Write a Short Description of Your Character: Nymn is pretty short and skinny. This helps her to fly better. She has long, golden hair, and lively blue eyes. Nymn was born and raised in a wealthy family. She's never had trouble making friends. Her life was pretty boring and uneventful, but she never saw it that way. Nymn has always been precautions, but will try many things even if she fails horribly at it. Nymn is very kind and compassionate and cares about everyone. Her family lived in a house isolated from the little town they lived nearby. Her family has a history to have magical powers, and that is why Nymn does. Nymn could always talk to animals, but she only recently had found her water ability and, therefore, isn't very skilled in it. Nymn can cheer anyone up and will trust you if you trust her. She will defend herself but will never attack for no reason.
Your Character's Name: Nymn
Your Character's Age: 16
Your Character's Race: Feil
Your Character's Class: Mage- Nymn uses magic. She has a staff she doesn't hold, but is strapped to her back that gives her more energy and makes her attacks better. Nymn can communicate with animals, but doesn't like to use them as a weapon. She can make water appear and move it without touching it. She uses this to her advantage. She can't drink water she makes because it is undrinkable. In battle, Nymn can't drown her enemy, but she can use the water like a blade. When the battle is over, the water dissapears. She doesn't know it yet, but she can heal wounds, but not illnesses. This process takes a very long time, and uses a lot of energy.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: She uses many sophisticated words because she was raised in a wealthy family. She can read, but not write.
Can Your Character Build: No, but she's very curious and will try doing things.
Can Your Character Farm: No, but she's very curious and will try doing things.
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have: She has very powerful attacks. She has fast reaction time. She weighs very little and does not have to eat much. She is trustworthy. No food is bland to her.
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: She will never kill a person. She isn't very strong, so she doesn't do well with an actual weapon. She has bad aim when it comes to using bows. Without her staff, her attacks are not very powerful. When she's done fighting, she feels very drained. She cares about others too much.
Anything You Want To Add: To the story? I like it the way it is.
Umm well, i dont know about the other two but i think there are a couple of things you might want to review.
First would be the "class" "She can communicate with animals but doesnt like to use them as a weapon? So are you stating that you can control animals or do you need to pursuade them to attack? Either way i think it would be better to have some clarification.
Second i think would be the "Can your character read, write or speak proficiently" Umm i think you misunderstood,we also need to know what languages you can speak. Not just whether you can speak or not. So maybe some more clarification?
Last would be the "Can your character farm/and the Can your character Build" secitons. Those i think you need to clarify, like if she doesnt farm then why? the "she's curious to do things seems iffy to me. Maybe stating that she is an active learner? somthing like that?
Other than that it seems alright. Again Im not going to accept/deny you without the consent of @Qalien and @StrykDem. (unless cobra intervenes of course since it's his game."
IRL Age: 11 (I have been mistaken as a 15 year old before)
Character Description: He comes from the winter arctic areas and usually wears a black cloak. His iron sword is sheathed behind him, and is unique due to the fact he is left-handed.
He is calm and tends to think before he acts, which is both a liability and an asset.
He has a glove on his right hand, since his right hand is covered in his own blood since when he was younger he failed to execute
his ranged sword attack, thus killing his enemies wh had killed his friend. However Zero also injured himself and kept the blood on his hand as a reminder of his rash attitude and is weakness before the incident.
Your Character's Age:19
Your Character's Race: Human
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Rogue/Warrior (Mainly rogue), who clearly knows how to fight. Only remembers a ranged sword attack, a limited invisibility ability which conceals him in the shadow. He has a black iron sword and several hidden kunai's. He moves slightly faster due to his extreme training in the Snowy Regions. His blade is forged with cold steel and he has ice powers he does not know about.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: Yes. He speaks English and moderate amounts of Elvish and can fluently speak Daemon (I guess).
Can Your Character Build: To a certain degree.
Can Your Character Farm: Not at all.
Strengths: Cold resistant and prone to act very quickly, after contemplating the situation.
Weakness: Does not show emotion, is very slow to act (During thinking) and is weak to heat.
Anything You Want To Add: Sorry if the post is glitchy, iPad is not the best tool.
IRL Age: 11 (I have been mistaken as a 15 year old before)
Character Description: He comes from the winter arctic areas and usually wears a black cloak. His iron sword is sheathed behind him, and is unique due to the fact he is left-handed.
He is calm and tends to think before he acts, which is both a liability and an asset.
Your Character's Age:13
Your Character's Race: Human
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Rogue/Ninja, clearly knows how to fight. Only remembers a ranged sword attack. He has a black iron sword and several hidden kunai's.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: Yes. He speaks English and Chinese.
