Hello, this is the first RP I have made, but not the first I have been in. Lets get to the storyline shall we? DISCLAIMER: This RP is based off of LOST and some elements are used, any and all parts that are related to the TV series are credited to the makers. J.J AbramsJeffrey Lieber and Damon Lindelof
"Hello this is the captain speaking, we are hitting a large patch of turbulance, please fasten your seatbelts for this will be over shortly". The shifty crowd rambled amongst each other. They carried on with their conversations like nothing was happening, until the plane began to wobble. It only got worse and worse. The captain did not come back on the speaker. Screams erupted throught the plane when the tail ripped off from the plane. They all hung on for their lives as everything went black. The remaining parts of the plane land on a desolate island beach. It is inhabited by mysterious explosive creatures that the passengers have never seen in their lives ( Similar to The Others in LOST). This is where our RP starts.
There are 2 races you can choose from due to the fact that this RP needs enemies. The creepers are the explosive creatures mentioned in the storyline. They are silent and don't go kamikazi like WTFBOOOOOOOOOOM. They somewhat have arms to take their victims. But their must be some type of struggle, this will be mentioned in the rules. If you choose to be a child in this RP you must have another applicant(s) to be your parent(s). Relationships if wanted must be made before the RP starts.
Here comes the nitty-gritty.
Rules
1. No power-gaming! this is basically doing anything physical to someone without their being some type of struggle or you get a strike.
2. You get 3 strikes before you are kicked from the RP, and since im giving you 3 strikes if you break any of the rules you get no warning its an immediate strike.
3. OOC- Out Of Charectar. Must be used in these formats. : :, ( ), [ ], or { }.
4. To show you've read all rules put an arrow at the beggining of your application or you will be denied immediately.
5. Proper grammar is required if you can't follow up with it dont apply.
6. There are minecraft related elements but I don't wanna see " Jack went off and gathered some dirt to build a house with". No you are stranded on an island with few materials to start off with. You can't build your own house with a custom lounging chair. The only people who should have houses are The Others due to the fact that they have been on the island all of their lives.
7. Post your charectars name at the beggining of your post like this <Jack>. We will do this until all the spots are filled and everyone is familiar.
8.No god modding or controlling other charectars.
9. There aren't any items left on the island unless I add a plot twist like a rack of weapons in a hidden hole in the forest.
10. Do not stray from the group and become a loner, stick with your team or the others have permission to find and kill you. There is an exception to this rule if you go out finding fruit or hunting.
11. Follow plot twists if given.
Here is the format for a charectar application. If I see exact copy and pastes of applications from one of the lost charectars it is an instant deny. If your going to base it off of one of their biographies edit it around a little and put some twists in it. Make it up to how and why you got on Flight 815
Name(Self Explanatory):
Age:
Class(The Others or Human):
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.)
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.)
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.)
Biography(Charectars Backstory)
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)
Heres mine.
Name(Self Explanatory): Drake Smith
Age:33
Class(The Others or Human):Human
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.) Doctor specifcally a spinal surgeon.
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.) Blue T-Shirt, black eyes, flat high black hair, bruised and bloody, blue jeans, rough sneakers.
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.)Basic doctoral supplies.
Biography(Charectars Backstory) Drake was born into a family of doctors. His father was good to him during his life, he wanted his son to be just like his dad, a successful doctor. When Drake did rise up to be a doctor another life fell down. Drake's mom died and his father became depressed. During a procedure on a dieng patient his dad was drunk. Hand shaking and eyes twitchy he cut a vital artery just as Drake walked in. They kept it a secret until a meeting was held for that specific surgery. Drake spilled out everything and his father was fired from his job. He became even more depressed and died of heart failure in a different area. Drake went on a flight to pick up his fathers coffin and he went on another flight to bring it back. That was Flight 815.
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)Nopeydopeydopedope.
Can't wait to see how this RP turns out.
Insert Absolete comment below XD.
*Edit*- Sorry for the lines not turning out great, when I was typing it, it looked fine.
