I'm going to hop in here real quick and say this is pretty great - proportion wise and everything. It's kinda hard to find something this good. Great job on it.
On the other hand, its not perfect either.
The arms are a touch too thick in comparison to the body.
She is quite slim, almost anorexic looking.
The positioning of the eyes and snout seem a little off.
And the shading/colouring by the snout is very obtrusive.
But otherwise it is great n.n
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On the other hand, its not perfect either.
The arms are a touch too thick in comparison to the body.
She is quite slim, almost anorexic looking.
The positioning of the eyes and snout seem a little off.
And the shading/colouring by the snout is very obtrusive.
But otherwise it is great n.n
Around the snout is a bit messy, but I find the eyes and body shape fine. Just from my standpoint that is.
Around the snout is a bit messy, but I find the eyes and body shape fine. Just from my standpoint that is.
I should post in this thread more often...
Yes you should! Also, that is pretty good... i suck at art... and have no wish to learn to draw... so... yeah... i am a story writter.
I awoke in the night, the sound of the cars below the window was calming to me. I walked downstairs and saw something in my yard, needing a drink of water, i walked into the kitchen before looking out of the window... There it stood, the monster that seemed to drip blood from every wound it had... This is the first night i was truly scared... but not the last.
And thats a poor piece of writting. I am better if i take my time.
I awoke in the night, the sound of the cars below the window was calming to me. I walked downstairs and saw something in my yard, needing a drink of water, i walked into the kitchen before looking out of the window... There it stood, the monster that seemed to drip blood from every wound it had... This is the first night i was truly scared... but not the last.
And thats a poor piece of writting. I am better if i take my time.
Personally, I prefer a good book than a movie. For something you whipped up quicky, this isn't half bad. One that thing that annoys me though, is the amount of ellipses you used to separate the sentences.
Anyway, I had this for a lock screen for the longest time on my iTouch. I forgot where I got it from, though.
Personally, I prefer a good book than a movie. For something you whipped up quicky, this isn't half bad. One that thing that annoys me though, is the amount of ellipses you used to separate the sentences.
Anyway, I had this for a lock screen for the longest time on my iTouch. I forgot where I got it from, though.
Hmm... have not seen that in a long time, saw it on E926.net about 2 months ago.
And yeah... i do them to over use ellipses, i try and stop myself when its meant to be a more drama filled scene. But in horror stories, using them at say, the end of a short story can show that the character was unable to think quickly or keep a clear head.
I walked into my house after playing in the yard, i was around 8 years old at the time. "Come here honey! i have a treat for you" I heard my mother say. I ran towards the kitchen, but stopped as i felt myself being dragged into the closet nearby, i wanted to scream, until i heard my mother say. "Don't go into the kitchen... i heard it too."
On the other hand, its not perfect either.
The arms are a touch too thick in comparison to the body.
She is quite slim, almost anorexic looking.
The positioning of the eyes and snout seem a little off.
And the shading/colouring by the snout is very obtrusive.
But otherwise it is great n.n
- Yea I forgot to mention it is a rough sketch so there is no shading which throws off the dimension, but she is running. It is a very rough sketch... I literally used a mechanical pencil XD
- Uhm yea.. I try to make my fursonas look like me... and im ungodly skinny XD For instance you can see fears ribs a little in most pictures >_>
- In the portrait or the fullbody picture?
- Coloring? You mean the black markings?
I started drawing around late August 2012. That wasn't that long ago. I practiced a lot and my art skills improved drastically. It doesn't take much time to become skilled at drawing, mate. And based on what I've seen, you're already quite skilled. I couldn't help but note you used perspective in that shotgun drawing
Yea, awesome prospective!! I suck at any machinery.
Yes you should! Also, that is pretty good... i suck at art... and have no wish to learn to draw... so... yeah... i am a story writter.
I awoke in the night, the sound of the cars below the window was calming to me. I walked downstairs and saw something in my yard, needing a drink of water, i walked into the kitchen before looking out of the window... There it stood, the monster that seemed to drip blood from every wound it had... This is the first night i was truly scared... but not the last.
And thats a poor piece of writting. I am better if i take my time.
Good for you. I've never been good with.... words........... Yea.
Thank you, i tend to write about horror more then anything. Hoping i can at least make a few good stories with anthro characters... hmm. Maybe an anthro zombie post-apoc story?
Hmm... have not seen that in a long time, saw it on E926.net about 2 months ago.
And yeah... i do them to over use ellipses, i try and stop myself when its meant to be a more drama filled scene. But in horror stories, using them at say, the end of a short story can show that the character was unable to think quickly or keep a clear head.
">Just a story i remember from long ago[/color">.']I walked into my house after playing in the yard, i was around 8 years old at the time. "Come here honey! i have a treat for you" I heard my mother say. I ran towards the kitchen, but stopped as i felt myself being dragged into the closet nearby, i wanted to scream, until i heard my mother say. "Don't go into the kitchen... i heard it too."
[color=#000080]That would make sense. Adds more a dramatic affect.
Just so you know, horror is my favorite genre of books and movies. Maybe you have some more horror? It's pretty good, your stories. It's giving me the chills D:
That would make sense. Adds more a dramatic affect.