Can Your Character Build: To a certain degree.
Can Your Character Farm: Not at all.
Strengths: Cold resistant and prone to act very quickly, after contemplating the situation.
Weakness: Does not show emotion, is very slow to act (During thinking) and is weak to heat.
Anything You Want To Add: Sorry if the post is glitchy, iPad is not the best tool.
I think it's good, there's just one thing i think you'd need to re-check. The "Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently it's asking what languages in the game that you can speak; For example: Elvin, English (for human), Dwarish, ect.). Just fix that and I think your good to go! I'll check to make sure that @Qualien and @StrykDem agree as well.
Description: Quiet, but when talked to he may get carried away with the conversation. Usually maintains a neutral expression on his face, rarely changing. He has semi-long black hair, parted in the middle to keep his face free of obstruction and slightly spiked look to it. He has two-tone eyes, one of his eyes is gold and the other is silver. He wears an eyepatch covering his silver eye ( which is on the right. ) and talks in a monotone quiet tone. He wears a dark black long coat, and dark color schemed clothing, including his magician hat which resembles a witch's hat.
Name: Chrome EverBurn ↑
Age: 19 Years Old
Gender: Male
Race: Fyre
Class: Magician
Ability: Manipulating his eternal flame into flaming discs, which he can then launch at his targets like buzz-saws. He can also use his flames to send heat-waves into a persons body, making their blood boil enough to actually burn through the veins, only effective on humans and he personally does not like using this skill.
Spells: Astaroths Rage ◊ - Summons his floating buzzsaw flames. Gressils Temptation □ - Sends a heatwave into a humans body, causing their blood to boil. Leviathans Envy ● - Forces an uncontrollable blood-lust upon the target
Read: Human, Elven, and Dwarven
Build: Yes, Chrome always helped his family out when they needed help with expanding their house.
Farm: No, Chrome never farmed, only built.
Strengths: Chrome usually thinks out strategies before attacking and is a very fast attacker with his power, his strengths are his intelligence and attack speed.
Weaknesses: Chrome has a great fear of loudness, when a noise is loud enough it can cause him to lose his focus and if attacking screw up the attack and harm himself. Ever since the incident, he has grown this fear of noise. Chrome also fears water and has a fatal physical weakness to it as well, being a Fyre. He also lacks in physical strength and stamina, he usually moves around floating using his flame.
Anything You Want To Add: Chrome will usually talk in a rude way, even if he isn't doing it intentionally.
I think it's good, there's just one thing i think you'd need to re-check. The "Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently it's asking what languages in the game that you can speak; For example: Elvin, English (for human), Dwarish, ect.). Just fix that and I think your good to go! I'll check to make sure that @Qualien and @StrykDem agree as well.
All right thanks for that advice. I have fixed that up now. :biggrin.gif:
I also added some details.
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Kyro came from a small, distant village, off the cost of a large island. He moved to the main island looking for a job, And he got it. Kyro is very slender, but not very tall. He has dusted peasent garments that cover his chest and most of his arms. His bottoms are normally winter sweatpants that his parents had knitted themselves. Kyro has shy, hazel eyes, accompanioned by Long, Dark brown hair flowing down his back. He has a long scar extending from his right eyebrow down to his left cheek. It is unknown how he got the scar, but idealy, he got it accidentaly.
Your Character's Name: My character`s name is Kyro.
Your Character's Age: Kyro has grown to be 15.
Your Character's Race: Kyro is seemingly human, although a few strange happenings appeared during his childhood.
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Kyro is a Warrior, even though he has never had to resort to deadly force.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: Yes, Kyro payed very much attention in class, Even when his friends were distracting him constantly. He speaks with great grammar, studdering at some times. He reads very well, reading at least a book a day. He also writes very well, Having written a few books, not published yet. He reads, speaks and writes in English and Elven.
Can Your Character Build: Kyro is not a very good builder, but he isn`t awful. The best thing he has built is a poorly built wooden mansion, which burned down soon after. Just, don`t hire him for a construction worker job.
Can Your Character Farm: Living on an island for most of his life has taught him how to farm very well, as they had limited rescources there. He normally farms things such as Wheat, Carrots and Turnips.
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have: Kyro has the strength of Agility. He is a very agile, nimble person, who commonly wins races.
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: Kyro is not a very strong person, even though he is a very well trained Warrior. his brains quickly defeat his bron. He doesn`t enjoy fights, but will attack if he is forced to.
Anything You Want To Add: I have not roleplayed before, Simply because my applications are never answered. So i am sorry if i am not very good.
