Character name: Stan "the intelligent" boxworthy
Character age: 22
Character appearance:Looks like a trader.Fairly well dressed in a grey sort of brown suit.where's a black hat with gold tips.has long brown sideburns/has a beard.black pants with brown shoes.
Character equipment:when stan washed up he found he only had a few dollars because his wallet had been ruined . he also had a pad of paper that he found beside him when he washed up that had unknown symbols on it
Character bio:when he was 5 his mother and father died from a mudslide killing everyone he knew except his great grandmother.he then lived with her until he was 10 when he ran off with his girlfriend. but when his girlfriend died from a mugger he could never find his way home.He in a nice caring person but doesn't like the get into relationship's or get attached to people because of fear of them dyeing . he is never selfish and is easily persuaded to giving a better deal.he likes helping out others for free or little cost and is good at conversation.(i think i might have put this in the wrong column).
Character Backstory:he was washed out to see one day after trying to pray to the sea for better weather.and washed up on the island mind boggled and tired almost having the feeling of a hang over.
if you would like me to add more i can this is just a sample.
Allow me to help you out with that. Though you seem a bit ego-maniacal,(pretend you didn't read that last bit), this seems like it has potential...
Character Name: Larkus "Lark" Wander
Character Age: 21
Character Appearance: Lark as a tall, skinny, grubby looking fellow. He has unkempt blonde hair of average length, and very light blue eyes. He is tan except for his arms, the bottom half of which are very pale. His clothing consists of expensive looking, though heavily worn, cloth shirt and pants, supplemented with leather vest, which conceals a large chain-mail vest And a leather scabbard. Though the most peculiar thing about him are his "gloves", large metal gauntlets which cover most of his lower arm.
Character Equipment: Lark's equipment includes a large steel scimitar, and an assortment of baubles made of gold and various gems, which he keeps in the many pouches of his scabbard belt.
Character Bio: Most of what is known of Lark is a combination of myth and rumor. All that is genuinely known of him is that he has a love of gold and jewel, which he fulfills through less-than-legal means. He is greedy, and does not trust others, especially those he believes suspect his past. Despite that, when forced to cooperate with others, he is an invaluable ally, and has a strong will to survive, and is a fast learner.
Character Back-story: lark awoke to the smell of sea salt and the sound of ocean birds. How did I get on a beach? He thought, confused. He tried to get up, but his legs were pinned by something. He opened his eyes. Apparently, something wooden had exploded. There were shards of splintered wood everywhere. One particularly large one was resting on his legs, looking immobile but rotten. He reached for his side, and his hands fell upon a metal hilt. That's right, I have a sword... Lark drew the mighty scimitar, and hacked away pieces of the wooden beam until he could move. But upon standing, Lark could only take a few steps before he fell, hard back onto the sand. His legs were in pain. He might've broken one... "Well ****," he cursed softly. All he could manage was to use a part of the beam as a cane. He began walking towards the forest. Hopefully he could at-least find shade under a tree....
Hope this is up to par...
Oh, and from reading the small bit about location, could someone explain to me the setting a bit more? All you've explained is that we are on an island, and the time period is "modern" but we do not have electronics so to speak... Quite frankly I don't follow in the least.We do or don't have technology? Who lives here (besides the characters) ? What problems will be occurring that we'll have to deal with (Zombie Invasion? Bandits? "Lame" stuff like lack of food?) Is "we don't speak in middle English," the only way this is "modern"? Will I have to redo this completely?
Accepted. I saw a couple grammatical errors but they were just minor(Like typos). Your character seems fit to be a Shop Keeper.
By the way, all the info will be listed in the Roleplay Thread(Not up yet, will be when we get 1 more player.) where we
will roleplay. But, I can tell you this. The time is the present. But we are just an island. The island is mostly
surrounded by trees. The island has many other cities and tribes. We have communist-like tribes. Peace-loving tribes. And neutral tribes. I will NOT tell you the names of our tribes YET. The players' tribe is a small city that
will grow larger with roleplay. About 5 houses, each holding three to four people. A couple shops, a prison, a few farms, and a town square. The houses and shops are made out of logs. The island people do not use electronics. A
few of the other tribes do however.