Just so you know, horror is my favorite genre of books and movies. Maybe you have some more horror? It's pretty good, your stories. It's giving me the chills D:
Oh man, when it's in color it will look fantastic!
Hmm... it does make sense for a scene where say. The main char is breahting heavy, hes shaking with fear, then the beast/monster attacks him.
Also, thats not my story, that was a creepypasta i heard cry read... hmm... permission to post a video link to the video with that story in it.
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I fell... the plane exploded in a fireball the size of a wildfire. I looked at the remnants of the plane, bits of shrapnel flying like escape pods of dead passengers, still-moving turbines of the huge engines, and a part of the bomb briefcase. I looked at the blue ocean below me - the impact would kill me, as hard as landing on hard ground. I looked back at the sky, black smoke still there. "So this is what life loves - death." I whispered, before joining the dead.
...and I'm terrible at drawing anthros and humans.
Hmm... it does make sense for a scene where say. The main char is breahting heavy, hes shaking with fear, then the beast/monster attacks him.
Also, thats not my story, that was a creepypasta i heard cry read... hmm... permission to post a video link to the video with that story in it.
You're asking to post a video? Of course, go ahead! - you can post a video as long as it's relevant to discussion. Things that people get spanked in trouble for is if the video is just randomly tossed in somewhere.
I fell... the plane exploded in a fireball the size of a wildfire. I looked at the remnants of the plane, bits of shrapnel flying like escape pods of dead passengers, still-moving turbines of the huge engines, and a part of the bomb briefcase. I looked at the blue ocean below me - the impact would kill me, as hard as landing on hard ground. I looked back at the sky, black smoke still there. "So this is what life loves - death." I whispered, before joining the dead.
The arms are a touch too thick in comparison to the body.
She is quite slim, almost anorexic looking.
The positioning of the eyes and snout seem a little off.
And the shading/colouring by the snout is very obtrusive.
But otherwise it is great n.n
I am here for you, Don't be afraid to send me a message.
I just found out I'm terrible at drawing both anthro and humans.
Around the snout is a bit messy, but I find the eyes and body shape fine. Just from my standpoint that is.
I should post in this thread more often...
Yes you should! Also, that is pretty good... i suck at art... and have no wish to learn to draw... so... yeah... i am a story writter.
And thats a poor piece of writting. I am better if i take my time.
I'll get on that
Personally, I prefer a good book than a movie. For something you whipped up quicky, this isn't half bad. One that thing that annoys me though, is the amount of ellipses you used to separate the sentences.
Anyway, I had this for a lock screen for the longest time on my iTouch. I forgot where I got it from, though.
Hmm... have not seen that in a long time, saw it on E926.net about 2 months ago.
And yeah... i do them to over use ellipses, i try and stop myself when its meant to be a more drama filled scene. But in horror stories, using them at say, the end of a short story can show that the character was unable to think quickly or keep a clear head.
- Yea I forgot to mention it is a rough sketch so there is no shading which throws off the dimension, but she is running. It is a very rough sketch... I literally used a mechanical pencil XD
- Uhm yea.. I try to make my fursonas look like me... and im ungodly skinny XD For instance you can see fears ribs a little in most pictures >_>
- In the portrait or the fullbody picture?
- Coloring? You mean the black markings?
And here's her colors, I used a base: http://fearfurr.deviantart.com/#/d5tewqm
Yea, awesome prospective!! I suck at any machinery.
I agree it is. Now that I have her concept down I'm gonna do a real drawing. Hopefully I can find my colored pencils!
Good for you. I've never been good with.... words........... Yea.
Hmm... nah... thats a little silly.
[color=#000080]That would make sense. Adds more a dramatic affect.
Just so you know, horror is my favorite genre of books and movies. Maybe you have some more horror? It's pretty good, your stories. It's giving me the chills D:
Oh man, when it's in color it will look fantastic!
Hmm... it does make sense for a scene where say. The main char is breahting heavy, hes shaking with fear, then the beast/monster attacks him.
Also, thats not my story, that was a creepypasta i heard cry read... hmm... permission to post a video link to the video with that story in it.
I fell... the plane exploded in a fireball the size of a wildfire. I looked at the remnants of the plane, bits of shrapnel flying like escape pods of dead passengers, still-moving turbines of the huge engines, and a part of the bomb briefcase. I looked at the blue ocean below me - the impact would kill me, as hard as landing on hard ground. I looked back at the sky, black smoke still there. "So this is what life loves - death." I whispered, before joining the dead.
...and I'm terrible at drawing anthros and humans.
You're asking to post a video? Of course, go ahead! - you can post a video as long as it's relevant to discussion. Things that people get
spankedin trouble for is if the video is just randomly tossed in somewhere.[media][media][/media[/media]]
There we go, this is a good one.
Here is the link to the youtube, he has read about 40 stories.
Dangit... the new thing took my youtube code...
Oh wow, really? Talk about harsh. I'll work on that a bit. In the mean time, I'll check out those videos now
Lookin' for some feedback.
Indeed. Few days ago pages were gone.
That is freakishly dramatic, I love it. That last saying of "So this is what life loves - death." I almost wanna put that in my signature...
Well, I'll make sure that don't happen again, eh?
"...I say before joining the dead."
The new few ending words.
Oh sorry that's not what I meant! I really don't make the rules!!
On topic, art!
Now the story.