((Typically, thoughts are italics, yes. But that tends to take time. If you want to, use italics. if not, don't.
I dunno. It's still really not that descriptive. Other peoples' are very long, but yours has maybe two lines over the start. Others have a good 6 or so. Also, you haven't defined your characters' weapons abilities.))
Sorry, it's just that I have impeccable laziness. Or was it chronic laziness? I don't know. I'm too lazy to figure out. XD
Name: Will Cohen
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral, (as of yet)
Weapon, armor: Leather armor with some steel plating. It is light enough for him to get around easily in battle, but still protective. Prefers using two stone or steel simitars as a weapon, with a leather and a gem encrusted hilt. One gem gives off a healing aura, and the other is just for looks.
Personality: Hard for him to trust people, kind, frightful. Not much of a fighter, prefers to craft or build. Very curious. In battle he is often frightened, but has strong determination. Otherwise he is quite and prefers not to get involved. Prefers to solve things peaceful, a concept he tries to spread to Creepers.
Appearance: Fairly tall with shortish brown hair and amber eyes. He is also quite skinny and isn't the most muscular person. Has pale skin, and a few freckles on his cheeks. His hair and fingernails are slightly dirty.
Other: Interested in creepers, because of their strange behavior and cunning. Because of their fairly advanced intelligence, he believes that friendly tries are not impossible.
That laziness thing?
LOL HAHAHAH NO.
haha! I knew you had it in you. Accepted.
((Yay! But I gotta go to sleep now. *Looks at the 'haha! I knew you had in you'* Well I have Roleplayed on other forums you know... Anyway, see ya later.))
((lol k bye. I'm tired too... I may work on 100 Days a little, then sleep...))
"Cool. I guess I'll see you... Sometime, I guess. Night." Alex said. And he fell asleep.
((I'm gonna go too, guys... Soz. I'm just really tired, I was hanging out with my girlfriends today.))
((Same. I just thought that maybe... This forum could use it.))
Name: just-in chase
Age: 18
Gender: male
Alignment: bad
Weapon, Armor: a iron sword with diamond core, full iron armour and 64 arrows (but no bow), iron gloves
Personality: smart, kind, silent, can be trusted
Appearance: blue eyes, brown short hair, lots of muccles. and 7feet tall, "normal" white skin color.
Other: got a neclase that is supposed to bring luck and stop bleeding
A forum roleplay? I LOVE forum roleplays! It's not too late to join, is it?
Name: Luso Clemmings
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon, armor: Armed with nothing but a Wooden sword and a pickaxe. He has some leather on him, but nothing in the manner of actual weapons yet.
Personality: He's constantly edgy, twitchy, nervious. You can easily tell he hasn't slept in a long time.
Appearance: Dirty, with tattered clothes, darkened in some places. Hair seems singed off, or maybe covered in dirt. You can't really tell.
Other: His current abode is a small shack made of dirt, set at the side of a mountain. (Which mountain? YOU DECIDE!)
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I need to go here more often, considering how much I actually play this.
Currently working on making a server. kcoolwgatdubmoicjambleberry
(I love writing and RolePlaying, so let me in or imma cut you up. Or I'll go get my creeper guns, shove you on the ground, put the gun to your head and go all CREEPAH on your ass! Sorreh, Im just over excited. I've read up to the bit where you finish explaining about everything, so I'll reread after applying.)
Name: Ryan Black (Black would be such a cool last name!)
Age: 14
Gender: Boy
Alignment: Good
Weapon, Armor: A white Wooden Staff with a long golden zig-zag down the middle (that glows in the dark :biggrin.gif:) with a white sphere attached to the end that can be channeled by certain people to give special abilities eg. Zapping people, Healing, I dunno.....(If that's godmodding, just tell me.). For clothes, he has an airy white shirt with a golden trim on the edges and collar. For pants he has White long pants with a golden stripe down the side. When in extreme trouble the gold trim on everything with shine extremely badly and help the needy eg. If someone is about to die, I may be there in time. (I kind of want him to get a basic form of Magic, maybe when you introduce Notchism I could be like a Monk xD) Here's a really bad doodle from paint I made!