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Name: Matt Johnson
Age: 14
Personality: Matt is a very quiet, extemely smart, friendly kid who enjoys nature.
Appearence: Matt has messy black hair, an orange hoodie and ripped jeans, he has empty black eyes, and no shoes.
Backstory: Matt didnt have many friends back home, but often Matt would just become lost in his own little world inside his head. He didnt have many goals, just dreams.
Time here:
Matt woke up on the shore with his clothes ripped and arm scratched badly, he didnt know much about how he got here, nor did he care, as long as he can escape to his mind. Matt did not know how he got here, his parents died shortly before but he was extremely happy his cat Mittens was there.
Equipment:
Matt woke up with a 100 page notepad, 2 nice sharpened pencils and a sleeping bag. All he really wants.
Matt began by playing with his cat, who he loved alot. Mittens was not afraid of coal, but didnt appreciate being near a wolf alot.
Okay, alot of problems here.
1. The application is WAY to short.
2. When I read this it made me want to read it really fast like I was on drugs or something.
3. Your not being descriptive(A Problem with alot of the others I denied.), like- why would you wake up with a notepad and sharpened pencils? Is the Notepad dry or wet? If you hit the ground after crashing or washed on
the shore the pencils would have either broken in half or the lead would have broken.
4. You cannot carry an entire sleeping bag in the on your back or in your pocket.
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Character Name: Elliot 'El' Cray
Character Age: 41
Character Appearance: Tall, with tanned skin. Although he is not that old, he is showing signs of aging. His face is pointed, and he has light stubble. His muscles are very defined.
Character Equipment: His clothes, and a pocket knife. And his wallet, which is pretty much useless.
Character Bio(About your character): He is a loner who spends most of his time at work, which is being a Police Officer. He has no family. He is quiet, and decisive, and is more or less considered an arsehole.
Character Backstory(Where your character came from. If you were born on the island or were found stranded on the island): He found himself stranded on the island. He came from Alice Springs, Australia, until he moved to Perth. It was there that he had come from before the island.
You were not descriptive at all. Like, what did his clothes look like? Also, please do not tell us what your character's job is. WE pick your job based on your character. And who in the world would move from a country with an economy, electronics, and such? Denied.
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HI i want to apply so here is my application.
Character name: Stan "the intelligent" boxworthy
Character age: 22
Character appearance:Looks like a trader.Fairly well dressed in a grey sort of brown suit.where's a black hat with gold tips.has long brown sideburns/has a beard.black pants with brown shoes.
Character equipment:when stan washed up he found he only had a few dollars because his wallet had been ruined . he also had a pad of paper that he found beside him when he washed up that had unknown symbols on it
Character bio:when he was 5 his mother and father died from a mudslide killing everyone he knew except his great grandmother.he then lived with her until he was 10 when he ran off with his girlfriend. but when his girlfriend died from a mugger he could never find his way home.He in a nice caring person but doesn't like the get into relationship's or get attached to people because of fear of them dyeing . he is never selfish and is easily persuaded to giving a better deal.he likes helping out others for free or little cost and is good at conversation.(i think i might have put this in the wrong column).
Character Backstory:he was washed out to see one day after trying to pray to the sea for better weather.and washed up on the island mind boggled and tired almost having the feeling of a hang over.
if you would like me to add more i can this is just a sample.
I found alot of grammatical errors, and you were not that very descriptive. Denied.
Character Appearance:Brown Shaggy Hair,Brown Pants,Green Shirt,Brown Eyes.
Character Equipment:An iron sword that has been damaged severly.One gold ingot,he recieved it from his father,who gave him this before the voayge,as a good luck charm.
