Username(creator): MAPOPA, me
Map Name: The Institution
Forum Link: My Signature
Genre: Adventure/Puzzle/Escape-ish
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): No requirements :smile.gif:
Additional Info(optional): All in the Thread!
Username(creator): MAPOPA, me
Map Name: The Institution
Forum Link: My Signature
Genre: Adventure/Puzzle/Escape-ish
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): No requirements :smile.gif:
Additional Info(optional): All in the Thread!
Added to the list. Also, if you would like to help review make sure you apply!
Wow. These are some really nice reviews. A LOT better than mine, I admit. :wink.gif:
Would you mind checking out my reviews over in my thread? The reason I say this is because (before I fill out the application) I'd like you to see what you think. Note that I'm only 12, so I'm currently gaining experience as a Minecraft player and author/reviewer, so I'd love tips. Thanks in advance!
Wow. These are some really nice reviews. A LOT better than mine, I admit. :wink.gif:
Would you mind checking out my reviews over in my thread? The reason I say this is because (before I fill out the application) I'd like you to see what you think. Note that I'm only 12, so I'm currently gaining experience as a Minecraft player and author/reviewer, so I'd love tips. Thanks in advance!
Haha I'm not quite sure you remember but you reviewed my map, Levi's Nightmare not too long ago. I have already checked out your page, and I must say, you are an excellent reviewer. 12 or not, you have some of the best reviews and grammar I have seen. It would be absolutely amazing if you could pair with me to do reviews. If you are interested, leave an application. Thanks, I hope you apply!!!
You're such a good reviewer and I totally got immersed in your reviews, so much that I actually forgot about reviewing your map. The problem is, my page is totally filling up and I was hoping I could sort of quit doing them there and perhaps help review a few maps for other reviewers, so that it was more casual. In this sense, I'd love to assist you.
Friggin hell, I can't believe I forgot. So sorry...
Alright, my application:
Username: StreamofAdventure
Age: 12
Gender: Dude (duh :smile.gif: )
Map Maker: Partly, working on my own, assisted with my friend's map: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/594910-adv-jinu-the-lost-land-–-an-epic-adventure-through-perilous-terrain/
Writing Experience: High grades in Junior High, currently planning ideas for a future novel
Review Experience: Something tells me you already know that... :wink.gif:
Read the "Join the Team" section? Totally.
Additional Info:
Would love to help! LOL There wasn't much point in writing that, was there...
You're such a good reviewer and I totally got immersed in your reviews, so much that I actually forgot about reviewing your map. The problem is, my page is totally filling up and I was hoping I could sort of quit doing them there and perhaps help review a few maps for other reviewers, so that it was more casual. In this sense, I'd love to assist you.
Friggin hell, I can't believe I forgot. So sorry...
You didn't forget my map! It is up on your thread. Anyway, I would love for you to help me on the reviews. Just check out the "Join The Team" section of this thread for more info on how to apply.
You're such a good reviewer and I totally got immersed in your reviews, so much that I actually forgot about reviewing your map. The problem is, my page is totally filling up and I was hoping I could sort of quit doing them there and perhaps help review a few maps for other reviewers, so that it was more casual. In this sense, I'd love to assist you.
Friggin hell, I can't believe I forgot. So sorry...
Alright, my application:
Username: StreamofAdventure
Age: 12
Gender: Dude (duh :smile.gif: )
Map Maker: Partly, working on my own, assisted with my friend's map: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/594910-adv-jinu-the-lost-land-–-an-epic-adventure-through-perilous-terrain/
Writing Experience: High grades in Junior High, currently planning ideas for a future novel
Review Experience: Something tells me you already know that... :wink.gif:
Read the "Join the Team" section? Totally.
Additional Info:
Would love to help! LOL There wasn't much point in writing that, was there...
Alright, we will continue talking privately about reviewing.
Username(creator): GeraldoCockerhan
Map Name: Greed
Forum Link: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/715936-193
Genre: Pure Parkour
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): Use 1.9.3 (1.9.4 will work, but I do not recommend you do this). I also recommend using Misa's texture pack or brown and bloom (there is a link for both in the thread) and playing on Quake pro FOV.
Additional Info(optional): Greed is a MineCraft parkour map which I made for two of my videos over at YouTube. Because the map was made for the videos and not the other way around, it is pretty short and not too difficult and has a focus on visuals. It is very fluent (no ladders, no water) which makes it possible to complete without leaving sprint once.
Username(creator): overlordpawel
Map Name: Jerry's Adventure
Forum Link: Jerry's Adventure
Genre: Parkour/Adventure
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): None
Additional Info(optional): The store is experimental but worked pretty well on my computer. let me know if you have any issues.
