Xavier could not make sense of the chaos happening, "Everyone into the Time Machine!" he yelled to his comrades jumping into his suitcase and setting coordinates for Rent's location, he poked his head out for one last time, "HURRY!!!!"
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"It takes more to critique than to do, and you cannot truly do until you can critique."
Luckily, his suit absorbed most of the damage, dispersing it in a wide circle which obliterated the pavement in a 2 meter radius. Standing up, he flexed his arm, popped the joint back in to place with a pained grunt, and began to sprint the 400 meters to the Time Machine.
One bullet went wide, striking the ground in front of Xarl. The second was deflected by his suit. The third, however, tore through his shoulder, tearing through his muscle. Gritting his teeth, Xarl drew his sub machine gun and sent a storm of bullets toward the humans.
Seth sent a silent cheer through the air when his bullets stopped the martian. But happiness turned back to fear when he fired back. Seth was hit with two bullets in the leg and 3 in the lower stomach. He fell to the ground. He could barely call out help to anyone. " Help," Seth called, his voice slowly fading. After a few more moments he went under into unconciousness.
Name: Adam Pace
Race: Human
Bio: Adam grew up in Australia with his Dad, who was a trained assassin. He taught his son everything he knew. However when he was fourteen, Adam and his Dad were attacked! Adam managed to escape in an escape pod, where he lived by himself for almost two years. In this time Adam learnt alot about technology etc.
Good or Evil: Good
Equipment: Emerald powered laser sword? Diamond blade dagger
Appearance: -Medium length, blue hair
-Olive eyes
-Relatively muscular
-Black pants, grey shirt
(Age- 16) BTW
(RR)
[I wouldn't have accepted it with this equipment, but:
"Nobody fire!" I yelled. "Think about it; you shoot, he shoots, we all go up. Let's just think for a moment, everyone. Now, who are you?" I said, this time to the Martian.
[Since I couldn't really figure out where I was, let's just say I got into the time machine as well.
Also, zambozaxx, Zmax is right, you should not be able to just take something from a character. There must have been some kind of a struggle to get it in the first place. I'll let it pass now, but just don't let it happen again.]
(sorry for not posting in awhile guys but I just bought a new computer and had to get it started up.Plus I had lots of stuff to do because my cuz is flying in)
I jumped into the time machine right when it started powering down.When I came out the other side I was amazed. I then noticed my gun was pulled out and pointing at the Max so I put it back into it's holster."Where in time are we Max?"
Adam was startled when he heard an alarm begin to go off in his escape pod, the one he had been in for 2 years now. He ran over to the control panel and saw that a message was flashing on one of the screens.
APPROACHING PLANET: EARTH
A smile crept up on Adams face. "I'm home baby! Yeah!" The pod bean to shake. Adam fell to the floor and was knocked unconscious. The pod crashed in the middle of some kind of battlefield. (The place where everyone is)
Seth crawled over to a pod that had falled in the battlefield. Guns from the remaining soldiers and martians were flaring. Seth picked up a rock and banged on the door. " Hey! I need some help! you awake"?
"Guys I have some clothes in my pack that we could tear up a little and wear. We will be disguised as homeless men."
I told the group while crouching down and pulling some of my t-shirts and pants out.
**That...that didn't make any sense at all. First off, that second sentence just plain sucked grammatically and morally. Second, I'm a martian! You guys hate me! I have a gun to your head! Third, I'm afraid I'm going to have to leave this RP unless scatmaster comes back, because this whole damn thing is just coming apart.**
And entered the time machine.
Max was startled by the martian entering the Time Machine, he pulled out his small pistol and pointed it at the intruder.
Equipment: Sub-machine gun? Some kind of an assassins knife?
Better?
[I wouldn't have accepted it with this equipment, but:
I will accept it with this change.]
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
[Since I couldn't really figure out where I was, let's just say I got into the time machine as well.
Also, zambozaxx, Zmax is right, you should not be able to just take something from a character. There must have been some kind of a struggle to get it in the first place. I'll let it pass now, but just don't let it happen again.]
Here's a story I'm writing. So yeah.
Silent Raven
I jumped into the time machine right when it started powering down.When I came out the other side I was amazed. I then noticed my gun was pulled out and pointing at the Max so I put it back into it's holster."Where in time are we Max?"
APPROACHING PLANET: EARTH
A smile crept up on Adams face. "I'm home baby! Yeah!" The pod bean to shake. Adam fell to the floor and was knocked unconscious. The pod crashed in the middle of some kind of battlefield. (The place where everyone is)
Seth woke up wounds bleeding, he cringed in pain. " Hey!",he yelled. " I could use some help over here!"
Seth crawled over to a pod that had falled in the battlefield. Guns from the remaining soldiers and martians were flaring. Seth picked up a rock and banged on the door. " Hey! I need some help! you awake"?
I told the group while crouching down and pulling some of my t-shirts and pants out.