Character Bio(About your character):Kain is the type of person who sleeps all day,and is awake all night,he always seemed stubborn and short tempered.He usually has a negative attitude and does not usually take orders from anybody.He always trys to hide the fact that he can be a coward,he also enjoys nature.He can sometimes be seen wandering in a forest,admiring the beauty of it.
Character Backstory(Where your character came from. If you were born on the island or were found stranded on the island):Kain came from an island known as Jolari.He lived in a small village with his father,Leon Edwards,and his uncle.He always loved his father and his uncle.He was told that his mother moved to somewhere else,far far away.When he waas ten years old,his father informed him that his mother did not move,but was murdered.Kain was heartbroken that his father lied to him all his life about his mother.His father always tried to tell him that he tried to wait until the right to tell Kain.Kain would barely speak to his father anymore.He started to forgive his father at the age of 13.When he was 14,his village fell victim to a deadly disease.Jolari did not have cures for many diseases.His uncle died from this disease.Kain was grief-strucken.He then began to develop his negative attitude,he started becoming short-tempered,he would not listen to anybody.When he was 15,a new kid moved into the town,her name was Stella.Stella was the complete opposite of Kain.She was nice,patient and had a positive attitude.Stella met Kain the first day she moved to Jolari.Kain tried to ignore her,but she kept talking to him.One day she asked him Kain a question.She asked,what do you think of nature.Kain's response was,why should I care?Stella tried showing him the beauty of nature,but Kain always failed to see it.Kain tried to not think about itbut he started to love Stella,when he was 17.Jolari was raided,out of nowhere.Many lives were lost everyday,from the constant raiding.The raiders eventually took over Jolari,becoming the new rules of it.Kain and Stella's family was suffering.Kain and Stella thought they could not do anything to help thier family.When he was 18,Stella approached Kain,with two diamond swords."My father gave these to me"She said."We must fight the invaders".Kain regretfully agreed.The next day they went to the raiders castle,with a diamond sword.Two gaurds were at the castle entrance.The guards struck Kain and Stella down easily.Kain survived,Stella did not.The next week,a group of people were selected to move from Jolari.Kain was one of them.Before he left on the boat,known as "The Great Voyage".His father gave him an iron sowrd to defend himself.He also give him a gold ingot,as a good luck charm.Ths voyage was supposed to remain a secret from the raiders.The raiders found out quicky and sent out boats to destroy The Great Voyage.The destroyed the boat.Kain was lucky to survuve,and he woke up,stunned on an island,with his iron sword,and his gold ingot.
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"Even if I knew that tomorrow the world would go to pieces, I would still plant my apple tree."
Character Appearance:Brown Shaggy Hair,Brown Pants,Green Shirt,Brown Eyes.
Character Equipment:An iron sword that has been damaged severly.One gold ingot,he recieved it from his father,who gave him this before the voayge,as a good luck charm.
Character Bio(About your character):Kain is the type of person who sleeps all day,and is awake all night,he always seemed stubborn and short tempered.He usually has a negative attitude and does not usually take orders from anybody.He always trys to hide the fact that he can be a coward,he also enjoys nature.He can sometimes be seen wandering in a forest,admiring the beauty of it.
