Story so far: When you woke up from your bed you found both your parents gone with you parents gone you explore and decide to settle down for the night then for some reason you wake up in a abandoned lab with a Unknown scientist talking to you he then asks you to get to his other lab asap from there you enter the bridge to see who it is........
Or was it a dream?.............
Rules: Play on normal hard or normal
Have fun
Music off
Only break bars with your pickaxe when needed
Before you download this map is not hard at all and requires little thinking(actually no thinking at all). It was made for you to have fun
(by the way, the first command block that gives the sword is broken, and the other 2 are connected by the same button)
The Zambie apokalipse part 2 map review
Ok. So here's the next installment. The story starts with you (the player) remembering where yo left off. A good start. Things happen, and you have to continue and discover what is happening.
So here we go:
The Pros:
1) Continuance. I LOVE continuance in maps. It keeps me into the story. I suggest making a reward for those who remember info from previous maps. Reward systems rock!
2) Developing story. You gotta keep it going, and fresh (inside joke)
The Cons:
1) Broken start command blocks. That's a good way to loose some people. ALWAYS test your builds.
2) Small build. Don't rush it buddy. You are capable of making good builds. Effort is always appreciated.
3) Wandering. I don't mind wandering in a map, just a long as there's a point. Wandering parts just to continue story isn't really a good thing.
4) Cliff-hangers. You GOTTA have them. I didn't get yours.
The Result: 4 Blocks.
There were some elements added in this part that is crucial to further development to this series. Take your time. You have a good start here.
Have a map that you want me to review? Message me with the link and I will get to it!
That. command wasn't broken when I tested it I will check it out. But part 3 is not being made right now I am working on a different map at the moment. I will continue it after Christmas.
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Curse PremiumStory so far: When you woke up from your bed you found both your parents gone with you parents gone you explore and decide to settle down for the night then for some reason you wake up in a abandoned lab with a Unknown scientist talking to you he then asks you to get to his other lab asap from there you enter the bridge to see who it is........
Or was it a dream?.............
Rules: Play on normal hard or normal
Have fun
Music off
Only break bars with your pickaxe when needed
Before you download this map is not hard at all and requires little thinking(actually no thinking at all). It was made for you to have fun
Link for part 1:http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/mapping-and-modding/maps/2565026-the-zambie-apokalipse
(by the way, the first command block that gives the sword is broken, and the other 2 are connected by the same button)
The Zambie apokalipse part 2 map review
Ok. So here's the next installment. The story starts with you (the player) remembering where yo left off. A good start. Things happen, and you have to continue and discover what is happening.
So here we go:
The Pros:
1) Continuance. I LOVE continuance in maps. It keeps me into the story. I suggest making a reward for those who remember info from previous maps. Reward systems rock!
2) Developing story. You gotta keep it going, and fresh (inside joke)
The Cons:
1) Broken start command blocks. That's a good way to loose some people. ALWAYS test your builds.
2) Small build. Don't rush it buddy. You are capable of making good builds. Effort is always appreciated.
3) Wandering. I don't mind wandering in a map, just a long as there's a point. Wandering parts just to continue story isn't really a good thing.
4) Cliff-hangers. You GOTTA have them. I didn't get yours.
The Result: 4 Blocks.
There were some elements added in this part that is crucial to further development to this series. Take your time. You have a good start here.
Have a map that you want me to review? Message me with the link and I will get to it!
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Curse PremiumHmm I checked last time and there were no broken command blocks I will check it out.
Edit: All problems are fixed!
Both of these maps are awful, you literally put 0 work into this map at all!
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Curse PremiumWell here's one thing this is my 2nd map that I made. Also I am trying to improve my maps and will. They will improve.
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Curse PremiumThat. command wasn't broken when I tested it I will check it out. But part 3 is not being made right now I am working on a different map at the moment. I will continue it after Christmas.