All right thanks for that! I have fixed that up now. :biggrin.gif:
Alright! I checked it over and it looks as if your good to go! So i think its safe to say you can start posting in the other forum, (check link on the first page) Dont forget to check the back-story and ect. before you start and it may be a good idea to skim through whats happened already to give yourself an idea of whats going on/how to start! Okays! Welcome
Alright! I checked it over and it looks as if your good to go! So i think its safe to say you can start posting in the other forum, (check link on the first page) Dont forget to check the back-story and ect. before you start and it may be a good idea to skim through whats happened already to give yourself an idea of whats going on/how to start! Okays! Welcome
Tyvm, but I will start posting in Monday since I'm camping
Arrrghh! So many people want to join, but there aren't enough spaces! Basically none of you have acceptable profiles(In my opinion..) and would like to offer some advice to help improve your profiles into acceptable ones. At this point, I will PM people about improvements and modifications that have not been stated here, as to avoid excessive posting.
Sorry, your secret section is in another castle!
First off, this one is REGARDING MAGICAL POWERS: For those who's characters are mages, in your application, add a Spells: section to clarify what exactly your character can cast. Please, only three spells! While I'm on the topic of magic, other classes may use magic, but they are limited to two weak spells. In many cases, magic for other classes will NOT be allowed!
This isn't the section you're looking for!
Second, LANGUAGES AND THOUGHTS: The three languages(Only three!(Some exceptions may occur.)) are English, Dwarven, and Elven. These languages are signified with BOLD, UNDERLINES, and STRIKES respectively. If you wish to create a new language, please include how it will be told from the other languages(NO COLORINGS PLEASE!).(By the way, I don't want to see EVERY character to suddenly know all three main languages.) Thoughts would be placed in italics. Simple enough, yes?
Excuse me, this isn't the place. Keep looking..
Third is CHARACTER AGE: I am stressing on this topic because in a previous RP I was in, this was an actual issue! Since most role plays have a more specific character age frequency, ages on the extremes will most likely be left out of certain occurrences, such as romantic developments. Let's take an example from the RP I was referring to earlier. One character(Who was a female.) was fifteen years old. On the other hand, there was a character(Male) who was twenty eight years old. The male character wanted a relationship with the female, but was obviously rejected and called a pedophile, for reasons I REALLY shouldn't have to explain. In many of the new applications, I see much younger characters than the standard. Now I'm only really saying this now to attempt to avoid conflict in the future, but are you sure you wish to be younger than sixteen? You will certainly miss out on advantages an older character would have, such as a greater education, or a relationship. And they definitely won't be trained in combat and such!
Keep looking.. It might be the next one!
Fourth is CLASSES IN GENERAL: When I look through the newer applications, all I see are rogues! Come on, we need some diversity here! I don't give a crap if you're usually a rogue in other role plays, I want to see some fighters! Classes are more or less a description of how your character fights, and if we have everybody just kind of hiding in the shadows, then fights would be boring and indifferent every time! While on this topic, I would like to declare that any characters that have NOT been accepted have the word "rogue" in their class section will NOT be accepted! If you don't like that, suck it up or leave. I can honestly care less, especially since I don't know you. Mixing of classes is allowed, but only two at a time, and one must be dominant to the other. For instance, my character is mainly a rogue, but may use the weapons of a ranger from time to time.Congratulations on finding this section! If you have read the entire post through and through, I would like for you to add an arrow to your character's name.
Fifth is STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Many of your applications are not dedicated towards the strengths and weaknesses of your characters. If you look at mine, I gave nice long sentences describing my assets and liabilities, and then summed them up with single descriptive words. Mostly what I see in these sections are what your character doesn't like, and maybe a few relevant words upon the subject. NOT EVERYBODY IS TRAINED IN THE ART OF COMBAT, AND WON'T AUTOMATICALLY BE ABLE TO USE WEAPONS PROFICIENTLY. THE TWO MAIN CLASSES WHICH REQUIRE A CHARACTER TO BE TRAINED IN THE USAGE OF THEIR WEAPONS WOULD BE RANGERS AND MAGES.(By the way, I would highlight the entire post to check for hidden sections! c;<) I am going to include building and farming in this one, mostly because those can be depicted as strengths. If you are proficient in one of these, you would obviously suck at the other one. Or you suck at both. There will be no jack of all trades in this role play, if I can help it. By the way, your personality can also fit into this section. Such as whether or not you are shy, or if you respond negatively to certain things, etc etc.
What are you doing down here? Didn't you see it earlier?
Sixth and lastly is RACES: This first part regarding humans. Humans are the vanilla race, weakest of them all. They have no exclusive strengths or advantages over the other races. They have to rely solely on technology and/or magic to survive. If you wish to be superbly proficient in a certain class, you should look through the descriptions of the races and choose the one you think would fit your style best.
