Name: (RP characters name.) Seth Green- I like apples yes I do, I like apples doodely doodely doo XD.
Age: (RP characters age.) 39
Gender: (Boy or girl?) Boy
Appearance: (What do they look like... This should include their physical appearance, as well as any clothing. Do NOT list equipment here!)Black shaggy hair, blue eyes, dark heavy eyebrows, black robe when not at work, heavy shirt and pants, boots, black belt.
Personality: (What are they like. Good? Evil? Friendly? A Loner? That stuff goes here.) Generally good to those around him, being rude is not in his nature.
Skills: (What makes them special? What can they do others cant?) Seth has no special talents except for being an amazing constructor.
Equipment: (What do they have with them when they arrive. This should make sense. If you are carrying a lot, have a satchel. If you have a sword, it should probably also have a holster.
Details are essential here, and could be the difference between getting accepted or not. ) A satchel of various tools that includes: A hammer, nails, and glue.
Bio: (Who are they, what has happened in their life, and why are they here now. I DO NOT want to see any basic minecraft "woke up on a beach with no idea where they are from" stuff here. You have a story, even if your character can't remember it.) Seth was an idol at school and at home. He was always the one you would go to if you needed help with your homework, or you needed tutoring for an upcoming test. Same goes for when he was at his house. He was a great boy, but was destined to have tradgedies in his life. His mom died while working on a very important job. A bridge that connected Morocco ( Sorry if theres no countries) with Muslim Spain. She fell when her harness snapped while putting a long strip of iron for the arch. His father attempted to get over it, but could not. He jumped off of the same bridge. Seth was left with noone, but he wasn't born with his skills for no reason. He could survive on his own. He planned on creating one of the biggest city's in the world, in honor of his mother and father. If only they could see him now, for his dream was about to become reality.
One Liner: (A brief description to describe your character on the members list. Should include name, trait(s), and job title. EX: Phil, the rude, flirty chef. [If I see anybody make Phil, the rude, flirty chef, you will be denied. Originality please. ]) Seth the prepared worked.
Suggestions:(What do you think I should add, change, etc.) Nothing this looks like a very instresting RP.
I think you just made it look longer with those brackets. Although it is a short application I absolutely love it but I'm not sure about Feo :sad.gif:
Name: (RP characters name.) Seth Green- I like apples yes I do, I like apples doodely doodely doo XD. [Unoriginal name: Used the name of an actor/writer. And this is not in the section it was told to be in. This alone is an auto deny.]
Age: (RP characters age.) 39
Gender: (Boy or girl?) Boy
Appearance: Black shaggy hair, blue eyes, dark heavy eyebrows, black robe when not at work, heavy shirt and pants, boots, black belt. [This is a list, not a description.]
Personality: Generally good to those around him, being rude is not in his nature. [One line.]
Skills: Seth has no special talents except for being an amazing constructor. [One line.]
Equipment: A satchel of various tools that includes: A hammer, nails, and glue. [One line.]
Bio: Seth was an idol at school and at home. He was always the one you would go to if you needed help with your homework, or you needed tutoring for an upcoming test. Same goes for when he was at his house. He was a great boy, but was destined to have tradgedies in his life. His mom died while working on a very important job. A bridge that connected Morocco ( Sorry if theres no countries) with Muslim Spain. She fell when her harness snapped while putting a long strip of iron for the arch. His father attempted to get over it, but could not. He jumped off of the same bridge. Seth was left with noone, but he wasn't born with his skills for no reason. He could survive on his own. He planned on creating one of the biggest city's in the world, in honor of his mother and father. If only they could see him now, for his dream was about to become reality.
[Improper grammar used, this is not the real world obviously, bridges that advanced will not exist for a long time. In general, like vMpee said, you used what I wrote in parenthesis to make your application look longer. ]
One Liner: Seth the prepared worked.
Suggestions:Nothing this looks like a very instresting RP.
I never intended to make it look longer lol. It might of looked like that but no. So whatevs. And who is Seth Green? like who is he as an actor/writer never heard of him.