Dungeon Escape is a short, but well executed map that I would label as a work in progress. This map is simply too short, and does not have a "real" ending. Of course, my rating reflected a map that I judged as completed; I did not "imagine" an ending, nor "imagine" all of the bugs being fixed. I rated this map like I would rate any other map, no map will get a higher rating just because it's a WIP. Because of this, Dungeon Escape received a lower score than it would have as a finished map. Alright, now that we got that over with, let's begin the review.
I believe the highlight of this map is the believable dungeon scenery. As I traveled through the map, I was completely immersed in the dungeon theme. No one wall was symmetrical to its opposite, and it really felt like I was walking through an ancient dungeon. This map took advantage of the 1.8 features, including vines, stone blocks, and mossy stone blocks. It really was an enjoyable break from the square room to square room maps I have been playing lately.
As far as the puzzles go, it was ok. There were only three types of puzzles in this map, parkour, combat and a couple other unoriginal challenges. The parkour was fairly easy, but enjoyable. Pistons were used well, and were timed perfectly. The combat was ok. For being a dungeon map, there wasn't actually that many rooms filled with monsters. However, when you did enter a room with monsters, there was a ton of them. Zombies, skeletons, endermen, spiders and CREEPERS littering the ground. I found this to be quite overwhelming, especially with creepers. As for the puzzles, they were mainly unoriginal, and one of the puzzles didn't work properly(more info in the bugs/tips section). In all, the puzzles were average, and could definitely be improved.
Overall, Dungeon Escape is a pretty "meh". This map has some serious potential, but lacks a story, original puzzles, and a solid ending. I would recommend checking this map out if you like short dungeon maps with great architecture. If that doesn't particularly motivate you to check it out, then I would ignore it until a solid update comes out.
Bugs/tips
-The minecart puzzle didn't really work. I hit a couple buttons and then the door opened, the minecart did not move from its starting position. Check that out.
-Change the name! Dungeon escape is too generic and uninteresting.
-Don't give out full armor right away, make them earn it.
-Missing blocks. It is possible that this is due to enderman. If it is, I would suggest not spawning them.
Username:eshancowee
Age (optional):14
Gender (optional):m
Map maker? (if yes, provide a link to map(s)):Yes, sig (your meant to be doing mine in a while but if thats a problem take it off the list
Writing experience:i have had help from my dad (who does professional reviews and i am a good writer)
Review experience:i have my own thread where i do shorter reviews but i can easily longer reviews (just check my profile)
Have you read the entire "Join The Team" section of this thread?: yes
Additional info:i can write well (im in one of the top 40 secondary schools in my country) im also on the forums everyday!
Alright, I'll pm you with a test review and we will see.
Remove my run boy run application as I have discontinued the map. However I have an adventure map I would like to be reviewed (It really needs 1 now)
Username(creator):Jvample
Map Name:Creation
Forum Link: In sig
Genre:Adv/puz
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): None
Additional Info(optional):4 different endings that determine your skill level :biggrin.gif:
Thank you :biggrin.gif:
lolz nvm
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Retired StaffMap Name: [Barren]
Forum Link: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/301997-18-1-barren-an-adventure-map-like-no-other-500-dl-910-rated/
Genre: Adventure
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): Dynamic Lights mod isn't necessary, but I'd recommend it
Additional Info(optional): Tell me what you think :3
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Retired StaffMap Name: Escape of the Mind
Forum Link: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/710482-19-only-escape-of-the-mind-puzadv/
Genre: Puzzle/Adventure
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): 1.9pre1 or higher
Additional Info(optional): Also tell me what you think XD
Map Name: The Institution
Forum Link: My Signature
Genre: Adventure/Puzzle/Escape-ish
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): No requirements :smile.gif:
Additional Info(optional): All in the Thread!
Added to the list. Also, if you would like to help review make sure you apply!
Would you mind checking out my reviews over in my thread? The reason I say this is because (before I fill out the application) I'd like you to see what you think. Note that I'm only 12, so I'm currently gaining experience as a Minecraft player and author/reviewer, so I'd love tips. Thanks in advance!
Here's my thread:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/574219-map-reviews-feedback-testing-and-advice/
Map Name: The Alchemical Portal
Forum Link: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/709193-advpuz-the-alchemical-portal/page__p__9399227__fromsearch__1#entry9399227
Genre:Adventure/Puzzle/Parkour
Requirements: None!
Additional Info: Took ages to build, I would love some feedback from you! :3
Haha I'm not quite sure you remember but you reviewed my map, Levi's Nightmare not too long ago. I have already checked out your page, and I must say, you are an excellent reviewer. 12 or not, you have some of the best reviews and grammar I have seen. It would be absolutely amazing if you could pair with me to do reviews. If you are interested, leave an application. Thanks, I hope you apply!!!
