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I may scrap Ghost of a Hero. Let's be honest, Unspoken Trials has lost the spark that The Survival Chronicles had. Why? I know exactly why. I tried to start it with the third story. Even if it is a prequel, never start with the third story. I basically took Unspoken Trials and started mashing together story fragments that I thought would fit. It's just like when I used to do puzzles. I would eat parts that I had thought were unnecessary, and be utterly screwed over when the future had come. I may scrap all of the work I have done on Ghost of a Hero. If anything, the first story of The Survival Chronicles should be called Ghost of a Hero, it fits much better anyways.
TL;DR
I am not finishing the first story as of yet
I am going to start the next story, and hopefully fix my mistakes
Ah yes. Came here from Fan Art. As it happens, I did know about The Survival Chronicles. I really should catch up and finish it though. Anyway, I suppose I'll be following this thread now.
This sounds great, however, if you're going to upload the story in the forums, may I suggest keeping it into one thread? It's simpler that way...
I'll be using my Deviant Art page, like I did with Fate of the Risen, and provide the links.
I'm also planning on starting this tomorrow, but I just want to make sure everything is right. I basically have the beginning down, so it should be no problem. Wish me luck.
Wow, I really enjoy the 2nd person. Gives a new perspective, and in battle scenes it makes everything more realistic.
Also, I noticed multiple typos- I suggest fixing that.
Wow, I really enjoy the 2nd person. Gives a new perspective, and in battle scenes it makes everything more realistic.
Also, I noticed multiple typos- I suggest fixing that.
I look through it from time to time, but I can't find every single one. It would help if you could point out any typos ou see. It would be a big help.
I know I didn't do any writing Sep 1st, but I made up for than by bringing you guys three nice, long, and eventful paragraphs. Enjoy, and remember, feedback is appreciated.
Just finished the next chapter. I'm sorry for the long delay, but I just started my Freshman year, so things are a bit... let's say, cramped. I don't have much time to do, well, anything really. I will try to write as much as possible, but keep in mind, it will no longer be daily, at least not for a while.
EDIT: Oh, and I also changed the name Ariadne to Lumios, because I failed to realize that Ariadne is in fact a GIRL'S NAME!
Yeah, I lost power for five days, but I'll continue the story tomorrow. For now, I believe a much-needed shower is due. Who knows, maybe I'll be done with chapter one soon. I am basing the chapters' leangths in pages from other books. Ender's Game has an average of eight pages per chapter, so I'll be going for that.
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TL;DR
I am not finishing the first story as of yet
I am going to start the next story, and hopefully fix my mistakes
The Survival Chronicles (Original story)
My Deviant Art page, for those who want to fallow my recent updates... In other words: Nobody.
http://pattenaude.deviantart.com/
Scrapped
The Cursed One
Pact of Bloody Tears
Origins
Eryth
A Broken People
A Hero Return
A Legend Returns
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Retired StaffThis sounds great, however, if you're going to upload the story in the forums, may I suggest keeping it into one thread? It's simpler that way...
[12:41] Coffeeeeeee!
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[16:29] "And lo, the tacos were delicious"
I'll be using my Deviant Art page, like I did with Fate of the Risen, and provide the links.
I'm also planning on starting this tomorrow, but I just want to make sure everything is right. I basically have the beginning down, so it should be no problem. Wish me luck.EDIT: Started the first chapter.
Also, I noticed multiple typos- I suggest fixing that.
"Nietzsche is dead." - God
I look through it from time to time, but I can't find every single one. It would help if you could point out any typos ou see. It would be a big help.
Thanks.
Unfortunetly I am unable to write today. I don't know, maybe I'll squeeze something in later, but I've got a lot to do today.
EDIT: Oh, and I also changed the name Ariadne to Lumios, because I failed to realize that Ariadne is in fact a GIRL'S NAME!