Michael has an incredibly short hair, since he always loved to shave his head. A small wound is housed in the center of his head but it is imperceptible due to his amazing ability to ever removing the straw hat who uses for years. The only part of the hair possible to see is the one that surrounds the right side of his big ear, being possible to observe only looking closely, since it seems to be glued on the sides of his head. The hair is terminated by a thin beard, and poorly cut finally ending in a short uncombed goatee, which as a small creek of hair, grabs one of the minuscule lips of Michael. His nose is big and a bit long, but it doesn't gets much attention. His extensive eyebrows keeps upon two small dark blue eyes, always naturally tightly closed. His mustache has the Puerto Rican style, always seeming capillary mountains carefully combed, spending much of his time.
Standing on 5'8", his body is semi-athletic, always with some muscles appearing and showing its charm. Around his neck, he uses a Onyx necklace given by his grandfather. He doesn't feel cold easily, it has a lot of fat to warm him, and uses a simple white and dirty tank top. In his waist, a leather belt used to grab the strap of his bag full of clothes. Using a beige pants, greatly baggy in his legs, always bloated with air, and really well stuck between his leather belt and boots.
Personality: He is lazy, but prefers to say that "only acts when necessary". He likes to talk, trying not to be rude, but ends up showing to be very chutzpah. Always think twice before speaking, but has no shame about saying what he think. Michael does not like to offend, but when offended, easily get irritated and shows his inner stressed personality.
Skills: The fact of being too lazy does not show people his fascinating skills. He can swim very well, a gift that has trained for a long time, since childhood. Always loved the water, that is why the fact of his swimming skills being so loud and with positive results. He also knows various types of minerals, a skill that only in the exact time becomes useful. But when he is not doing anything, he likes to throw rocks the farthest as possible.
Equipment: In addition to his necklace of onyx, a backpack attached to his belt that takes several clothes.
Bio:
Michael, since childhood, lived in a house on the side of a pond, called "The Apple River". He loved to swim there, practiced swimming every day. His innocence was not total, since he knew which stood an underground cavern deep in the pond ((yes, an underwater cave)). He one day, warned his parents about it. Everyone wanted to know what was guarded there. Then, after completing 10 years, Michael's father decided to explore. Michael insisted on going along, and ended up accompanying his father. Mineral. Several worthless minerals were there. Even so, they decided to sell it. It was not much money, but they were several minerals. Seeing the brightness of them, Michael decided to learn more about that subject.
He kept inventing names for gemstones, including one with his favorite name: "Amethyst". When he turned 14, already had to work. But he didn't found anything that interested him. Neither political, military, education, nothing. Just thinking about those stones he knew. He decided to work in the course of market, in the labor of mining. As he didn't found anything he liked, he followed the career. He was very hardworking. He worked a long time, but every day, missed the desire to do something. When he found a diamond of 15 carats, he decided to keep secret from the other miners, in order to sell it, secretly. He received a small reward, but it was very helpful. 5.000 (of our currency) of money, pure and fresh money.
He decided to leave the house near the pond. He bought a boat and sailed, sailed, sailed, until arriving in an island...
One Liner: Michael, the lazy, yet incredible swimmer.
Suggestions: No.
Additional Facts (discovered so far): He has disgust of cockroaches. Especially the large ones.
Appearance: Brendan has wild, unkept black hair that sticks out in all directions. It is long and unruly. He never has time in the morning to fix it, nor does he are about appearance. He has intelligent baby blue eyes that are stern and condensending. He always is grimacing or smirking, depending of he just made a fool of someone or not. His nose is thin and slender, and slightly raised. He has freckles beside his nose, but not too many to be overly noticeable. His face is thin and triangular.
He is about five foot six, of average height. He is thin, as he is often to absorbed by his studying. He stands in a way that almost looks unhealthy. He wears a crisp and clean suit, not because he works hard to keep it clean, but because he rarely, if ever, engages in physical activity. Because of this, he has low muscle mass and is fairly weak. His suit consists of a simple white cloth shirt, and leather pants. They fit him perfectly. His shoes are black and shined.