(AN EXTREMELY CRUDE DOODLE IN PAINT)
EDIT: I just realised how much I look like a sleepy wizard. Oh well, I wont look like that for a LONG time, plus by then something like that should be of use. Maybe I could turn into a monk or something xD
Personality: Ryan is very smart, as he is the top of his class and he can observe his surroundings well. He is very shy and does not like to make friends or trust most people usually, as he was shunned his whole life and never had many friends. He falls in love easily, and is sometimes short-tempered. He also holds a grudge.
Appearance: A little bit on the chubby side, 6'1". Kind of Nerdy but not big goofy grin, braces, glasses and acne Nerdy. He has medium length dark brown wavy hair. He is pale.(Hey, not everyone can be hunky he-men! I hate going to RP's where everyone is super buff and hot. It just isn't really that good.)
Other: Although friendly, Ryan has had trouble making friends as the ones he has had in the past always betrayed him or used him. He had a bad childhood, although he was an overacheiver and a straight A' student. Ryan is very techy (Redstone Electric Staff FTW) but also wishes he could unlock the hidden secrets of magic.
Night has fallen. A fear starts to draw over me and I feel the need to isolate my self, perhaps to be safe. I quickly take the sticks from my pocket and jam them into a nearby tree, using them as a sort of steps. I climb up, breaking them after each step. I manage to get on top of the tree and start harvesting some more sticks. ~They seem very durable and useful.~As I reach the top, I see a light in the distance...~A cave? I'll check it out later. Don't want to risk anything. I have a bad feeling.~
Name: Xequos
Age: 12
Gender: Male creeper
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon, Armor: Weird club made out of his parents bones, excelent fighting skills, doesn't use armor because he has scales all over his body.
Personality: A depressed orphaned mutated creeper kid without the abillity to explode, with the abillity to speek every language.
Appearance: Greenish yellow with red spots, horrible depressed smile (even more depressed then an average creeper), Two arms, two legs, slightly resmebels a freakishly mutated human.
Other: His parents died when he was young, one was a creeper, the other was a human, he made a club out of their bones and he can't be seperated from it.
After a couple minutes of walking, fighting off zombies and creepers, and a little bit of harvesting, I finally came across a clearing in the forest. Further west was just another mountain, so far uninhabited, just a ways off south was a modest little pond, while north was Alex Blake's cave. We're sort of in a rivalry at the moment, but we're pretty close friends anyways. Usually just a couple friendly battles here and there. Anyways, I decided to go over to the cave, see if Alex was in for a little brawl. I was about halfway there when I heard something. It wasn't a mob, or at least not from what I could tell. It was something in a tree. I investigated the trunk of the tree I suspected, and noticed it had sticks in it, forcefully lodged through the skin of the poor plant. This could only be a human's work.
"Alex.. Is that you up there?" I shouted at the leaves swaying along the branches. This was a particularly thick tree, so my vision was heavily obscured, to the point where I only made out a shred of cloth.
Someone shouts from below and I jump, shaken out of my skin. He asks for someone named Alex.
"Alex? Who is this Alex you speak of? I am Daniel, thrown into this world after hitting my head on a table. Who are you and where is this!?"
I peek through the leaves, attempting to see this speaker.
Wait a minute, you haven't submitted a bio(NVM. Saw it. DId zuned accept you?). Do so and wait for zuned to come on.
( I don't know if Zuned did, but Deterence said I could work my way in.. I could stop if I need to.)
A mere moment after I speak, I hear whoever it is jump from fright in the branches. I could only barely keep in a laugh. With as much seriousness as I could gather up at that point in time, I promptly responded. " My name's Matthew. We're in... I don't know where we are or why. All I do know is this isn't Earth. Could you come down, I don't see any mobs around." I stabbed my sword into the ground and leaned against it, waiting for Daniel to reveal himself.
((seemed like he was fine, just seemed like Zuned missed him, he submitted last night. but to be fair we should probably wait for the main story teller to get back))
Yeah. I was like...should we continue?
Screw it, I'll post it anyway. It'll apply when he gets back I guess. (I believe Qualien's bio seems valid. Still have to wait for zuned.)
The person tells me his name, Mathew. I poke my head out of the leaves and see him. I jump down, rolling to avoid breaking anything.
"Mobs? Not Earth? What are you talking about?"
