legorick is a no...
1. Appearance is way to small...
2. Your equipment seems kinda weak.
3. How did you get here?
4. Why were you arrested?
5. Grammer. Could be improved.
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Well I -suppose- I should write something here. But I also should make a new account D<
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Characters name:hemp
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair
Bio: strong willed and caring hemp was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
Characters name:forno
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair tattered black pants and short sleeve blue shirt
Bio: strong willed and caring forno was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.loyal till the end he has no memory of were he is or how he got there.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
apperance: Nick is a young boy and has brown hair. He is about 5'7 and is of course human. He wears white cotton shirt and linen pants. He also wears a brown leather jacket. His eyes are brown and he has freckles all over his face.
Bio: Since Nick could remember,he lived in the woods....alone. He lived in a small tent that is fairly large. His tent was located a small waterfall that he gathered water from. He would hunt boar,moose,deer,and even sometimes sheep. He killed them with a bow and arrow. He would use the the antlers of the animals he killed for the arrowheads. Living in the wild of course gave him superb survival skills. He still to this day lives in the woods. Living peacefully.
Equipment:A bow and arrow,a knife,and various herbs and spices.
Have you ever been on another RP:Duh! I am the PieWizard!
(third times a charm)
Characters name: john farlight
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair tattered black pants and short sleeve blue shirt
Bio: strong willed and caring forno was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.loyal till the end he has no memory of were he is or how he got there.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
"Where am I? Did the plane crash or something?" Zeke rubbed his head as he sat up. Upon further inspection, he was sitting in the middle of a grassy field, with no indication of a plane crash. "I guess not, looks like I was thrown out of the plane."
Zeke stood up and inspected his body, looking for broken bones, luckily there were none. The only possessions that he had left were his backpack and wallet, and he was pretty sure there weren't any vending machines around here.
"Guess I should look around. Maybe someone else from the plane is around here." Zeke murmured to himself as he started walking forward. He promptly tripped and landed on his face. "What the heck?" It seems that Zeke tripped on a pile of burnt bones and a iron long sword. Zeke picked up the long sword and tested the weight. It seemed real. "Where the heck am I? I'm pretty sure this isn't paradise..."
Ssss...
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I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it! <3
Jonah sat around his warm fire as he rubbed his hands together to gather warmth. He shivered from the cold snow gathering on his face. He had just finished eating his supper and was ready to get moving. He always traveled at night for all the animals were sleeping. So,he gathered his supplies and stuffed them into his bag. Then he rolled up his tent and put it in a separate bag. He then put out fire and started walking. The snow kept falling on his face when he heard a mysterious noise. He looked in the direction of the noise and saw a faint purple light. He walked toward the light and saw a large obelisk type structure. It looked like some sort of....portal. So,being alone for so his whole life he was eager to see if there was anyone like him. So,he threw he bags into the portal and they instantly disappeared. So,he jumped into the portal himself. Then he looked around and saw what looked like some natural disaster. There were lakes,pool,and even waterfalls made entirely of lava. He quickly gathered he bags and turned around. When he looked at the portal suddenly a large explosive hit the portal and the purple light went our.
"Noooooo!!!!," Nick screamed.
The portal went out. He was trapped. Then a monstrous cry rung in his ears. He quickly looked around and saw the source. It was a giant white squidlike monster. He grabbed his bags and ran away. He then saw a small group of people and yelled,"Help me!!!!".
Zeke was rocketed foward, falling onto his chest. The air was knocked out of him. Zeke stood onto his shaking legs, wondering what in the world just happened. His clothes were ripped and covered in mud, and his skin was bruised. He was lucky enough to not fall right onto his new long sword.
"What the hell was that!" Zeke yelled into the sky. "Where the hell am I?"
I grabbed Vevila's shoulder and said " there .... Is a man coming over here." I looked above the man to see a white creature flying above him. " and he has a friend." the creature screamed and launched a fireball at the man.
Zeke walked. It was the only thing that he could do. He walked over the grassy plains, until he reached a mountain that wasn't too far away. It only took him a good 15 minutes. "Maybe I can get a good view of everything up there." Zeke said to himself, and he began walking up the mountain.
