Story:
Year: 3025
You live in a land known as Mysteria. Hidden somewhere in the Bermuda Triangle, it is invisible to anyone who was not shown it or born in it. It holds creatures that most people couldn't imagine. Two Guardians protect the creatures that live there, and they have existed since the beginning of time. It has slowed down technology greatly, due to the massive power harnessed by the creatures there. Few humans are born there, but they rarely survive long. ((Put a form of mystery in your other section.))
Rules:
1.Normal RP rules
2.Include gold in the other section
3.Keep it PG-13, there are little kids out there
4.Read these rules
Name:Tear Drilico
Nickname:The Sky Guardian
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown
Species:Mysterion Dragon
Appearance:Avatar, and this
Bio:Very little is known, guards the skies.
Powers/Equipment:Can absorb electricity, shell can project an image, horns can work as drills
Multichar Color:Orange
Other:I am among one of the most mysterious kinds of dragons. I have no gold.
Name:Spar Pentori
Nickname:The Sea Guardian
Gender:Female
Age:Unknown
Species:Mysterion Serpent
Appearance: This,
and this
Bio:Very little is known, guards the water
Powers/Equipment:Can make insane waves and whirlpools, can freeze water.
Multichar Color:Teal
Other:Among the most mysterious creatures. Constantly begs Tear for gold.
Only if you come up with a goddamn plot, a goddamn world and a goddamn bloody reason for anyone to join the rp. MAKE AN EFFORT. If you think anyones going to bother rping in a rp that doesnt have a damn plot, a proper world or any sense of a bloody piece of effort, why should we waste out time when you wont put the effort in?
Minecraft roleplays are getting worse, i swear x.x
There's this thing called it's not A FREAKING MINECRAFT RP!
I meant a roleplay that's on the minecraft forums... Honestly, you could have came to that conclusion yourself... :l
Your storyline is short, uninteresting and isn't explained -5 points.
However, while I wouldn't use the words he used, he's right - It lacks much of a storyline, and what do you mean by 'a form of mystery'? It seems rushed if you ask me, but this is simply constructive criticism.
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"We must call for aid! Executor, bring out the Reavers! ... What? What do you mean we don't have reavers anymore? Then... send the Dragoons! ... Ugh, then what do you suggest? ... What's a Void Ray?!" -Tassadar, Savior of the Templar
True, it may lack an intricate storyline, and an extensive background... However, don't take that as a negative point! Some people want to fully explain and put the RPers on a certain track making the RP follow a certain storyline, and some like to leave the story line open and allow anyone (themselves included) to create it as the RP develops! I believe this type of RP can be just as amazingly fun! They allow the people who are a part of it to do more, they're less limited and require for the participants to be creative and imaginative with their every move in order to create an exiting RP!
So that said, I'd love to join this RP, will make an app soon, just a quick Q: What is the life expectancy of humans who are born in Mysteria?
16 years about if they're born, 10-30 years after they're shown it if they're shown it.
Name: Skye Leyva
Nickname: Tiny
Age: 8
Species: Human
Appearance: Skye has long wavy Blonde hair and deep blue eyes, she's smaller than usual for her age and also lighter than usual, in one word she'd probably be described as 'cute'.
Bio: Skye's parents were shipwrecked on the island, and after a few years had a baby, Skye. they raised her best they could until passing away when she was 6 years old, science then Skye has learned how to survive on her own in the mysterious land of mysteria and adapted to live there as if it were normal.
Powers: The ability to communicate with many of the animals in mysteria and get along with them
Equipment: A bow and a couple of arrows she crafted herself but rarely uses, usually keeps thin hidden in a tree (that she calls home)
Other: Generally dislikes violence, is an agile person but not very strong, likes to befriend as many animals as she can, she's older mentally than she is physically due to having to adapt to living on her own. and GOLD!
((Seriously TanK, try a little harder on your RP. Don't look at the new RP's that are out there, look at the old ones, as the new ones lack of the story. Through, if this survives (It will be really hard and many peeps need to be involved.) then take note of this... Keep giving the people something to do, a cool adventure to follow. A plotline in which everyone is involved. That way, people will stay longer, but there's a truth, No Roleplay lasts forever, most roleplays last from one to nine months. In certain cases, MORE than nine months. There has been three-two roleplays that lasted more than nine months... Just trying to be polite and pointing out where you should improve. And yes, I agree with Geozaki, just that the world where this is based upon is very limited upon the story...))
I never thought I'd find a rp named after my special character, have we played a game together in the last 12-14 years? Thats when i created Mysteria anyway hazama is her married name so that wouldnt be in it till about four years ago but nice call with the whole mysterious part seeing as being mysterious is what she does best
Year: 3025
You live in a land known as Mysteria. Hidden somewhere in the Bermuda Triangle, it is invisible to anyone who was not shown it or born in it. It holds creatures that most people couldn't imagine. Two Guardians protect the creatures that live there, and they have existed since the beginning of time. It has slowed down technology greatly, due to the massive power harnessed by the creatures there. Few humans are born there, but they rarely survive long. ((Put a form of mystery in your other section.))
Rules:
1.Normal RP rules
2.Include gold in the other section
3.Keep it PG-13, there are little kids out there
4.Read these rules
Application:
Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Age:
Species:
Appearance:
Bio:
Powers/Equipment:
Multichar Color:
Other:
Example Application
Name:Tear Drilico
Nickname:The Sky Guardian
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown
Species:Mysterion Dragon
Appearance:Avatar, and
this
Bio:Very little is known, guards the skies.
Powers/Equipment:Can absorb electricity, shell can project an image, horns can work as drills
Multichar Color:Orange
Other:I am among one of the most mysterious kinds of dragons. I have no gold.
Name:Spar Pentori
Nickname:The Sea Guardian
Gender:Female
Age:Unknown
Species:Mysterion Serpent
Appearance:
This,
and
this
Bio:Very little is known, guards the water
Powers/Equipment:Can make insane waves and whirlpools, can freeze water.
Multichar Color:Teal
Other:Among the most mysterious creatures. Constantly begs Tear for gold.
Who's ready to RP?
There's this thing called it's not A FREAKING MINECRAFT RP!
Half full? Half empty? Something else altogether? You decide.
And who said I was asking you?
Half full? Half empty? Something else altogether? You decide.
However, while I wouldn't use the words he used, he's right - It lacks much of a storyline, and what do you mean by 'a form of mystery'? It seems rushed if you ask me, but this is simply constructive criticism.
"We must call for aid! Executor, bring out the Reavers! ... What? What do you mean we don't have reavers anymore? Then... send the Dragoons! ... Ugh, then what do you suggest? ... What's a Void Ray?!" -Tassadar, Savior of the Templar
16 years about if they're born, 10-30 years after they're shown it if they're shown it.
((Accepted))
IM Not Su
I never thought I'd find a rp named after my special character, have we played a game together in the last 12-14 years? Thats when i created Mysteria anyway hazama is her married name so that wouldnt be in it till about four years ago but nice call with the whole mysterious part seeing as being mysterious is what she does best