Name(Self Explanatory):Sam Flyblade
Age:31
Class:Human
Skills:Very good with gadgets and tools. (and swords >:biggrin.gif:)
Appearance: Brown hair, red shirt, blue jeans.
Equipment:Pistol and Katana
Biography:Used to be a ninja, went on plane to go to a dojo in china but the plane crashed.
Additional Information:AWESOME!
I need to start tomorrow though I cant tonight >.<
Name(Self Explanatory):Sam Flyblade
Age:31
Class:Human
Skills:Very good with gadgets and tools. (and swords >:biggrin.gif:)
Appearance: Brown hair, red shirt, blue jeans.
Equipment:Pistol and Katana
Biography:Used to be a ninja, went on plane to go to a dojo in china but the plane crashed.
Additional Information:AWESOME!
I need to start tomorrow though I cant tonight >.<
Sorry but your not going to be starting at all. Denied. Your bio is probably the shortest in the world and really? a ninja? Your equipment is far too overpowered anything like that would most likely fly off the plane when it crashed.
Hey, question to you - to be a mod, you must participate the roleplay?
To be a mod you must be a good and trusted roleplayer throughout the story. I dont really need any right now because of the fact that it hasn't started lol. But when it does and I have to go away for a while or something I will appoint moderators or someone to be in charge. and if you havent read look at the storyline yeahhh.
To be a mod you must be a good and trusted roleplayer throughout the story. I dont really need any right now because of the fact that it hasn't started lol. But when it does and I have to go away for a while or something I will appoint moderators or someone to be in charge. and if you havent read look at the storyline yeahhh.
Oh - just wondering. It's about Corinn is not even a trusted roleplayer at Every Story has Three Sides, and he is a moderator.
->Name(Self Explanatory): Kyle Smith
Age:42
Class(The Others or Human): Others
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.) gets flashes of the future
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.) Long black hair, ragged clothes
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.) 22mm pistol
Biography(Charectars Backstory)Kyle Was a british professor and pilot before he came to the island. When he was flying a beach baron plane he crashed there. He was deliviring over 10,000 packages of instant oatmeal. he lived on the island for 5 years before he decided to investigate the whispers. He was captured by the others and eventually joined them.
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)nope
->Name(Self Explanatory): Kyle Smith
Age:
Class(The Others or Human): Others
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.) gets flashes of the future
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.) Long black hair, ragged clothes
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.) 22mm pistol
Biography(Charectars Backstory)Kyle Was a british professor and pilot before he came to the island. When he was flying a beach baron plane he crashed there. He was deliviring over 10,000 packages of instant oatmeal. he lived on the island for 5 years before he decided to investigate the whispers. He was captured by the others and eventually joined them.
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)nope
You look like a new RP'er sorry but declined your Biography is indescribable and short. The Others are Creepers not humans.
Skills: The only talent of Tarhen is his gentle cunning, which almost always leads the tricked person into a trap. But he's very gossipy and hardly holds secrets. He learned the deceive very well, and uses this ability as a defense to scare off intruders without getting hurt.
Appearance: The thing that differentiates him from any Creeper is the long scar that starts on his forehead and ends in the thorax.
Equipment: Nothing.
Biography: Tarhen at birth was a miracle for the family - the only survived male. He was always very coddled and a liar since childhood. When he reached 13 years, his mother discovered that her son always lied. The punishment for any crime for Creepers was a court. A tremendously giant cut. With a bark, the mother of Tarhen sliced from the forehead to the chest of the creature. The pain was terrible, but his natural tendency made he be quickly healed. The problem was that the scar has become a highlight in Tarhen. With the hatred for everyone, Tarhen fled, and far from where he lived, he met a gang of other creepers that were conmen and nasty. They said that Tarhen would have to bring victims so they could take things of value and give to the Powerful CreeperLord to be honored. Tarhen, without choice, had to do the commandments. Arriving at the beach, he found several wreckage in distance. "What might be it?" Tarhen's curiosity made him wonder what had happened. He went there, and before everyone realizes something was wanderin' around, he hid in the forest, just watching the creatures slowly regain the life.
