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[ I would imagine that trying to get on the side of the Time-Thief to use it would be Evil, it would be the only way to use it, and right now im on way back from disney so I will start to RP when im back]

Name: Maximillion Gristoff
Race: Human
Bio: Max is a very intelligent and focused 23 year old man. At a young age he went to Massachusetts Institute of Technology and got a PHD in "Techno Physics". He later helped invent an portable teleportation device and the time machine. He knows about Rent trying to find the time machine and has followed him to New York to find him and give him both a clue he found and the last time machine.
Good or Evil: Good
Equipment: A Small Revolver, The Portable Teleportation Device (A device he keeps in his backpack) or PTD, the time machine
Appearance: He is about 6,3, dark brown hair, goggles which he keeps on his forehead, and a grey MIT hoodie which he has unzipped.

(RR)

[What does the time machine look like?]

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Name: Maximillion Gristoff
Race: Human
Bio: Max is a very intelligent and focused 23 year old man. At a young age he went to Massachusetts Institute of Technology and got a PHD in "Techno Physics". He later helped invent an portable teleportation device and the time machine. He knows about Rent trying to find the time machine and has followed him to New York to find him and give him both a clue he found and the last time machine.
Good or Evil: Good
Equipment: A Small Revolver, The Portable Teleportation Device (A device he keeps in his backpack) or PTD, the time machine
Appearance: He is about 6,3, dark brown hair, goggles which he keeps on his forehead, and a grey MIT hoodie which he has unzipped.

[What does the time machine look like?]

[The time machine basically is like the TARDIS - bigger on the inside :laugh.gif: . Your app is great. There's just one thing missing that implies that you didn't read the op-through. Read the first post over and edit your app. Thanks.]

<Rent>

"I'm looking for the stolen time machine," I told the man and his angry looking cat, "So I guess that means I'm on the good side. I'm looking for people to help me. Would you help?"

"We're gonna find more people," I told him. "I already found one person. He's at home getting some of his stuff (such as knives (What's with all the weapons?)). I told him to come back here in about half an hour. That's 5 minutes from now."

[Was it the (RR)? I added the (RR). Was that it? I'm confused.]

Once I got to my house I grabbed a few knifes my fanypack to store money and knifes in. I ran to my closet to get my backpack which had a built in cooler. Then I ran to my medium sized refrigerator and got some energy drink's. Then I ran to the airport to meet Rent at the airport.

[The (RR) is just to verify that you've read through the first post. You're accepted now, Zmax1.]

<Rent>

"Well, we won't have to stay here for long. The other guy is coming back soon, and then we're taking the tunnel route to China (In the future, we can go straight to the other side of the Earth :biggrin.gif:)," I told the man. Again, this man had a knife for precautions. It seems that noone wants to step outside without a weapon. *Sigh*

Max was ready to begin his search for rent, finally after the plane ride there, as soon as he left that airport he would begin on his quest to save the world. He was just getting his things from the baggage claim, and to begin his search that could last over weeks, all around the city across time and space, and...

There he was... he was just standing there in the airport and talking to some people, "Excuse me, sir," he said to Rent, "You wouldn't happen to be organizing a team to go searching for the missing time machine that was in the news would you?"

<Rent>

"Um, yes, that's exactly what I'm doing," I said to the man. Maybe he could help as well. "Wait, how did you know that?" I examined the man for a moment.
"OH!" I exclaimed. "You're the guy that invented the time machine in the first place! It's an honour to meet you."

"I do indeed have a means of getting it back, and before anything truly bad happens," I reply, "plus I can't take all the credit for inventing the time machine, most of that honor goes to Dr. Omni." I continue, "You see, The time machine is simply a gateway to another dimension and from there we can time travel, if we were to do it here we could destroy a major city! In said alternate dimension there is a large room, like the TARDIS, with many control panels where we can see all temporal displacements, and that is how we'll find him." He finishs.

"There might be only two time machines, but more than two gateways TO the time machines he said smiling, pulling his suitcase in front of his legs.

[Wow, 3 WHOLE PAGES!!! lol]

"What's that in the case?" I asked him. "If it's another weapon, I may just decide to leave you all behind and look for some other help."

[Woot! We're 2nd in the Fan Art forum!!! Just felt like sharing that with you guys.]

Chris came up to Rent and saw to other guys and a menacing cat. "Would you mind telling me who these two are,Rent?" I questioned

"Hello there, my name is Maximillion Gristoff, I am one of the inventors of the time machine that was stolen," he said, replying to Chris. "And in this case is something that will be crucial to your search," he said. he opened his suitcase and revealed a large open room with many control panels, buttons, screens, flashing lights, and beeping noises on the other side. "Please, come in."

I read the entire thing, im liking it, thing is, i have seen alot of grammer issues for zambozaxx. still pretty great!

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Isn't related to Minecraft, take it to Forum Games please.

have you bean searching for roleplays cause i've bean searching them and your always the person who is saying its bad :dry.gif:

[Sorry for the offtime, I've been busy lately, and I am gonna be for a few days, so here's what I'll do. Sorry about this, Zmax.]

"Wait, what's that?" I said, pointing into the suitcase. Just then, a hand came out and pulled me in. Then he locked the case behind him. It was a case from where I was, but now - inside of it - it was a door that could be locked with a key. Then I was hit in the head with something hard and knocked unconscious. And all of this happened before you could blink. [Don't take that literally, there is such a thing as an exaggeration.]

[And yes, zambozaxx is Polish, so he makes a few mistakes here and there. Of course, it is apalling how much grammar and spelling mistakes people who are English-speaking make on the internet, and then they comment on someone else's grammar. Pfft.]