After an hour, Zeke finally collapsed on the snow at the top of the mountain. He was dead tired, and couldn't move another inch. But he knew he had to. Zeke sat up and looked around. In front of him lay miles of land. There were forests, deserts, plains, everything! And there wasn't a single person or town in sight. This isn't good. Zeke looked behind him to see a strange sight. A large black structure. "Hello? Is anybody there?" Zeke called out. There was no response. He walked over to the structure and began kicking the snow around it, hoping to find something. After a good five minutes, Zeke was about to give up until he kicked some dying embers from a dead campfire onto the center of the structure. The embers blazed when the reached the black stone, and a shimmering, purple... portal appeared in front of Zeke. "I'm hallucinating..." Zeke said to himself as he stared at the portal. Zeke assumed that someone had to have made this portal, and they must have gone through it. "Well, there's nothing else I can do." Zeke murmured as he stepped into the portal, and into hell.
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I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it! <3
"You better get out of the way!" I yelled to the on coming man. I concentrated on my sword. A flash of dark. Everything stood still besides me. The only being that I could see was the Ghast floating in the air, it's hellish mouth opened. I ran like I've never ran before, Glowstone passed by me at full speed. I lunged at the man, the explosive landing only mere meters away from where he stood. I stood up, regained my senses then went at a full charge towards the hellish ghast. Another hellish pop and another fire ball was coming directly at me. I swung my sword, causing the ball to bounce off and explode else where. The ghast was in obvious shock that a creature so tiny could deflect it's only form of attack. It started floating away. I jumped, jumped higher then I ever had before. I swung my sword, feeling the sword make contact with the flesh of the ghast. A loud screaming pierced the air. As I came tumbling to the ground I smiled to my self. Another flash of black and I had blacked-out.
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Well I -suppose- I should write something here. But I also should make a new account D<
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
"VEVILA!" I screamed and ran over to her ignoring the pain in my chest. I got on my knees next to her and picked her up. " Damn it Vevila..." I walked with her to a nearby rock and put her propped up to it I then remembered what they told me to do in medical school. I rolled her over on her side and made sure she was breathing. Thank god she was. I made sure that her airways were also opened properly and it was. I then felt that this place despite the lava was un naturally cold. I took off the cloak of my armor and put it on her like a blanket. I sat next to her waiting for her to come back.
Vevila...
Two people came out of a building, towards another man, then a large explosion.
One was on the floor, the other knocked out. The last one was still alive and well, and took shelter.
I looked in my leather satchel, and took out a vial of a purple, dark mist.
It soared across the lava, off the edge of the cliff, and managed to hit the rock.
"RUN!"
I hoped they could get to safety.
I ran round the edge of the cliff, looking for a way across.
Zeke stumbled out of the portal, and began to fall. Looking up while falling, Zeke noticed that the portal spit him out right in front of a cliff. This was the end. Zeke fell onto something strangely soft, wet, and spongy. He looked down to see that he fell on a peculiar form of sand, with little screaming souls in it. Zeke was sweating, and he felt like he was burning. There was lava everywhere, and strange glowing stones. Zeke looked around, hoping to find someone, anyone! Out in the distance, he saw a man hunched over a girl. "Hey!" Zeke yelled. "Over here!"
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I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it! <3
legorick is a no...
1. Appearance is way to small...
2. Your equipment seems kinda weak.
3. How did you get here?
4. Why were you arrested?
5. Grammer. Could be improved.
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair
Bio: strong willed and caring hemp was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
I'm a bit iffy on the Name.
Appearance is to short...
What does he usually wear?
What is his personality?
How did you get here?
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair tattered black pants and short sleeve blue shirt
Bio: strong willed and caring forno was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.loyal till the end he has no memory of were he is or how he got there.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
If you need ideas for a name don't be scared to go on one of those baby name sites [It's where I found mine!]
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Characters name:Nick Ramses
Characters age:15
apperance: Nick is a young boy and has brown hair. He is about 5'7 and is of course human. He wears white cotton shirt and linen pants. He also wears a brown leather jacket. His eyes are brown and he has freckles all over his face.
Bio: Since Nick could remember,he lived in the woods....alone. He lived in a small tent that is fairly large. His tent was located a small waterfall that he gathered water from. He would hunt boar,moose,deer,and even sometimes sheep. He killed them with a bow and arrow. He would use the the antlers of the animals he killed for the arrowheads. Living in the wild of course gave him superb survival skills. He still to this day lives in the woods. Living peacefully.
Equipment:A bow and arrow,a knife,and various herbs and spices.
Have you ever been on another RP:Duh! I am the PieWizard!
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Characters name: john farlight
Characters age:15
apperance: short blue eyes brown hair tattered black pants and short sleeve blue shirt
Bio: strong willed and caring forno was a humble kid growing up on a farm he trained with his dad who was an hunter. life was great intill bandits attacked his farm he got some stuff and fled as the bandits burned his farm and stole what was left.loyal till the end he has no memory of were he is or how he got there.
