So after commenting on your map earlier today i decided to leave a feedback, so here it is!
Since this is your first map i can tell you one thing, it's awesome! There is nothing wrong with it, it has a great storyline, cool design and epic rail system. It's great to see that you put so much effort in this map, you updated at least once, maybe more, i don't know and that shows how much you care!
So after commenting on your map earlier today i decided to leave a feedback, so here it is!
Since this is your first map i can tell you one thing, it's awesome! There is nothing wrong with it, it has a great storyline, cool design and epic rail system. It's great to see that you put so much effort in this map, you updated at least once, maybe more, i don't know and that shows how much you care!
Cheers!
Thank you so much on your feedback, i'm really glad you like my map
"An Unexpected Adventure" is a linear, you guessed it, adventure map. Being that in the map itself the maker says that this is his/her first map they've made, I obviously didn't expect tons of wireless redstone machines, plugins, and all of that sort of stuff which to many people just seems to be the standard when it comes to making maps. What I really like about this map is the fact that the maker used simple mechanics that were obviously just done in normal vanilla creative mode, and I envy your greatness for it.
But since the map was made in creative mode (that's what I'm going to assume), there are a few minor problems that come about with these sort of maps. One for example in the map are "looks" of the levels, they're all kind of simple, and plain. I've seen so many library mazes (including this one would be two today alone as of writing this review), they're a bit over used for my taste at this point. Then the lava maze right after was a good break from the mold through, and my only complaint with that is parkour in the maze, it was a little annoying.
Looking back at the map I really can only think of one thing that really bugged me, how short the map was. I really wanted more, the story might not have been the most exciting story in the world, but the story that was there was funny, and managed to get a few chuckles out of me. Truthfully though, I think it was a good thing the map was short. This was the maker's first map (that's what he/she said at least), and he/she left me wanting more, so all I can say as far as that goes is to keep on improving, and make more maps.
Overall, this a good map that I would suggest putting aside the half-hour to play.
"An Unexpected Adventure" is a linear, you guessed it, adventure map. Being that in the map itself the maker says that this is his/her first map they've made, I obviously didn't expect tons of wireless redstone machines, plugins, and all of that sort of stuff which to many people just seems to be the standard when it comes to making maps. What I really like about this map is the fact that the maker used simple mechanics that were obviously just done in normal vanilla creative mode, and I envy your greatness for it.
But since the map was made in creative mode (that's what I'm going to assume), there are a few minor problems that come about with these sort of maps. One for example in the map are "looks" of the levels, they're all kind of simple, and plain. I've seen so many library mazes (including this one would be two today alone as of writing this review), they're a bit over used for my taste at this point. Then the lava maze right after was a good break from the mold through, and my only complaint with that is parkour in the maze, it was a little annoying.
Looking back at the map I really can only think of one thing that really bugged me, how short the map was. I really wanted more, the story might not have been the most exciting story in the world, but the story that was there was funny, and managed to get a few chuckles out of me. Truthfully though, I think it was a good thing the map was short. This was the maker's first map (that's what he/she said at least), and he/she left me wanting more, so all I can say as far as that goes is to keep on improving, and make more maps.
Overall, this a good map that I would suggest putting aside the half-hour to play.
3.5/5 Stars
Thank you so much, i appreciate your feedback because i guess it took some time to write this and after what you said i just got motivated to make more and more MC Custom Maps. I will work harder on my maps and mehanics are going to be simple, because simple is awesome. Again, thanks so much!
"An Unexpected Adventure" is a linear, you guessed it, adventure map. Being that in the map itself the maker says that this is his/her first map they've made, I obviously didn't expect tons of wireless redstone machines, plugins, and all of that sort of stuff which to many people just seems to be the standard when it comes to making maps. What I really like about this map is the fact that the maker used simple mechanics that were obviously just done in normal vanilla creative mode, and I envy your greatness for it.
But since the map was made in creative mode (that's what I'm going to assume), there are a few minor problems that come about with these sort of maps. One for example in the map are "looks" of the levels, they're all kind of simple, and plain. I've seen so many library mazes (including this one would be two today alone as of writing this review), they're a bit over used for my taste at this point. Then the lava maze right after was a good break from the mold through, and my only complaint with that is parkour in the maze, it was a little annoying.