Sorry Qualien, I was unaware. If you kick me out that is fine, but i was not thinking correctly, though it makes sense to me. As a change my character will only be able to use an invisibility spell which lasts for six seconds and onl works in the shade, and a stun attack with the sword. Sorry for the trouble though.
Sorry Qualien, I was unaware. If you kick me out that is fine, but i was not thinking correctly, though it makes sense to me. As a change my character will only be able to use an invisibility spell which lasts for six seconds and onl works in the shade, and a stun attack with the sword. Sorry for the trouble though.
I wasn't that harsh, was I? I'm not kicking you out. It's just I've dealt with so much in the past I can come off as cold, not so much calculating. Just calm down a little bit. I don't bite too hard...
Well, im not quite sure but do we have 10 people yet? Because of the confusion with DrTyranno I'm not so sure if we do? Qualien? Can you help shed some light?
I read most of this topic and am still confused about whether you guys are still accepting applications or not.
I also have a question regarding the use of new races, I've been playing dungeons and dragons recently and have become fascinated by a race know as "Warforged". They're basically large mechanical constructs made of varying metals and organic matter.
If you guys are still accepting applicants, then I will almost definitely be applying, and if you would allow adding this race, then I would be forever in your debt :laugh.gif:
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Jack moves around alot, so he has no set location, he has brown shaggy hair, dark sharp eyebrows. Pointed ears, similar to an elve's but not that much. Regular nose. And im guessing this is the bio part so. Here are some facts that aren't told. He was born to Christian shepard and a unknown mother. He has a sister that he's never met named Claire.
At 8:15 AM on an unknown date in 2001, two victims of a head-on collision came to Blake's hospital, and Blake operated on the woman, Sarah, at the older man's expense. Sarah's spine was severely crushed, and Blake told her she would never walk again. This bluntness bothered Christian. Sarah's fiance responded superficially upon hearing her condition, and Blake overstepped his professional relationship with Sarah, promising to fix her. He initially believed he failed, but a man he met at a stadium suggested he may not have. Jack tearfully informed Sarah of his failure. She then wiggled her toes, and Jack realized he'd fixed her.Sarah and Blake fell in love, and she toasted Blake as a hero at their wedding rehearsal, but Blake had trouble writing his vows. Christian comforted him, saying he chose his wife correctly, and handing Blake an heirloom watch. Blake ended up improvising his vows during the wedding ceremony, telling Sarah that he didn't fix her - she fixed him, After the wedding Blake and Sarah got on a plane to head to their honeymoon spot. Blake remembers nothing from that point as he wakes up in a small sized crater, with his back of surgical tools next to him.
Your Character's Name: Blake Shepard
Your Character's Age:37
Your Character's Race:Human
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Doctor ( If that's alright). He starts out with a bag of tools used for sugery and injuries.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently:Yes
Can Your Character Build:Small shelters
Can Your Character Farm:no
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have:He is a very
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: He is not a good fighter at all.
Ehh, there's a few problems with your profile. First of all, your character's biography is inconsistent with the timeline. The role play takes place in the medieval times, not the present. Also, I don't exactly understand what's up with the whole switching out Blake for Jack thing. I'm not really going to bother you about your character's age, since he is already in a committed relationship, despite the fact almost nobody other than the characters exist as people. For your class, 'doctor' isn't really acceptable, since that is more of an occupation than a fighting style. In this case, I will assume that Blake is a fighter, unless you have an objection..? You haven't exactly finished everything else. You haven't specified which languages you can read, write and speak in, why you can build "small shelters", and your strengths+weaknesses are nearly completely empty. I would like for you to finish your application, as well as making the adjustments I have asked you to in this post.
@Ravenhawk, Yes, the role play still has space for three more people. I think allowing you as a 'warforged' would be acceptable, but I'll need you to make a description of the race itself, and then I would have to make modifications(slight ones) to balance the race.
@Qualien Thanks for replying :3
Description of the race is scattered throughout my application.
Character Application Form:
IRL Age: Ummm 15?
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Kathar, like all Warforged, was created within a matrix of arcane energy and dwarven ingenuity. The locations of these Forges are hidden but can be usually be found within hollowed mountains and below lakes of magma under the planet’s surface. At a distance, Kathar can be mistaken as a heavily armored knight, but on closer examination, some will notice that the armored plate is infused to her body. Soft yellow eyes shine from the shadow of her helmet-like face, betraying the harsh, sharp features of her metal plating. Most of her body is completely defended by the metallic armor plating, except for her joints and her lower torso. Those that peer into the cracks of her armor plate find a red sinewy material humming with arcane energies that power her body and mind. Her height matches that of a tall man (6’5”) yet her voice is that of young woman.
