im not trying to be mean but as a creative builder myself i would rate this a 6/10
1. its pretty empty give it a pattern
2.the colors clash together badly
3.(im not trying to be mean here) its a box shape basically
now heres good things
1.it must have taken forever in regular creative
2.i like the red carpet but try to make it extend outside the building
3.it looks pretty symmetrical (which is really big in making things look good)
in all together dont give up it was your first build and you were anxious to have your first great build and be seen
try making a light blue pattern on the walls though trust me it would really make the empty space be forgotten and chatch people'seyes in the right way
lack of details, inside and outside the building (I mean, details to wall, inside and outside and details like floor, ceiling, wall and ceiling reinforcement structures, details to the structures chaging some blocks and creating a pattern . . . )
mostly, it is a lack of details, a lot of details.
like . . check it out (it is smaller but show a lot of details you could get some idea to use)
just the building, without any other structure around it, already have a lot of details and it is not made of 1 block only (yes, I checked u used ice block and glowstone too, yet make it look with less details as it is basicaly wool)
6/10. It is a little plain. Try adding some more definition to it. Especially some windows. If it was less square it would also look better. It is not bad overall though. Keep building, you can become amazing.
no one start making amazing structures and most start making small box of wood or dirty they call "house" so, your start is not a bad start.
just have in mind you should use more than 1 block (wool) at your buildings (I would try to avoid wool as wall and ceiling), try to dont use Ice and other kind of blocks like that and, glowstone is not suposed to be a raw material for buildings (yet it is up to u to make a building with a lot of glowstone or just with glowstone or not)
anyway, try to make with more details, more blocks and to avoid using some kind of blocks for certain parts of your buildings. they will look cool and more "realistic" yet, again, up to u to use or not because it is your creation so do whatever come up to your mind and keep building and trying to make every building better and better
Lessee... Points subtracted: Bland color scheme, not many features (those combine to create... Not visually interesting), not very origional in shape.
Points added: Very large for a first build. Great thinking, using the trapdoors on the lamps like that.
I'm going to grade generously and give you a 7. You're certainly on the right track. And it's been said before but bears repeating... don't be afraid to mix up your building materials and take risks with shape. Really, though, keep building. A good build is one that is never done. =D
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...actually, created is a bit much.... Thought of. That's more accurate.
2.5/10
The building itself is okay on the outside, the only thing that bugs me about it are the lack of details and the colours you used. I'm assuming you were trying to go for an ice fortress or something, but sadly it looks like a white box. You can make it look nicer by using more colours and addings details such as windows and banners. Another idea is to build walls around the building to make it look like a real fortress. The inside of your building simply doesn't match the theme. You chose to use red and yellow wool for the throne and you have no path leading to the throne itself. You can try to make the throne out of ice and add stone pressure pads as seat cushions and make a path out of snow.
Anyways, good effort but there's always room for improvement :). Good luck with your next build.
I think it looks good but you need to put more things in it, or detail it alot more, Its really good don't get me wrong, pretty good for a first time, I would have to say 6.5
Thats amazing! Keep up the good work. Must have spent awhile huh? Well I'm more of a surviver instead of a creator but sometimes I do some creating in Minecraft too. For the rating I'd give a 9 for the creativity. You should do more of these, this is what Minecraft Creative Mode is about.
1. its pretty empty give it a pattern
2.the colors clash together badly
3.(im not trying to be mean here) its a box shape basically
now heres good things
1.it must have taken forever in regular creative
2.i like the red carpet but try to make it extend outside the building
3.it looks pretty symmetrical (which is really big in making things look good)
in all together dont give up it was your first build and you were anxious to have your first great build and be seen
try making a light blue pattern on the walls though trust me it would really make the empty space be forgotten and chatch people'seyes in the right way
ENTER OVER-DETAILED SIGNATURE HERE)mostly, it is a lack of details, a lot of details.
LINKS TO MY BUILDS: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1565443-nithou-kingdom/
just the building, without any other structure around it, already have a lot of details and it is not made of 1 block only (yes, I checked u used ice block and glowstone too, yet make it look with less details as it is basicaly wool)
LINKS TO MY BUILDS: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1565443-nithou-kingdom/
no one start making amazing structures and most start making small box of wood or dirty they call "house" so, your start is not a bad start.
just have in mind you should use more than 1 block (wool) at your buildings (I would try to avoid wool as wall and ceiling), try to dont use Ice and other kind of blocks like that and, glowstone is not suposed to be a raw material for buildings (yet it is up to u to make a building with a lot of glowstone or just with glowstone or not)
anyway, try to make with more details, more blocks and to avoid using some kind of blocks for certain parts of your buildings. they will look cool and more "realistic" yet, again, up to u to use or not because it is your creation so do whatever come up to your mind and keep building and trying to make every building better and better
LINKS TO MY BUILDS: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1565443-nithou-kingdom/
Your building look like a snowball stadium =).
This build really sucks. at least use dirt or something instead of glass
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Points added: Very large for a first build. Great thinking, using the trapdoors on the lamps like that.
I'm going to grade generously and give you a 7. You're certainly on the right track. And it's been said before but bears repeating... don't be afraid to mix up your building materials and take risks with shape. Really, though, keep building. A good build is one that is never done. =D
...actually, created is a bit much.... Thought of. That's more accurate.
The building itself is okay on the outside, the only thing that bugs me about it are the lack of details and the colours you used. I'm assuming you were trying to go for an ice fortress or something, but sadly it looks like a white box. You can make it look nicer by using more colours and addings details such as windows and banners. Another idea is to build walls around the building to make it look like a real fortress. The inside of your building simply doesn't match the theme. You chose to use red and yellow wool for the throne and you have no path leading to the throne itself. You can try to make the throne out of ice and add stone pressure pads as seat cushions and make a path out of snow.
Anyways, good effort but there's always room for improvement :). Good luck with your next build.
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