Additional Information: He is not aggressive, always try to make friends (after deceiving them, of course).
NO offense dude but you are just to strict. Good luck if you find anyone to your liking
Im not being strict, Im just being honest. Look around Fan Art and look at various applications and compare them to yours. This is your first RP app so I can understand. I didn't get accepted into my first one either. Just keep writing and keep trying if your serious about it.
And Tarhen Beesket is accepted good job on your app. We will start when we get 2 or so more humans and probably one more of The Others if neseccary-spelling fail on my part =P.
Im not being strict, Im just being honest. Look around Fan Art and look at various applications and compare them to yours. This is your first RP app so I can understand. I didn't get accepted into my first one either. Just keep writing and keep trying if your serious about it.
And Tarhen Beesket is accepted good job on your app. We will start when we get 2 or so more humans and probably one more of The Others if neseccary-spelling fail on my part =P.
Try 'bout four roleplayers - two humans and two monster.
Tomorrow, wake up early, because morning means turnover of money! - ergh, of players.
I don't know how many RPs you've been in before, but for a "literate" RP the original post is...lacking. Other than misspellings (unless character is properly spelled charectar wherever you're from) and punctuation errors, the backstory is quite short and not very descriptive, especially in describing the Others. Just saying they have arms to take people with doesn't let us know if they appear human, or are completely repulsive to the survivors of the plane crash. I love the idea, but I'm not keen on people using the words "literate RP" lightly. No offense to you intended, I'm simply suggesting revisions.
I don't know how many RPs you've been in before, but for a "literate" RP the original post is...lacking. Other than misspellings (unless character is properly spelled charectar wherever you're from) and punctuation errors, the backstory is quite short and not very descriptive, especially in describing the Others. Just saying they have arms to take people with doesn't let us know if they appear human, or are completely repulsive to the survivors of the plane crash. I love the idea, but I'm not keen on people using the words "literate RP" lightly. No offense to you intended, I'm simply suggesting revisions.
Not enough information on The Others is exactly what I wanted, thank you. And the literacy mistakes. I know, i typed this up quick because when I got the idea in my head I was so excited to care about any mistakes. And heres the list of my Roleplays, The Black Diamond, Heroes Wanted, Movement-Race Against Time, Minecraft: The Beggining. All of these are based on literacy and all Im worried about is literacy during the RP. Please send stuff like this through a message Im trying to manage applications not comments.
*Edit*- And the backstory being short is to save your life. Unless you want it the size of War & Peace I can do that to.
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Name(Self Explanatory): Alice Sempra
Age:20
Class(The Others or Human): I wanted to be human.. If it is possible to get human then I will have that opportunity. So I'd say Human
Skills(Talents or helpful professions):
Alice has no other skills, talents or helpful professions other than her knowledge of nursing
Appearance:
The appearance of Alice is very much like Alice from Alice : Madness Returns. Right now I do not have a link because I roleplay on my iPhone. But anyway, Alice has black hair, lengthened at around about where the heart is. She has deep green eyes and has a smile like no others. She has normal teenage clothes with a white apron that has blood marks on it from the crash. Her shoes are also wonderfully colored because Alice just loves to see the bright smile on everybody's face.
Equipment: Alice always brings a bundle wherever she goes. It always contains herbs, flasks, and food that will surely bring a smile upon a person's face. She brings flasks because she knows the education of alchemy and it's healings.
Biography: Alice was a young girl when she realized how wonderful she is at alchemy ad nursing. Her parents foresaw that too, but she wouldn't listen. But when she did realize it, she was embarrassed.
Anyway, she took a course in university about alchemy and nursing both at the same time. She was pretty awesome at it, until everybody got jealous of her skills. when she got kicked out, Alice felt sad.
And she also felt sadistic... With her and the knowledge of alchemy and healing, she can make a potion that can drastically poison the students who hated her.
But she needed to get the certain ingredients, in which can only be found in another country...
So she decided to get the rare ingredients but first have to make an airplane travel.