Your Character's Name: Kathar
Your Character's Age: 10 months since initial construction (A Warforged usually has the personality of a young Human near age 20 upon successful creation)
Your Character's Race: Warforged-Female personality
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)):
Class: Warrior Subclass: Defender
Defenders specialize in the use of shields of varying types and are proficient in heavy amours. They rarely wield any mundane types of weapons in favor of specialized Kite shields, equipped on each arm. These Kite Shields are slender and are armed with a sharp point at the end of the shield. These shields can be used to stab and slash at enemies as well as block the shield’s user.
Can Your Character Read, Write, and Speak Proficiently: Kathar can both read and speak English, but her handwriting is nearly illegible due to her large obstructive hands.
Can Your Character Build: Kathar is a capable architect and engineer. Her strength allows her to move heavy construction materials, and her sharp mind enables her to design effect and sturdy structures.
Can Your Character Farm: Kathar lacks any knowledge of agrarian techniques.
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have: Her mechanical body possesses immense strength and power. This trait is derived from the unique runic markings engraved onto the bodies of each Warforged. Her mind can match that of an educated aristocrat, but her single minded determination restricts her creativity and ingenuity.
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: Being constructed within a Forge rather than born, few can find the ability to trust and befriend a Warforged. Kathar is no exception; she is both aloof and reserved. Kathar also suffered a defect during her creation; she cannot endure the extreme conditions that her brothers and sisters can comfortably live in. As well as suffering from a lack of dexterity from mechanical body.
Anything You Want To Add: She has one critical flaw that I have not added to the application so that that other RPer’s would not try to exploit it. Mods and CraftingCobras may inquire about it and I will PM them it…. Just trying not to take advantage of it ><
EDIT: If you need more information on the race, I'll try to write a specific article dedicated to the race itself.
Umm well, i dont know about the other two but i think there are a couple of things you might want to review.
First would be the "class" "She can communicate with animals but doesnt like to use them as a weapon? So are you stating that you can control animals or do you need to pursuade them to attack? Either way i think it would be better to have some clarification.
Second i think would be the "Can your character read, write or speak proficiently" Umm i think you misunderstood,we also need to know what languages you can speak. Not just whether you can speak or not. So maybe some more clarification?
Last would be the "Can your character farm/and the Can your character Build" secitons. Those i think you need to clarify, like if she doesnt farm then why? the "she's curious to do things seems iffy to me. Maybe stating that she is an active learner? somthing like that?
Other than that it seems alright. Again Im not going to accept/deny you without the consent of @Qalien and @StrykDem. (unless cobra intervenes of course since it's his game."
Your Character's Name: Zero
IRL Age: 11 (I have been mistaken as a 15 year old before)
Character Description: He comes from the winter arctic areas and usually wears a black cloak. His iron sword is sheathed behind him, and is unique due to the fact he is left-handed.
He is calm and tends to think before he acts, which is both a liability and an asset.
He has a glove on his right hand, since his right hand is covered in his own blood since when he was younger he failed to execute
his ranged sword attack, thus killing his enemies wh had killed his friend. However Zero also injured himself and kept the blood on his hand as a reminder of his rash attitude and is weakness before the incident.
Your Character's Age:19
Your Character's Race: Human
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Rogue/Warrior (Mainly rogue), who clearly knows how to fight. Only remembers a ranged sword attack, a limited invisibility ability which conceals him in the shadow. He has a black iron sword and several hidden kunai's. He moves slightly faster due to his extreme training in the Snowy Regions. His blade is forged with cold steel and he has ice powers he does not know about.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: Yes. He speaks English and moderate amounts of Elvish and can fluently speak Daemon (I guess).
Can Your Character Build: To a certain degree.
Can Your Character Farm: Not at all.
Strengths: Cold resistant and prone to act very quickly, after contemplating the situation.
Weakness: Does not show emotion, is very slow to act (During thinking) and is weak to heat.
Anything You Want To Add: Sorry if the post is glitchy, iPad is not the best tool.
I think it's good, there's just one thing i think you'd need to re-check. The "Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently it's asking what languages in the game that you can speak; For example: Elvin, English (for human), Dwarish, ect.). Just fix that and I think your good to go! I'll check to make sure that @Qualien and @StrykDem agree as well.