Personality: Brendan is a bit of a progidy. He is incredibly intelligent and quick-thinking, and is a fantastic reader. He also has an attraction to art. He loves studying and his dreams are to create new inventions. As a child, he never talked to many people, because he was always smarter than almost everyone he met, even if they were years older than him. Even if someone was of his intelligence, they usually were an acclaimed adult scientist who didn't have time to talk to a child. This made him incredibly anti-social. Because of his brilliance, he is also condensending to most people he meets, unless they can match his intelligence.
He is also an athiest. He believes that there is a way to prove everything in the universe with science. He thinks religion is a fickle thing, used simple to control people. He finds the whole idea silly, and generally ignores extremely religious folk. If they bother him too much, or try to convert him, he will suddenly turn cruel and yell at them for a good long time, no matter who they are.
Brendan also likes to manipulate people in a lesser form to cause some trouble. He enjoys watching people fight, and he uses this as his form of entertainment.
Brendan is also very superficial and self centered. He likes to keep the blueprints of his inventions to himself, and maybe even make one-of-a-kind objects just for him. He usually enjoys reaping the benefits for himself.
Skills: Brendan is incredibly intelligent and a bit of an inventor. He can think things up incredibly quickly and use them to his own advantage. He is also manipulative of people, and likes to influence them non-directly to do his bidding or fight other people. He is also an artist, and he paints in his little spare time. He isn't the most talented artist out there, but it looks good and he is above average. He loves to read. He can dash through a book in no time flat, and remember it with almost photographic memory.
Equipment: Brendan carries a pack on his back filled with books and notepads, to sketch inventions out and study. He also carries plenty of inkpots and pens. He also has a small dagger in his pack, just in case.
Bio: Brendan was left on an a foster home's doorstep, abandoned by his parents. He kept to himself, but learned all the things a baby need to learn, including talking, in less than a year. Oddly, he never cried. Once he learned to read, he suddenly had a massive craving to learn. By the time he was five, he was reading textbooks by brilliant scientists across the globe that a lot of adults couldn't understand. Because of his brilliance, he couldn't relate to any of his peers and ended up sneering at them a lot and calling them stupid. Because of his attitude, nobody wanted to adopt him.
In his teen years, however, he ran away and built his own home. How he did it nobody really ever figured out, but he used an advanced building technique that he learned from his novels to do it quickly and easily. He kept indoors, only leaving when he needed food and water, and invented. He sold his inventions in the marketplace, and racked in lots of money. However, the government soon was suspiscous of who was supplying him with all the inventions, and investigated his household. They were surprised when they simply found the fourteen year old boy, creating a new type of axe, with a pick on one side and the axe itself on the other. They didn't believe he was coming up with it himself, so they arrested him and tried to get him to admit where he got the blueprints.
He could of easily just handed over his own blueprints and made up a name of someone else, but the way he was made him keep his blueprint locations secret. He was arrested and underfed for a couple years, until they finally gave up. Over his years in prison, he made many sketches of inventions, some of which would fail and never be released. Some of them were advanced war weapons that he would hand out to mercenaries for a large fee. Others, he simply kept to himself, waiting to release them.
Now, he lives in a small, refurnished cave that is more comfortable then lots of houses these days. He hides out, working on more inventions and only walking into towns (which takes a day and a night just to get there) for supplies, such as apples.
One Liner: Brendan Storm, the superficial inventor.
Appearance: His thick black hair does not end on the top of the head, a thick mostache and beard acompany it, near his brown eyes there is a scar, his body isnt much the body off an athelete, but he still manages to build big constuctions using his knowladge and experience in the field, in his upper body he wears an old gray shirt with sleeves all the way to his wrists, in his left hand there is a gold ring an tatto with the words "sinceridade", and on his right hand a ring and a tatto with the words "confiança", on his lower body he wears black pants and a shoe.
Personality:He is a playfull person, he is comonly found joking about things he should not joke about, when he wants something he will work his way to it, and he loves his job.
Skills:He is very good att building stuff, hes been on the business for 15 years, and has built several things, he is specialized in inovative building.