Additional Information:
Alice's personality is very nice and cheerful, though not always caring. She is sometimes sadistic if things really got out of control. Alice is dangerous to be with when angered.
Also English is not my first language. And this is the second RP I will be in if I get accepted.
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Name(Self Explanatory): Alice Sempra
Age:20
Class(The Others or Human): I wanted to be human.. If it is possible to get human then I will have that opportunity. So I'd say Human
Skills(Talents or helpful professions):
Alice has no other skills, talents or helpful professions other than her knowledge of nursing
Appearance:
The appearance of Alice is very much like Alice from Alice : Madness Returns. Right now I do not have a link because I roleplay on my iPhone. But anyway, Alice has black hair, lengthened at around about where the heart is. She has deep green eyes and has a smile like no others. She has normal teenage clothes with a white apron that has blood marks on it from the crash. Her shoes are also wonderfully colored because Alice just loves to see the bright smile on everybody's face.
Equipment: Alice always brings a bundle wherever she goes. It always contains herbs, flasks, and food that will surely bring a smile upon a person's face. She brings flasks because she knows the education of alchemy and it's healings.
Biography: Alice was a young girl when she realized how wonderful she is at alchemy ad nursing. Her parents foresaw that too, but she wouldn't listen. But when she did realize it, she was embarrassed.
Anyway, she took a course in university about alchemy and nursing both at the same time. She was pretty awesome at it, until everybody got jealous of her skills. when she got kicked out, Alice felt sad.
And she also felt sadistic... With her and the knowledge of alchemy and healing, she can make a potion that can drastically poison the students who hated her.
But she needed to get the certain ingredients, in which can only be found in another country...
So she decided to get the rare ingredients but first have to make an airplane travel.
Additional Information:
Alice's personality is very nice and cheerful, though not always caring. She is sometimes sadistic if things really got out of control. Alice is dangerous to be with when angered.
Also English is not my first language. And this is the second RP I will be in if I get accepted.
"Hello this is the captain speaking, we are hitting a large patch of turbulance, please fasten your seatbelts for this will be over shortly". The shifty crowd rambled amongst each other. They carried on with their conversations like nothing was happening, until the plane began to wobble. It only got worse and worse. The captain did not come back on the speaker. Screams erupted throught the plane when the tail ripped off from the plane. They all hung on for their lives as everything went black. The remaining parts of the plane land on a desolate island beach. It is inhabited by mysterious explosive creatures that the passengers have never seen in their lives ( Similar to The Others in LOST). This is where our RP starts.
There are 2 races you can choose from due to the fact that this RP needs enemies. The creepers are the explosive creatures mentioned in the storyline. They are silent and don't go kamikazi like WTFBOOOOOOOOOOM. They somewhat have arms to take their victims. But their must be some type of struggle, this will be mentioned in the rules. If you choose to be a child in this RP you must have another applicant(s) to be your parent(s). Relationships if wanted must be made before the RP starts.
Here comes the nitty-gritty.
Rules
1. No power-gaming! this is basically doing anything physical to someone without their being some type of struggle or you get a strike.
2. You get 3 strikes before you are kicked from the RP, and since im giving you 3 strikes if you break any of the rules you get no warning its an immediate strike.
3. OOC- Out Of Charectar. Must be used in these formats. : :, ( ), [ ], or { }.
4. To show you've read all rules put an arrow at the beggining of your application or you will be denied immediately.
5. Proper grammar is required if you can't follow up with it dont apply.
6. There are minecraft related elements but I don't wanna see " Jack went off and gathered some dirt to build a house with". No you are stranded on an island with few materials to start off with. You can't build your own house with a custom lounging chair. The only people who should have houses are The Others due to the fact that they have been on the island all of their lives.
7. Post your charectars name at the beggining of your post like this <Jack>. We will do this until all the spots are filled and everyone is familiar.
8.No god modding or controlling other charectars.
9. There aren't any items left on the island unless I add a plot twist like a rack of weapons in a hidden hole in the forest.