Character Backstory(Where your character came from. If you were born on the island or were found stranded on the island):Kain came from an island known as Jolari.He lived in a small village with his father,Leon Edwards,and his uncle.He always loved his father and his uncle.He was told that his mother moved to somewhere else,far far away.When he waas ten years old,his father informed him that his mother did not move,but was murdered.Kain was heartbroken that his father lied to him all his life about his mother.His father always tried to tell him that he tried to wait until the right to tell Kain.Kain would barely speak to his father anymore.He started to forgive his father at the age of 13.When he was 14,his village fell victim to a deadly disease.Jolari did not have cures for many diseases.His uncle died from this disease.Kain was grief-strucken.He then began to develop his negative attitude,he started becoming short-tempered,he would not listen to anybody.When he was 15,a new kid moved into the town,her name was Stella.Stella was the complete opposite of Kain.She was nice,patient and had a positive attitude.Stella met Kain the first day she moved to Jolari.Kain tried to ignore her,but she kept talking to him.One day she asked him Kain a question.She asked,what do you think of nature.Kain's response was,why should I care?Stella tried showing him the beauty of nature,but Kain always failed to see it.Kain tried to not think about itbut he started to love Stella,when he was 17.Jolari was raided,out of nowhere.Many lives were lost everyday,from the constant raiding.The raiders eventually took over Jolari,becoming the new rules of it.Kain and Stella's family was suffering.Kain and Stella thought they could not do anything to help thier family.When he was 18,Stella approached Kain,with two diamond swords."My father gave these to me"She said."We must fight the invaders".Kain regretfully agreed.The next day they went to the raiders castle,with a diamond sword.Two gaurds were at the castle entrance.The guards struck Kain and Stella down easily.Kain survived,Stella did not.The next week,a group of people were selected to move from Jolari.Kain was one of them.Before he left on the boat,known as "The Great Voyage".His father gave him an iron sowrd to defend himself.He also give him a gold ingot,as a good luck charm.Ths voyage was supposed to remain a secret from the raiders.The raiders found out quicky and sent out boats to destroy The Great Voyage.The destroyed the boat.Kain was lucky to survuve,and he woke up,stunned on an island,with his iron sword,and his gold ingot.
Denied. Alot of spelling and grammatical errors. You were very descriptive, though. I can tell English isn't your first language, if it is then please fix these errors. If it isn't, go on google and... you know
the rest.
Once we get two more players, I'll create the Roleplay Thread.
and...
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Derp Herpity.
Personally, I look forward to Roleplaying with you and Pokehunter. *handshake* I wonder if any of these guys will come back & realize they didn't make the cut...Maybe I should PM them....
Character name: Stan "the intelligent" boxworthy
Character age: 22
Character appearance:Looks like a trader.Fairly well dressed in a grey sort of brown suit.where's a black hat with gold tips.has long brown sideburns/has a beard.black pants with brown shoes.
Character equipment:when stan washed up he found he only had a few dollars because his wallet had been ruined . he also had a pad of paper that he found beside him when he washed up that had unknown symbols on it
Character bio:when he was 5 his mother and father died from a mudslide killing everyone he knew except his great grandmother.he then lived with her until he was 10 when he ran off with his girlfriend. but when his girlfriend died from a mugger he could never find his way home.He in a nice caring person but doesn't like the get into relationship's or get attached to people because of fear of them dyeing . he is never selfish and is easily persuaded to giving a better deal.he likes helping out others for free or little cost and is good at conversation.(i think i might have put this in the wrong column).
Character Backstory:he was washed out to see one day after trying to pray to the sea for better weather.and washed up on the island mind boggled and tired almost having the feeling of a hang over.
if you would like me to add more i can this is just a sample.
Accepted. I saw a couple grammatical errors but they were just minor(Like typos). Your character seems fit to be a Shop Keeper.
By the way, all the info will be listed in the Roleplay Thread(Not up yet, will be when we get 1 more player.) where we
will roleplay. But, I can tell you this. The time is the present. But we are just an island. The island is mostly
surrounded by trees. The island has many other cities and tribes. We have communist-like tribes. Peace-loving tribes. And neutral tribes. I will NOT tell you the names of our tribes YET. The players' tribe is a small city that
will grow larger with roleplay. About 5 houses, each holding three to four people. A couple shops, a prison, a few farms, and a town square. The houses and shops are made out of logs. The island people do not use electronics. A
few of the other tribes do however.
Okay, alot of problems here.