Equipment: a bag with a hammer and some building materials, and in his back he carries a backpack with essentials ass food and clothes
Bio:since little Pedro lived in Brazil, because his father had to work there, he lived near a forest in a little farm called "maça do amor"('APPLE OF LOVE'in portuguese) one day he saw his uncle building the barn, and decided to hel, his uncle laughed at first but liked the idea, and started teaching him how to build things, after that he became amazed in how big buildings are made, he became amazed with all the work behind it and decided to start working, he was 15 and started buidling barns,cops and other small things in farms for money, when he made 20 years old, he finished his biggest building, and the first one he ever leaded, a library, he leaded several men, and buit a library, when he was 30 he received a message telling him to travel to a certaoin place to meet the king, when he went there, he found no one and noticed it was a prank, he laughed and searched for a way back, he saw a person sitting in an area filled with apples and walked up to him.
One Liner: Pedro the funny builder
Suggestions:none
((i would like my character to be the leader in construction))
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@ Absolete. While I would like to see more details in his appearance, it's still a good application. ACCEPTED.
@ Baragon. Application is good, but you cut out the name section. =p I know it says Michael, but, he should have a last name too. :smile.gif: Just add a name, and you're good. PENDING.
@ Neil. Looks good! Glad to have ya here! ACCEPTED.
@Necro. It's already been said that we are not in the real world, and you used too many one line descriptions. You can try to add more and apply again, but, the way it is now, sorry, but, DENIED.
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Once we have a head of construction, we can start! Agriculture is not needed yet, as we have Absolete to take care of hunting for us. ;P
There isn't much to say about his appearance though, it's a simple uniform with a patch and pouches. He was just deployed, and his clothes are only wet. So they're not torn or ripped or bloody or anything. Sorry, though. I've lost my roleplay touch, these days...
Well, I meant more of his physical appearance. Eye color, topical details, etc. But, like I said, not required. =p And... You're getting sucked into those games, boy! xD
I wasn't even playing Terraria or Gmod. xD I was watching a movie while typing this, a really ****ing boring one with over an hour of shots of people's faces with trees in the background. ****ing medieval knight movie or something, no action at all. xD
Alright... I'll set you as the leader until somebody else comes in asking to lead Market, then... Now all we need it a Construction leader, and we can start! Also... It's the squiggly red line that appears under a word when you misspell it.
I think you just made it look longer with those brackets. Although it is a short application I absolutely love it but I'm not sure about Feo :sad.gif:
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Age: 33
Gender: Male.
Appearance:
Michael has an incredibly short hair, since he always loved to shave his head. A small wound is housed in the center of his head but it is imperceptible due to his amazing ability to ever removing the straw hat who uses for years. The only part of the hair possible to see is the one that surrounds the right side of his big ear, being possible to observe only looking closely, since it seems to be glued on the sides of his head. The hair is terminated by a thin beard, and poorly cut finally ending in a short uncombed goatee, which as a small creek of hair, grabs one of the minuscule lips of Michael. His nose is big and a bit long, but it doesn't gets much attention. His extensive eyebrows keeps upon two small dark blue eyes, always naturally tightly closed. His mustache has the Puerto Rican style, always seeming capillary mountains carefully combed, spending much of his time.
Standing on 5'8", his body is semi-athletic, always with some muscles appearing and showing its charm. Around his neck, he uses a Onyx necklace given by his grandfather. He doesn't feel cold easily, it has a lot of fat to warm him, and uses a simple white and dirty tank top. In his waist, a leather belt used to grab the strap of his bag full of clothes. Using a beige pants, greatly baggy in his legs, always bloated with air, and really well stuck between his leather belt and boots.
Personality: He is lazy, but prefers to say that "only acts when necessary". He likes to talk, trying not to be rude, but ends up showing to be very chutzpah. Always think twice before speaking, but has no shame about saying what he think. Michael does not like to offend, but when offended, easily get irritated and shows his inner stressed personality.
Skills: The fact of being too lazy does not show people his fascinating skills. He can swim very well, a gift that has trained for a long time, since childhood. Always loved the water, that is why the fact of his swimming skills being so loud and with positive results. He also knows various types of minerals, a skill that only in the exact time becomes useful. But when he is not doing anything, he likes to throw rocks the farthest as possible.