10. Do not stray from the group and become a loner, stick with your team or the others have permission to find and kill you. There is an exception to this rule if you go out finding fruit or hunting.
11. Follow plot twists if given.
Here is the format for a charectar application. If I see exact copy and pastes of applications from one of the lost charectars it is an instant deny. If your going to base it off of one of their biographies edit it around a little and put some twists in it. Make it up to how and why you got on Flight 815
Name(Self Explanatory):
Age:
Class(The Others or Human):
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.)
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.)
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.)
Biography(Charectars Backstory)
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)
Heres mine.
Name(Self Explanatory): Drake Smith
Age:33
Class(The Others or Human):Human
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.) Doctor specifcally a spinal surgeon.
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.) Blue T-Shirt, black eyes, flat high black hair, bruised and bloody, blue jeans, rough sneakers.
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.)Basic doctoral supplies.
Biography(Charectars Backstory) Drake was born into a family of doctors. His father was good to him during his life, he wanted his son to be just like his dad, a successful doctor. When Drake did rise up to be a doctor another life fell down. Drake's mom died and his father became depressed. During a procedure on a dieng patient his dad was drunk. Hand shaking and eyes twitchy he cut a vital artery just as Drake walked in. They kept it a secret until a meeting was held for that specific surgery. Drake spilled out everything and his father was fired from his job. He became even more depressed and died of heart failure in a different area. Drake went on a flight to pick up his fathers coffin and he went on another flight to bring it back. That was Flight 815.
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)Nopeydopeydopedope.
Can't wait to see how this RP turns out.
Insert Absolete comment below XD.
*Edit*- Sorry for the lines not turning out great, when I was typing it, it looked fine.
Drake Smith- Doctor- Spinal Surgeon.-Human
Tarheen Beesket- The Silent Trapper.-The Others
Alice Sempra- The Helpful Nurse.-Human
Age:31
Class:Human
Skills:Very good with gadgets and tools. (and swords >:biggrin.gif:)
Appearance: Brown hair, red shirt, blue jeans.
Equipment:Pistol and Katana
Biography:Used to be a ninja, went on plane to go to a dojo in china but the plane crashed.
Additional Information:AWESOME!
I need to start tomorrow though I cant tonight >.<
Sorry but your not going to be starting at all. Denied. Your bio is probably the shortest in the world and really? a ninja? Your equipment is far too overpowered anything like that would most likely fly off the plane when it crashed.
Also - note one thing - roleplays in Fan Art must be, somehow related to Minecraft. Mobs, items, kind of weaponry, world of blocks - something.
To be a mod you must be a good and trusted roleplayer throughout the story. I dont really need any right now because of the fact that it hasn't started lol. But when it does and I have to go away for a while or something I will appoint moderators or someone to be in charge. and if you havent read look at the storyline yeahhh.
Oh - just wondering. It's about Corinn is not even a trusted roleplayer at Every Story has Three Sides, and he is a moderator.
Um,ok but I dont want anymore posts here unless there applications.
Age:42
Class(The Others or Human): Others
Skills(Talents or helpful proffesions.) gets flashes of the future
Appearance( What your charectar looks like.) Long black hair, ragged clothes
Equipment ( Weapons dont make them overpowered.) 22mm pistol
Biography(Charectars Backstory)Kyle Was a british professor and pilot before he came to the island. When he was flying a beach baron plane he crashed there. He was deliviring over 10,000 packages of instant oatmeal. he lived on the island for 5 years before he decided to investigate the whispers. He was captured by the others and eventually joined them.
Additional Information(Anything else you would like to add.)nope
You look like a new RP'er sorry but declined your Biography is indescribable and short. The Others are Creepers not humans.
NO offense dude but you are just to strict. Good luck if you find anyone to your liking
Age: 23
Class: The Others/Creeper
Skills: The only talent of Tarhen is his gentle cunning, which almost always leads the tricked person into a trap. But he's very gossipy and hardly holds secrets. He learned the deceive very well, and uses this ability as a defense to scare off intruders without getting hurt.