Equipment: a stone axe and his clothes.
Have you ever been on another RP:yes
*Groan*
"Where am I? Did the plane crash or something?" Zeke rubbed his head as he sat up. Upon further inspection, he was sitting in the middle of a grassy field, with no indication of a plane crash. "I guess not, looks like I was thrown out of the plane."
Zeke stood up and inspected his body, looking for broken bones, luckily there were none. The only possessions that he had left were his backpack and wallet, and he was pretty sure there weren't any vending machines around here.
"Guess I should look around. Maybe someone else from the plane is around here." Zeke murmured to himself as he started walking forward. He promptly tripped and landed on his face. "What the heck?" It seems that Zeke tripped on a pile of burnt bones and a iron long sword. Zeke picked up the long sword and tested the weight. It seemed real. "Where the heck am I? I'm pretty sure this isn't paradise..."
Ssss...
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"Noooooo!!!!," Nick screamed.
The portal went out. He was trapped. Then a monstrous cry rung in his ears. He quickly looked around and saw the source. It was a giant white squidlike monster. He grabbed his bags and ran away. He then saw a small group of people and yelled,"Help me!!!!".
"Ssss? What the he-" BOOM!
Zeke was rocketed foward, falling onto his chest. The air was knocked out of him. Zeke stood onto his shaking legs, wondering what in the world just happened. His clothes were ripped and covered in mud, and his skin was bruised. He was lucky enough to not fall right onto his new long sword.
"What the hell was that!" Zeke yelled into the sky. "Where the hell am I?"
Zeke walked. It was the only thing that he could do. He walked over the grassy plains, until he reached a mountain that wasn't too far away. It only took him a good 15 minutes. "Maybe I can get a good view of everything up there." Zeke said to himself, and he began walking up the mountain.
After an hour, Zeke finally collapsed on the snow at the top of the mountain. He was dead tired, and couldn't move another inch. But he knew he had to. Zeke sat up and looked around. In front of him lay miles of land. There were forests, deserts, plains, everything! And there wasn't a single person or town in sight. This isn't good. Zeke looked behind him to see a strange sight. A large black structure. "Hello? Is anybody there?" Zeke called out. There was no response. He walked over to the structure and began kicking the snow around it, hoping to find something. After a good five minutes, Zeke was about to give up until he kicked some dying embers from a dead campfire onto the center of the structure. The embers blazed when the reached the black stone, and a shimmering, purple... portal appeared in front of Zeke. "I'm hallucinating..." Zeke said to himself as he stared at the portal. Zeke assumed that someone had to have made this portal, and they must have gone through it. "Well, there's nothing else I can do." Zeke murmured as he stepped into the portal, and into hell.
"You better get out of the way!" I yelled to the on coming man. I concentrated on my sword. A flash of dark. Everything stood still besides me. The only being that I could see was the Ghast floating in the air, it's hellish mouth opened. I ran like I've never ran before, Glowstone passed by me at full speed. I lunged at the man, the explosive landing only mere meters away from where he stood. I stood up, regained my senses then went at a full charge towards the hellish ghast. Another hellish pop and another fire ball was coming directly at me. I swung my sword, causing the ball to bounce off and explode else where. The ghast was in obvious shock that a creature so tiny could deflect it's only form of attack. It started floating away. I jumped, jumped higher then I ever had before. I swung my sword, feeling the sword make contact with the flesh of the ghast. A loud screaming pierced the air. As I came tumbling to the ground I smiled to my self. Another flash of black and I had blacked-out.
Goddamn do I hate this name z_z
Two people came out of a building, towards another man, then a large explosion.
One was on the floor, the other knocked out. The last one was still alive and well, and took shelter.
I looked in my leather satchel, and took out a vial of a purple, dark mist.
It soared across the lava, off the edge of the cliff, and managed to hit the rock.
"RUN!"
I hoped they could get to safety.
I ran round the edge of the cliff, looking for a way across.
~Ken
Zeke stumbled out of the portal, and began to fall. Looking up while falling, Zeke noticed that the portal spit him out right in front of a cliff. This was the end. Zeke fell onto something strangely soft, wet, and spongy. He looked down to see that he fell on a peculiar form of sand, with little screaming souls in it. Zeke was sweating, and he felt like he was burning. There was lava everywhere, and strange glowing stones. Zeke looked around, hoping to find someone, anyone! Out in the distance, he saw a man hunched over a girl. "Hey!" Zeke yelled. "Over here!"