Description: Quiet, but when talked to he may get carried away with the conversation. Usually maintains a neutral expression on his face, rarely changing. He has semi-long black hair, parted in the middle to keep his face free of obstruction and slightly spiked look to it. He has two-tone eyes, one of his eyes is gold and the other is silver. He wears an eyepatch covering his silver eye ( which is on the right. ) and talks in a monotone quiet tone. He wears a dark black long coat, and dark color schemed clothing, including his magician hat which resembles a witch's hat.
Name: Chrome EverBurn ↑
Age: 19 Years Old
Gender: Male
Race: Fyre
Class: Magician
Ability: Manipulating his eternal flame into flaming discs, which he can then launch at his targets like buzz-saws. He can also use his flames to send heat-waves into a persons body, making their blood boil enough to actually burn through the veins, only effective on humans and he personally does not like using this skill.
Spells:
Astaroths Rage ◊ - Summons his floating buzzsaw flames.
Gressils Temptation □ - Sends a heatwave into a humans body, causing their blood to boil.
Leviathans Envy ● - Forces an uncontrollable blood-lust upon the target
Read: Human,
Elven, and DwarvenBuild: Yes, Chrome always helped his family out when they needed help with expanding their house.
Farm: No, Chrome never farmed, only built.
Strengths: Chrome usually thinks out strategies before attacking and is a very fast attacker with his power, his strengths are his intelligence and attack speed.
Weaknesses: Chrome has a great fear of loudness, when a noise is loud enough it can cause him to lose his focus and if attacking screw up the attack and harm himself. Ever since the incident, he has grown this fear of noise. Chrome also fears water and has a fatal physical weakness to it as well, being a Fyre. He also lacks in physical strength and stamina, he usually moves around floating using his flame.
Anything You Want To Add: Chrome will usually talk in a rude way, even if he isn't doing it intentionally.
All right thanks for that advice. I have fixed that up now. :biggrin.gif:
I also added some details.
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Kyro came from a small, distant village, off the cost of a large island. He moved to the main island looking for a job, And he got it. Kyro is very slender, but not very tall. He has dusted peasent garments that cover his chest and most of his arms. His bottoms are normally winter sweatpants that his parents had knitted themselves. Kyro has shy, hazel eyes, accompanioned by Long, Dark brown hair flowing down his back. He has a long scar extending from his right eyebrow down to his left cheek. It is unknown how he got the scar, but idealy, he got it accidentaly.
Your Character's Name: My character`s name is Kyro.
Your Character's Age: Kyro has grown to be 15.
Your Character's Race: Kyro is seemingly human, although a few strange happenings appeared during his childhood.
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Kyro is a Warrior, even though he has never had to resort to deadly force.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently: Yes, Kyro payed very much attention in class, Even when his friends were distracting him constantly. He speaks with great grammar, studdering at some times. He reads very well, reading at least a book a day. He also writes very well, Having written a few books, not published yet. He reads, speaks and writes in English and Elven.
Can Your Character Build: Kyro is not a very good builder, but he isn`t awful. The best thing he has built is a poorly built wooden mansion, which burned down soon after. Just, don`t hire him for a construction worker job.
Can Your Character Farm: Living on an island for most of his life has taught him how to farm very well, as they had limited rescources there. He normally farms things such as Wheat, Carrots and Turnips.
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have: Kyro has the strength of Agility. He is a very agile, nimble person, who commonly wins races.
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: Kyro is not a very strong person, even though he is a very well trained Warrior. his brains quickly defeat his bron. He doesn`t enjoy fights, but will attack if he is forced to.
Anything You Want To Add: I have not roleplayed before, Simply because my applications are never answered. So i am sorry if i am not very good.
Alright! I checked it over and it looks as if your good to go! So i think its safe to say you can start posting in the other forum, (check link on the first page) Dont forget to check the back-story and ect. before you start and it may be a good idea to skim through whats happened already to give yourself an idea of whats going on/how to start! Okays! Welcome
Tyvm, but I will start posting in Monday since I'm camping
Sorry, your secret section is in another castle!
First off, this one is REGARDING MAGICAL POWERS: For those who's characters are mages, in your application, add a Spells: section to clarify what exactly your character can cast. Please, only three spells! While I'm on the topic of magic, other classes may use magic, but they are limited to two weak spells. In many cases, magic for other classes will NOT be allowed!
This isn't the section you're looking for!
Second,
LANGUAGES AND THOUGHTS: The three languages(Only three!(Some exceptions may occur.)) are English, Dwarven, andElven. These languages are signified with BOLD, UNDERLINES, andSTRIKESrespectively. If you wish to create a new language, please include how it will be told from the other languages(NO COLORINGS PLEASE!).(By the way, I don't want to see EVERY character to suddenly know all three main languages.) Thoughts would be placed in italics. Simple enough, yes?Excuse me, this isn't the place. Keep looking..