Appearance: The thing that differentiates him from any Creeper is the long scar that starts on his forehead and ends in the thorax.
Equipment: Nothing.
Biography: Tarhen at birth was a miracle for the family - the only survived male. He was always very coddled and a liar since childhood. When he reached 13 years, his mother discovered that her son always lied. The punishment for any crime for Creepers was a court. A tremendously giant cut. With a bark, the mother of Tarhen sliced from the forehead to the chest of the creature. The pain was terrible, but his natural tendency made he be quickly healed. The problem was that the scar has become a highlight in Tarhen. With the hatred for everyone, Tarhen fled, and far from where he lived, he met a gang of other creepers that were conmen and nasty. They said that Tarhen would have to bring victims so they could take things of value and give to the Powerful CreeperLord to be honored. Tarhen, without choice, had to do the commandments. Arriving at the beach, he found several wreckage in distance. "What might be it?" Tarhen's curiosity made him wonder what had happened. He went there, and before everyone realizes something was wanderin' around, he hid in the forest, just watching the creatures slowly regain the life.
Additional Information: He is not aggressive, always try to make friends (after deceiving them, of course).
I will give a shot as Creeper.
Im not being strict, Im just being honest. Look around Fan Art and look at various applications and compare them to yours. This is your first RP app so I can understand. I didn't get accepted into my first one either. Just keep writing and keep trying if your serious about it.
And Tarhen Beesket is accepted good job on your app. We will start when we get 2 or so more humans and probably one more of The Others if neseccary-spelling fail on my part =P.
Try 'bout four roleplayers - two humans and two monster.
Tomorrow, wake up early, because morning means turnover of money! - ergh, of players.
And please call him Tarhen.
Not enough information on The Others is exactly what I wanted, thank you. And the literacy mistakes. I know, i typed this up quick because when I got the idea in my head I was so excited to care about any mistakes. And heres the list of my Roleplays, The Black Diamond, Heroes Wanted, Movement-Race Against Time, Minecraft: The Beggining. All of these are based on literacy and all Im worried about is literacy during the RP. Please send stuff like this through a message Im trying to manage applications not comments.
*Edit*- And the backstory being short is to save your life. Unless you want it the size of War & Peace I can do that to.
Name(Self Explanatory): Alice Sempra
Age:20
Class(The Others or Human): I wanted to be human.. If it is possible to get human then I will have that opportunity. So I'd say Human
Skills(Talents or helpful professions):
Alice has no other skills, talents or helpful professions other than her knowledge of nursing
Appearance:
The appearance of Alice is very much like Alice from Alice : Madness Returns. Right now I do not have a link because I roleplay on my iPhone. But anyway, Alice has black hair, lengthened at around about where the heart is. She has deep green eyes and has a smile like no others. She has normal teenage clothes with a white apron that has blood marks on it from the crash. Her shoes are also wonderfully colored because Alice just loves to see the bright smile on everybody's face.
Equipment: Alice always brings a bundle wherever she goes. It always contains herbs, flasks, and food that will surely bring a smile upon a person's face. She brings flasks because she knows the education of alchemy and it's healings.
Biography: Alice was a young girl when she realized how wonderful she is at alchemy ad nursing. Her parents foresaw that too, but she wouldn't listen. But when she did realize it, she was embarrassed.
Anyway, she took a course in university about alchemy and nursing both at the same time. She was pretty awesome at it, until everybody got jealous of her skills. when she got kicked out, Alice felt sad.
And she also felt sadistic... With her and the knowledge of alchemy and healing, she can make a potion that can drastically poison the students who hated her.
But she needed to get the certain ingredients, in which can only be found in another country...
So she decided to get the rare ingredients but first have to make an airplane travel.
Additional Information:
Alice's personality is very nice and cheerful, though not always caring. She is sometimes sadistic if things really got out of control. Alice is dangerous to be with when angered.
Also English is not my first language. And this is the second RP I will be in if I get accepted.
Thanks for reading~
Accepted, one more person and we will start.
were just waiting for one more and we will get started.