Really Great, Nice Job! I love when the lightsaber was dragging on the wall and the effect at 0:45 and at 0:58. There was a lot of clipping and some choppy animation at times so you need to work on your weapon throws because they look a little genkey at times. Also when people get thrown it is a little genkey as well. I also noticed that at 1:03 he teleports farther down the hallway. But you did a really good job on the walking animation and the Camera movement. I also really like the lightsaber toss at 0:35 And around 0:57 how the body parts fall down is really cool looking.
The last one thing to note this is not bad or good, there are no shadows for the props which does make things on the floor look a little weird it looks the weirdest at 0:52.
Overall for a Minecraft animation short, I would rate it a 8.7/10.
Really Great, Nice Job! I love when the lightsaber was dragging on the wall and the effect at 0:45 and at 0:58. There was a lot of clipping and some choppy animation at times so you need to work on your weapon throws because they look a little genkey at times. Also when people get thrown it is a little genkey as well. I also noticed that at 1:03 he teleports farther down the hallway. But you did a really good job on the walking animation and the Camera movement. I also really like the lightsaber toss at 0:35 And around 0:57 how the body parts fall down is really cool looking.
The last one thing to note this is not bad or good, there are no shadows for the props which does make things on the floor look a little weird it looks the weirdest at 0:52.
Overall for a Minecraft animation short, I would rate it a 8.7/10.
Thank you very much for this detailed feedback, it was exactly what I needed. Next time, I will definitely watch shadows and try to play more with animation itself.
Absolutely stunning! Great job.
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Really Great, Nice Job! I love when the lightsaber was dragging on the wall and the effect at 0:45 and at 0:58. There was a lot of clipping and some choppy animation at times so you need to work on your weapon throws because they look a little genkey at times. Also when people get thrown it is a little genkey as well. I also noticed that at 1:03 he teleports farther down the hallway. But you did a really good job on the walking animation and the Camera movement. I also really like the lightsaber toss at 0:35 And around 0:57 how the body parts fall down is really cool looking.
The last one thing to note this is not bad or good, there are no shadows for the props which does make things on the floor look a little weird it looks the weirdest at 0:52.
Overall for a Minecraft animation short, I would rate it a 8.7/10.
Thank you very much for this detailed feedback, it was exactly what I needed. Next time, I will definitely watch shadows and try to play more with animation itself.
Hydra,
U did a wonderfull job! Thanks to share this with us!
Greetz zilivia
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