Just went a week without a computer, that means a week of zero progression in the story... So yeah, that sucks.
Anyways, I'm thinking of renaming the story because I feel that Unspoken Trials doesn't fit very well. Any suggestions? I'm not very good at making names.
Oh look at that, I decided to start the Unspoken Trials: Origins series.
I just read one chapter and it was awesome already!
How much will you make, brADyHD?
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asdfchlwnsgy1236 (chlwnsgy or Joonhyo Choi) I like computers, MapleStory, Minecraft, Creeper World 3, Gemcraft, Left 4 Dead 2, Super Smash Flash 2, King of Fighters, books, manga, anime, light novels, visual novels, Clannad, Step Mania, romance, games, Vocaloid, YTChorus, Nico Nico Chorus, YouTube, Nico Nico Douga, Randomness Thing, reading stories, writing stories, playing the piano, programming, physics, and mathematics. Before me things created were none, save things eternal, and eternal I endure. All hope abandon, ye who enter here. - Inferno by Dante -
It would help if you could point out any typos ou see.
Hah sorry, couldn't get over the irony of this. Anywho, interesting read. (I'll finish it later: I have tons of work.)
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Alright, so I scrapped Ghost of a Hero, I will most likely recycle the name. I am now writing Pact of Legacies, which is at the point of Fate of the Curse in The Survival Chronicles. Maybe now I won't mess up, this time I'm going in the original order.
Anyways, I'm thinking of renaming the story because I feel that Unspoken Trials doesn't fit very well. Any suggestions? I'm not very good at making names.
Oh look at that, I decided to start the Unspoken Trials: Origins series.
How much will you make, brADyHD?
asdfchlwnsgy1236 (chlwnsgy or Joonhyo Choi) I like computers, MapleStory, Minecraft, Creeper World 3, Gemcraft, Left 4 Dead 2, Super Smash Flash 2, King of Fighters, books, manga, anime, light novels, visual novels, Clannad, Step Mania, romance, games, Vocaloid, YTChorus, Nico Nico Chorus, YouTube, Nico Nico Douga, Randomness Thing, reading stories, writing stories, playing the piano, programming, physics, and mathematics. Before me things created were none, save things eternal, and eternal I endure. All hope abandon, ye who enter here. - Inferno by Dante -
Well, I'm planning on making it into a 15 chapter book.
Speaking of which, I just started the second chapter.
Unspoken Trials: Long Lost Legends renamed to Unspoken Trials: Ghost of a Hero.
Hah sorry, couldn't get over the irony of this. Anywho, interesting read. (I'll finish it later: I have tons of work.)
EDIT: Alright, it is written. I can feel it, this already has a better start that Ghost of a Hero.
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Thank you. Looking back at my first story, I think that as I write more, my writing becomes smoother and easier to write. I also just wrote some more.