Equipment: In addition to his necklace of onyx, a backpack attached to his belt that takes several clothes.
Bio:
Michael, since childhood, lived in a house on the side of a pond, called "The Apple River". He loved to swim there, practiced swimming every day. His innocence was not total, since he knew which stood an underground cavern deep in the pond ((yes, an underwater cave)). He one day, warned his parents about it. Everyone wanted to know what was guarded there. Then, after completing 10 years, Michael's father decided to explore. Michael insisted on going along, and ended up accompanying his father. Mineral. Several worthless minerals were there. Even so, they decided to sell it. It was not much money, but they were several minerals. Seeing the brightness of them, Michael decided to learn more about that subject.
He kept inventing names for gemstones, including one with his favorite name: "Amethyst". When he turned 14, already had to work. But he didn't found anything that interested him. Neither political, military, education, nothing. Just thinking about those stones he knew. He decided to work in the course of market, in the labor of mining. As he didn't found anything he liked, he followed the career. He was very hardworking. He worked a long time, but every day, missed the desire to do something. When he found a diamond of 15 carats, he decided to keep secret from the other miners, in order to sell it, secretly. He received a small reward, but it was very helpful. 5.000 (of our currency) of money, pure and fresh money.
He decided to leave the house near the pond. He bought a boat and sailed, sailed, sailed, until arriving in an island...
One Liner: Michael, the lazy, yet incredible swimmer.
Suggestions: No.
Additional Facts (discovered so far): He has disgust of cockroaches. Especially the large ones.
** Sorry by the mistake. Done. **
Name: Brendan Storm
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Appearance: Brendan has wild, unkept black hair that sticks out in all directions. It is long and unruly. He never has time in the morning to fix it, nor does he are about appearance. He has intelligent baby blue eyes that are stern and condensending. He always is grimacing or smirking, depending of he just made a fool of someone or not. His nose is thin and slender, and slightly raised. He has freckles beside his nose, but not too many to be overly noticeable. His face is thin and triangular.
He is about five foot six, of average height. He is thin, as he is often to absorbed by his studying. He stands in a way that almost looks unhealthy. He wears a crisp and clean suit, not because he works hard to keep it clean, but because he rarely, if ever, engages in physical activity. Because of this, he has low muscle mass and is fairly weak. His suit consists of a simple white cloth shirt, and leather pants. They fit him perfectly. His shoes are black and shined.
Personality: Brendan is a bit of a progidy. He is incredibly intelligent and quick-thinking, and is a fantastic reader. He also has an attraction to art. He loves studying and his dreams are to create new inventions. As a child, he never talked to many people, because he was always smarter than almost everyone he met, even if they were years older than him. Even if someone was of his intelligence, they usually were an acclaimed adult scientist who didn't have time to talk to a child. This made him incredibly anti-social. Because of his brilliance, he is also condensending to most people he meets, unless they can match his intelligence.
He is also an athiest. He believes that there is a way to prove everything in the universe with science. He thinks religion is a fickle thing, used simple to control people. He finds the whole idea silly, and generally ignores extremely religious folk. If they bother him too much, or try to convert him, he will suddenly turn cruel and yell at them for a good long time, no matter who they are.
Brendan also likes to manipulate people in a lesser form to cause some trouble. He enjoys watching people fight, and he uses this as his form of entertainment.
Brendan is also very superficial and self centered. He likes to keep the blueprints of his inventions to himself, and maybe even make one-of-a-kind objects just for him. He usually enjoys reaping the benefits for himself.
Skills: Brendan is incredibly intelligent and a bit of an inventor. He can think things up incredibly quickly and use them to his own advantage. He is also manipulative of people, and likes to influence them non-directly to do his bidding or fight other people. He is also an artist, and he paints in his little spare time. He isn't the most talented artist out there, but it looks good and he is above average. He loves to read. He can dash through a book in no time flat, and remember it with almost photographic memory.
Equipment: Brendan carries a pack on his back filled with books and notepads, to sketch inventions out and study. He also carries plenty of inkpots and pens. He also has a small dagger in his pack, just in case.