1. The application is WAY to short.
2. When I read this it made me want to read it really fast like I was on drugs or something.
3. Your not being descriptive(A Problem with alot of the others I denied.), like- why would you wake up with a notepad and sharpened pencils? Is the Notepad dry or wet? If you hit the ground after crashing or washed on
the shore the pencils would have either broken in half or the lead would have broken.
4. You cannot carry an entire sleeping bag in the on your back or in your pocket.
You were not descriptive at all. Like, what did his clothes look like? Also, please do not tell us what your character's job is. WE pick your job based on your character. And who in the world would move from a country with an economy, electronics, and such? Denied.
I found alot of grammatical errors, and you were not that very descriptive. Denied.
Character Age:18
Character Appearance:Brown Shaggy Hair,Brown Pants,Green Shirt,Brown Eyes.
Character Equipment:An iron sword that has been damaged severly.One gold ingot,he recieved it from his father,who gave him this before the voayge,as a good luck charm.
Character Bio(About your character):Kain is the type of person who sleeps all day,and is awake all night,he always seemed stubborn and short tempered.He usually has a negative attitude and does not usually take orders from anybody.He always trys to hide the fact that he can be a coward,he also enjoys nature.He can sometimes be seen wandering in a forest,admiring the beauty of it.
Character Backstory(Where your character came from. If you were born on the island or were found stranded on the island):Kain came from an island known as Jolari.He lived in a small village with his father,Leon Edwards,and his uncle.He always loved his father and his uncle.He was told that his mother moved to somewhere else,far far away.When he waas ten years old,his father informed him that his mother did not move,but was murdered.Kain was heartbroken that his father lied to him all his life about his mother.His father always tried to tell him that he tried to wait until the right to tell Kain.Kain would barely speak to his father anymore.He started to forgive his father at the age of 13.When he was 14,his village fell victim to a deadly disease.Jolari did not have cures for many diseases.His uncle died from this disease.Kain was grief-strucken.He then began to develop his negative attitude,he started becoming short-tempered,he would not listen to anybody.When he was 15,a new kid moved into the town,her name was Stella.Stella was the complete opposite of Kain.She was nice,patient and had a positive attitude.Stella met Kain the first day she moved to Jolari.Kain tried to ignore her,but she kept talking to him.One day she asked him Kain a question.She asked,what do you think of nature.Kain's response was,why should I care?Stella tried showing him the beauty of nature,but Kain always failed to see it.Kain tried to not think about itbut he started to love Stella,when he was 17.Jolari was raided,out of nowhere.Many lives were lost everyday,from the constant raiding.The raiders eventually took over Jolari,becoming the new rules of it.Kain and Stella's family was suffering.Kain and Stella thought they could not do anything to help thier family.When he was 18,Stella approached Kain,with two diamond swords."My father gave these to me"She said."We must fight the invaders".Kain regretfully agreed.The next day they went to the raiders castle,with a diamond sword.Two gaurds were at the castle entrance.The guards struck Kain and Stella down easily.Kain survived,Stella did not.The next week,a group of people were selected to move from Jolari.Kain was one of them.Before he left on the boat,known as "The Great Voyage".His father gave him an iron sowrd to defend himself.He also give him a gold ingot,as a good luck charm.Ths voyage was supposed to remain a secret from the raiders.The raiders found out quicky and sent out boats to destroy The Great Voyage.The destroyed the boat.Kain was lucky to survuve,and he woke up,stunned on an island,with his iron sword,and his gold ingot.
Denied. Alot of spelling and grammatical errors. You were very descriptive, though. I can tell English isn't your first language, if it is then please fix these errors. If it isn't, go on google and... you know
the rest.
Also, anybody find it funny that I'm the only guy that made it in out of all those guys?
and...
Personally, I look forward to Roleplaying with you and Pokehunter. *handshake* I wonder if any of these guys will come back & realize they didn't make the cut... Maybe I should PM them....
Yeah yeah, double post I know... sue me...