You're such a good reviewer and I totally got immersed in your reviews, so much that I actually forgot about reviewing your map. The problem is, my page is totally filling up and I was hoping I could sort of quit doing them there and perhaps help review a few maps for other reviewers, so that it was more casual. In this sense, I'd love to assist you.
Friggin hell, I can't believe I forgot. So sorry...
Alright, my application:
Username: StreamofAdventure
Age: 12
Gender: Dude (duh :smile.gif: )
Map Maker: Partly, working on my own, assisted with my friend's map: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/594910-adv-jinu-the-lost-land-–-an-epic-adventure-through-perilous-terrain/
Writing Experience: High grades in Junior High, currently planning ideas for a future novel
Review Experience: Something tells me you already know that... :wink.gif:
Read the "Join the Team" section? Totally.
Additional Info:
Would love to help! LOL There wasn't much point in writing that, was there...
You didn't forget my map! It is up on your thread. Anyway, I would love for you to help me on the reviews. Just check out the "Join The Team" section of this thread for more info on how to apply.
Thanks!!!
Alright, we will continue talking privately about reviewing.
Map Name: Greed
Forum Link: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/715936-193
Genre: Pure Parkour
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): Use 1.9.3 (1.9.4 will work, but I do not recommend you do this). I also recommend using Misa's texture pack or brown and bloom (there is a link for both in the thread) and playing on Quake pro FOV.
Additional Info(optional): Greed is a MineCraft parkour map which I made for two of my videos over at YouTube. Because the map was made for the videos and not the other way around, it is pretty short and not too difficult and has a focus on visuals. It is very fluent (no ladders, no water) which makes it possible to complete without leaving sprint once.
Map Name: Jerry's Adventure
Forum Link: Jerry's Adventure
Genre: Parkour/Adventure
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): None
Additional Info(optional): The store is experimental but worked pretty well on my computer. let me know if you have any issues.
Overlord's: Super Minecraft Bros
Dungeon Escape is a short, but well executed map that I would label as a work in progress. This map is simply too short, and does not have a "real" ending. Of course, my rating reflected a map that I judged as completed; I did not "imagine" an ending, nor "imagine" all of the bugs being fixed. I rated this map like I would rate any other map, no map will get a higher rating just because it's a WIP. Because of this, Dungeon Escape received a lower score than it would have as a finished map. Alright, now that we got that over with, let's begin the review.
I believe the highlight of this map is the believable dungeon scenery. As I traveled through the map, I was completely immersed in the dungeon theme. No one wall was symmetrical to its opposite, and it really felt like I was walking through an ancient dungeon. This map took advantage of the 1.8 features, including vines, stone blocks, and mossy stone blocks. It really was an enjoyable break from the square room to square room maps I have been playing lately.
As far as the puzzles go, it was ok. There were only three types of puzzles in this map, parkour, combat and a couple other unoriginal challenges. The parkour was fairly easy, but enjoyable. Pistons were used well, and were timed perfectly. The combat was ok. For being a dungeon map, there wasn't actually that many rooms filled with monsters. However, when you did enter a room with monsters, there was a ton of them. Zombies, skeletons, endermen, spiders and CREEPERS littering the ground. I found this to be quite overwhelming, especially with creepers. As for the puzzles, they were mainly unoriginal, and one of the puzzles didn't work properly(more info in the bugs/tips section). In all, the puzzles were average, and could definitely be improved.
Overall, Dungeon Escape is a pretty "meh". This map has some serious potential, but lacks a story, original puzzles, and a solid ending. I would recommend checking this map out if you like short dungeon maps with great architecture. If that doesn't particularly motivate you to check it out, then I would ignore it until a solid update comes out.
Bugs/tips
-The minecart puzzle didn't really work. I hit a couple buttons and then the door opened, the minecart did not move from its starting position. Check that out.
-Change the name! Dungeon escape is too generic and uninteresting.
-Don't give out full armor right away, make them earn it.
-Missing blocks. It is possible that this is due to enderman. If it is, I would suggest not spawning them.
Alright, I'll pm you with a test review and we will see.
Please add the genre to your application.
Again, I am looking for some people to help me review, if you are interested don't hesitate to apply!
Username(creator):Jvample
Map Name:Creation
Forum Link: In sig
Genre:Adv/puz
Requirements(mods,texture packs,ect.): None
Additional Info(optional):4 different endings that determine your skill level :biggrin.gif:
Thank you :biggrin.gif: