CPRox's opinion on things.))
((First, webba to you SUSTIC! Thank you for clearing up we aren't accepting anymore, as I was a bit confused over that. Also, it's been a while since CPRox100 came on. I hope all is well with her.))
((@Cyshadichu Thanks. Also I hope all is well with her as well. I have been gone due to being distracted by another forums, work IRL, and even trying to think of a new character for NeoWolf's New Genesis: A Futuristic-Fantasy RP... I really want to join it...))
((Sai's not dead. That is, if he is welcome at Mist Creek anymore. My internet bill went unpaid and I hadn't gotten it back for a while.))
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Sticks and stones may break my bones; but words are merely the smallest element of language capable of containing meaning and isolation and as such could never directly produce 4000N/cm^2 required to break bones.
((I am not an admin, so I really can't accept your application... =( MAYBE IF THE ADMINS COME ON. I'll just review some things. Well, the first issue we should touch is your species. Could you make up your mind? =P The bio really is confusing too. Somehow a fourteen-year-old survived on his own since he was one without anyone clearly recognized raising him nor teaching him how to use his abilities (or do anything for that matter). Probably expand on his weaknesses, as in say how is he vulnerable to light and silver. Also, he does have a bit too many abilities.))
((Though, if the admins still don't accept, then everything was all a wasted effort.))
Name: Axel Hall
Appearance: He usually wears all black if he can. His eyes change according to his emotions, but his normal eye-color is grey. He has a twin pair of daggers on either side of him, and he's pale to the point of almost being as white as paper. He has black hair slightly reaching his eyes, and usually wears a jacket as well.
Age: Fourteen.
House: He has none. He lives in the forest, climbing and sleeping in trees when he needs to.
Street: Again, he doesn't live inside the perimeters of town, or in a house.
Supernatural Species: He's a hybrid of Demon, Angel, Werewolf, Vampire, and a few other things, and there is a reason to it. It's not simply because I can't make up my mind, trust me.
Weaknesses: His demon side tries to take over constantly, which makes Axel have sort of seizures which debilitate him for as short as five minutes to as long as an hour. He's also very vulnerable to silver, because he's part werewolf. And light, because of his demon side. He's quite anti-social, so he won't often ask for help, and that gets him injured a lot. He often gets clumsy and can't pay attention very well when his family is brought up, so he can't fight very well when thinking about it. He avoids violence because he's seen too much of it, and he doesn't like injuring people, though he tends to do so by mistake.
Supernatural Abilities: He can turn into a shadow, but only when there's some sort of light, or he can't do it. And turning into mist exhausts him, so he tries not to when he can help it. He can control the elements of Lightning and Fire only. While he can heal, it drains him so much that he doesn't bother doing it most of the time. He can make his skin as hard as steel, but he has to know the attack is coming, and it takes time to do. He can only maintain it for a few seconds at a time, as well. He also has pure black wings, but he barely knows how to fly, as they only grew in a few months ago, so he never uses it in combat.
(Anything else I need to edit..? I limited his abilities to a limit, and stuff. Is that any better..?)
((@Snappcraft Sorry, but Cyshadichu has a point. Your character has no weaknesses, controlling people is an OVERPOWERED ability in almost every sense of the word, and like Cyshadichu said... you obviously confused Supernatural Being with Supernatural Abilities.))
(("Supernatural Being" dictates what your character is. Is he a human with psychic abilities? Is he a vampire? A demon? Or something completely different?))
(("Supernatural Abilities" dictates WHAT powers they have, also make the powers at least MATCH what supernatural being your character is. If your character is say... a stone golem for example then he might be a little slow, but incredibly powerful.))
((Also... WEAKNESSES ARE MANDATORY FOR A CHARACTER! Without any weaknesses your character will be able to pretty much take on any threat thrown at him. In other words a near perfect character. Granted giving your character a disability can be considered a weakness of sorts, it's still not an actual listed weakness. For example Werewolves are weak to silver. Normally a werewolf would be incredibly resistant to injuries except injuries created by silver (like a silver bullet) which could really weaken a werewolf and cause the wound to take longer to heal. When making a character make them balanced. A perfect character in a metaphorical sense is a character with flaws. Nobody is perfect, and I do mean nobody. Also..))
((THE TITLE OF THE RP SAYS WE ARE NO LONGER ACCEPTING! So until my fellow Co-owner says otherwise we are not accepting anyone. I may be a CO-Owner of the RP, but I still prefer to have my fellow co-owner CPRox's opinion on things.))
((I'm sorry if I sounded harsh and mean, but I just felt like I had to throw all that out.))
((First, webba to you SUSTIC! Thank you for clearing up we aren't accepting anymore, as I was a bit confused over that. Also, it's been a while since CPRox100 came on. I hope all is well with her.))
I usually have a neutral/undecided standpoint on things. And yes, I am part Swiss.
(( Even Pinkie is crying
I usually have a neutral/undecided standpoint on things. And yes, I am part Swiss.
Moderators. Please don't close this if you are considering that idea. We are waiting for the chosen one to return.
(( Holy mother of necromancer... ))
I usually have a neutral/undecided standpoint on things. And yes, I am part Swiss.