I'm confused, still unsure of this stranger. Still, he seems alright. I eye his sword warily.
(Is it still night?)
Weapon, Armor: An Ivory Bow with a gold insert at the grip, Steel-Headed arrows with redstone inserts, you can see them fly in the dark, and Iron armor with cloth joints for easy movement and swiftness. There is a special holster on the backplate of the armor for holding the bow when not in use. Power: Skilled at 1 on 1 combat, can run for a very long time.
Personality: Caring and Compassionate, not too social, and loyal. Is mostly serious, but can lighten up amongst friends. Shy around strangers. Sense of adventure.
Appearance: Tall, about 6 feet, long legs, deep brown hair that falls straight over his forehead, eyes that alternate between Brown and Green, skinny. Deep voice that can seem intimidating at times. Small feet, and glasses.
Small scar on top right of the forehead from accident in Elementary-School. (almost unnoticeable)
Other: Favors house music, especially Deadmau5 (does that score me brownie points? I saw your avatar :biggrin.gif:) Likes to sleep in late (like, VERY late.) has a fondness for creepers, hates the killing of them. Has a phobia of gigantic spiders. LOVES CHEESECAKE.
Dude. Make a great weapon/armor combo! You'll see mine in a sec. It's beastly.
Also, you may only have ONE power.
Can we get a female character? Chibi, a female, please? Only one character though. I will have to be the female if necessary, so I will refrain from posting my bio for a little.
Um...Yeah. Posted suggestion on how to change the weapon description.
As for the one power, you mean the arrows? How about now? Does it count as one?
Yes, I think the weapon armor combo is good.
YOU LIED. I did not see yours in a sec because you are refraining from posting it! RAWRZ.
Name: Miki Fujita (of coarse its not mi real name)
Age: 14 (i cant tell you anything real lol ill just use this stuff)
Gender: female
Alignment: good
Weapon, Armor: bow, armor, hmmm... iron? (powers in weapons, can daze people with her bow, giving them a strong head ache, armor, she can transform into a different person ( who remains a mystery)
Personality: can get hyper at times and cute, shy, tomboyish, sensitive, she likes making friends (although it takes a while to earn her trust) ninja-like (she is not homo)
Appearance: dark brown hair, chestnut eyes, ( hair is shoulder length and bangs are natural and go to eyebrows) pink cheeks and slightly pale, thin, petite, (5,1) weight: 101, asian (which explains the eyes) wears: ninja clothes (as you can tell in the picture http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2361446/ , she also wears boy clothes, they're more comforable, or atleast bigger clothes)
Other: she will eat anything as long as she doesnt get fat, she follows people around because shes clueless, shes smart but hides it, she has a secret, she cries alot because she's an orphan and no one seems to like her.
ya but idk wat to put o-o'' what kind of powers would miki have? cuteness? o-o''
Um...The bow could...do something special. Dunno, shine light? Be able to track target?
Iron Armor....I don't know. Can make Miki shrink? Iron is a bit hard to get stuff from.
Hmmm, Im not sure. I've played some roles where I have been magical, and I found it rather interesting and entertaining for everyone. Like I said in Ryan's bio, although he's really tech-y, he wants to learn the ancient secrets to magic. I doubt he'll get the chance unless the story bends a bit, but, still.....
Im reading 100 Days to Mine, really liking it : )
EDIT: I guess if I had to give Ryan a power i'd actually make the staff zap people WITHOUT the whole redstone current. It would be kinda cool, showing that even though he wants magic so badly, he unknowingly already has a bit. And if that if giving a wooden rod the magical ability to zap people is godmodding, having a diamond button that turns you into a completely diamond-protected invincible warrior for 5 minutes defenitely is :biggrin.gif:
((Yay! But I gotta go to sleep now. *Looks at the 'haha! I knew you had in you'* Well I have Roleplayed on other forums you know... Anyway, see ya later.))
"Cool. I guess I'll see you... Sometime, I guess. Night." Alex said. And he fell asleep.
((I'm gonna go too, guys... Soz. I'm just really tired, I was hanging out with my girlfriends today.))
((Same. I just thought that maybe... This forum could use it.))
I'm wrote a story. You should read it.