Third is CHARACTER AGE: I am stressing on this topic because in a previous RP I was in, this was an actual issue! Since most role plays have a more specific character age frequency, ages on the extremes will most likely be left out of certain occurrences, such as romantic developments. Let's take an example from the RP I was referring to earlier. One character(Who was a female.) was fifteen years old. On the other hand, there was a character(Male) who was twenty eight years old. The male character wanted a relationship with the female, but was obviously rejected and called a pedophile, for reasons I REALLY shouldn't have to explain. In many of the new applications, I see much younger characters than the standard. Now I'm only really saying this now to attempt to avoid conflict in the future, but are you sure you wish to be younger than sixteen? You will certainly miss out on advantages an older character would have, such as a greater education, or a relationship. And they definitely won't be trained in combat and such!
Keep looking.. It might be the next one!
Fourth is CLASSES IN GENERAL: When I look through the newer applications, all I see are rogues! Come on, we need some diversity here! I don't give a crap if you're usually a rogue in other role plays, I want to see some fighters! Classes are more or less a description of how your character fights, and if we have everybody just kind of hiding in the shadows, then fights would be boring and indifferent every time! While on this topic, I would like to declare that any characters that have NOT been accepted have the word "rogue" in their class section will NOT be accepted! If you don't like that, suck it up or leave. I can honestly care less, especially since I don't know you. Mixing of classes is allowed, but only two at a time, and one must be dominant to the other. For instance, my character is mainly a rogue, but may use the weapons of a ranger from time to time.Congratulations on finding this section! If you have read the entire post through and through, I would like for you to add an arrow to your character's name.
Fifth is STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Many of your applications are not dedicated towards the strengths and weaknesses of your characters. If you look at mine, I gave nice long sentences describing my assets and liabilities, and then summed them up with single descriptive words. Mostly what I see in these sections are what your character doesn't like, and maybe a few relevant words upon the subject. NOT EVERYBODY IS TRAINED IN THE ART OF COMBAT, AND WON'T AUTOMATICALLY BE ABLE TO USE WEAPONS PROFICIENTLY. THE TWO MAIN CLASSES WHICH REQUIRE A CHARACTER TO BE TRAINED IN THE USAGE OF THEIR WEAPONS WOULD BE RANGERS AND MAGES.(By the way, I would highlight the entire post to check for hidden sections! c;<) I am going to include building and farming in this one, mostly because those can be depicted as strengths. If you are proficient in one of these, you would obviously suck at the other one. Or you suck at both. There will be no jack of all trades in this role play, if I can help it. By the way, your personality can also fit into this section. Such as whether or not you are shy, or if you respond negatively to certain things, etc etc.
What are you doing down here? Didn't you see it earlier?
Sixth and lastly is RACES: This first part regarding humans. Humans are the vanilla race, weakest of them all. They have no exclusive strengths or advantages over the other races. They have to rely solely on technology and/or magic to survive. If you wish to be superbly proficient in a certain class, you should look through the descriptions of the races and choose the one you think would fit your style best.
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I wasn't that harsh, was I? I'm not kicking you out. It's just I've dealt with so much in the past I can come off as cold, not so much calculating. Just calm down a little bit. I don't bite too hard...
I would say that you can start role playing now. Go ahead, whenever you like!
I also have a question regarding the use of new races, I've been playing dungeons and dragons recently and have become fascinated by a race know as "Warforged". They're basically large mechanical constructs made of varying metals and organic matter.
If you guys are still accepting applicants, then I will almost definitely be applying, and if you would allow adding this race, then I would be forever in your debt :laugh.gif:
Cheers and good luck with the RP!
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Jack moves around alot, so he has no set location, he has brown shaggy hair, dark sharp eyebrows. Pointed ears, similar to an elve's but not that much. Regular nose. And im guessing this is the bio part so. Here are some facts that aren't told. He was born to Christian shepard and a unknown mother. He has a sister that he's never met named Claire.
At 8:15 AM on an unknown date in 2001, two victims of a head-on collision came to Blake's hospital, and Blake operated on the woman, Sarah, at the older man's expense. Sarah's spine was severely crushed, and Blake told her she would never walk again. This bluntness bothered Christian. Sarah's fiance responded superficially upon hearing her condition, and Blake overstepped his professional relationship with Sarah, promising to fix her. He initially believed he failed, but a man he met at a stadium suggested he may not have. Jack tearfully informed Sarah of his failure. She then wiggled her toes, and Jack realized he'd fixed her.Sarah and Blake fell in love, and she toasted Blake as a hero at their wedding rehearsal, but Blake had trouble writing his vows. Christian comforted him, saying he chose his wife correctly, and handing Blake an heirloom watch. Blake ended up improvising his vows during the wedding ceremony, telling Sarah that he didn't fix her - she fixed him, After the wedding Blake and Sarah got on a plane to head to their honeymoon spot. Blake remembers nothing from that point as he wakes up in a small sized crater, with his back of surgical tools next to him.