Bio: Brendan was left on an a foster home's doorstep, abandoned by his parents. He kept to himself, but learned all the things a baby need to learn, including talking, in less than a year. Oddly, he never cried. Once he learned to read, he suddenly had a massive craving to learn. By the time he was five, he was reading textbooks by brilliant scientists across the globe that a lot of adults couldn't understand. Because of his brilliance, he couldn't relate to any of his peers and ended up sneering at them a lot and calling them stupid. Because of his attitude, nobody wanted to adopt him.
In his teen years, however, he ran away and built his own home. How he did it nobody really ever figured out, but he used an advanced building technique that he learned from his novels to do it quickly and easily. He kept indoors, only leaving when he needed food and water, and invented. He sold his inventions in the marketplace, and racked in lots of money. However, the government soon was suspiscous of who was supplying him with all the inventions, and investigated his household. They were surprised when they simply found the fourteen year old boy, creating a new type of axe, with a pick on one side and the axe itself on the other. They didn't believe he was coming up with it himself, so they arrested him and tried to get him to admit where he got the blueprints.
He could of easily just handed over his own blueprints and made up a name of someone else, but the way he was made him keep his blueprint locations secret. He was arrested and underfed for a couple years, until they finally gave up. Over his years in prison, he made many sketches of inventions, some of which would fail and never be released. Some of them were advanced war weapons that he would hand out to mercenaries for a large fee. Others, he simply kept to himself, waiting to release them.
Now, he lives in a small, refurnished cave that is more comfortable then lots of houses these days. He hides out, working on more inventions and only walking into towns (which takes a day and a night just to get there) for supplies, such as apples.
One Liner: Brendan Storm, the superficial inventor.
Suggestions: Nada.
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Appearance: His thick black hair does not end on the top of the head, a thick mostache and beard acompany it, near his brown eyes there is a scar, his body isnt much the body off an athelete, but he still manages to build big constuctions using his knowladge and experience in the field, in his upper body he wears an old gray shirt with sleeves all the way to his wrists, in his left hand there is a gold ring an tatto with the words "sinceridade", and on his right hand a ring and a tatto with the words "confiança", on his lower body he wears black pants and a shoe.
Personality:He is a playfull person, he is comonly found joking about things he should not joke about, when he wants something he will work his way to it, and he loves his job.
Skills:He is very good att building stuff, hes been on the business for 15 years, and has built several things, he is specialized in inovative building.
Equipment: a bag with a hammer and some building materials, and in his back he carries a backpack with essentials ass food and clothes
Bio:since little Pedro lived in Brazil, because his father had to work there, he lived near a forest in a little farm called "maça do amor"('APPLE OF LOVE'in portuguese) one day he saw his uncle building the barn, and decided to hel, his uncle laughed at first but liked the idea, and started teaching him how to build things, after that he became amazed in how big buildings are made, he became amazed with all the work behind it and decided to start working, he was 15 and started buidling barns,cops and other small things in farms for money, when he made 20 years old, he finished his biggest building, and the first one he ever leaded, a library, he leaded several men, and buit a library, when he was 30 he received a message telling him to travel to a certaoin place to meet the king, when he went there, he found no one and noticed it was a prank, he laughed and searched for a way back, he saw a person sitting in an area filled with apples and walked up to him.
One Liner: Pedro the funny builder
Suggestions:none
((i would like my character to be the leader in construction))
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@ Baragon. Application is good, but you cut out the name section. =p I know it says Michael, but, he should have a last name too. :smile.gif: Just add a name, and you're good. PENDING.
@ Neil. Looks good! Glad to have ya here! ACCEPTED.
@Necro. It's already been said that we are not in the real world, and you used too many one line descriptions. You can try to add more and apply again, but, the way it is now, sorry, but, DENIED.
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Once we have a head of construction, we can start! Agriculture is not needed yet, as we have Absolete to take care of hunting for us. ;P
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But, I'll do a lot better once I get IC I hope.
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I don't care of being either a owner or worker.
But... where is the grammar checker?
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(You are pretty idiot [just kidding]. This is a ridiculous quote.)
Yep, nothing happened.
Too bad. I HAVE IT.
The ironi.
Still nothing.