100 Days to Mine
Already read it? Try the sequel,
Vagrants of the Mine
Finished that? Check the next one,
Resurrection of the Mine
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Name: just-in chase
Age: 18
Gender: male
Alignment: bad
Weapon, Armor: a iron sword with diamond core, full iron armour and 64 arrows (but no bow), iron gloves
Personality: smart, kind, silent, can be trusted
Appearance: blue eyes, brown short hair, lots of muccles. and 7feet tall, "normal" white skin color.
Other: got a neclase that is supposed to bring luck and stop bleeding
items in backpac: iron pickaxe, 64 arrows.
Name: Luso Clemmings
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon, armor: Armed with nothing but a Wooden sword and a pickaxe. He has some leather on him, but nothing in the manner of actual weapons yet.
Personality: He's constantly edgy, twitchy, nervious. You can easily tell he hasn't slept in a long time.
Appearance: Dirty, with tattered clothes, darkened in some places. Hair seems singed off, or maybe covered in dirt. You can't really tell.
Other: His current abode is a small shack made of dirt, set at the side of a mountain. (Which mountain? YOU DECIDE!)
Currently working on making a server. kcoolwgatdubmoicjambleberry
Name: Ryan Black (Black would be such a cool last name!)
Age: 14
Gender: Boy
Alignment: Good
Weapon, Armor: A white Wooden Staff with a long golden zig-zag down the middle (that glows in the dark :biggrin.gif:) with a white sphere attached to the end that can be channeled by certain people to give special abilities eg. Zapping people, Healing, I dunno.....(If that's godmodding, just tell me.). For clothes, he has an airy white shirt with a golden trim on the edges and collar. For pants he has White long pants with a golden stripe down the side. When in extreme trouble the gold trim on everything with shine extremely badly and help the needy eg. If someone is about to die, I may be there in time. (I kind of want him to get a basic form of Magic, maybe when you introduce Notchism I could be like a Monk xD) Here's a really bad doodle from paint I made!
(AN EXTREMELY CRUDE DOODLE IN PAINT)
EDIT: I just realised how much I look like a sleepy wizard. Oh well, I wont look like that for a LONG time, plus by then something like that should be of use. Maybe I could turn into a monk or something xD
Personality: Ryan is very smart, as he is the top of his class and he can observe his surroundings well. He is very shy and does not like to make friends or trust most people usually, as he was shunned his whole life and never had many friends. He falls in love easily, and is sometimes short-tempered. He also holds a grudge.
Appearance: A little bit on the chubby side, 6'1". Kind of Nerdy but not big goofy grin, braces, glasses and acne Nerdy. He has medium length dark brown wavy hair. He is pale.(Hey, not everyone can be hunky he-men! I hate going to RP's where everyone is super buff and hot. It just isn't really that good.)
Other: Although friendly, Ryan has had trouble making friends as the ones he has had in the past always betrayed him or used him. He had a bad childhood, although he was an overacheiver and a straight A' student. Ryan is very techy (Redstone Electric Staff FTW) but also wishes he could unlock the hidden secrets of magic.
Night has fallen. A fear starts to draw over me and I feel the need to isolate my self, perhaps to be safe. I quickly take the sticks from my pocket and jam them into a nearby tree, using them as a sort of steps. I climb up, breaking them after each step. I manage to get on top of the tree and start harvesting some more sticks. ~They seem very durable and useful.~As I reach the top, I see a light in the distance...~A cave? I'll check it out later. Don't want to risk anything. I have a bad feeling.~
Age: 12
Gender: Male creeper
Alignment: Neutral
Weapon, Armor: Weird club made out of his parents bones, excelent fighting skills, doesn't use armor because he has scales all over his body.
Personality: A depressed orphaned mutated creeper kid without the abillity to explode, with the abillity to speek every language.
Appearance: Greenish yellow with red spots, horrible depressed smile (even more depressed then an average creeper), Two arms, two legs, slightly resmebels a freakishly mutated human.
Other: His parents died when he was young, one was a creeper, the other was a human, he made a club out of their bones and he can't be seperated from it.
"Alex.. Is that you up there?" I shouted at the leaves swaying along the branches. This was a particularly thick tree, so my vision was heavily obscured, to the point where I only made out a shred of cloth.