Your Character's Name: Blake Shepard
Your Character's Age:37
Your Character's Race:Human
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)): Doctor ( If that's alright). He starts out with a bag of tools used for sugery and injuries.
Can Your Character Read, Write, Speak Proficiently:Yes
Can Your Character Build:Small shelters
Can Your Character Farm:no
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have:He is a very
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: He is not a good fighter at all.
Anything You Want To Add:Nop
Ehh, there's a few problems with your profile. First of all, your character's biography is inconsistent with the timeline. The role play takes place in the medieval times, not the present. Also, I don't exactly understand what's up with the whole switching out Blake for Jack thing. I'm not really going to bother you about your character's age, since he is already in a committed relationship, despite the fact almost nobody other than the characters exist as people. For your class, 'doctor' isn't really acceptable, since that is more of an occupation than a fighting style. In this case, I will assume that Blake is a fighter, unless you have an objection..? You haven't exactly finished everything else. You haven't specified which languages you can read, write and speak in, why you can build "small shelters", and your strengths+weaknesses are nearly completely empty. I would like for you to finish your application, as well as making the adjustments I have asked you to in this post.
@Ravenhawk, Yes, the role play still has space for three more people. I think allowing you as a 'warforged' would be acceptable, but I'll need you to make a description of the race itself, and then I would have to make modifications(slight ones) to balance the race.
Description of the race is scattered throughout my application.
Character Application Form:
IRL Age: Ummm 15?
Write a Short Description of Your Character (Where they came from, what they look like. Go into some detail): Kathar, like all Warforged, was created within a matrix of arcane energy and dwarven ingenuity. The locations of these Forges are hidden but can be usually be found within hollowed mountains and below lakes of magma under the planet’s surface. At a distance, Kathar can be mistaken as a heavily armored knight, but on closer examination, some will notice that the armored plate is infused to her body. Soft yellow eyes shine from the shadow of her helmet-like face, betraying the harsh, sharp features of her metal plating. Most of her body is completely defended by the metallic armor plating, except for her joints and her lower torso. Those that peer into the cracks of her armor plate find a red sinewy material humming with arcane energies that power her body and mind. Her height matches that of a tall man (6’5”) yet her voice is that of young woman.
Your Character's Name: Kathar
Your Character's Age: 10 months since initial construction (A Warforged usually has the personality of a young Human near age 20 upon successful creation)
Your Character's Race: Warforged-Female personality
Your Character's Class (In This Case, How Does Your Character Remember To Fight, What Abilities Do They Remember, Or What Weapons They Started Out With (Nothing OP!)):
Class: Warrior Subclass: Defender
Defenders specialize in the use of shields of varying types and are proficient in heavy amours. They rarely wield any mundane types of weapons in favor of specialized Kite shields, equipped on each arm. These Kite Shields are slender and are armed with a sharp point at the end of the shield. These shields can be used to stab and slash at enemies as well as block the shield’s user.
Can Your Character Read, Write, and Speak Proficiently: Kathar can both read and speak English, but her handwriting is nearly illegible due to her large obstructive hands.
Can Your Character Build: Kathar is a capable architect and engineer. Her strength allows her to move heavy construction materials, and her sharp mind enables her to design effect and sturdy structures.
Can Your Character Farm: Kathar lacks any knowledge of agrarian techniques.
What Kind of Strengths Does Your Character Have: Her mechanical body possesses immense strength and power. This trait is derived from the unique runic markings engraved onto the bodies of each Warforged. Her mind can match that of an educated aristocrat, but her single minded determination restricts her creativity and ingenuity.
What Kind of Weaknesses Does Your Character Have: Being constructed within a Forge rather than born, few can find the ability to trust and befriend a Warforged. Kathar is no exception; she is both aloof and reserved. Kathar also suffered a defect during her creation; she cannot endure the extreme conditions that her brothers and sisters can comfortably live in. As well as suffering from a lack of dexterity from mechanical body.
Anything You Want To Add: She has one critical flaw that I have not added to the application so that that other RPer’s would not try to exploit it. Mods and CraftingCobras may inquire about it and I will PM them it…. Just trying not to take advantage of it ><
EDIT: If you need more information on the race, I'll try to write a specific article dedicated to the race itself.