Looking back at the map I really can only think of one thing that really bugged me, how short the map was. I really wanted more, the story might not have been the most exciting story in the world, but the story that was there was funny, and managed to get a few chuckles out of me. Truthfully though, I think it was a good thing the map was short. This was the maker's first map (that's what he/she said at least), and he/she left me wanting more, so all I can say as far as that goes is to keep on improving, and make more maps.
Overall, this a good map that I would suggest putting aside the half-hour to play.
3.5/5 Stars
Great review, great feedback, awesome work man, if i make a map once i would be more that glad if you made a review on it!
Thank you so much, i appreciate your feedback because i guess it took some time to write this and after what you said i just got motivated to make more and more MC Custom Maps. I will work harder on my maps and mehanics are going to be simple, because simple is awesome. Again, thanks so much!
Your welcome. I loved your map, and hope you continue
Hey I just played the map and recorded it, the video is just rendering now so I will be uploading it afterwards and I will be playing it here. I enjoyed it though it was easy but I think you have potential to become a great map maker with more practice of course.
Thanks man, i will practice more and i will get better!
I've watched the vid as well, i think that this rail is just fine, doesn't need to be shorter because that rail is so cool, you don't see the rail like this in many Custom Maps, there are fewer maps that actually have the rail long as this and i think it's lenght isn't the problem.
I've watched the vid as well, i think that this rail is just fine, doesn't need to be shorter because that rail is so cool, you don't see the rail like this in many Custom Maps, there are fewer maps that actually have the rail long as this and i think it's lenght isn't the problem.
It's true that it's rare to see a rail this long in a custom map but everyone has opinion of it's own!
Video on your map! I LOVED IT!
Great video man, thanks!
Glad you like my map!
Since this is your first map i can tell you one thing, it's awesome! There is nothing wrong with it, it has a great storyline, cool design and epic rail system. It's great to see that you put so much effort in this map, you updated at least once, maybe more, i don't know and that shows how much you care!
Cheers!
Thank you so much on your feedback, i'm really glad you like my map
"An Unexpected Adventure" is a linear, you guessed it, adventure map. Being that in the map itself the maker says that this is his/her first map they've made, I obviously didn't expect tons of wireless redstone machines, plugins, and all of that sort of stuff which to many people just seems to be the standard when it comes to making maps. What I really like about this map is the fact that the maker used simple mechanics that were obviously just done in normal vanilla creative mode, and I envy your greatness for it.
But since the map was made in creative mode (that's what I'm going to assume), there are a few minor problems that come about with these sort of maps. One for example in the map are "looks" of the levels, they're all kind of simple, and plain. I've seen so many library mazes (including this one would be two today alone as of writing this review), they're a bit over used for my taste at this point. Then the lava maze right after was a good break from the mold through, and my only complaint with that is parkour in the maze, it was a little annoying.
Looking back at the map I really can only think of one thing that really bugged me, how short the map was. I really wanted more, the story might not have been the most exciting story in the world, but the story that was there was funny, and managed to get a few chuckles out of me. Truthfully though, I think it was a good thing the map was short. This was the maker's first map (that's what he/she said at least), and he/she left me wanting more, so all I can say as far as that goes is to keep on improving, and make more maps.
Overall, this a good map that I would suggest putting aside the half-hour to play.
3.5/5 Stars
"Ahh, you've found yourself a hunter"
Thank you so much, i appreciate your feedback because i guess it took some time to write this and after what you said i just got motivated to make more and more MC Custom Maps. I will work harder on my maps and mehanics are going to be simple, because simple is awesome. Again, thanks so much!
Great review, great feedback, awesome work man, if i make a map once i would be more that glad if you made a review on it!
I know, right? He nailed it!
Your welcome. I loved your map, and hope you continue
"Ahh, you've found yourself a hunter"
I sure will, i'm already working on a map!
I'm still working on the map and it's going to be uploaded soon, also no, this is not the final update of this map, i will add more stuff to it!
Thanks man, i will practice more and i will get better!
Just finished watching your vids, they're awesome, thanks on feedback!
It's true that it's rare to see a rail this long in a custom map but everyone has opinion of it's own!