"Alex? Who is this Alex you speak of? I am Daniel, thrown into this world after hitting my head on a table. Who are you and where is this!?"
I peek through the leaves, attempting to see this speaker.
Wait a minute,
you haven't submitted a bio(NVM. Saw it. DId zuned accept you?). Do so and wait for zuned to come on.A mere moment after I speak, I hear whoever it is jump from fright in the branches. I could only barely keep in a laugh. With as much seriousness as I could gather up at that point in time, I promptly responded. " My name's Matthew. We're in... I don't know where we are or why. All I do know is this isn't Earth. Could you come down, I don't see any mobs around." I stabbed my sword into the ground and leaned against it, waiting for Daniel to reveal himself.
Screw it, I'll post it anyway. It'll apply when he gets back I guess. (I believe Qualien's bio seems valid. Still have to wait for zuned.)
The person tells me his name, Mathew. I poke my head out of the leaves and see him. I jump down, rolling to avoid breaking anything.
"Mobs? Not Earth? What are you talking about?"
I'm confused, still unsure of this stranger. Still, he seems alright. I eye his sword warily.
(Is it still night?)
Name: Paul Stevenson
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Alignment: Good
Weapon, Armor: An Ivory Bow with a gold insert at the grip, Steel-Headed arrows with redstone inserts, you can see them fly in the dark, and Iron armor with cloth joints for easy movement and swiftness. There is a special holster on the backplate of the armor for holding the bow when not in use. Power: Skilled at 1 on 1 combat, can run for a very long time.
Personality: Caring and Compassionate, not too social, and loyal. Is mostly serious, but can lighten up amongst friends. Shy around strangers. Sense of adventure.
Appearance: Tall, about 6 feet, long legs, deep brown hair that falls straight over his forehead, eyes that alternate between Brown and Green, skinny. Deep voice that can seem intimidating at times. Small feet, and glasses.
Small scar on top right of the forehead from accident in Elementary-School. (almost unnoticeable)
Other: Favors house music, especially Deadmau5 (does that score me brownie points? I saw your avatar :biggrin.gif:) Likes to sleep in late (like, VERY late.) has a fondness for creepers, hates the killing of them. Has a phobia of gigantic spiders. LOVES CHEESECAKE.
Name: Miki Fujita (of coarse its not mi real name)
Age: 14 (i cant tell you anything real lol ill just use this stuff)
Gender: female
Alignment: good
Weapon, Armor: bow, armor, hmmm... iron? (powers in weapons, can daze people with her bow, giving them a strong head ache, armor, she can transform into a different person ( who remains a mystery)
Personality: can get hyper at times and cute, shy, tomboyish, sensitive, she likes making friends (although it takes a while to earn her trust) ninja-like (she is not homo)
Appearance: dark brown hair, chestnut eyes, ( hair is shoulder length and bangs are natural and go to eyebrows) pink cheeks and slightly pale, thin, petite, (5,1) weight: 101, asian (which explains the eyes) wears: ninja clothes (as you can tell in the picture http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2361446/ , she also wears boy clothes, they're more comforable, or atleast bigger clothes)
Other: she will eat anything as long as she doesnt get fat, she follows people around because shes clueless, shes smart but hides it, she has a secret, she cries alot because she's an orphan and no one seems to like her.
Um...The bow could...do something special. Dunno, shine light? Be able to track target?
Iron Armor....I don't know. Can make Miki shrink? Iron is a bit hard to get stuff from.
Im reading 100 Days to Mine, really liking it : )
EDIT: I guess if I had to give Ryan a power i'd actually make the staff zap people WITHOUT the whole redstone current. It would be kinda cool, showing that even though he wants magic so badly, he unknowingly already has a bit. And if that if giving a wooden rod the magical ability to zap people is godmodding, having a diamond button that turns you into a completely diamond-protected invincible warrior for 5 minutes defenitely is :biggrin.gif:
Exactly: 3 pages and only a few actions. :biggrin.gif:
Edit: He's on. -Fan boy scream? No. Cause that would be homo. Which I am not.-
HELL YES. He posted. I guessed right because he mentioned that he was in EST(?) time and was on vacation. :biggrin.gif: